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MORE RESULTS!
HYBRID-X VS WORDSMITH
HYBRID-X:
Punchlines - 14
Quote:"u wack like flowshow/lyrically over-retarded like Bolaji-broke"
Quote:"throw a couple of bars,damn,wordsmith caught stroke"
Quote:"u's kermet d frog/knew u since u was a tadpole"(I smell Talib Kweli)
Quote:"Word, u ran out of luck,smith"
Quote:"when the X walks through ur street-alleys/ish becomes d valley of d shadow of death"
Quote:"hybrid's force,u forced 2 reckon wt,u f.cking nitwit"
Quote:"my rhymes on steroids,u can't keep up"
Wordplay - 8
Quote:"ma tongue spits automatics sporadic"
Quote:"lyrically over-retarded like BOLAJI-BROKE"
Quote:"threw a couple of bars,wordsmith caught stroke"
Quote:"X breeds more terror recruitment"
Metaphors - 8
Quote:"my rhymes on steroid,u can't keep up"
Quote:"first blood like Rambo"
Quote:"wack like flowshow/lyrically over-retarded like Bolaji-broke"
Quote:"freeze hart's war like d north pole"
Multies - 4
Quote:"knew u since u was a TADPOLE/I'm that rap veteran SLASH PRO"
Quote:"Word CAUGHT STROKE/freeze hart' war like d NORTH POLE"
Creativity - 7
(got depth)
Delivery - 5
(cud be better structured)
Total = 46 pts
WORDSMITH:
Punchlines - 16
Quote:"smith cock guns/d result? U get lost on/a wkend i hover over ur carcass,u's a lost one"
Quote:"I make hybrid dig less/wt his remains on a 1+5 ft deepness"
Quote:"even if this b.tch gets signed by UEFA/u still not in my league"
Quote:"d hybrid u are/u must hve been born wt a minus rib"
Quote:"just let me find that tool then let d tool find u/this chicken's scared/i let d crimson red(blood) blind u"
Quote:"I break bread wt d divine/u's just a mere carnality"
Quote:"B please,u get worn down/like h*es doin a strip tease"
Quote:"what a trans-hybrid/u wanted d best of both of both worlds"
Wordplay - 14
Quote: "I hover(HOVA) over ur carcass/u's a LOST ONE"
Quote:"foretell ur doom whenever i breed illness"
Quote:"(W)rap it up like xmas packages"
Quote:"even if u signed wt UEFA/u still aint in my LEAGUE"
Quote:"Just let ME FIND that TOOL and let d TOOL FIND YOU"
Quote:my VERSATILITY brings about that lethal VERBAL FATALITY"
Quote:"I break bread wt d DIVINE/u just a mere CARNALITY"
Multies - 6
Quote:"wherever I BREED ILLNESS/i make hybrid dig less,on a 1+5 FEET DEEPNESS"
Quote:"took u a week 2 come up wt that WEAK ISH/u get worn down like h*es doin a STRIP TEASE"
Quote:"dnt blush so COLD GURL/what a trans-hybrid,guess u wanted d best of BOTH WORLDS"
Metaphors - 8
Quote:"D Word be that psychic illness"
Quote:"shit so sick,i write verses on toilet paper"
Quote:"(W)rap it up like xmas packages"
Quote:"get worn down like h*es doing a strip tease"
Delivery - 7
(good structure)
Creativity - 8
(nice way wt words)
Total = 57 pts
(it was a pleasure analyzing this battle.Had 2 take my time.Good fight,fellaz!)
@HYBRID-X
I dnt intend analyzing any battle involving Menike till i am convinced he doesnt harbour any more reservations about my competence and credibility as a Judge on this thread.I would rather avoid d controversy it may generate.Overstand?
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Maverik
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FROM THE 36TH CHAMBER:
In the wake of my learned brother,Zephyrr's temporary leave of absence from the thread,iam left saddled with the responsibility of presiding over this thread.
I wish to make an appeal to all combatants and well-wishers alike to give me their maximum co-operation in hosting a successful rap tourney. I do not profess to know everything about battling there4 helpful suggestions would be welcome if made in a polite and civilized manner.
