@SMC
Thanks for your advice. But what exactly is repulsive about my posts? The fact that they're extracts from the manuscript (Guilt and Redemption) does not necessarily mean that the posts are continuous. As the titles of the posts suggest, they deal with different themes within the the bigger plot of the book-this one,for instance, is about crossing the Berlin Wall.
Of course, i would like to apologise if the posts were deemed offensive, but i don't see anything offensive in them. On the matter of others being repelled, i m not particularly bothered. You see, most writers-and indeed most artistically inclined individuals-in addition to the creativity "thing" are driven by an almost unconscious exhibitionism and they will always find voyeuristic partners who will engage them in completing the metaphoric tango.
With that in mind, i hardly care how many people
actually read my posts, as nobody is paying me anything for them at the moment. And as long as my exhibitionist appetite is gratified I don't really have a problem

When the time comes and i need to make money from my work, i will do the right thing.
PS: I am almost through with this draft of the book anyway and will start on the real work, which people will have to pay for to read. So you won't be seeing any more
extracts from Guilt and Redemption.