Don't Have An Exact Title -_-

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caramelsq (f)
Don't Have An Exact Title -_-
« on: October 14, 2009, 01:00 AM »

   I knew it. He still did not know how to stop or control it. Whatever that thing is. I didn’t know what its name is or what it meant. It followed him everywhere. It was dangerous, I could sense it. Its shape is indescribable. I really cannot explain its figure.  Every time it happens a shape grows covering his whole body. Dark and mysterious smoke starts coming out. I know what you’re thinking, how am I used to seeing this? Well it’s simple. I’ve seen it more times than you can imagine. The color is black, yellow stripes surround it. Whenever you see it you get the sense that’s its an animal, or something that can attack you….maybe something alive. Like something is living in there.
“No please!  Don’t let it happe--!”
I’m interrupted by the sound of the shape. It’s such a horrible sound. Probably the worst thing you can hear.
“Please don’t let it happen again!” I yell as hard as I can.
My throat burns. It burns from screaming.  I don’t let it bother me. I catch a glimpse of his eyes.
   I catch a glimpse of his eyes. They are silver. As silver as an expensive bracelet. Those no one can afford. He looks at me with so much worry in his eyes. This upsets me. I can’t do anything about it. I can’t do anything about it. I can’t tell anyone about it. I promised him…
   I slowly back away, not realizing that I fall into a hole. This hole Is dark. Very dark. Once I land  on the floor, I smell something so beautiful. Flowers are surrounding me. All kinds of flowers. Roses, daffodils, lilies, all kinds. I slowly stand up and look around. I see a sign and was towards it. My heart is pounding. Fast. I look at it and read what’s on it.
                  Zeg
   That’s all It says. I’m confused. Why would his name be on that sign?
Turiano (m)
Re: Don't Have An Exact Title -_-
« #1 on: October 14, 2009, 04:24 PM »

@cara,you r'e a good writter if only u r'e focussed.and you should have what is called writting techniques.where u,have a particular idea or story to developed on.start from there u see urself at the top.
caramelsq (f)
Re: Don't Have An Exact Title -_-
« #2 on: October 15, 2009, 03:22 AM »

You mean correct my spelling?
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