Saying Goodbye

Date: September 07, 2008, 01:02 AM
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Labans (m)

Saying Goodbye

« on: January 17, 2007, 05:56 PM »

So soft
the brief touch of your lips
on my cheek.

Was I almost intruding?

"Look after yourself "
should have been
"I love you!"

Then the Jumbo flew over
my head
and I shouted my love
above the roar
and thundering thrust

. . . as if you'D hear.

Through the clouds in my eyes
I watched you fly away
and wished I'D been born with wings.

Lalas (m)

Re: Saying Goodbye

« #1 on: January 20, 2007, 08:09 AM »

kai, that good bye musta hurt!! i liked it very much, because it coincisely depicts all the emotions felt at once,

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