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snazzydawn (f)
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the hairs on the back of my neck stood,I felt goosebumps on my body and I felt a gust of wind rush past me.I dropped the man and began to move quickly away from there,I felt as if someone was watching me,all my veins were screaming with terror so I started running,running as fast as my legs could carry me.
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Zahymaka (m)
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The feeling of being watched followed me to my car. My legs felt like rubber and I kept thinking they'D give way or that I'D wet myself.
Suddenly, there was a burst of blinding white light
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snazzydawn (f)
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I hit the ground with a thud,shielding my eyes with my hands.The light came closer,blinding me with its brightness,so intense,so encompassing,I slowly removed my hands from my eyes and as I stared at the light,a sense of awe surrrounded me.
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Zahymaka (m)
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Aside: Snazz -- are you a writer? You complement me beautifully -- just use more paragraphs for easy readability
Go on, I have no ideas.
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Fluffy (f)
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It was so bright so beautiful! I looked closer and could make out the figure of a man inside. Suddenly I saw flaming red eyes staring at me from inside, sending a burning sensation through my body and soul. I was numb, I couldn't speak, I couldn't run and then he spoke in an evil voice that sounded like thunder in my ears,
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snazzydawn (f)
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I was so petrified with terror,I was looking into his eyes,his eyes were screaming of hatred,I tried to pry my eyes away but something in it kept drawing me closer.I opened my mouth and screamed!!!!!!! I jumped up and realised I was dreaming!!!I was drenched in cold sweat but I was relieved it was a dream.
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Grizzly (m)
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, only something about this dream wasnt right.
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Zahymaka (m)
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I sniffed. Something was burning -- the smell was like burning rubber.
I crept out of my bedroom and noticed there was intense light coming from the living room. I opened the door and was hit by intense light. The wires had erupted and were burning.
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snazzydawn (f)
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I tried to extinguish the fire nut it was too late.My whole house was burning up and there was little I could do to salvage the situation.A feeling of despondency crept all over me and I hung my head and walked out of the house,barely missing the flames.I went outside and watched the flames lick my house,I saw many years of sweat get licked in the flames,I sank down on my knees and screamed!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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dm (m)
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LORD W-H-Y MEEEEEE
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snazzydawn (f)
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the tears cascaded down my face in torrents,I could not stop crying,I wept like a baby,it was uncontrollable. After a while,all was silent,I looked up,the fire had gotten tired of burning,embers of what used my home were crackling,but there was an inner peace within me.I felt a kind of peace coarse through me.
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dm (m)
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but there was an inner peace within me.I felt a kind of peace coarse through me.
 please continue
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Fluffy (f)
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It was as if everything had happened for a reason. I saw all the events of the previous day in a flash, the strange dreams especially the white light with the burning red eyes. Then it hit me they were all just warnings of what is to come. As I looked again at the ashes left from what used to be my house I smiled a big smile, I remembered I had every single item insured!!! I got up silently and went for a long peaceful walk not having to worry about a single thing. THE END It had to end one way or another any new fresh ideas 
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snazzydawn (f)
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, as I was walking,I heard something in my trouser pocket ringing.For a moment I thought it was my phone,then I recalled that my phone must have been lost in the inferno.It kept ringing,I put my hands into my pocket and by golly,it really was my phone!!!I pressed the "ok" button to answer the call.
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snazzydawn (f)
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 this aint the smiley thread.
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dm (m)
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it was a call from a cousin of mine telling me bout an incident that happened two days ago, i was like God , what could this be AGAIN?
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Zahymaka (m)
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Just then I heard a scream. Someone staggered out of the house completely covered in flames.
He was just one charred figure, emitting blood-curdling yells as he fell to the ground and thrashed on the ground.
I realised he had come to kill somebody -- me.
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snazzydawn (f)
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*what house?you are on the road.Please rephrase*
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Fluffy (f)
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Okay now I'm completely lost and confused, I thought we walked away from the house and received a call about some incident two days ago. where does the person covered in flames come from? 
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Zahymaka (m)
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I just left the burning house. It's still in view.
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Fluffy (f)
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*My creative juices just stopped flowing*
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snazzydawn (f)
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that was 2 days ago!!!
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Zahymaka (m)
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*So do we cut it out and go back to the call?*
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dm (m)
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*So do we cut it out and go back to the call?*
please yes o 
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Grizzly (m)
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1 hell of a story. a book by twenty-summing different authors. jeez!! 
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Fluffy (f)
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Why is everyone so quiet all of a sudden? I told you we should have ended this story and start over, but noone listens to little old Fluffy  Now noone has any idea of what to write 
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2cantango (f)
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Why is everyone so quiet all of a sudden? I told you we should have ended this story and start over, but noone listens to little old Fluffy  Now noone has any idea of what to write  I'm with you on this Fluffy  Let your creative juices flow and start the next NL best seller 
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