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Eshyy (m)
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Amy seems u've got a war 2 fight wit some dudes here. Lets get anoda story b4 12noon so dey know u're 4 real. Agreèd
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THE AMAKA (f)
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man its after midnight over here and ive got a lot of work to do tomorrow, school work and such. ive wasted all my time here on NL. i cant get another story soon, maybe sometime this week though.
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Rooneyboy (m)
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exactly! they are all similar because sex is sex. most came from imagination and a bit from inspiration from a book. the altoid part to be specific. sorry they all sound the same, DUH! but you dont have to believe it anyway. that b**** part was just uncalled for. getta way jor and go your way. thanks for taking the time to read it and wasting your time.  i just love the way u respond to people's criticism about your work , u blatantly refuse to go angry , that i think is the best way to treat Nigerians.
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Eshyy (m)
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Up to ya.  watever
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THE AMAKA (f)
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i just love the way u respond to people's criticism about your work , u blatantly refuse to go angry , that i think is the best way to treat Nigerians.
thanks. 
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Rooneyboy (m)
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Eagerly waiting 4 part 2.
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Eshyy (m)
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Up to ya.  watever
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lightwalk (m)
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You will make a good romantic novelist for them girlz (though it looks copied a bit) but I think the award winning ones write about love (not sex) 
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THE AMAKA (f)
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yeah the thing about my story is i kinda threw it together so fast and didnt spend too much time on it. so it came out a little cliche. so i see why it looks copied. i should have made it a little more unique.
ill admit to stealing the "Altoid" part from a book i read. only where she pops the Altoids in her mouth to make her mouth warm. everything else was me.
thanks anyway.
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PAININASS
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The AMAKA my baby,hmmm you are f**king someone else why?
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funkystanl (m)
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Hmmm amaka. Nice story. I must commend you for the story. I had a similar experience last month. How i wish most naija girls could be bold like you, So romantic story. Keep it up. And for kenneth, He's sure good, but needs better touch,
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THE AMAKA (f)
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kenneth is a made up person. and thanks anyway!
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Jibson999 (m)
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Shut d hell up b****. U just copied dat 4rm an erotic website and u claim its your imagination. I've read dozens of similar stories and here u are giving us fabuuu. Go get a job
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funkystanl (m)
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Amaka if you the one in that profile, I can only imagine the job you have done on kenneth's cock. It sure started wit a kiss, those lips are worth it,
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THE AMAKA (f)
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Amaka if you the one in that profile, I can only imagine the job you have done on kenneth's cock. It sure started wit a kiss, those lips are worth it,
thats not me, thats the supermodel Oluchi.
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boy1 (m)
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fantasy!i want d real thing.
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amb_asue (m)
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I like the way u have been handling these rebukes and criticism from fellow NLs.It only shows that u re a cool-headed damsel wit good manners. Most contemporary writers still fall back 2 other people's work 4 support,that's why knowledge is not an exclusive preserve of any man. That was a good write up girl be it real or imagined. U'hv gat good talent.Dont allow it 2 wroth. Keep it up. Wanna Know u better. If u dont mind,leave an IM on this yahoo messenger "doncapss". Ciao.
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TheSeeker (m)
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Who are those criticizing AMAKA? If it's that easy to copy from a website, why don't you give it a shot? And for you who think she's corrupt, from my experience, virgins have the most perverted and sexually corrupt mind, so I can see AMAKA in that evil light. 
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funkystanl (m)
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Oh i see,, Amaka. Can you write more of stories like this, fictional or non fictional?, you on facebook? Hit me up funkystanlo@yahoo.com
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funkystanl (m)
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Oh i see,, Amaka. Can you write more of stories like this, fictional or non fictional?, you on facebook? Hit me up funkystanlo@yahoo.com
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funkystanl (m)
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Oh i see,, Amaka. Can you write more of stories like this, fictional or non fictional?, you on facebook? Hit me up funkystanlo@yahoo.com
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funkystanl (m)
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Oh i see,, Amaka. Can you write more of stories like this, fictional or non fictional?, you on facebook? Hit me up funkystanlo@yahoo.com
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funkystanl (m)
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Oh i see,, Amaka. Can you write more of stories like this, fictional or non fictional?, you on facebook? Hit me up funkystanlo@yahoo.com
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Ty Gabriel (m)
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hey,think u should discover yourself and start writtin erotic story,
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eyonigger (m)
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Amaka, is this fact or fiction? If its a fact, then your no more a virgin right? When did it happen. Thank goodness for u.
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Ty Gabriel (m)
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hahaha,lol wait oo u dey read too much erotic novels.u no get work?u come finish am say u b V,
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Pharoh
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@Poster You are really abusing the internet for your age, forget those people praising you here. At the end of the day we don't remember the words of our enemies but the silence of our friends. You should get a worthy life and flee away from all these romance and sexual perversions. The road seems right, exciting and fun at the beginning but at the end they are ways leading to destruction. Don't wait before it is too late before you realize the big mistake you are making here.
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THE AMAKA (f)
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@Poster You are really abusing the internet for your age, forget those people praising you here. At the end of the day we don't remember the words of our enemies but the silence of our friends. You should get a worthy life and flee away from all these romance and sexual perversions. The road seems right, exciting and fun at the beginning but at the end they are ways leading to destruction. Don't wait before it is too late before you realize the big mistake you are making here.
why are you in this section if its so "bad"? so a girl cant post a story just for the hell of it anymore? GOSH! what is up with people on NL these days? thats just wrong. just because you had a fuked up love life doesnt mean everyone else will. just enjoy the story, or not, sheesh!
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Ebonyeyes (f)
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Girl if you wrote that up in 30mins, good job. Its a very sexy story. P.S. Ignore the haters critics 
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Pharoh
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why are you in this section if its so "bad"? so a girl cant post a story just for the hell of it anymore? GOSH! what is up with people on NL these days? thats just wrong.
just because you had a fuked up love life doesnt mean everyone else will.
just enjoy the story, or not, sheesh!
Well not surprised because i know you run your mouth a lot at other people and you lack respect thinking you are expressing your opinions or entitled to have your own freedom. Girl who said this section is bad? Do you know why films are rated? Just telling you stuffs like these are not meant for you so get it straight. You said i have a fucked up love life like you know me beyond my user name? There is nothing there to enjoy in that story. Well it is obvious you have chosen the path you want to follow and i can see you have lots of supporters. Remember the stubborn flies follows the dead body into the grave. Just advising and not hating but anyway have a nice day and keep up the wonderful write-up you think it is up there. I hope you don't think that the celebrated Chimnanda Adichie started like this and with this sort of write-ups. Peace!
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unfaded (m)
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I belive your story-but the speed and acuracy is that of a pro, amaka drop this your virgin story.are u saying u've neva had a sexual experience?
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