*Rap *Freestyle * Vol 2

Hey sup y'all.

Check this

Am Naija Aftermath,i spit with no error/
Born with Fire in ma mouth Reck them emcees with my dynamic stealth,they call me rap Terror/
Music gat flavour,wicked than Charles Taylor,check da Dictionary its called Mental Upgrader/
Wine you like you was drinkin' CHAMPAYNE make you perform stunts like the power
Ranger/
check ma tech,i was caused from the Devil's Peck,Niggas y'all will fear fear/
Am being talked about everywhere and people keep asking is he shakes spear?/
Ma tougue is like a stray bullet Niggers you better Run and don't tumble/
i could hit your smallest toe from a thousand miles so Nigger don't fumble/
Hit clubs with ma hommies and the shorties want to get closer/
i tell them to take turns and get loose while i make runs till they get tits Ulcers/
They can do anything to have me and taste me 'sweet jesus' can here them yellin'
please come login/
Me the gangster player,stronger that a hundred Trailers,waste no time so i plugin/
The street Gangster is back and y'all can't do nothing,i get the hood Bumping/
niggas start hating but mind so strong automatic AKs start Tracin/
I bring hit no shit am fit hommies get hit/
Lines so conc. if you aint protected your balls gon'n split/
Am the lyrical warhead nigger can see you're scared/
hommy don't go frontin cus you know when am done with ya you'll look like papers in shreads/

Am just 18,but count ma glocks thay are like 1 2, thirteen,
when beef is ON,the line is drawn/
Half a verse of my jeepsy music and your jaw is Gone/
Gangster in the house its worldbest roasting Mics with speakers burnin'/
tumbs popping all ma ladies keep shoutin and their face still blushin'/


Y'all should help critise this.

@Worldbest

Nothing do you homeboy, you just need structuring and try not to talk too much, I believe it happened to me as well when I started scribbling you just feel like putting everything down,
For example:

This



Can be this


See we are both saying the same thing but your lines are just too long and heads just get bored off. And apart from the longevity of your lines there is no need to panic 'because the talent is there.

@i-shine.   Yes you definetely correct.I have noted them down.let me go back to the drawing board.        @menike     u r fcukin weaked.Anyway u gat words

@worldbest

Keep elevating homeboy and keep your head up + don't let menike's verse deceive you 'because he is a beast on the mic.

Respect everyone

thats right alexpissu, tell em, keep up the good work, holla @ yo girl

This is for the wannabe rappers,

check it~

Glued to my pen like I was to my umbilical cord/
Fight with words, emcees can refer to it as my sword/
My sword within my reach, be rest assured am swinging it/
Leave traces of it on their mind, yea my sword slit/
Carry you along this lyrical journey/
Pack your pen and pad, we might stop at Disney/
Balance the line between intelligent emcees and fame seekers/
I make it hard for them to gulp air through the speakers/
They won’t even be saved by their labels and kicks/
They get used and dumped like their chicks/
Hip-hop instructor, these emcees should learn the art/
They should be educated to get on the chart/
Don’t get to thinking fame doesn’t have a price tag/
You will pay your dues to fly hip-hop flag/
Life is like a dart, you’ve got to aim at the target/
Get your mind on the focus so you don’t regret/
This is no game son, this is getting burnt under the sun/
Turn around and face the harsh reality or you are done/
Sick of what you life is becoming?/
You are not the first, soldiers have fell,
And some are still falling/
Only the strong get back up like Christ/
They the only one that get to climb the height/
Some won’t even get it like Sudoku/
Feel themselves and they ain’t even cool/
Artists shinning brightly like the Stars/
Don’t lose your bearing or might fall like the Stars/
Your past haunting you down/
Holding you down and you don’t get to wear the gown/
Biting your fingers oh you’re regretting/
End of the road, you don’t get to keep moving/
I hope this lyrical journey wasn’t boring/
Come back next time without wondering/

Its a must that we must must the must.
Value whats you valued cause you valued to value it.
It must be valued cause it is valued.
I always make sense cause I hate to yhan non-sense,
no difference, my non-sense still make sense.

Y'all know yourselves

Pops a faggot?Yea heard that before,we on
same level cus same street says ya mom is da cheapest hallot
lyrically spice you with hot bullets
decorate you with pus*sy acid and make ya smell like public toilets
Am a rap weapon with unlimited armour
gotta make ya suck ya pops di*ck and turn a HIV habour
like luda,Am a bed room gangster,di*ck-driftin' on ya chick with ma prick
she says she hate ya and  prefers a 12 inch stick
am ma spit out to correct y'all,for the fact
that i gat flaps isnt enof to bliv am dull in the rap act
stop preachin' and get ready to taste ma devilish remedy
slice ya and mayonaise ya like naija breadii9(BREAD)
2nd son of God i rule the rap region
2much hoe rappers in Nairalan.d(nairaland)yea y'all ma next mission
i babysit ya with tough hands
breast feed ya with uppercuts till ya jaw bends
get ready and sit tight,we on a journey till the world ends
Monster on Mic?Na he just a loser on Bike
Heard? "a war with worldbest is like a death from malaria strike"
The legendary rap newborn eat ma damn lyrical outline
your style is outmoded and programmatically null in da lyrical pipeline
Go do sometin else cus rap?!u no fit
talk pass yaself and find ya sory ass in a 6fts pit

y'all heard!!!

