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hola2ng (m)
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She walks beauty and then the moon saw her whispered to the sun from afar model like and still angelic even the wind remained static the way she walked caused tremors in the earth and my heart sputerred like a car out of gas my heart was being fast and then she looked at me at last i melted like ice that was my sacrifice...
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seyefar (m)
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bravooooooooooooo.............
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hola2ng (m)
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thanx. 1 Love.
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Z4M4eva (f)
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Love it too 
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hola2ng (m)
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Thank y'all for the love. realy appreciate it !!
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DoubleRevv (m)
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I would refer you to Kanu Heart Foundation.
That was cool though I appreciate poems that conjure Old world emotions i.e nothing about cars, phones, You know!
maybe more of campfires, buccaneers etc.
1 love.
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