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canuck (m)
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What irony! LAMENTATION OF A POLICEMANGloomily sit I, gazing afar; Gazing afar, far ahead, Today again, just like yesterday, My comrade died or is killed! Yes, Today like yesterday; A widow, an orphan is made, clear. O! Death why more my clan, the police! For why do you strike me, alone! Yet I must smile and work, Not minding the scorn, Forget also the ridicule, Not even the outright, assault. Protect the society, I must, a must! Yet another comrade must lie; Buried, buried and forgotten. For how long this sadness must continue! Thus lament I the police. By CSP Lawan Jimeta Peacekeeping Department, FHQ, Abuja 14th August, 2009 Source: http://www.nigeriapolice.org/index.php?view=category&id=23 (Scroll to the bottom of the page)
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FL Gators
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Poem is horrible. like a primary school kid wrote it 
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Jakumo (m)
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We're not here to count bridges. You know that's a fact
Here comes a fat cat posing in his Mercedes Benz
I'll lock and load my gat And we'll see where this all ends
Pull over my friend, or woe betide 'Cause I'm in no mood for joking
You sit there in your cool ride While I stand in the sun smoking
Is that cash in your trunk ? Well you know what that means, don't you
I'm taking a fat cut, and don't give me no bunk The last guy who said no, dropped dead with a thunk
To the winner go the spoils And your money is mine with no toils
Play it smart and cool, and you just might get home Play it dumb and hard, and they'll never find your bones
Sgt. Dongoyaro Abubakar Mumuuuni
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bawomolo (m)
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jakumo o 
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kabola2009 (m)
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their is no any line in the poem that talk about 20 naira lol
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chosen04 (f)
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What irony! LAMENTATION OF A POLICEMANMy comrade died or is killed! A widow, an orphan is made, clear. O! Death why more my clan, the police! Yet another comrade must lie; Buried, buried and forgotten. For how long this sadness must continue! Thus lament I the police. By CSP Lawan Jimeta Peacekeeping Department, FHQ, Abuja 14th August, 2009 Source: http://www.nigeriapolice.org/index.php?view=category&id=23 (Scroll to the bottom of the page) My comrade died or is killed!=====Just like fellow innocent civilians are killed by your people A widow, an orphan is made, clear.==== U make us orphans, we pray same for your household O ! Death why more my clan, the police!===== Are u asking the "APO 6" Yet another comrade must lie;==== Cos of the bribe he just/once collected?? Buried, buried and forgotten.======IF only bribe takers can make HEAVEN!!!!!!!!! For how long this sadness must continue!=== Until u are ready to treat us like fellow citizens Thus lament I the police.=====Is that y u are OUR FRIEND?
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slap1 (m)
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As a poet, I can tell u I like d poem. But d lies are just many.
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slap1 (m)
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As a poet, I can tell u I like d poem. But d lies are just too many.
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slap1 (m)
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As a poet, I can tell u I like d poem. But d lies are just too many.
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slap1 (m)
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As a poet, I can tell u I like d poem. But d lies are just too many.
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nex (m)
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The poetry is not really bad. The guy tried. The fact he's a policeman doesn't mean he can't know art. Besides, we write for reasons and he was directing the poem at his colleagues.
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bibiking1
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Nice poem, but senseless to my plight insensitive to my understanding and utterly meaningless to current situations!
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deezah (f)
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The poetry is not really bad. The guy tried. The fact he's a policeman doesn't mean he can't know art. Besides, we write for reasons and he was directing the poem at his colleagues.
Thank you, Nex. Why can't we just overlook the fact that he's a policeman and appreciate the seriousness of the poem and the pathetic plight of the Nigerian policeman who are supposed to be well taken care of since they are put in charge of the country's security?? This does not mean that i justify the atrocities they perpetuate in the course of their "duty".
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MrPrsdent (m)
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poem ko,poem ni
read that to all the innocent victims of NPF and see how they appreciate the art
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slap1 (m)
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Dis lamentation should, infact, be shown 2 Umaru. D police welfare shud be improved. I don't always blame d police most times: to whom much is given, much is expected. . . and vice-versa. . .
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okeey (m)
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ha,wht dey will later not make use
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kok (m)
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Nice poem! If only every member of the police can appreciate their individual talent and take it upon themselves to with-hold their integrity, we would have a better force. But majority of them dont even know what the job "as a police" entails. Its all about the money!
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villous (m)
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an idle is a poem workshop,help me ask this guy may be no any file on his table
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Aloy~Emeka
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At least a policeman wrote a poem in english and not pidgin. When I saw the thread, I thought the title will start with : Oga wetin you carry.
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slap1 (m)
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@ villous. U made little sense. Ever had heard of d word MUSE? Ever had it come knocking?
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Anabel (f)
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are we asking them to write a poem or to catch thieves.
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janedoe (f)
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My comrade dies or is killed!?are you frigging kidding me?That line should read:"My comrade kills or kills some more!
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Jakumo (m)
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At least a policeman wrote a poem in english and not pidgin. When I saw the thread, I thought the title will start with : Oga wetin you carry.
Anoda Grammar Man done come o, Oga And he no gree commot for him yanga moto He dey halla say him go phone DPO But me I don smell money for him pocket Leave am, na by force he go fly down just now After when my gun don misfire spoil him leg Grammar man, Ooo grammar man, I beg make you no vex Na stop and search we dey here o, and dem never pay we this month Na last warning I dey jeje dey give you so If you no wan sleep for back of counter Come down and show how for weekend like correct man Before OC say make dem sentence you forget.
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Dis Guy
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Jakumo jakumo!!! Lament you!! Please lets all note, we loose policemen everyday in nigeria these people are fathers, mohers, uncle sister etc etc its quite unfortunate we don't really have time to appreciate them the country jaga jaga and their service sef 
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bawomolo (m)
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Anoda Grammar Man done come o, Oga And he no gree commot for him yanga moto
He dey halla say him go phone DPO But me I don smell money for him pocket
Leave am, na by force he go fly down just now After when my gun don misfire spoil him leg
Grammar man, Ooo grammar man, I beg make you no vex Na stop and search we dey here o, and dem never pay we this month
Na last warning I dey jeje dey give you so If you no wan sleep for back of counter
Come down and show how for weekend like correct man Before OC say make dem sentence you forget.
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ridgeman
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DAMN! I think these poems are good. I like the fact that there is no overdone grammer and they are actually realistic!
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bgees (m)
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We're not here to count bridges. You know that's a fact
Here comes a fat cat posing in his Mercedes Benz
I'll lock and load my gat And we'll see where this all ends
Pull over my friend, or woe betide 'Cause I'm in no mood for joking
You sit there in your cool ride While I stand in the sun smoking
Is that cash in your trunk ? Well you know what that means, don't you
I'm taking a fat cut, and don't give me no bunk The last guy who said no, dropped dead with a thunk
To the winner go the spoils And your money is mine with no toils
Play it smart and cool, and you just might get home Play it dumb and hard, and they'll never find your bones
Sgt. Dongoyaro Abubakar Mumuuuni

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