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nuttyproff (m)

Alone Out Here

« on: July 17, 2007, 02:21 PM »

alone out here
without you around
i miss ur smile
ur laugh and ur jokes

alone out here
without you around
to share my joy
my pain and tears

alone out here
without you around
the world seems empty
without life and colour

alone out here
without you around
it's very lonely

Ndi (f)

Re: Alone Out Here

« #1 on: July 27, 2007, 01:24 PM »

Yes! these are the kind of words (Genuine) anyone would like to hear from the one they love.

But it is really unfortunate we use these words without any significance. Huh

RuuDie (m)

Re: Alone Out Here

« #2 on: August 02, 2007, 03:37 PM »

Very original. . . simple, straight-cut. . . no theatrics. . . very exhibition of how simplicty can have a dazzling effect on an audience!

Thumbs up. . . nobody else could'a put it better - it's your heart concisely put out on print !

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