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snazzydawn (f)
Re: Fill In The Story
« #160 on: April 05, 2006, 09:17 AM »

the hairs on the back of my neck stood,I felt goosebumps on my body and I felt a gust of wind rush past me.I dropped the man and began to move quickly away from there,I felt as if someone was watching me,all my veins were screaming with terror so I started running,running as fast as my legs could carry me.
Zahymaka (m)
Re: Fill In The Story
« #161 on: April 05, 2006, 12:07 PM »

The feeling of being watched followed me to my car. My legs felt like rubber and I kept thinking they'D give way or that I'D wet myself.

Suddenly, there was a burst of blinding white light
snazzydawn (f)
Re: Fill In The Story
« #162 on: April 05, 2006, 12:18 PM »

I hit the ground with a thud,shielding my eyes with my hands.The light came closer,blinding me with its brightness,so intense,so encompassing,I slowly removed my hands from my eyes and as I stared at the light,a sense of awe surrrounded me.
Zahymaka (m)
Re: Fill In The Story
« #163 on: April 05, 2006, 12:22 PM »

Aside: Snazz -- are you a writer? You complement me beautifully -- just use more paragraphs for easy readability


Go on,  I have no ideas.
Fluffy (f)
Re: Fill In The Story
« #164 on: April 05, 2006, 12:35 PM »

It was so bright so beautiful! I looked closer and could make out the figure of a man inside.
Suddenly I saw flaming red eyes staring at me from inside, sending a burning sensation through my body and soul.
I was numb, I couldn't speak, I couldn't run and then he spoke in an evil voice that sounded like thunder in my ears,

snazzydawn (f)
Re: Fill In The Story
« #165 on: April 05, 2006, 12:43 PM »

I was so petrified with terror,I was looking into his eyes,his eyes were screaming of hatred,I tried to pry my eyes away but something in it kept drawing me closer.I opened my mouth and screamed!!!!!!!
I jumped up and realised I was dreaming!!!I was drenched in cold sweat but I was relieved it was a dream.
Grizzly (m)
Re: Fill In The Story
« #166 on: April 05, 2006, 12:45 PM »

, only something about this dream wasnt right.
Zahymaka (m)
Re: Fill In The Story
« #167 on: April 05, 2006, 12:54 PM »

I sniffed. Something was burning -- the smell was like burning rubber.

I crept out of my bedroom and noticed there was intense light coming from the living room. I opened the door and was hit by intense light. The wires had erupted and were burning.
dm (m)
Re: Fill In The Story
« #168 on: April 05, 2006, 02:07 PM »

Damn me, i left the candle on, the previous night before going to bed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed
snazzydawn (f)
Re: Fill In The Story
« #169 on: April 05, 2006, 02:13 PM »

 I tried to extinguish the fire nut it was too late.My whole house was burning up and there was little I could do to salvage the situation.A feeling of despondency crept all over me and I hung my head and walked out of the house,barely missing the flames.I went outside and watched the flames lick my house,I saw many years of sweat get licked in the flames,I sank down on my knees and screamed!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
dm (m)
Re: Fill In The Story
« #170 on: April 05, 2006, 02:17 PM »

LORD W-H-Y MEEEEEE
snazzydawn (f)
Re: Fill In The Story
« #171 on: April 05, 2006, 02:21 PM »

the tears cascaded down my face in torrents,I could not stop crying,I wept like a baby,it was uncontrollable.
After a while,all was silent,I looked up,the fire had gotten tired of burning,embers of what used my home were crackling,but there was an inner peace within me.I felt a kind of peace coarse through me.
dm (m)
Re: Fill In The Story
« #172 on: April 05, 2006, 02:27 PM »

Quote from: snazzydawn on April 05, 2006, 02:21 PM
but there was an inner peace within me.I felt a kind of peace coarse through me.
  Huh Huh Huh

please continue
Fluffy (f)
Re: Fill In The Story
« #173 on: April 05, 2006, 02:33 PM »

It was as if everything had happened for a reason. I saw all the events of the previous day in a flash, the strange dreams especially the white light with the burning red eyes.  Then it hit me they were all just warnings of what is to come.
As I looked again at the ashes left from what used to be my house I smiled a big smile, I remembered I had every single item insured!!!
I got up silently and went for a long peaceful walk not having to worry about a single thing.

