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Sean25 (m)
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Sometimes i wonder, why im so fond of you
I've seen so many faces and met so many people
But none quite like you
Your face is not the most beautiful i have seen
But definitely the most stunning
Your voice is not the sweetest i've heard
But definitely the most alluring
Maybe its your smile which brightens me up
Maybe its When you talk that i wish you'd never stop
Maybe its When i hear your voice & i feel like a baby
Wanting that voice to be near all the time
Maybe its When i see your smile & i feel a warm glow from the deepest part of me
Making me come alive like the dawning of a new day
I can't really tell
I don't really understand
But i can tell it happens when you come around
And i want you to come some more
There are a thousand and one reasons people give for the things they do
But i just can't explain why i'm so fond of you
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hot-angel (f)
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This is just beautiful. I love it. Your face is not the most beautiful i have seen
But definitely the most stunning
Your voice is not the sweetest i've heard
But definitely the most alluring . That's my favorite part. I Love that part. |
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Sean25 (m)
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thanks Hot-angel
if feels good to know that a girl actually appreciates that poem
i have another one
it's called "The Inner Man"
check it out
hope you like it
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hola2ng (m)
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Really captivating.
Well done!!
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thimbook2 (m)
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/Your face is not the most beautiful i have seen
But definitely the most stunning
Your voice is not the sweetest i've heard
But definitely the most alluring/
/Your voice is not the sweetest i've heard
But definitely the most alluring
Maybe its your smile which brightens me up/
Nice, really nice. captures the feel and texture of the fabric of love.
and the "ordinary everyday" simplicity of tone makes it click home instantly,
personally, reminds me of my cutie,
a lovely piece really, keep it up bro!
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Yusufadeto (m)
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wow it so lovley, i really love it and it really something that happens, just felt like u talking about me
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davidylan (m)
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There are a thousand and one reasons people give for the things they do
But i just can't explain why i'm so fond of you
Fantastic poem! Can i borrow it for use when i propose?  |
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Sean25 (m)
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No Problem bro
i'm sure lots of people have already borrowed it without my permission
please go ahead
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RuuDie (m)
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The simplicity of it is absolutely true, pure & enchantling stirring!
smacks of an intense feeling from well within & the presentation is near perfection!
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mekoyo (m)
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This is really nice man. I like it. It's really really nice.
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dumi (f)
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In fact that was amazing and fantastic.I really do appreciate you man for such poem that is so mind glowing and touching.
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monshege
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@ poster,
this is a beautiful poem, but i could swear i have read the exact poem (with same words) somewhere online. you might want to check if they have copyrighted your work. and sure enough, i read it from one of the numerous naija websites online. kudos!
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worldismy (m)
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guys do any one have any ideal to my request
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Okejazz (m)
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I love poems like this, very romantic But I must confess On reading the 1st few lines i almost dismissed the credibility of its originality. Simply because it reminded me of Teddy Pendergrass's "You're my latest, my greatest inspiration" ( an oh so lovely piece) On further reading, i was quickly enraptured in a daydream right in my office with a beautiful Nigerian lady with an alluring ambience and a bodacious curve Talk of wishful wanting, till i spilled my coffee all over my desk  Anyway, i love it , keep it up. |
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teepy (f)
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Awesome poem,very real.Do keep it on and hoping to read more of such.
Very nice,kind of speaking my mind to my Fiance.
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yelum (f)
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Maybe its When i see your smile & i feel a warm glow from the deepest part of me [i][/i] this part is so so true. love it. |
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kemoade (f)
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l love this so much it reminds of someone special. please keep it up.
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pmdaboh (f)
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I loved your poem, for it was very beautiful. Keep writing, for we may be purchasing your book one day![b][/b] 
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2dye4 (m)
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the poem is so cool, who or what inspired it?
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laraba (f)
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beautiful, beautiful, beautiful, where did you pull this out from? I love it. Do you have more poems you'd like to share?
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temmyabby (f)
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aawwww, so sweet, but the word should be deeper than fond
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Sean25 (m)
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beautiful, beautiful, beautiful, where did you pull this out from? I love it. Do you have more poems you'd like to share?
YES i do this is one of my favourites but my number one can be found on the LITERATURE/POETRY BOARD it's called "The Inner Man" its not romantic O but very very deep i hope you'll like it http://www.nairaland.com/nigeria?topic=41129.msg899949#msg899949 |
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Sean25 (m)
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the poem is so cool, who or what inspired it?
A girl i fell in love with in SS3 she did not know i told her after we graduted university and we both had a laugh she's getting married soon though |
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FactorChic (f)
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awwwww, that was so sweet and u know, sometimes its good to tell some people how much you care about them, u'll realise how relieved u will be when u do so that poem was beautiful, too bad she's getting married NICE POEM!  |
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olawa20 (m)
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A girl i fell in love with in SS3
she did not know
i told her after we graduted university and we both had a laugh
she's getting married soon though
this is just beautiful. it immediately conjures the memory of a loved one. funny where inspiration originates from atimes |
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hot chic (f)
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Your face is not the most beautiful i have seen
But definitely the most stunning
Your voice is not the sweetest i've heard
But definitely the most alluring
Maybe its your smile which brightens me up
Maybe its When you talk that i wish you'd never stop
Maybe its When i hear your voice & i feel like a baby
Wanting that voice to be near all the time
Maybe its When i see your smile & i feel a warm glow from the deepest part of me
That was so sweet.That part was really lovely,your girl must be really lucky that if you display those qualities.Kudos.
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oyb (m)
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There’s something about u,
Your beautiful, exotic features
Your endearing smile,
Your soft, honeyed tones,
Your sweet, charming disposition,
I just don’t know. . .
But it makes me think about u. . .
All the time
an old one of mine. . . .
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junegirl (f)
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@Sean25:
Very very nice. But why did you wait until after university to tell her? Things might have turned out differently between you two. Maybe
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Sean25 (m)
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@Sean25:
Very very nice. But why did you wait until after university to tell her? Things might have turned out differently between you two. Maybe
Yeah i know but i was naiive, young and inexperienced Besides,sometimes you gotta let a good thing go to get a better thing You should see my girlfriend of today She gets all the poems and "MORE" |
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