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spunk (m)
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Pain
« on: January 25, 2006, 11:14 AM » |
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Tears cascade down her face
she's been hurt again
it seems every time she finds love
like a mirage it disappears
her heart ach with pain
and in place of love
hate now reign
her thoughts are filled with rage
she clenched her fist ,clamp her teeth
let out a scream
she could not understand why
it had to be her everytime.
They say there's pain in love
but this type never goes away
it lingers,it brews,and like a fermented food
it let out it fury of unpleasant intent
maybe one day all these will change
she await that day
hopefully love would come her way again
until then pain reign.
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Z4M4eva (f)
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Re: Pain
« #1 on: January 25, 2006, 11:19 AM » |
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Awww...such a sad poem, well done though
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spunk (m)
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Re: Pain
« #2 on: January 25, 2006, 11:27 AM » |
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yes oooo really sad abi? it's good to cry sometimes,makes you feel alive!!! anyway thank 4 reading my poem Zee.hope you don't mind me calling you that.
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Z4M4eva (f)
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Re: Pain
« #3 on: January 25, 2006, 11:28 AM » |
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No not at all...I don't mind,it's actually my pet name,thanx
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justme
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Re: Pain
« #4 on: January 25, 2006, 12:37 PM » |
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hey spunk, haven't you got anything better to do? please if you're heart broken see a specialist, don't spoil peoples day with your PAIN in the you-know-where poem  |
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spunk (m)
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Re: Pain
« #5 on: January 25, 2006, 12:46 PM » |
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your belle!
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Rhodalyn (f)
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Re: Pain
« #6 on: March 26, 2006, 03:04 AM » |
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love hurts sometimes  |
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