Any contestants who feels aggrieved wt d results of my analysis may appeal for a re-trial giving justifiable reasons why his or her case should be re-examined.
All emcees both seasoned veterans and Young bucks alike,are strictly enjoined to treat each other wt d utmost respect and courtesy as deserving of one black man to another.
I wish everyone a successful campaign on 'STAR WARZ'.Nuff Respeck!
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Maverik
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PANEL REPORT ON BOLAJIBOAK/FLOWSHOW STANDOFF:
It is the recommendation of the panel set up to investigate d allegations of double-identity and Schizophrenia levelled against d above named persons that:
1) Bolajibaok and Flowshow shall battle themselves to prove their innocence.
2)Whoever wins d battle shall be allowed to remain as a lawful contestant on Star Warz.
3)in the event that they refuse to battle themselves,the case against them shall be deemed proved beyond reasonable doubt and they shall both be ex-communicated frm the thread and ignored by other contestants.
I hereby adopt the recommendations of the panel and rule accordingly.
@Bolajibaok & Flowshow
U are hereby paired together to battle .This is to prove u are separate individuals and not d same person. Whoever wins gets to remain in the contest.To arms! Gentlemen!
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mailmalc (m)
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@maverik Damn ! ! ! now you sound like King Solomon  anyways nice nice work Manchester United really doing your thing perfectly. . i see you started a new thread. . pro'lly you should rename it to Star Warz (The Judgement) and all the results and analysis will be carried out here while the real starwarz thread'll be the Battle Ground. hmmmm. . . . still awaiting your judgement ( mailmalc vs. hybrid-X) and @ the meantime inform wordsmith i'll be battling him and i am giving him the pleasure of drawing the first blood. |
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Jduck13 (m)
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Walking in is a caucasian man wearing a black suit and holding an AK-47, around his neck you notice a cross. I challenge whoever is deemed best here to a battle me. I must prove of my worth once again. *Loads up and prepares to take aim*.
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Maverik
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This thread is a child of necessity and legitimate offspring of the 'Star Warz' Battle thread.All results,pairings and relevant information shall be pasted here,while d battling itself continues on the original thread.
All complaints,comments and observations may be posted here.
To encourage audience participation,interested members of d public may also post their comments and predictions here.
Signed
Yours Judicially,
Judge Maverik
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HYBRID-X (m)
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@maverickking solomon  . . . .thats the correct discription hommz . . . . u doing this real proper ma nigger . . . . . .big ups to u champ . . . . neat work . . .relly neat work . . . .am interested in taking on jduck13 . . pair us aight . . @jduck13lets do battle kid . . . . . suggest u better duck coss u can't see em slugs when they flying . . . lol, . . . .lets make it happen . . .do u accept to battle the hybrid. . . ?
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Maverik
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SITUATION REPORT!
RATINGS:
Wordsmith - 4 bars
Alexpissu - 3 bars
Afrocynic - 2 bars
Malthuss - 2 bars
Hybrid-X - 2 bars
Mailmalc - 1 bar
Tianshie - 0 bar
Naijafan - 0 bar
Obedz - 0 bar
Simmy - 0 bar
Paddy_lo - 0 bar
Jduck13 - 0 bar
Saucekid - 0 bar
BATTLES:
Kress Vs Heyo (struck out for lack of diligent prosecution)
Naijafan Vs Hybrid (waiting on Hybrid)
Mailmalc Vs Simmy (waiting on Simmy)
Malthuss Vs Paddy_lo
(waiting on Paddy)
Bolajibaok Vs Flowshow (merk the man in d mirror!)
Afrocynic Vs Flowshow
(ladies first!)
Jduck Vs Mailmalc (J-nice goes first)
Tianshie Vs Saucekid
(let the King lead d subject)
RESULTS UNDER PROCESS:
Mailmalc Vs Hybrid-X
Malthuss Vs Wordsmith
REMINDER:
Keep to the rule: 16 bars strictly for each battle! Thanx.
