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gorociano (m)
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Hi guys, this is my first foray into novel writing and i'm postimg my first chapter to you guys to ask for what you think, Comments and criticism are highly welcomed, most especially from publishers and editors, Thanks.
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netotse (m)
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read your story, its really funny o(maybe cos i'm a corper now) i also know a bukky owoyemi but she didn't go to unilag(i'm guessing u picked the name at random), u're style of delivery is pretty funny sha. . .well done!
p.s. you spelt "come on" as common on page 7
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Orikinla (m)
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I will comment later.
Cheers and keep the flow and the glow.
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gorociano (m)
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@ nettose, thanks for the correction.
@all: Thank you very much for the comments, it don dey make my head swell small small sha,
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gorociano (m)
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@ nettose, d bukky you know served in lagos in 2007? if yes then she mght be,
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