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otoidea (m)
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precicly
guess uv not made ne girl feel that before
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cute-ass (f)
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with tears in my eyes, i give hot-angel a standing ovation for this beautiful work of art@ hot-angel dearie this creation in one word . . . LOVELY  you just moved me to tears, and got my heart pounding. thanks darling, for the entertainment.
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ehix (m)
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hi, your poem was tha bomb!
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ashala (m)
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Na wah ,i nearly come as i dey the poem.
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Uche2nna (m)
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I wonder if it is because of the theme of the poem that makes it draw such profuse accolades. I have seen other poems as good (or even better than this) but they never drew such amount of accolades.
Anyway, nice poem, sha!!!
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hot-angel (f)
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with tears in my eyes, i give hot-angel a standing ovation for this beautiful work of art@ hot-angel dearie this creation in one word . . . LOVELY you just moved me to tears, and got my heart pounding. thanks darling, for the entertainment. Awwwww, thank you darling. You are farr to kind, and I appreciate that. :-) Thanks Wes. You r a sweetheart. I wonder if it is because of the theme of the poem that makes it draw such profuse accolades. I have seen other poems as good (or even better than this) but they never drew such amount of accolades.
Anyway, nice poem, sha!!!
Thank You dear. :-) |
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Ilovemyhus (f)
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Would you mind If I use the poem to show my husband.  It is an amazing poem. |
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damygurl (f)
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i wish i could really critic this poem but i can't. I'm one of the few who don't appreciate poetry. but because i read a lot of romantic novel i see a lot of good and bad lovemaking scene. compared to some of the good ones i've seen you are definately on the right track and they've been doing it for a very long time.
i'D like to see more stuff on something like maybe the weather? we need to have a really long talk girl. girls of nowadays gan sef. what are they teaching you @ that college?
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ufuoslee (f)
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is this the ehis that gra from abraka bus admin dept
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oleku (m)
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Can you please re-post this poem in yoruba for those of us who don't understand poem in english.
Thanks
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ehi4life (m)
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Nice poem, but a little bit raw, i believe topics like sex and lovemaking should be somthing secret and forbidden, to realistic its the secrecy of sex that makes it enjoyable. the fact that you are doing somthing out of the ordinary, that why married people cheat, with your wife it becomes official and it kind of takes the fun away. so forbidden and secret i think lovemaking should be  |
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whiteroses (f)
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zebudaya don't hate appreciate or appreciate or APPRECIATE
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wasma (m)
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love making is a good and bad decision to make better be wise not to make the bad one
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odada (m)
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doh was that a response to the poem or a personnal vendetta come advice?  @wasma |
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odada (m)
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y didnt he just start a new topic and post his poem thr so we can all review this not a poetry contest we are all trying to comment and appreciate hot angels love making lyrics! not directed at anyone but the dude who posted above me should get a raincheck because i think its for him  ;Dnice poem too though! |
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whiteboy (m)
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Peace y'all!!
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hot-angel (f)
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@ whiteboy, yeah it would be better if you copied and pasted this a new topic. Please modify it. . . Thanks.
By the way, It was nicee
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odada (m)
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@white boy
The THRASHY has spoken!MIEEEN!
hot angels post
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sasha4u (f)
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@hot angel
just like your name,your are one hot angel without the wings though.My imagination was just running as i read it, thinking of when i made love last to my girl,now you ahve given a hard on i didn't want,thanx anyway i loved it we may share somethings in common emotiom wise.your guy is lucky.
yuck! a hard on- u should learn to keep certain things to yourself. ah |
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hot chic (f)
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OMG,wea did u get that,that was so funny n interesting
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jaybaby (f)
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Ewwwwwwww 2 long
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odada (m)
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ahan!thats all that u can say innit? not minding the replies hotangel,u did a really pretty job ib constructing this poem! |
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hot-angel (f)
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Thanks y'all.
@ odada, thanks dear.
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odada (m)
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you'r mos' definately welcome sugar! @hot angel
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richylaw (m)
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@ oleku,
as if you saw my mind,
This will be great in yoruba, igbo and hausa translation afterall na naira land. I have cooked up a yoruba version for hot angel's poem. please note that she has her copyright and I don't have any further intention than to present it in another language on nairaland only. I hope this will be fun as well. I will roll it out by evening today.
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hot-angel (f)
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@ oleku,
as if you saw my mind,
This will be great in yoruba, igbo and hausa translation afterall na naira land. I have cooked up a yoruba version for hot angel's poem. please note that she has her copyright and I don't have any further intention than to present it in another language on nairaland only. I hope this will be fun as well. I will roll it out by evening today.
Uhmm i like that you did that, trust me i really do. But there's a but now sweetie, I ermm, I erm, well i wouldn't like it to be posted now. Shey you understand me? And my "copyright" laws, also include that it shouldn't be translated into another language or posted anywhere else on the internet without my name "Hot-angel - Lizzy" Following it. Okay so if you think my own is too much, please let me be like that. I don't want somebody thinking i turned the yoruba one into an english version. Thanks for understand please. Just read, leave a comment, and move. No remixes, or translations. I beg you. Mmkay dear? |
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$hadex (m)
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Hey Hot-angel,nice poem there. Really Creative for a girl of your age.Do you have a link where i can read more of your creative poems?
Are you one of the girls in the picture on your profile,lol i know its a silly question but am really asking.
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richylaw (m)
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ok hot angel, as you said, " read and move on" however if you need the yoruba version and an audio of it for your further advancement i have it right on my desk in your name. I understand and respect copyright so it lies that way
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