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mailmalc (m)
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Jduck Vs Mailmalc . . . . sizzling cool man. @maverik Sup "Judge", mailmalc 1 bar ?? check the thread properly i hav defeated saucekid and obedz so far. Zephyrr was the sole judge when i defeated saucekid so his decision should still stand and remains valid till the end of the Star Warz. . . so get the ratings modified. |
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bolajibaok (m)
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@maverik now am convinced that you are truly the boss , your proposal on me battling the wannabe called flowshow is just like mr mcmahon wrestling match called ''i quit match '' in the wwe. MAVERIK, drama and more drama is what makes this thread the STARS OF ALL WARS! @menike stop doubting maveriks ruling , u complained that zepphyr does not analyse battles , now maverik does and u still complain , is there anything a human being will do that people wont complain  ? makes me remember an old ebenezer obey song .the man ,the horse and the son , human beings are never satisfied , menike aka menipoop the pooping professor , i know u r the original professor meni=poop, and lest i forget i am not true wit you,, by the time i finish the second attack on you , your cremation and naming ceremony as a pooping professor will be finally complete! @flowshow u wannabe punk, i battle and destroy all those who stands close to my vicinity, i am bolaji bjpumpin aka the lyrical gangsta. expect ur termination from this thread when i drop my ish bombshell on you. EXPECT MY I QUIT VERSE ON YOU . I AM BOLAJI AKA BJPUMPINDOGG MY FLOWS ARE SO GANGSTA AND MY SKILLS ARE SO RETARDED MAVERIK UR PROPOSAL IS ACCEPTED BY ME , WATCH ME PROOF MYSELF AS I DESTROY THE PUNK ASS MOTHERFCUKING FLOWSHOW TO PIECES! |
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bolajibaok (m)
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quote from hybrid-x:
Quote:"lyrically over-retarded like BOLAJI-BROKE"
its good to know that u acknowledge the fact that am lyrically over-retarded, ''lyrically'' was the word of pride i was looking for . thank you hybrid-x , take a close look in the past battle bolajibaok vs hybrid -x and see the line i dropped on you that turned hybrid into an high breed afin, he's mama calls him afin a genrric name for items that are crossbred!
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bolajibaok (m)
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@thecolonel
quote by thecolonel@Bolajibaok
Bros, when I rap I rap with pidgin English and from wetin my nigga Menike yan me yesterday
Hahahahaha - Boy me self go kill u now
@thecolonel
seems you are a menike's meni-poop the pooping professor's fan or stan , if u can also rap in pidgin then u may want to fllex ur muscles against me , i am bolaji aka bjpumpin the illest , am the verstaile rapper rapping in queens english ,phonetics, gangsta language and even pidgin and yoruba mixed together ,
my flows are gangsta niggas want to copy ma style !damn my skills are so retarded
so i am accepting thecolonel's invitation to an offical battle , waiting for maverik to declare that official.
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bolajibaok (m)
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enough of all these old boys and u know how we do it back in the days shit!
thats noisemaking
if any of them old gangstas are ill enough then i offically invite the following people to an official battle.
1.jduck
2.tianshe
3.rapsody
4.matthiaus
5.alextissue paper
6.wordsmith
full blooded drama is what i bring !
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Maverik
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@Mailmalc
I apologize 4 d mix-up.U ripped a bar off Obez.
Mailmalc - 2 Bars
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saucekid (m)
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wtf???
pair me up quick because i want to disfigure someone
@judge,
i stand complete on this thread
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mailmalc (m)
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bolaji please stop your numerous lengthy post on this thread. make ur reply post be simple and short as possible . . . . check for the meaning of "RETARD" @Maverik Thanks for the update |
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FLOWSHOW
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@maverik
why is this thread divided into two?
, this makes it look scattered and duplicated, i suggest u limit it to only one single thread.
@bolaji-broke
bolaji-broke , it seems u don't know me , i will gladly introduce myself .
i am the one and only FLOWSHOW, for ur information , i flow shows on niggas head,
and on ya head am definitely going to flow ma shows!
bolajibroke i will leave ur broke ass broke with no gold bars at the end of star wars tourney.ps:thats a promise.
your challenge for ''I quit battle'' is flowshowingly accepted .i aint scared of u bolaji-broke ass , u can drop ur verse first !
WORD !
