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agatonaa (f)
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My daughter, whom I so loved You can spread your wings & fly like a dove Shake the mud & dirt with a shrugged Without anger nor a grudge.
You can fly as high as you can For you are a very strong woman Blow them like a fan To stay away to do any more harm.
My daughter, I will be in your side Together we will swim the tide If you're in the dark, I will hug you so tight To give you comfort throughout the night.
Have courage for you're surrounded by lights It is so bright it will restore your sight To make sure your path is right I can assure you, everything will be alright.
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Zahymaka (m)
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Go on. (Loud applause)
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uzygirl (f)
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wow, that was nice. but is that a father or a mother's point of view?
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agatonaa (f)
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@Zahymaka Thanks.
@uzygirl It can really be both but in this case, it is from a mother to her daughter.
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ogamike
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that is so touchingĀ  You go niom niomĀ I really like it!
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ogamike
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this poem is so
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Queenzy (f)
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This is the best poem I have ever read.
I love it
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agatonaa (f)
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@ baby Queen Glad you like it. 
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uzygirl (f)
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Thanks. the poem is really insightful. Thinking about it now, how often do we really tell that special woman in our lives(our mothers of course) thank you.
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agatonaa (f)
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@uzygirl  ;)yeap.
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Z4M4eva (f)
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Aww. What a Sweet Poem. 
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agatonaa (f)
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@Z4M4eva Thanks. 
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Fimmy (m)
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cool i love my daughter also she matters alot to me
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Oracle (m)
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This sounds like a true life story
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SMC (f)
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I LIKE!!!  [However, there are some grammatical errors/typos in the poem but still, I quite like it].
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