cyber5:
First of all

Congratulations on making fp, it was on fp i saw this story and decided to follow it.





You are doing a great job ma'am.

If you would permit me to invite my VINs (very important Nairalanders) to come and sit

rachealfst
brownlolly
AustinBlinks
TheBlessedMAN
SmartestPopQUEEN
NevetsIbot
RolaDiva

tnk u and welcme

Kimkardashain:
tnk u and welcme

when are you updating ma

cyber5:



when are you updating ma

tomw mwn

Vectormike:


I do. Please take your ugly face away.

What is even dat ur name vectormike abi shud I say carrier of diseasesmike

Nobody asked you to comment forget that we are in the new month oooo.
Idiot, even the name self would let u knw he is a fool of his own caliber.
Rubbish idiat. Getout of here if u don't have anything to do or say. Or better still go and tap sense.
Shameless he-goat.
Be gone you fool. I don't have time to share E-words with you. Mention back at ur own peril.
Hadampson, kimberlywest, evajael, meneski, wizsolzy, ikombe, theblessedman, gtin, souloho19, boffinjay, hormobolanle abeg una no see the idiot of a human being

Darkcrisp:


No, you don't, because if you did, you'd be showing it to the world. But rather, here you are, showing us what a jobless asswipe you are.

And please, don't make me laugh. Ugly? Stop wishing you had a girlfriend half as gorgeous as me.

STAY OFF THIS POST AND GET A LIFE!

Lol...laff wan kill me for where I dey.
Babe u wicked oooo. Don't minthe fool that calls homself carrierofdiseasesmike

stephenGee12:


Lol...laff wan kill me for where I dey.
Babe u wicked oooo. Don't minthe fool that calls homself carrierofdiseasesmike

guys jst leave d bull dog, their problm is dat i used sleepy hollow town, wats d deal iffa use d name, isnt fiction? didnt i make it clear? and d oda guys is sayin dat irving is going to sue me, jeez ,
for real? sue me?

Contd
Juliet got to the woods and parked her car,she sniffed back a tear and got down,glancing at her watch its already past 10 am,she smirked,and chuckled to herself,she will teach her fiance a big lesson,so he can do her wish,she spread her gown to cover her legs and sat down,and brought out her phone


he stood at a not too far distance,watching her as she throw her head back in laughter,he rummaged through his bag aod brought out the syringe,he raise it up and smiled through the eyes,

tasha sat down on the long benche in the sheriffs office and flip through her phone barely some days and she is already missing rivensisle,she watched as ramsey exchange words with the sheriff,his back to her, even at that she could see his muscles through the revealing white polo that he wore,she found herself fantasizing how it would feel like to touch those sexy muscles,too caught up in her thoughts she didnt hear when ramsey called her to come over,she blinked and got up rubbing her palms together she walked over to him

Kimkardashain:
Contd
Juliet got to the woods and parked her car,she sniffed back a tear and got down,glancing at her watch its already past 10 am,she smirked,and chuckled to herself,she will teach her fiance a big lesson,so he can do her wish,she spread her gown to cover her legs and sat down,and brought out her phone


he stood at a not too far distance,watching her as she throw her head back in laughter,he rummaged through his bag aod brought out the syringe,he raise it up and smiled through the eyes,

tasha sat down on the long benche in the sheriffs office and flip through her phone barely some days and she is already missing rivensisle,she watched as ramsey exchange words with the sheriff,his back to her, even at that she could see his muscles through the revealing white polo that he wore,she found herself fantasizing how it would feel like to touch those sexy muscles,too caught up in her thoughts she didnt hear when ramsey called her to come over,she blinked and got up rubbing her palms together she walked over to him

tanks for not giving up....
pls Kim k..can u make it long..d episodes are too short....tanks

Juliet ended the call and got up time to leave she said to herself,she bent to smoothen the rumples in her gown,he grabbed her shoulders and juliet shouted out in fright,
"you scared me mr,who are you? "she said breathlessly
he looked at her the young lady looked frightened,best to put her out of the misery,but first he needed to play along with her
"oh am sorry miss,i obviously was caught off by the growling of a wild bear," he watch her face as he spoke,the lady didnt show a sign of fear,he continued"aint you scared of bear?"he asked her

"am not....am not scared,...i need to go now,it was nice talking to you"she got up and made to leave and he drew her back,
"i dont think so,you need to fear bears" he said as he jabbed the syringe into her arm,
stiffling her painful cries he scoop her into hands to his car,he laid he down at the back and drove out,whistling to himself,

janeade:
tanks for not giving up.... pls Kim k..can u make it long..d episodes are too short....tanks

i will hum,just wantd to appreciate u guys,main update will cum tomw

Kimkardashain:

cos of u all dat has been gvin me encouragement i will continur bt dat wil be tomw