@maverik and afrocynic
maverik, as u can see i am anxiously waiting for afrocynic to go first .maverik told her to drop her verse first . ladies first!
maybe she is about to chicken out, if she chickens out maverik, you could as well give me my bar off afrocynic.c/o walkover chicken out!
@maverik
since u say saucekid has(0) zero bar, i am convinced beyond reasonable doubt that i won that battle against saucekid, so kindly hand me my bar and include me in the bar rankings .YOU MAY ALSO JUDGE THE BATTLE TOO.I WILL LIKE TO SEE MY ANALYSIS AND AREAS OF IMPROVEMENT. that is saucekid vs flowshow battle.
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Maverik
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@Flowshow
Zephyrr directed that the battle between u and saucekid be disregarded due to allegations that u were Bolajiboak using a different name to battle.please be informed that u are still under trial and must battle ur other self Bolajibaok to prove ur innocence.Also bear in mind that who ever loses gets expelled frm d thread.Quit whining and get 2 spittin!
@The Community
Results coming up in a moment:
Mailmalc Vs Hybrid
Malthuss Vs Wordsmith
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Maverik
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@Flowshow
Zephyrr directed that the battle between u and saucekid be disregarded due to allegations that u were Bolajiboak using a different name to battle.please be informed that u are still under trial and must battle ur other self Bolajibaok to prove ur innocence.Also bear in mind that who ever loses gets expelled frm d thread.Quit whining and get 2 spittin!
@The Community
Results coming up in a moment:
Mailmalc Vs Hybrid
Malthuss Vs Wordsmith
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bolajibaok (m)
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@FLOWSHOW
THIS IS MY BOMBSHELL STRICTLY DIRECTED TOWARDS EXTERMINATING U FROM THIS THREAD .THIS IS UR KILLER ''I QUIT'' VERSE!
THIS TIME AM going to BE SPITTIN LIKE never BEFORE , CHECK IT EVERYONE !
flowshow my little Son
all them rappers and gangstas now know you as a wannabe garbage
seeking rapping baggages
the judges got flow 'detectors',
like 'metals' man we all know you as a 'fake ass luggage holding a cucumber cabbage'
flowshow Son lets be honest, you should pay me homage,
so nigga where's the money,for my pirated cd?
like a yoruba adage this nigga wants to sound like me,
nigga you are a freaking retarded copycat
dogg ur flowshows is garbage
i overturn ur flowshows on you totally like they were missed tv episodes
son am all sold out,can't u see they all want to see me battle
after my great week in self aparthied
am all tied up,like 'busta' am so fired up,
my rhymes got ur flowshowing ass in total blank'eclipse'checks!
you crammed my rapping style and came boldly to battle the entire world with it.
pay dues boy u can't outdo me
flowshow get a life son. u can't be like me .
, am'emancipated',like 'mariah' damn u can call me the great 'mimi'
u can't bust like me dogg ,am the only busting b,
sipping bumbles like a bee ,my skills are so fcuking big
am hallucinating nigga now i am fcuking exaggerating
from d most hated' to da most undergraded ,x-rated nigga
now i am going to be named bjpumpin the most underated
and suddenly i become the most anticipated
with Your wack flowshow rap style,
dogg your whole verse sounds like my song's repeated choruses !
i am like a shot gun, i interstate between rapid response and crime preventions cops
with my drinking cups my point is that i will make ur flowshows come to a complete stop!
after this battle dogg u will surely quit and say damn bolaji ur so fabulous
just like loso u wont question my vocals again because i wasn't a local locust !
finally nigga I bury your true lies, along with your cries because nigga on your lame ass i will bury my entire lyrical avalanche,
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Maverik
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@Flowshow
Bolajibaok just filed a motion for summary judgment on U.I suggest u bring ur best lyrics to defend u because i can't wait to settle this case once and for all.
@The Community
I been busy writing my Judgment on d Wordsmith Vs Malthuss battle and i must confess its been a very close margin.Aint gon say much bt somebody's throne is in grave danger.
Mailmalc Vs Hybrid result will be released at d same time as the above stated.
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FLOWSHOW
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@bolaji-broke
impressive , is that all u got ?
now wait for my reply as i shed my entire flowshows on your lifespan.
