Hi, I'm Tgirl. This is my first story and I'll welcome criticism and corrections. I'll like to say a big thank you to my bosses and mentors some nairaland writers e.g
Larrysun
Oyinprince
Tonye001
AudreyTimms
Glowingscenes
Rapmike
Dty97
Kaymajey etc
This story is about love and betrayal and nemesis caught up with the unfaithful friends while truthful ones are vindicated.

Tgirl085:
Hi, I'm Tgirl. This is my first story and I'll welcome criticism and corrections. I'll like to say a big thank you to my bosses and mentors some nairaland writers e.g
Larrysun
Oyinprince
Tonye001
AudreyTimms
Glowingscenes
Rapmike
Dty97
Kaymajey etc
This story is about love and betrayal and nemesis caught up with the unfaithful friends while truthful ones are vindicated.

Present.

Let's go there Tgirl.

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CHARACTERS
Miss Oladele Oreoluwa
A girl who faced a lot of trials and tribulations in life but held on to her determination to succeed.
Mrs Oladele Julie
The only daughter of the former (late) minister of works who owns a construction firm.she is married to an architect.
Mr Oladele Joseph
The son-in-law of the former (late) minister of works.He was betrayed by his evil Friend.
Ike Chucks
A man with evil ambitions and his unrepentant nature leads to his death.
Mr Fajemiyo Aduragbemi
A businessman who owns numerous companies.
Mrs Fajemiyo Sharon
A woman of virtue who has great love for her husband . She persevered greatly for her children.
Mrs Fajemiyo Folakemi
The second wife of Mr Fajemiyo whose aim is to
destroy his marriage and inherit his wealth.
Fajemiyo Seun
The son of Mrs Fajemiyo Sharon.
Fajemiyo Benson
The son of Mrs Fajemiyo Folakemi

CHAPTER ONE
Mrs Fajemiyo Sharon
Today which started on a good note is gradually ending badly for me.I escorted my husband to a fund raising ceremony being his first wife.I do enjoy the privilege of being his official wife although that is about to change now. What is the essence of a wife that can't bear any child for her husband after 10 years of marriage. Hmmmmm, I re flash what happened in the sitting room this evening in my mind. We just finished eating our dinner, me, my husband and his second wife (Folake) when she said she has a good news for us. What is the good news? She is pregnant again and the pregnancy is four weeks old. Well, I'm happy for her. She is lucky, unlike me who have not been pregnant once, not even a day. I know it's my inability to bear a child that make my husband have an extramarital relationship with her. Although he denied that it is just a one night thing that leads to her first pregbancy.Oh Lord please give me my own child. I want to carry my child with my hand.I want to know what morning sickness is.I want to feel labour pain.Lord I want my child.Answer my prayers oh Lord.

Mrs Fajemiyo Folake
Hmmmmmm.This people never sabi anything o. See how them dey act lovey dovey for my face.That barren woman, she go know for this house.I know say when I born my baby boy.Hubby go shift attention.And na me go be the boss then.He go dey hear my opinion for matter too.And that barren woman go know say I don displace her for this house.The man no dey pay me any attention self, na only when madam no dey around that I dey useful to him. Me too I be wife for this house o.If he no cooperate now that I'm pregnant again, I go just listen to mama and use charm for him.

Mr Fajemiyo Aduragbemi
Thanks to God she is pregnant again, that will stop her from whining that my wife is responsible for her miscarriage. How do I even get into this mess? A man with two wives, a polygamous home.If I had known everything will turn out this way, I wouldn't follow Leye to the bar that night. I love my wife dearly but the results of a moment of weakness with Folake is breaking my marriage gradually.I know Folake is Satan sent to me.When I heard of her pregnancy, I offered her everything houses, cars, etc but she took non of it.All she want me to do is to pay her bride price to her parent and bring her to my house so as to be living there though she knew I'm married. I'll make sure she regret her decision because she can never have my love whether she bear a child for me or not. My love is for Sharon only.She is a great woman. She has stayed with me through my trying period. From my University days till now.She is my strength. We build all I have now together.Father please answer our prayers. Give us our own child. Don't let Sharon be ashamed before her peers.