Yaaaayyyyy,I'm bringing wine

stephenGee12:


What is even dat ur name vectormike abi shud I say carrier of diseasesmike

Nobody asked you to comment forget that we are in the new month oooo.
Idiot, even the name self would let u knw he is a fool of his own caliber.
Rubbish idiat. Getout of here if u don't have anything to do or say. Or better still go and tap sense.
Shameless he-goat.
Be gone you fool. I don't have time to share E-words with you. Mention back at ur own peril.
Hadampson, kimberlywest, evajael, meneski, wizsolzy, ikombe, theblessedman, gtin, souloho19, boffinjay, hormobolanle abeg una no see the idiot of a human being

Lol....kimberlywest,come and make ur hubby calm down

GREAT 1 Sister

stephenGee12:


What is even dat ur name vectormike abi shud I say carrier of diseasesmike

Nobody asked you to comment forget that we are in the new month oooo.
Idiot, even the name self would let u knw he is a fool of his own caliber.
Rubbish idiat. Getout of here if u don't have anything to do or say. Or better still go and tap sense.
Shameless he-goat.
Be gone you fool. I don't have time to share E-words with you. Mention back at ur own peril.
Hadampson, kimberlywest, evajael, meneski, wizsolzy, ikombe, theblessedman, gtin, souloho19, boffinjay, hormobolanle abeg una no see the idiot of a human being

Ero pese
Calm down bro.. he don't worth ur time. Like doris would say PATIENCE IS A GREAT VIRTUE. Exercise patience please

Toyin223:
GREAT 1 Sister

tnk u lve

Kimkardashain:
Juliet ended the call and got up time to leave she said to herself,she bent to smoothen the rumples in her gown,he grabbed her shoulders and juliet shouted out in fright,
"you scared me mr,who are you? "she said breathlessly
he looked at her the young lady looked frightened,best to put her out of the misery,but first he needed to play along with her
"oh am sorry miss,i obviously was caught off by the growling of a wild bear," he watch her face as he spoke,the lady didnt show a sign of fear,he continued"aint you scared of bear?"he asked her
"am not....am not scared,...i need to go now,it was nice talking to you"she got up and made to leave and he drew her back,
"i dont think so,you need to fear bears" he said as he jabbed the syringe into her arm,
stiffling her painful cries he scoop her into hands to his car,he laid he down at the back and drove out,whistling to himself,

Hehe. Good for you, Juliet.

Wow. I guess another body will soon be found. Nice cliffhanger.
Thanks for the update (:

stephenGee12:


What is even dat ur name vectormike abi shud I say carrier of diseasesmike

Nobody asked you to comment forget that we are in the new month oooo.
Idiot, even the name self would let u knw he is a fool of his own caliber.
Rubbish idiat. Getout of here if u don't have anything to do or say. Or better still go and tap sense.
Shameless he-goat.
Be gone you fool. I don't have time to share E-words with you. Mention back at ur own peril.
Hadampson, kimberlywest, evajael, meneski, wizsolzy, ikombe, theblessedman, gtin, souloho19, boffinjay, hormobolanle abeg una no see the idiot of a human being

... leave am make ah flog am

Nice one ma...thank you for continuing. Don't mind that hater pls, I think my dad and mum have just taught him lessons.

Nice storyline kim. Stop giving attention to haters. Their hatred is just a form of their acceptance of your being better than them and should serve only to encourage you on the need to improve on some few obvious lapses of yours.

You are still doing great considering the fact that you are not a writer. Not so many people who just write for fun can summon the courage to start a project like you did.

Divepen1 has highlighted the things you need to improve on. It will help you build your skill and boost your rating here on nairaland. You might also want to adopt Lleigh's (that girl ehn) approach of mentioning your readers on every update, dem no go get choice than to comment.

Let me go look for somewhere to buy popcorn and beer. I dey follow.

Lexxyla:
Nice storyline kim. Stop giving attention to haters. Their hatred is just a form of their acceptance of your being better than them and should serve only to encourage you on the need to improve on some few obvious lapses of yours.

You are still doing great considering the fact that you are not a writer. Not so many people who just write for fun can summon the courage to start a project like you did.

Divepen1 has highlighted the things you need to improve on. It will help you build your skill and boost your rating here on nairaland. You might also want to adopt Lleigh's (that girl ehn) approach of mentioning your readers on every update, dem no go get choice than to comment.