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jerrymania (m)
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@ Maverick
I've looked around this thread and i havent seen any input from the "Big Boys". We all know bolaji-broke ass is wack so no need pairing him up with "himself". I'm impressed with your work so far but if you want this thread to last longer then you have to boot the wackstars out of your thread 
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Jduck13 (m)
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@ boja bitch
Yo I got one slug to kill you,
I pop heat that will grill you
and will turn ya meat to a sausage
have ya shirt drippin like a leaky faucet
ya rhyme Ill toss it like salad or shaq in da paint
you whack and you lame man ill clap at ya brain
bola bitch got no rhyme skillz period
I leavem delirious because my rhymes kill period
and this dude say his rhymes is ill is he serious
I popem in his nut havem bleedin like da bitch is on his period
I'm no joke straight from da top of da dome like my hair do
I blow ya wig off Bitch now get a new hairdo
and i don't have to flash a fuckin got to scare you
I'm to syk I spit flame straight from da air dude
and homey listen you aint ready for this
you spray like a mist
and my fist will leave ya fuckin face in a twist
ma flows retarded politically its handicap mentally
rip ya teeth from ya gums you go need some new dentistry
You no obstacle I eat you like a popsicle
pop ya tonsils and send you to da hospital
whats good straight flame !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Maverik
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THE TABLES HAVE TURNED!
MAILMALC VS HYBRID-X
MAILMALC:
Punchlines - 20
Quote:"malc flows be tidal waves u never goin 2 sail through"
Quote:"Relegate X because u way below my league/split ur game so it skips like a cracked CD"
Quote:"treat u like d b*tch u are/if u were up on clouds, u still wudnt star"
Quote:"access denied,my flows can't be hacked/if u play Noah,i still shatter ur ark"
Quote:"like crack i smoke X off in a hose pipe"
Quote:"I'm a phantom u aint fit enough 2 ghost ride"
Quote:"i x-ray ur dumb potentials/malc be d hitman executioner"
Quote:"blast off hybrid's lungs,x numerical value be zero/freeze smash ur bones like subzero"
Quote:"X being dull is exagarated/he's worst because ma flows be X-rated"
Quote"malc gets skulls cracked/inputs u in my calc/ur resukt be wack"
Wordplay - 12
Quote:"Malc flows be tidal waves,u never going to sail through"
Quote:"Relegate u because u way below my league"
Quote:"if u were up on clouds,u still wudnt star"
Quote:"like crack i smoke X off in a hose pipe"
Quote:"I'm a phantom u aint fit enough 4 a ghost ride"
Quote:"If u play Noah,i still shatter ur Ark"
Metaphors - 8
Quote:"Malc flows be tidal waves"
Quote:"split ur game so it skips like a cracked CD"
Quote:"like crack i smoke X off in a hose pipe"
Quote:"I'm a phantom,u aint fit enough to ghost ride"
Multies - 4
Quote:"flows be tidal waves,u never gon SAIL THROUGH/detach d Hybrid frm X/because i always FADE U"
Quote:"like crack i smoke X off in a HOSE PIPE/I'm a phantom,u aint fit enough to GHOST RIDE"
Delivery - 6
(Good Structure)
Creativity - 10
(quite impressive)
Total = 60 pts
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Jduck13 (m)
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Yo judge My flow real quick somebody jus want to see how many points I would earn off that.
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FLOWSHOW
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@BOLAJI-BROKE
flowshow comes with da unexpected hyperbolic metaphoric multi-metaphors
now am similar to a simile i move fast on you like a chettah thats about to cheat on you.