A month later
Mrs Fajemiyo Sharon
I'm two months late.I don't see my menses last month and this month is gradually ending too.I'm ecstatic about being pregnant but I don't want to raise my hope unnecessary cause It might be as a result of a disorder in my body.Two whole month is enough to confirm if I'm really pregnant or not.So while closing for the day at my supermarket and pharmaceutical store.I picked a pregnancy test strip noting to use it tomorrow morning but I don't think I can wait any longer. I'll have to do the test now before my husband gets home.So I went into the pantry and pick a new transparent disposable plate, entered into the bathroom and close the door. I urinated into the disposable plate and dipped the pregnancy test strip into it.I removed it and place it on the bath tub.I closed my eyes and count down from sixty to one,then I opened my eyes.wat? Two lines, that means I'm pregnant,according to the instructions on the strip.God thank you.You've done it.Thank you lord.

Mrs Fajemiyo Sharon
Hmmmm smiles. I Just woke up this morning and remembered what happened yesterday evening.I must see doctor Leye today.But I have to get to my pharmacy store first.
'I go stay
I go wait
Till my prayers don prevail
And my faith no go shake
Coz Jesus never fails
I go pray
The fervent prayers of the
righteous must avail
God go answer me before
I even open mouth to say
In Jesus name
In Jesus name'
I'm in my car driving to our family doctor's office and listening to 'I go stay' by Nosa. On getting to the hospital I parked my car outside and walked toward his office.
'Hi prettyShay' the doc greeted me
'Good morning doc Leye'I replied
'You look dazzling, My friend is taking good care of you'he said smiling. 'So for what reason are you in my office today'he asked
I want a pregnancy test
'Hmmmm. Have you told him' he said smiling mischievously.
'That's none of your problem just do the test for me and I want to tell my husband the news myself' I said sternly.
Good. You'll have to wait for two hours before the result is ready. Meanwhile I need your blood sample he said.
Doctor Leye and my husband are best friends from secondary school days.But my presence in their life almost severe their friendship. Both friends claimed to be in love with me though I love one of them and later got married to him.This broke the heart of the second person (Leye) and he vowed to revenge then.

But their parents are family friends so they settled the matter amicably. But doctor Leye still flirt with me and once asked that we should have an affair together.
'Congratulation Mrs Fajemiyo.You are eight weeks pregnant' doctor Leye said handing the pregnancy test result to me.
Wow! Me, I'm pregnant.I feel like doing different things at the same time .I feel like crying. I feel like laughing. I feel like rolling on the floor.I could feel tears of joy streaming down my face. I collect the pregnancy test result from him moving out of the hospital towards my car.
wait. My husband is here.I can feel it. Jeez! He picked me up bridal style smiling.
'ouch drop me now people are starring' I said
'Who cares ' he replied
'Drop me now, my car is over there' I said
'Nawa o I want to take my wife out and she is talking' He said smiling
' Ok o what of my own car?' I said pouting
I'll send someone to help you take it home or do you need a new one?' he replied.

Nice work here. I have not read it in detail, but i see that instead of the regular dialogue and description, you are using a set of diary-like conversations to advance the story which i feel is unique. Don't get discouraged about the number of comments currently, that's how it starts for many of us, especially if its not on the sexuality section and you are not popular. Just calm down and continue.



Have to get back to the reading

rapmike:
Nice work here. I have not read it in detail, but i see that instead of the regular dialogue and description, you are using a set of diary-like conversations to advance the story which i feel is unique. Don't get discouraged about the number of comments currently, that's how it starts for many of us, especially if its not on the sexuality section and you are not popular. Just calm down and continue.



Have to get back to the reading

thank you very much sir.I really appreciate this.

Tgirl, you are doing a nice job. I haven't had the time to read in details too but I visit this thread every now and then.

Try and make your work more organized...

Kudos, e no easy...at all..at all..

