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odada (m)
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I Cry!
« on: December 23, 2006, 09:51 PM » |
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TRIALS;
In a faraway land I found love,
one that i didnt truely deserve,
nothing like the previous "pequinas"av dated,
one that rilli made me elated,
----without d comfort n'luxury I'm used to,
----without my immoral shenanigans,
I learnt how to be a man!
FATE;
Being penniless n' alone,
she made me whole!
with all my unhealthyhabits,
, she tolerated me!!
In my trying times,
she was aleiz a dime!!!
but little did i know that I was on a scale,
being measured for my worth n'tell tales.
RELATIONSHIP;
She bowed out when d ovation was loudest,
after she'D reformed my troubled being,
my heart sank like shakespearse tempest,
that i can't feel a single thing,
and so I CRY for you:
because whenever i think of us,
its the favourite song in the CD i bought for u-
-that I alweiz remember!
"all the TRIALS and FATE in the RELATIONSHIP have all made me strong"
, but still i shed these tears.
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hola2ng (m)
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@ odada
Trials, fate, relationship -deifinitely will make us stronger.
Strong words, good poem!!
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odada (m)
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thanks y'all!the inspiration came from a girl i rilli loved and met while serving!i guess am stronger now thankx to all of that  |
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hola2ng (m)
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Its all good.
Keep it real. 1Luv !
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odada (m)
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i weep!  |
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saintsam (m)
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Nice poem, It reminds me of somethn but now am stronger |
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olawa20 (m)
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Nice poem, It reminds me of somethn but now am stronger thanks y'all!the inspiration came from a girl i rilli loved and met while serving!i guess am stronger now thankx to all of that nice poem! resonates true. |
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odada (m)
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Re: I Cry!
« #10 on: February 14, 2007, 02:55 AM » |
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true that!men  |
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Aloofaa (m)
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Re: I Cry!
« #11 on: February 16, 2007, 01:46 PM » |
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nice poem, though i really don't buy the 'hero-worship' undertone.
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odada (m)
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Re: I Cry!
« #12 on: February 17, 2007, 01:07 AM » |
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@aloofa
'hero-worship'undertone? ???what do u mean men?
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uspry1 (f)
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wow! that is remind of something I used to be, NOW i am much changed.
Like the song I learned for solo rehearsal the last minute last year for Ohio state we all deaf choir travelled---until the night I performed singing in sign language with CD music, oh my lord everyone in the congregation SHOUTED!
"Changed, Changed" song by Walter Hawkins and The Hawkins Family.
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odada (m)
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awwwwwwwwwwww baby |
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