i am an hyperbolic paradox, i flow figurative shows into your sickle brain
like a figure of speech i will stick into your brain's thick membrane
am here to flowshows and show off my metaphorical flows ,
but in my path stands bolajibroke a retard rapper i will surely break
i will leave bolaji-broke ass broken forever like pieces of tiny broken bottles
flowmothersuckin shows i show at u , am definitely similar to soap opera episodes
i show ma mad flows only once on a friday metaphoric night
like a dark knight wearing nighties in da darkest night in da nineteen nineties
mad multis i flowshow, figuratively i speak lyrical , right now am physically ill
explosively ,am about to get physical ,i infect u with all my metamorphosing character
am a flow damager, the ganga i smoke brings hell to bolaji broken face
just to show you that ma flows is similar to a thousand rivers flowing unstoppable streams
right now am with all my flowshow weapons and arsenals
like team arsenal i come with so much guns u will think u were battling against da gunners
my flowshow is streaming unstoppable. i stream fast like a bradband internet broadcast
like the tv episodes u said i am , like a dsl ,streaming suspense is what i bring to play
my multis flow shows steamy metaphors into your bloodstreams
with my metaphors i burn u up with the steam of da hottest electric iron
just like a lion i show my flows up like da great japanese iron fist
feasting on festivals lyrically i deliver multiple multis to your fading fate
u will think i was having a multiplier effect after i took my multi-vitamins.
bolabroke a wack rap critic politicking
tick tuck , gradually your time is ticking out finally
after my flowshow ends,
my thick skills will end your career like a dog with thicks all over its dirty body
NOW LETS SEE MAVERIK JUDGE YOU INTO ETERNAL EXTINCTION .
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Maverik
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HYBRID-X:
Punchlines - 14
Quote:"Xbreed d ghetto breed,u pussi n am d beast"
Quote:"put u out like sun set in d east"
Quote:"u jus a male riding hood stuck in my hood/u f*ckd up like i thot u would"
Quote:"hit u str8 in d chest like pac/that afro cat murdered u/wtout d gat"
Quote:"I aint nelly furtado bt am r put ur lites off"
Quote:"Mailmalc jus lame,this aint prison break son,u rot in jail/can't jump my bail"
Quote:"u's a dead nigga/every bar's an overdose"
Wordplay - 18
Quote:"Xbreed d ghetto breed/u pusssi n am d beast"
Quote:"put u out like sun set in d east"
Quote:"u can't Mic check this"
Quote:"u jus a male red riding hood stuck in my hood"
Quote:"I aint nelly fur ado bt am r put ur lites off/got hiphop on handcuffs"
Quote:"I hold this street she was handsome"
Quote:"The lyrical culprit/underground classics/i spit that blueprint"
Quote:"u gon rot in jail/u can't jump my bail"
Quote:"U's a dead nigga/every bars an overdose/case closed nigga"
Metaphors - 10
Quote:"put u out like sun set in d east"
Quote:"hit u str8 in chest like u was pac"
Quote:"I hold this street like she was ransome"
Quote:"Xbrid,the rap pundit/lyrical culprit"
Quote:"my foul speech stinks like politics"
Multies - 6
Quote:"Xbrid,d lyrical CULPRIT/i spit that BLUEPRINT"
Quote:"X rule d streets with a TIGHT FIST/rule d streets u can't MIC CHECK THIS"
Quote"aint Nelly furtado but am r put ur LITES OFF/got hiphop on HANDCUFFS"
Delivery - 5
(needs better structuring)
Creativity - 7
(not bad at all)
Total = 54 pts
MAILMALC WINS WITH 60 pts!
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Maverik
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SUPRISE! SUPRISE!