Good morning.

TONYE001:
Tgirl, you are doing a nice job. I haven't had the time to read in details too but I visit this thread every now and then.

Try and make your work more organized...

Kudos, e no easy...at all..at all..

Good morning.

Thanks Sir

Mr Fajemiyo
Hmmmmm, I knew something is going on with Sharon yesterday. She is very happy and lively.I asked her what the matter is, she only smiled and said nothing. I had to tickle her very had till she begged me to stop . Still all she said was that she will tell me when she is ready. Then she slept off in my arms.This morning in my office when Leye called me that she came for a pregnancy test and it seem she knew that she is pregnant already. She only wanted a confirmation. I'm overjoyed and was screaming like a baby on the phone. Two hours thirty minutes later he called me that the result is ready and my wife is eight weeks pregnant.I don't know when I leave my office and started driving towards his office. On getting to the hospital. I saw her walking out of the hospital towards her car tears streaming down her face.I don't even know when I carried her. Looking down at her lovely face I up my mind I'm taking her out that instance. And I enjoyed the date. I'm ready to rekindle the fire of affection that is fast burning out in my marriage since Folake entered.Hmmmmm Folake, that reminds me. It seems my wife and Folake gets pregnant roughly the same time.God help me ooo.

Hello Tgirl,

You are doing a nice job here; how about you make your posts longer?

Four months later
Mrs Fajemiyo Folakemi
Aaaah, I'm dead.I'm in soup.upon all the concoctions wey I drink and charm wey I tie for body, I still have another miscarriage. That woman be confirm witch o. When her husband no get second wife she dey eat all the children but now she com get pregnant and she dey let me lose my own pregnancy too. Yesterday, I don make up my mind say I go go hospital for check up today and also do scan make I know the sex of my baby. When I woke up this morning na blood I see.I quickly run go meet the family doctor but he said I've lost the baby. Then I started crying say make him help me.He later told me to stop crying that he can help me but I'll have to pay in cash and kind I.e with my body.He told me to pretend as if I'm still pregnant that he go tell me the plan in full details later. I no go relent now. I must be rich by all means. If the doctor's plan work or e no work I go switch to my plan B and I know that plan no go fail me.

Three months later.
Mr Fajemiyo
Today was a memorable day for me.Seven days ago both my wife and Folake put to bed .Leye called me that my wife has just been rushed in for delivery some minutes ago. I picked up my car key heading towards the hospital. Few minutes later Folake was also rushed in. They both gave birth to their babies in the interval of few minutes. Their naming ceremony is a great one. Many important dignitaries are there while others send their representative. I'm happy I'm now a man.I now have two sons that can inherit my properties and will continue my family lineage. I now believe the yoruba adage which says 'ori omo ni pe omo waye' maybe if Folake didn't come into my life, may be my wife won't have gotten pregnant at all.
End Of Chapter One.

Chapter two
After 14 years
Mrs Fajemiyo
Life with a rival is not palatable at all. She want everything I want. She ask for everything I have. All that has never been my problem but what concerns me most is her constant allegations against me. She once lied that I embarrassed her publicly calling her a slut and a home wrecker. My husband gets angry and lashed me in her presence. Telling me to my face that we both have equal right in his house. Most times when their is an argument he takes side with her.My consolation is my son seun.
Thank you Lord for giving me Oluwaseunfunmi. If not for him, may be I'll be out of this marriage now. After our first child I've been trying to
get pregnant again to no avail while Folake always have miscarriage and she is always blaming me for it.But since two weeks ago, I've been noticing some strange reactions in my body so I went to the hospital for treatment. I was informed there that I'm four weeks pregnant.I'll try to tell my husband tonight may be that will soften his heart towards me.

Mrs Fajemiyo Folakemi
Yeeeeeees. I Don ready for the show that go happen tonight. I don dey plan the thing for some time now and I don execute the plan. I no gree tolerate that woman for this house again. The time wey she go carry her load and go don knack. With my private investor I don discover say she get one ex like that wey still dey disturb am and our husband hate the man like shit. We com set them up take & their pictures together and even edit their separate pictures to show them in compromising positions. I com combine all the pictures together and give our husband. He just they shake head. E no wan believe am. I no say e go confront her dis night and she go wan defend herself. Me I go just sit down dey look and plan my next action.