THE END


It had to end one way or another any new fresh ideas Smiley
dm (m)
Re: Fill In The Story
« #174 on: April 05, 2006, 02:42 PM »

 Angry Angry Angry

why are u ending it

snazzydawn still has fantastic ideas  and the whole CREW  also,      come on. Angry Angry Angry
snazzydawn (f)
Re: Fill In The Story
« #175 on: April 05, 2006, 02:55 PM »

, as I was walking,I heard something in my trouser pocket ringing.For a moment I thought it was my phone,then I recalled that my phone must have been lost in the inferno.It kept ringing,I put my hands into my pocket and by golly,it really was my phone!!!I pressed the "ok" button to answer the call.
Fluffy (f)
Re: Fill In The Story
« #176 on: April 05, 2006, 02:58 PM »

 Cheesy Cheesy Cheesy Cheesy Cheesy Cheesy Cheesy Cheesy Cheesy Cheesy Cheesy Cheesy Cheesy Cheesy Cheesy Cheesy Cheesy Cheesy
Grin Grin Grin Grin Grin Grin Grin Grin Grin Grin Grin Grin Grin Grin Grin Grin Grin Grin
snazzydawn (f)
Re: Fill In The Story
« #177 on: April 05, 2006, 03:06 PM »

 Angry this aint the smiley thread.
dm (m)
Re: Fill In The Story
« #178 on: April 05, 2006, 03:14 PM »

it was a call from a cousin of mine telling me bout an incident that happened two days ago,    i was like God , what could this be AGAIN?
Zahymaka (m)
Re: Fill In The Story
« #179 on: April 05, 2006, 03:47 PM »

Just then I heard a scream. Someone staggered out of the house completely covered in flames.

He was just one charred  figure, emitting blood-curdling yells as he fell to the ground and thrashed on the ground.

I realised he had come to kill somebody -- me.
snazzydawn (f)
Re: Fill In The Story
« #180 on: April 05, 2006, 03:48 PM »

*what house?you are on the road.Please rephrase*
Fluffy (f)
Re: Fill In The Story
« #181 on: April 05, 2006, 03:52 PM »

Okay now I'm completely lost and confused, I thought we walked away from the house and received a call about some incident two days ago.
where does the person covered in flames come from?  Huh  Huh  Huh
Zahymaka (m)
Re: Fill In The Story
« #182 on: April 05, 2006, 03:54 PM »

I just left the burning house. It's still in view.
Fluffy (f)
Re: Fill In The Story
« #183 on: April 05, 2006, 03:56 PM »

*My creative juices just stopped flowing*
snazzydawn (f)
Re: Fill In The Story
« #184 on: April 05, 2006, 03:57 PM »

that was 2 days ago!!!
Zahymaka (m)
Re: Fill In The Story
« #185 on: April 05, 2006, 03:58 PM »

*So do we cut it out and go back to the call?*
2cantango (f)
Re: Fill In The Story
« #186 on: April 05, 2006, 04:23 PM »

 Undecided
dm (m)
Re: Fill In The Story
« #187 on: April 05, 2006, 05:59 PM »

Quote from: Zahymaka on April 05, 2006, 03:58 PM
*So do we cut it out and go back to the call?*


please yes o Wink
Grizzly (m)
Re: Fill In The Story
« #188 on: April 06, 2006, 11:10 AM »

1 hell of a story. a book by twenty-summing different authors. jeez!!  Grin
Fluffy (f)
Re: Fill In The Story
« #189 on: April 06, 2006, 11:50 AM »

Why is everyone so quiet all of a sudden? I told you we should have ended this story and start over, but noone listens to little old Fluffy Sad
Now noone has any idea of what to write Tongue
Rhodalyn (f)
Re: Fill In The Story
« #190 on: April 06, 2006, 01:31 PM »

this story is soo not cuul Shocked Shocked Shocked Shocked Shocked seems to me as if we're all just trying to save it from collapsing Shocked Shocked Shocked so complicated, so longgggg, so . . . . . . .
2cantango (f)
Re: Fill In The Story
« #191 on: April 06, 2006, 04:09 PM »

Quote from: Fluffy on April 06, 2006, 11:50 AM
Why is everyone so quiet all of a sudden? I told you we should have ended this story and start over, but noone listens to little old Fluffy Sad
Now noone has any idea of what to write Tongue

I'm with you on this Fluffy Wink Let your creative juices flow and start the next NL best seller Cool
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