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bibiking1 (m)
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i wait in anxiety as my heart gets knowledge of the sight before me.
with their Agbada's and Babariga's they toil diligently
they are soaked in the sweat of perverse ways i smell the combined stench it is a strong smell of ill gotten wealth
i fear being caught but they are too engrossed to bother the hole must be covered fast
they lay in the already decomposed body and begin to replace the earth
with care i slip back into the forest one of many eyes that saw it
the grave diggers burying God!
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denex
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I already commented on this somewhere else, but I just wanted to say I really enjoyed it and that you always write about important issues that everyone else ignores.
I know you've been busy these past couple of months so let me see what you've been up to.
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RuuDie (m)
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There's some intense cipher write there. . . . . i'm not g'onna fool anybody least of all me'self by trying to act like i understand a line of whats written out there but the visual representations running around in my head of what it could possibly be about is testament to what a quality poem it is - vague, undecipherable; seeming gibberish but loaded with a powerful, powerful message that only the author can vividly outline!
That title just grabs u by the scruff of ur neck and u gots no choice but 2 read - I doff my hat guy, you to much!
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bibiking1 (m)
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Thanks man, i am quite elated that some one does love my work
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RuuDie (m)
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Thanks man, i am quite elated that some one does love my work
N'ah man. . . . u shld be getting all the thanx 4 giving us a piece 2 relish 
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