If You Never See Me Again

That was nice hol2ng.

well i hope you don't mind, because i wrote my own version when i read yours, , hope you would like it.

here is it.



If you never see me again,
Pain fades, but our love remains,
Something i did gain,
Expressed together as we claim,

If you never see me again,
Sit back and recall does times,
Painful indeed, because we had no time,
So sour, it tastes like lime,

If you never see me again,
Remember i loved you and made you my first,
With loving heart, i took of my vest,
And together we shared our best,

If you never see me again,
Deep inside i would remember,
Like the last rain that falls in September,
YOU, my body sees as a MEMBER,

hi,

Hola2ng thanks for appreciating my own version. don't you have any new ones. really want to meet upcoming Nigerian poets.

please post some more.

just came online to check my reviews, going for CD, would be back online in the evening.

CIAO

hola2ng and hansibone, good thing u both have done!

Nice stuff u have got.
Cheers

tank u bro, u are appreciated,

one new poem is comin soon

wats up hola2ng

i'm super fine, ive been mowin around d phone section 4 a while, i think i got sum good stuff i want 2 share wit them, but u know that HOME is always home, so i slip in here and drop a POEM when i find it spinning in my HEAD. hehehehehehehehe

imagine tommorrow never comes
in the clouds i dwell
to form a part of your cell
in the end i bring the bell


down the road of memory
i lost ma power of sensory
ma mind preoccupied thinking of u
but am so real because am blue


am just a beginner hope i made some sense