T-girl?
# paragraph things. Query query

teamplayey:
T-girl?
# paragraph things. Query query

i think that because of the way she is narrating the events, in a diary sort of way, paragraphs can be unnecessary. Moreover, her updates are short.


T-girl dearest, you can try and work on the length of the updates.

Repogirl, Larrysun, come and help this lady. You can do a far better job than me.

Actually, I think its unique her writing a story like this. But as you noticed, the updates are relatively short.
I'm thinking if she could at least give a-piece for each of the characters and etc.
Well?

Mr Fajemiyo
Aaaaah women, they are betrayers. Imagine a woman that I've married for 24 years cheating on me with her ex. Even when it is obvious that all her secrets are out, she still tries to defend herself with lies. Even when I showed her the evidence that confirmed that she cheated. She still denied. If only she had said the truth, accepted her mistakes and asked for forgiveness, I will have forgiven her. But she said she is innocent that it is a set up. Set up my foot. If she doesn't work in the path of adultery no one will set her up. I'm very angry by her presence in my house that night I confronted her. So I have to tell her to leave for the main time till she is ready to say the truth. And now the ultimatum I gave her has expired. I've made my decision and that is to divorce her. I can't live with someone I don't trust. Someone my secrets are not safe with. Someone that can backstab me. And also I don't even believe I'm the father of that her son. If she wants me to take responsibilities for him after the divorce then I'll do a paternity test for that child first. May be I've been caring for a bastard since. With all she did to me, I just discovered I've treating Folake a good and faithful woman unfairly.I will make sure I make it up for her.

Mrs Fajemiyo Sharon
Hmmmmmm, so is this how my marriage of 24 years will crumble. All I've labored for all this years. It seems like a nightmare to me when my ex husband come into my room then about four months ago, throwing some pictures at me that he deserves an explanation about them. Truthfully I can only give explanation to only one of the five pictures and that is the one in which I hugged Tade my ex.Although he used to be a pest in my life then but he has changed now and he is even married now. That day he came to my pharmaceutical store to get somethings. We only hugged as old friends but whosoever take that picture do so well because the picture portrays more than a friendly hug and even showed that his hands are on my hips.
I really made up my mind to fight against the divorce. I don't want my son to grow up without fatherly love but something more important than that stopped me. I don't want to lose my son nor my life. The night my ex husband's lawyer brought the divorce papers I and my son received some visitors. May be they are trained assassins or petty robbers I don't know. But they came with different deadly weapons pistol, knife etc. They wanted to kill my son and me. I don't even know what to do. Then they said they won't kill us only on one condition, if I obey what madam said. Then they placed a call to the madam. I'm shocked to hear Folake voice and what do she say? She want me to live the town, live her husband's life and sign the divorce papers peacefully. That is when I reasoned that she must be the one who mastermind my set up. So I to signed the divorce and leave Ibadan totally. I'm now in Ife staying with a friend. I believe there are times someone have to leave everything behind so as to live to tell the story later in life.
END OF CHAPTER TWO

Thanks everyone for your words of encouragement and corrections.I'll try to make the post longer.

Tgirl085:
Thanks everyone for your words of encouragement and corrections.I'll try to make the post longer.

