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froggie (m)
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I WANT You GUYS TO CRITCISE THIS DESIGN. C'MON GO AHEAD N LETS SEE WHAT THE MISTAKES ARE LIKE,  |
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Raymond88
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The stamp of excellence needs to be worked ongood design though.
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richylaw (m)
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Just use a light shade glow / shadow for your excellence stamp and you should be scoring 65%. Good one anyway.
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Kemjisuper (m)
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Good job
Parts of the excellence stamp is obstructing a bit of the important information. Not that we can't guess what's there, but I think withe the stamp taking up all that space on the design, the text deserves some privacy (don't u think?)
Cheers
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froggie (m)
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YEA I SEE WHAT You MEAN, |
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Rodent
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The main area of the image, the seal is conveying absolutely nothing.
Apart form the fact that the seal is neither realistic looking nor functional, this is, I believe meant to be an advert for a product or service.
The product USP and message have been lost and is not conveyed to the viewer.
The images on the left hand side also do not aid at all in the conveyance of the message.
Better use of the headline and strap is required
More thought needs to go into what the aim of this advert is and how it would be conveyed to the viewer
A quick look/view should leave the viewer with a clear picture of both what the service/product is and what it does.
Try to achieve this both visually and typographically, in an instant, because normally that is all one has to 'draw' in a viewer/potential buyer/client.
On the flip side, i'm aware that time and effort have gone into this piece and those are required factors to creating better and improved work.
Keep up the good work
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wham (m)
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The Seal doesnt exactly look like one unit. Some parts are too glossy while others are plain. Some parts look more 3D and plastic while some are like simple coloured flat flash shapes.
there is something wrong in this light sha but it was good work.
Keep it up
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soulstar (m)
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give the excellence text a glass effect
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sojioguns (m)
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There is a lot of wasted space. The stamp is really bare. It should be a lot smaller, like an actual stamp (about 1/for the size). More emphasis should be laid on the innovative design of the product (kobian). Increase the size of the main message.
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