I have received three rejection slips and the rejection slips came from the same publisher I am sticking with, because as Bishop Ajayi Crowther said,
only the best is good enough for us. The publisher is one of the biggest publishers in the world.
I am addressing rejection slips and how writers react to them.
Here is the latest of the three rejection slips and my solution.
Many thanks for this submission. I truly respect your ability and tenacity with your writing -- it's the mark of any successful writer. And while I recognize the effort to outline a story of magical realism, I'm afraid that the way the story unfolds is just too fragmented and develops too many strands that are not tied together in an effective enough way to make this story commercially viable for our program.
I am unfortunately going to pass, but urge you to submit other pieces if you are amenable, and as you continue to refine your craft.
Best,
Daniel
Thank you for your swift reply. Your work sounds most interesting.
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My friend Bisi Ojediran writes whenever he is on vacation in London, because distractions in Nigeria can affect your concentration. Helon Habila writes better since he relocated to the UK and from the UK to the US.