. . .Bravo! @T-girl. More grace

Chapter Three A
Mr Fajemiyo
Life is not the same without my first wife. I miss her,her advice, her love and caring. I never believed she signed that document peacefully without draging me to court or better still send people to beg me. Few days after I send her out with her child she called that she need to tell me something that is very important I told her I don't want to even set my face on her. She begged but I don't answer. When I told my lawyer to make the divorce papers, he tried to convince me to stop the divorce but my mind is made up. He then told me to hear anything she has to say even if I'll still divorce her. We picked a venue and the time for the meeting but I'm surprised that she never showed up.I later discovered that she has left this town. I'm yet to understand the reason why she never showed up for the meeting and even left town totally. My closest male friends my lawyer and my family doctor are at loggerhead over the matter.Leye my family doctor said I did the right thing and that she might have eloped with her lover and that her child may not be mine truly because she doesn't even try to fight against the allegations leveled against her while my lawyer said my decision is irrational and that I never acted like a man at all. He said I acted on impulse without proves. He even suggested Folake is interrogated so as know where she got the pictures. He said he only prayed I don't regret it in the nearest future. I later ask Folake where she got the pictures and she said someone dropped it with the gateman that it is for the madam in the house, so she collected it and checked it, then she gave it to me. I later confirmed from the gateman and the stories correlate. I only pray I don't regret my decision in the future as my lawyer said.

Mrs Fajemiyo Folakemi
Life as the favourite wife with no rival is sweat so much. No one to compete with, just me and my husband. I fit get anything I want easily. I now have access to my husband's phones social Media account, email account etc. I don't want one tiny legged girl from no where to com snatch my husband from me. We now dey sleep in the same room the master's bedroom. Everything dey as I plan am. My only wahala be Benson my son. He dey very sad and depressed since my husband send that woman away. I think say e dey miss his brother because they are very close. He even ask say why did they leave. That day I vex for him and com tell him say make he ask im papa. The thing wey next be say make my charm work on him and then e go change to my ATM machine. The monthly allowance he dey give me as a full house wife no reach anywhere all. Time wey I go dey live big don come.
Mrs Fajemiyo Sharon
Life here at Ife is not easy at all. We are still managing with my friend for the main time. I can't even afford to send my son to a private secondary school because I have little money in my bank account.
I re-stock my pharmaceutical store a week before all this crisis began. So I'm almost kobo-less now. The little money I've I want to use it to set up a new pharmaceutical store because looking for a job as a graduate of pharmacy at my age without any experience will be pretty difficult. Now I'm working as a chemistry teacher in a private school in Ife. I teach organic chemistry alone.I also do private lessons for students. I'll try to do the teaching Job for like two years. Then I'll have gathered enough money to start my pharmaceutical store in Ife. My son Seun have been sad &depressed since. He complained and ask for the reason while we left his father's house and who sent those assassins after us then. Well I think he is old enough to know some things so I explain everything on details to him. He is even more sad and promised to do well in is study not minding he now attends government owned schools so as to vindicate me. But he did something that surprised me. He changed his surname from Fajemiyo to Faje. I tried to convince him but he did not answer me. He said he did not want to be identified with his dad again. It seems he now hate his dad thoroughly.My pregnancy is now seven months old. And it's pretty difficult carrying a baby at my age but I'm trying thanks to my small stature and baby face.

this interesting i have bookmarked my space for a thrilling ride

CHAPEL THREE B
Miss Oladele Ore
Life can be so cruel sometimes and no condition is permanent either for the poor or for the rich. Imagine me someone who the driver used to drive to best private school in Lagos now trekking to a common public school in Ife. Me that can get any food I want the very time I want it now finding it difficult to eat a good meal just once a day.
All this started about a year ago. My mum's father is a very rich engineer and he owns a buiding construction firm. My mum is his only child so he willed his company to any man who married her. Dad is an architect working in his firm so he met mum there. They both fell in love with each other and later got married. So the company became automatically dad's own after my maternal grandfather's death. My nickname then is Ore the dreamer because as from the age of three I do have dreams and they do come to pass. When I'm thirteen dad & mum called me and told me about a secret safe that is in the house we are living then. The safe is built inside the wall of the left side of the house. They took me there and told me how to operate it and also they told me the
password stating that I may need it anytime in the future.Roughly a year later, I have a dream where some assassins came into our house and order dad to change his next of kin and also will his properties including the company to someone after his death. Daddy refused but they promised to kill him if he didn't cooperate. So daddy called his lawyer in that dream and told him to change his will to suit the assassins. The lawyer did so and brought the will to our house then dad hand it over to the assassins but what troubled me most Is that they later killed dad and mum in my presence stating that if he changed the will or not his fate have been decided already. Having known that my dreams do come to pass, I know I have to do something but I don't want them to know the dream because they will freak out. So the following day when I'm back from school I entered into dad's study to check if I can see the will. Then I saw a section marked confidential and checked. The will is there. I know I've to keep the will somewhere safe so I remembered the safe and I keep it there . My next step is finding a way to make sure we leave that house as soon as possible. I'm already planing something but my plan did not Save my parent because they died that night In there sleep. The autopsy report says that they both have heart attack which I knew was a lie. That was when my suffering started.

