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maedan (f)
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Thanks ill2, the cares of life can be a drag on my little ability  . But since you said the magic words(blush blush)----I will put some "back" into it   . |
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illusion2
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Thanks ill2, the cares of life can be a drag on my little ability . But since you said the magic words(blush blush)----I will put some "back" into it .Thanks e-sweetie pie . . . . .but pls quality over quantity . . . .  ,did u catch our game last nite? |
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maedan (f)
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lol @ ill2 - love it when you sweet-talk me
quantity over quality you say  Have I ever fallen short of the mark?? Okay, maybe once or twice
Here's some "quality" for you. . .
u sef, ill2, u too dey yab
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maedan (f)
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“Tiara, baby. . .,” he crooned, rising and trying to wrap his arms around her. “One kiss isn’t going to hurt, would it?”
“First a kiss, then what?” she asked, angry and a little scared. “Is that why you brought me here?” As she spoke, she backed out of his arms. Only now she was beginning to realise how menacing he seemed, so tall and broad shouldered and – bigger than she was. They were all alone in the house, who could help her if she screamed? She berated herself for her foolishness in trusting him.
He saw the fearful look on her face and sighed. “Babe, relax. You know I love you. You’re my girl now. I just wanted us to know each other better.”
“Yes; “know” being the operative word here,” she sneered, snatching up her purse. “Look, just take me home, Raymond.”
“I will,” he told her, his voice placating, as he reached out to take her hand. “I’m sorry that I offended you. You don’t know how beautiful you are. . .” He began to caress her skin tenderly, and she snatched her hand away.
“What’s your problem?” he suddenly snapped, startling her. “Am I so disgusting? Many girls would kill to be in your shoes right now. Going skittish ‘cos of one measly kiss. I should have known you’re just a kid.” He took up his keys from the nearby dressing table.
Tiara was too dazed by his change of attitude to speak, and followed him without a word back out to the car.
He drove her home in silence, but when he stopped in front of the house and she made to get out, he stopped her with a hand on her arm. She shrugged it away at once, and he sighed.
“Look, I’m sorry okay? I really thought you were into me,” he said gently. “But if you think I’m going to fast, I’m ready to. . .”
“Forget it, Raymond,” she said, shaking her head a little sadly. “I don’t blame you for what happened; I should never have gone with you to your house in the first place.” She took a deep breath. “I don’t think we should see each other again.”
“If that’s the way you feel,” he replied, after a few moments. He knew he’d blown it, and he wasn’t the begging type. He was used to girls being easy, and though Tiara was different, and he’d have loved to get closer to her – but if she was such a prissy little miss, then he probably didn’t need the drama.
She was taken aback by how unfeeling he was, but swallowed any self-pity and with dignity, got out of the car and, without a backward glance, headed for her front door. She’d barely rung the bell when she heard him drive off with a squeal of tyres, and it was then a single tear fell on her cheek.
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Myne White
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hey hey more please, you're good.
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maedan (f)
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@ Myne White, thanks a bunch. There's so much in my head but so little time to put it down. Like I told illusion2, it's not so easy! Cheers babes.
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ravenzord (m)
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Raymond. . .fine boy and up and coming rapist. Nd I liked the guy O,he kinda reminds me of me. . .if I were richer |
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maedan (f)
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Oops, rapist?? Lol, @ ravenzord, that was not the impression I was trying to make! He's just a randy young fella too used to having his way with girls -who knows, a mere kiss would have slaked his youthful urges. Babe wasn't hanging around to find out though . |
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ravenzord (m)
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But if I was the guy I'd dump that Tiara girl also. . .although it's not like they've started dating.
Let's call him an Up n Coming womanizer,eh?
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maedan (f)
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Ta, that's better .
BTW, who dumped who - guys and their egos sef.
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Atreus (m)
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Re.
« #75 on: September 18, 2009, 12:05 AM » |
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I thought ray was gonna rape tiara.