Let me go look for somewhere to buy popcorn and beer. I dey follow.

Lexxyla thanks for telling me off I was only doing what I saw others do. Believe I was scratching my head why people were not reading it or commenting.

As I said Kim if you like writing continue, it will help you improve.
Off for some tea

stephenGee12:


What is even dat ur name vectormike abi shud I say carrier of diseasesmike

Nobody asked you to comment forget that we are in the new month oooo.
Idiot, even the name self would let u knw he is a fool of his own caliber.
Rubbish idiat. Getout of here if u don't have anything to do or say. Or better still go and tap sense.
Shameless he-goat.
Be gone you fool. I don't have time to share E-words with you. Mention back at ur own peril.
Hadampson, kimberlywest, evajael, meneski, wizsolzy, ikombe, theblessedman, gtin, souloho19, boffinjay, hormobolanle abeg una no see the idiot of a human being

Hubby, calm down.

Don't mind this kind of people.

If he looked half as good as Segun Arinze, his life would have been better.

Calm down dearie.

EvaJael:
Lol....kimberlywest,come and make ur hubby calm down

Already on it, sis.

tnks guys, note taken, where is mhizgap,marianneada,queenitee and Akinwale14?

Kimkardashain:
1700 and smtin views people, were are d comments, wat u guys do is wait 4 me to squeeze out tym to update,and u will read,and run to oda thread to also read,witawt droppn a little comment,is bad,i hv tried to ignore it 4 so long but its painful,i kip oda threads lively,bt myn is quiet lyk a cemetary, am nt a writer bt i try 2 do smtin interestn oda dan deal with drugs and people all day,
u guys dnt nid to rub it on my face to tell me am a big failure,
i tink am stopping dis story ryt now,
Divepen1 pls delete dis work 4rm NL
marianneada,kimberlywest,queenitee,evajael,mhizgap,Akinwale14 ,odas dat i 4get 2 mention, thank u 4 reading and d encouragement.

Awww I'm sorry, I'm also guilty of this. for the people that encourged kim, thank you

graphicsdelight:


Hehe. Good for you, Juliet.

lol,

Kimkardashain:
tnks guys, note taken,
where is mhizgap,marianneada,queenitee and Akinwale14?

I went to get chicken and chips For you when I saw the killer injecting some stuff into Juliet.

I had to run for my precious life and am still running.

mhizgap:




I went to get chicken and chips For you when I saw the killer injecting some stuff into Juliet.

I had to run for my precious life and am still running.

hahaha,chai see run oya cum bk,he's not pursuin u yet,both you and kimberlywest

Contd
"miss gilmore...." rick began

"tasha pls....."she cut in

"ok tasha,i understand that you want to see your dad,but he's still in the lab,so you...uh will have to wait....sometime around 4pm..." rick said

"she already knows that rick,go straight to the damn point..."ramsey cut in angrily,

"don't you dare shut me up again,ramsey baker,you dad is paying for his crimes...so deal with it" rick shouted at him flashing him his teeth,ramsey clenched his fist together and shot him an angry look,tasha's eyes darted between the two men,ramsey look like he wants to rip rick apart,and rick appeared to be unaware of the fact,
"ehm,pls may i see mr baker?.......i have some questions that require an urgent answer " she said bridging the cold stares,

"and what question and answer is that?" rick asked her, flipping through the thick note on the table

"best to hear it all once" tasha replied,and began moving towards the cell
rick stared after her and got up immediately,elbowing ramsey out of the way.

She woke up feeling nubbed,her neck was stiffed ,and she couldn't feel her fingers,how long has she been here? and why is she in an operating room,she clenched her teeth together and tried shouting but no sound could come out,just then she heard the sound of boots seconds before the door was opened,
she angled her head towards the other side and look up at him,a tiny gasped escaped her mouth as she saw who her abducter is,
"welcome back sunshine,i know what is going through your mind right now....we shall begin the ritual by 4pm,that way you will have time to connect with your sister,......incase you are thinking of shouting,..." he stiffled a wicked chuckle and continue"dont bother cos you are in the middle of nowhere,and nobody can hear you,so enjoy your last hour alive" he ended throwing his hat back and exploding in laughter,he walked through the door and shut it,leaving her soaked in her own tears,she began regreting trying to play the stupid trick on her fiance,now she's never going to leave

When am i gonna see a good story to read on nairaland? Mtchwwwwww

Evajael, Lleigh, Divepen1, Darkcrisp, mhizgap,kimberlywest,marianneada,queenitee,surestG,stephenGee12,Lexxyla, mabelconor,Emperor380,pamelB,