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laide o (f)
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Any poets on Nairaland? Well here's one of my poems. Tell me what you think about it. Anyone else who has a poem to post should do the same and we'll give our views. inspiration walked away
DEPRESSED
a silent tip-toeing walk
hapiness said hes goodbyes
in search of a more cheerful host
laughter kissed me on the cheek
it was fun while it lasted,now i take my leave
love ranaway
how could you desert me
tears become my bestfriend
my only companion
while hatred moved in
set hes bags by the door
pity threw mw a party
"go on wallow"he said
loneliness called to say he was coming
hope you have a spare bed
sadness crept in where love fled
suicide tot it best to play with my head
anger moved in next door
he says"anytime you need me ill be there"
now i have this particular swagger
like one not right in the head
eyes seem heavy
like i stayed up a thousand nites
now i walk a tired walk
that which resembles the living dead
if i didnt know better
id say i was DEPRESSED!
MY AFRICAN BROTHER
my african brother why do you wear masks why do you try to conceal the very thing that makes you who you are you try to rid yourself of all africaness my black skinned brother wearing white masks how dare you sell your soul for a spot in their good books you seek for a check beside your name a sign of approval...almost like fame skin;of toasted bread and coffee your almost white...you presume be not fooled by the lightness of your skin your as black as can be if only you could get rid of the stain "stain" that's what you call it to you,being black causes you pain in your dream world your of european descent imagining your self chattering away in brilliant oxford accent prancing on the streets of london swaps hes dashiki's for hes three piece flannel suit you turn your nose upwards when you come across a fellow man of your home you upset my insides you bloody sell-out you deny your roots but i just laugh black man in white man's clothing they mock you secretly "look at that poor fool..who wants to be white" they spit on the very thought of you.. my black brother be proud of who you are african from head to foot this is the very depth of your roots:black walk proud!
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trae_z (m)
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yeah I'm a poet. being writting poems since secondary school. but since i picked up rapping i've stopped feeling poems without rhymes in them. i'm sorry, ain't my fault. it's the rap/hip hopĀ in me  nice stuff but little rhymes (on and off in the first poem)
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hot-angel (f)
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laide can i invade your topic.
trea_z want to free-style? I ain't really good, but are you going to start? Or wait should i made a topic about free-styling?
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loma (m)
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A poem from my days in boarding school.
A Dining Hall Scene A scene of pandemonium A display of lawlessness An occasion for chaos An exposure of innate characters
A clash of wills Where smiles abound Long queues never end Double rations all along every hotangel and laide is involved in the struggle for a double ration
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loma (m)
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And I wrote this in 1995
The Childless Woman She has no place in society No contribution to the childish shrieks and cries in the house. No one to cuddle to her bossom She is still called iyawo,when others are called Iya abigael. A male she goat She has tilled the land for so long Yet it remains unyielding Dejected,Rejected and frustrated Tale-bearers carry her misfortune all about And the only panacea to her problem lies in the birth of a child. Though called "mother of the house" She has none to call her own Like our elders always say "ours is Ours" while "mine is mine" A woeful lot indeed.
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trae_z (m)
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@hot-angel, yeah i'll love to freestyle...battle u. havent really done it in a while online but lets give it a try. yeah maybe u should create a new thread. u start. ladies first 
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Greatpeter (m)
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I love my dansel and she loves me. Whenever she's with me I feel great, 24 hrs with me is like a second. When she touches me l feel the touch of an angel Her lips are full of honey comb She looks me straight to the eye and I was deeply moved.
Every satisfaction is just with her I never enjoy staying with anyone except her Babe, your love is fascinating, better than wine. Your neck is a tower of ivory, your hair like purple.
How pleasant and fair you are O' love for delights. you're the best that ever happened to me the treasure I cherish. You've got all I want.
losing you will be damned forever it will be a greatest treasure thrown into the ocean. I will never let you go. I just love you.
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domino (m)
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laide,you gat a good one there.i will be glad to have a fellow ladokite as one of the african contemporary poet
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Princess (f)
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who's damsel GP?
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IAH (f)
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My little rhyme... When you are faced with problems you dread; And you say to yourself; "I wish I was dead"; Your burdens are so heavy, they make you to bend; And you weep and weep till your eyes are red;
Remember, on my shoulders you can rest your head; I promise my bosom will be your bed; Don't forget or doubt that I said; I will always be your friend;
On a cross that's rugged my blood I shed; It was you that sinned but I died instead; Thus the greatest of all love, I shared; And before you pray, I have heard.
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IAH (f)
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I'm running the race just like a hare; Look back or compromise, I do not dare; Something tells me; "relax, you near" Oh No! I won't relax until I get there.
I'm moving on with a zeal so rare; Day after day, year by year; How rough the road is, I wouldn't care; I won't relax until I get there;
I know the devil has laid a snare; But the armour of God is what I wear; Even in the deepest valleys, I shall not fear; I won't relax until I get there;
I'm not satisfied with staying here; Every burden I will always bear; Even if I get not a single cheer; I won't relax until I get there.
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Greatpeter (m)
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who's damsel GP?
Ask Hotangel she will tell you. She ejoined us. And I'm enjoying every bit of it. 
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omomomi (f)
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Ride on my guy i dey gbadun u no b smal
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