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RuuDie (m)
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@ maedan,
Absolutely outstanding. . . . simply picturesque - just like in everyday life.
what am really interested in seeing is how u patch up ray & tiara back together again - if indeed they'll get back together - from what i just read, i think its a bit of a tricky spot u've put yourself in with this last scene. . . . it'd a lot of guile to craft out something "believable"; consistent with what has just transpired.
i'm really looking forward to seeing how u work it out!
Pretty sure u can pull it off, u've shown too much potential already. . . . am just so fascinated to see how!
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maedan (f)
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@ ravenzord Nope, Tiara was the one to call it quits - read thru again - and she was crying a little - and more out of annoyance at herself than any regrets. It's just a story though so people are free to draw their own conclusions . @RuuDie Wow, thanks for that. Okay, the Tiara/Raymond fiasco is def. over. She can do better, don't you think ? |
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ravenzord (m)
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She was just bluffing jare,she expected d guy 2 beg her and she was shocked when he didn't,U said so urself  / |
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maedan (f)
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@ravenzord, she was shocked because he was two-faced, not because she was heartbroken. Geez, man, you sound like a serious heartbreaker yourself ! Hope you're not one or those that find joy in another's misery! |
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RuuDie (m)
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@RuuDie Wow, thanks for that. Okay, the Tiara/Raymond fiasco is def. over. She can do better, don't you think ? Def. she can do very much better! thats surely 1 way out. . . . but i think if u worked @ it, u could make an interesting piece outta the tiara / ray thing. if its a tale of romance u're writing, then i think u've got a pretty good lead here too. |
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maedan (f)
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@ ruudie - not a chance ! Oh, I'll make Ray come begging, but she won't budge. Fate has real love for her waiting around the corner. . . It was right under her nose but----
Ok, I've let enough out of the bag, Don't want to ruin it for u'all before I write then post it!!!
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RuuDie (m)
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@ ruudie - not a chance ! Oh, I'll make Ray come begging, but she won't budge. Fate has real love for her waiting around the corner. . . It was right under her nose but----
Ok, I've let enough out of the bag, Don't want to ruin it for u'all before I write then post it!!! thats good. . . . good u made up your mind about d route to thread - sure makes your work lighter! I've got stuff am writing but don't have the heart to put it out - maybe, someday! |
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dgreatrock (m)
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Pls how do i get an isbn for my book!
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maedan (f)
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@dgreatrock, I've no idea, but there's a topic on it somewhere here on lit. thread, I think. @ ruudie, why not post it? You've got nothing but friends around here! I at least, promise to be very supportive ! |
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dgreatrock (m)
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@maedan,
can we talk? dgreatrock@yah,
i am waiting pls
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maedan (f)
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@dgreatrock, what's up?
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dgreatrock (m)
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i dey 0! i dey wait for yahoo messenger for your chat
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maedan (f)
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@dgreatrock - you are greatly commanding  . I'll have to think this thru quite carefully to glean your true intentions - meanwhile, have you found the ISBN thread yet??
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illusion2
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why are all these guys chasing maedan?  Look elsewhere pls,she's taken. . . .focus on the 'novel' however
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sino (m)
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Hi maedan, when will you reveal the title?Nice one im getting addicted thumbs up. Me got issue with dis small pikins wey dey play love sha  |
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maedan (f)
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@ sino
I was hoping you guys could suggest a title to me as the story progresses.
And kids grow fast these days - but u're right; I'm trying to be real but I don't encourage teen promiscuity. I'll keep that in mind.
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dgreatrock (m)
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@ Maedan, forgive me, i never intended to so be. i do not have any ulterior motive for my IVs, if you are not ok with it you may ignore it. I actually had my own observations and questions i didnt want to show here.  |
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ravenzord (m)
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@ravenzord, she was shocked because he was two-faced, not because she was heartbroken. Geez, man, you sound like a serious heartbreaker yourself ! Hope you're not one or those that find joy in another's misery! Nah girl,I'm not in2 heartbreaking,just kidding. And I'm not in2 teenage promiscuity also,believe it or not . |
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