Few weeks after my parents have been buried, my father's lawyer state that his company has been willed to his bestfriend Mr Ike chucks. I can't really believe it. Dad has always urged me to become an create interest in science so as to become an engineer, so that I'll be able to run the company smoothly when it is passed on to me. The lawyer also said I'll be the one to decide who I'll live with. Either my mom's relations or dad's relations or Mr Ike. I choose Mr Ike though I hate the man already. I know he has a part to play in my parents death and that is what I wanted to unravel there. My mum's people are really pissed off by my decision so they disowned me and tell me if things get messy, I should not come to them for help. Till a month after my parent's death he do act nice and pamper me but later he changed and started making life unbearing for me. He is spending my dad's money still he won't buy me what I need. He stopped hiring a drycleaner every weekend so I have to do all our laundry even with his girlfriend's own. The suffering was so much that I've to seek help from my mother's people but I later regret doing so because they can't do anything to help me, I already made my choice and an agreement has been signed by both parties. Although he seems to change for sometimes because he was threatened to be charged to court for child abuse by my mum's people. He later became worse. Something happened one day which make me decide I'll either run away from him or loose my dignity or even die afterwards. What did he do to me? He almost raped me and threatened that I must not tell anybody.I knew my paternal grandmother do live in Ife. I visited her once with my parents and I can still remember the name of the street she lived in- London street; the name sounds funny to me so I still remember it. She the only option I have now. I can't run away and stay with my mum's people. Uncle Ike can charge them with child theft and kidnap. I want to go to a place he will never see me.
END OF CHAPTER THREE

Chapter Four A
Six months later
Mrs Fajemiyo
I've given birth and I'm very happy. I gave birth to a beautiful baby girl. She is just an exact replica of me. Even the nurses and doctor fell in love with her. I name her Fajemiyo Ayomide Oluwasikemi. She is about a month old now. My son is now in SSS 1 . He is in Science class. He wanted to become an architect. Although he attends a public school now, I make sure he have all necessary textbooks and he even attend a tutorial class after school. He is taking his studies very serious and he is coping well. I do check his notes and text notes weekly. The only problem are the girls, they keep disturbing him. Some are even bold enough to declare their intention to him. I do see many love letters written to him by those girl in his school bag. Hmmmm, that is how it has been with Adura too girls are always after him. I only pray they don't distract my boy too much Else I'll do something myself to scare them away myself.

Faje Seun
I love my baby sister. She is very pretty, just like mummy.
School has been going on fine. Though it not what I'll always experienced before. There are bullies and even cultists tormenting fellow students. Even prefects are nothing to write home about. But all I know is that I need to persevere so as to make it in life. Another problems is the girls. They are always swarming around me. They are ready to do thing for me; polish my shoe, write my note etc. I only pity them because I don't have eyes for any if them. The girl I want to be friends with don't even look my way. She do act like I never exist. Even when I wanted to move near her. Some said she is arrogant but I know she is not. I get to know her name is Oladele Oreoluwa from one of my female admirer. What drew me to her is her vast knowledge in mathematics. From primary school no one has ever led me in maths but she do so last session and last term again. I want us to start ready together because I want to know what she knew that made her led me. But wait o, mummy must know about this.Sey I don't start thinking about girls be that.
May God see me through.

This is really nice, God Bless our writer...