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bibiking1 (m)
Burying God!
« on: September 10, 2007, 06:03 AM »

i wait in anxiety
as my heart gets knowledge
of the sight before me.

with their Agbada's
and Babariga's they toil
diligently

they are soaked
in the sweat of perverse ways
i smell the combined stench
it is a strong smell of ill gotten wealth

i fear being caught
but they are too engrossed to bother
the hole must be covered fast

they lay in the already
decomposed body
and begin to replace the earth

with care i slip back into the forest
one of many eyes that saw it

the grave diggers
burying God!
denex
Re: Burying God!
« #1 on: September 17, 2007, 01:39 PM »

I already commented on this somewhere else, but I just wanted to say I really enjoyed it and that you always write about important issues that everyone else ignores.

I know you've been busy these past couple of months so let me see what you've been up to.
RuuDie (m)
Re: Burying God!
« #2 on: October 03, 2007, 01:20 PM »

There's some intense cipher write there. . . . .  i'm not g'onna fool anybody least of all me'self by trying to act like i understand a line of whats written out there but the visual representations running around in my head of what it could possibly be about is testament to what a quality poem it is - vague, undecipherable; seeming gibberish but loaded with a powerful, powerful message that only the author can vividly outline!

That title just grabs u by the scruff of ur neck and u gots no choice but 2 read - I doff my hat guy, you to much!
bibiking1 (m)
Re: Burying God!
« #3 on: October 03, 2007, 02:29 PM »

Thanks man, i am quite elated that some one does love my work
RuuDie (m)
Re: Burying God!
« #4 on: October 05, 2007, 12:09 PM »

Quote from: bibiking1 on October 03, 2007, 02:29 PM
Thanks man, i am quite elated that some one does love my work

N'ah man. . . .  u shld be getting all the thanx 4 giving us a piece 2 relish  Cool
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