MALTHUSS VS WORDSMITH
MALTHUSS:
Punchlines - 18
Quote:"The return of that wordsmith killa/exterminate fakes because there aint nome realla,am iller"
Quote:"yeah nigga,ama tell u like a soothsayer/come against me guaranteed to word-slay-ya"
Quote:"am rap's illest ruler/to measure ma success,u need a 60 foot ruler"
Quote:"nigga,u still spittin embryonics/i come up n slam that ass like onyx"
Quote:"mr smith,am a school u to improve ur word ethics/because nigga u writing sh*t in phonetics"
Quote:"I bring d heat and make u use d fire exit"
Quote:"In this word fest,i flog first/while u on that d*ck thirst"
Quote:"Malthuss on a rhyme quest,leave smith wt a ripped chest/case closed,f*ck an inquest"
Quote:"u know am word perfect beat d smith in this rap scrabble/da letter man make wordsmith spell-bound"
Wordplay - 16
Quote:"see through pitch black like Helen Keller"
Quote:"come against me guaranteed 2 word-slay-ya"
Quote:"2 measure ma success,u need a 60 foot ruler"
Quote:"nigga u still spittin embryonics"
Quote:"I bring d heat and make u use d fire exit"
Quote:"in this word fest,i flog first/while u on that d*k thirst"
Quote:"d letterman make wordsmith spell-bound"
Quote:"am word perfect/beat d smith in this rap scrabble"
Metaphors - 12
Quote:"see through pitch black like Helen Keller"
Quote:"2 measure ma success,u need a 60 ft ruler"
Quote:"i come up n slam that ass like onyx"
Quote:"am picture perfect lcd frm panasonics"
Quote:"rhymes levitate to the sky like supersonics"
Quote:"ma sh*t hit air waves like a f*king request"
Multies - 4
Quote:"in this WORD FEST,i FLOG FIRST"
Quote:"u on that D*K THIRST,malthuss leave smith wt a RIPPED CHEST"
Delivery - 6
(needs better structuring)
Creativity - 8
(fresh!)
Total = 64 pts
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Maverik
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WORDSMITH:
Punchlines - 18
Quote:"lyrically i remain flawless,ur remains more or less on d floorbed"
Quote:"u lyrically deficient,u lack d vitamins like citrus"
Quote:"b*tch pause,u see slut/never put d smith 2 test like litmus"
Quote:"had 2 school u real quick since d public system failed u/lock u in this bars,aint no chance anyone gon bail u"
Quote:"d empty barrels u keep shooting are evidences of ur loud mouth"
Quote:malthus woke this giant,so I'm a put this b*tch to sleep like inertia"
Quote:"malthus better switch aid,better yet wt a clique aid/bt d word still slices when he switches 2 a switchblade"
Quote:"get this b*tch laid/slice deep n dice thick,leaving u wt a stich face"
Quote:"d word in d corner better stay strapped like Gold circle"
Wordplay - 14
Quote:"16+ bars of heat proves 2 be a fresh grave/u best laid"
Quote:"never u put d wordsmith to d test like litmus"
Quote:"lock u in this bars"
Quote:"d empty barrels u shoot evidences ur loud mouth"
Quote:"I'm a put this b*tch to rest like inertia"
Quote:"d word still slices when he switches to a switchblade"
Quote:"d word in d corner,better stay strapped like a Gold circle"
Metaphors - 12
Quote:"The smith spits so toxic,gbade a walking biohazard causing wreckage"
Quote:"verbally,i stays a criminal savage/wt that lyrical carnage"
Quote:"u lack d vitamins like citrus"
Quote:"never u put d smith to d test like litmus"
Quote:"d word spit hazardous,create that unrest like d south south"
Quote:"better stay strapped like Gold Circle"
Multies - 12
Quote:"Puny Mal come against d WORDSMITH/this aint Busta,bt i still let em TALK SHIT"
Quote:"lyrically i remain FLAWLESS,ur remains more or less on d FLOORBED"
Quote:"16+ bars of heat to be a FRESH GRAVE/u BEST LAID/u get no LEVERAGE"
Quote:"BITCH PAUSE,u SEE SLUT/never put d word 2 test like LITMUS"
Quote:"create that unrest like d SOUTH SOUTH/empty barrels u shoot evidence ur LOUD MOUTH"
Quote:"word still slices when he switches tn a SWITCH BLADE/slice deep,leavin u wt a STICH FACE"
Delivery - 8
(fresh!)
Creativity - 8
(fresh!)
Total - 72 pts
WORDSMITH WINS!
(snatches d crown from ex-king Malthuss)
Sorry Dude!
@Bolajibaok & Flowshow
I'll be delivering my Judgment on ur case shortly.One of u gets to disappear today,Lord Willing!
@Jduck13
it takes 2 to tango.I can't analyze ur verses on their own strength.U must hve an opponent.Ovastand?
@The Community
Situation Report coming up in a jiffy!
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FLOWSHOW
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@afrocynic
where is she, has she chickened out?
@maverik
whats up with afrocynic?
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Malthuss
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@ wordsmith
well done man!!, u did well, good battle
peace
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