Okay, I'm feeling ya. But I still wonder if you're personifying something using the mad man.
Denex man. . . that's the beauty of the creative arts; you see different depending on where you're looking from!
@Rhapsody,
this is brilliant. . . the last two lines of 1
st verse/ first two of the next conflict some to me, but the writer is best in the know. . .
it'd blow an audience away if well read - i marvel at the conciseness. . . champagne stuff!