@Akinagirl
Thanks 4 droping by babygirl.

Did this freestyle on hi5 wayback

You claim 2 be an OG but u raping cripples/
You gat phobia 4 bitches and u addicted 2 pimples/
this aint no battle because u eating your own feets/
quit actin like me cause your flows stinks like pits/
learnt your rap name is all-well-brown/
but when u do a rap battle all -will -frown/
The last time u smiled your pop said u need a surgery/
they refuse your shit cause its purgin/
I serve you beef but u eating your own flesh instead/
u's a cross breed 2 that cartoon surperted/
During sex your bitch said u c{u}m through your mouth/
I call u a homo man your new name is homo slot/

@ worldbest
You dey vex oooooo but take am easy sha 

@worldbest
worldbest quit yapping up and down as if u r good , if u think u are good come and face me on a fair battle ground

here are the rules
 16bars maximum, no lenghty quantity
no human judge
votes will count
no wining in the event of loss
no hates just a normal battle like everyone
no yo momma jokes

anybody can set up the thread but don't forget to introduce the contestants!
i am inviting u for a battle now, worldbest meet me there now !

@bolaji

Ok.i accept it,But not now.Gat some Academic stuff to do.
But you'll here from me.16 bars it is.

Nobody should take anything personal, am just playing with names.
Alex loves your all.


My flows makes no-names niggaz die careless/
am lucifer on earth clock u till u turn darkness/
haters kiss chaos/ this ma block am da rap president/
sprinke out your bloods/ 2 paint ma resident
Pen never sleep/ makes u think i wrote 4 Po Deep/
my mind clocked up spit out words cause is cheap/
Sharn asked 4 battle/ told her i battle no females/
Akinagirl liked ma flows she keeps sending me e-mails/
but my nigga Eldee dosen't rap/ wants 2 be a Judge/
What about Maverik? never had a grudge/
Mailmalc will send this verse on 1st class delivery/
Menike is  the pilot land this verse safely/
This verse will definately make big profit/
employ Bolaji to put it in my save deposit/
I-Shine don't tell my stories to the press man/
cause this verse will leave haters depressed dam/
is okay Ravenzord got my back with his sword/
slash out this niggaz call him d samurai god/
am close 2 Rapsody/ bury my evil thoughts on the altar/
is a wrap call it a close chapter/

still spittin
Hybrid-x on vacation 2 meet em bitch on miami beach/
he squashed all beefs/ haters still snitch/
If haters scared of beef/  i let Chiogo put em on heat/
she freeze em teeths/ put em careers 2 sleep/
Respect is reciprocal/ if a nigga wants it i go vocal/
dribbling niggaz in this game/ like i invented soccer/
Only time i pardon niggaz/ is when i dose em wit panadol/
leave u restless like HIV victims asking who at the door/
my flow is sick Afrocynic can testify 2 it/
i cloned niggaz like em Kasper d ghost dey got no feet/
Naijafan still getting the C-Note/ welcome to the good life/
the business on d table lets strive/
Hey Flowshow is my show i want no internet spy/
Seun create another joint this verse is fly/
Zephyrr last time i tried your line aint reachable/
anyway want 2 tell u that this niggaz are edible/
Somebody tell me where my nigga Mathuss at/
he's an ill battle cart/ married 2 the art/
Wordsmith still spittin ill on tha mic tool/
when he spit at ya face he makes u stool/
Nevertheless this ain't my last lines like revelation/
i'ma do tha rest on Jduck's thread 4 mic confession/

Tianshie tight ish, i see u man 

While i was dropping this verse i was accused of being hatercentric,so i promise 2 quit yip yappin bout haters.here's my last freestyle on'em.alex,tianshie,feel u guys


Some of us are born great,some odas achieve greatness
some of us stay kool but haters dey keep hatin'us
seems like dey be living 2 throw dirt on my name
but i ain't fazed cause i know odas feeling my pain
some people believe our lives r controlled by fate
well if that's true;den some niggas destined 2 hate
uzd 2 want to rip deir tongues out,tie it round deir throats
or slit'em from balls 2 brains,or even do both
but now i've realized dey could live life no oda way
so i do my thang;let them say what dey want to say
don't give a fcuk bout all'em mudslingers
get on my nerves i throw'em a middle finger
whatever i do i give it my best
players always get hated on i ain't d 1st
because when dey throw dirt it might or might not get me
but DEFINITELY;their hands are gon get dirty
so next time u get snitched on,nigga don't make reply
u do what u were born 4 nd den u die