Creeza:
okay dear, please air out your views... I know the story has an open ' END ' .. There is a reason for it, but if you think it should have ended otherwise, please let me know what you expected.


Mean while, here is the phone that stopped the bullet.

lol. Dat gun lasan bt tanks 4 saving our ben life. I tink ray is suppose to be killed 2ru ben's hand jare nd ben should be exonerated sumhow sha. Nd a great reunion 4 ben nd benedicta. Dats wat i tink sha

Matrycx:
boss creeza, tanks for d story, even if its a freestyle, i enjoyed it, expectin d next

bless you brother, I had fun too. Besides if writing isn't for fun ? Whatelse triggers the desire? Money? Secondary I think.

But my question though... How did you expect the story to end. I get quite a lot of emails about twists and turns from few loyal readers that I often beat their expectations and when they want more, that's when I drop a teaser and disappear!!!

Thanks in anticipation bro

.....

Queenitee don't worry am here with you. I go supply you with wine and chicken. Hope u like chicken?

Creeza:
awwnnnn happy ending! me too sweaty and all that did come to my head but hey , Charlie saved Ben's life and there is a twist. Like I said very early in the story about Charlie's death: it did one thing which is forward the plot.

Don't worry , Ray will die somehow, he is fast. I know and might kill those officers in a blink or who knows, just who knows, Benedicta might hit him from the back Or, now here the twist that might shock you.


What if Ben had tampered with Ray's gun back at the jungle. Remember when Ray gave it to him? Ahhhhh!!! You see?

But still if all these do not meet his end... Then we will find out in ' A dance Of Fury' expect it.
I feel stupid explaining this to you. But still its my duty.

So be cheerful... This was just the beginning of the End.

wooow i luv a dance of fury already, tanks very plentiful 4 d thorough explanation. Pls do mention me wen u start it

*clapping* the story was wow, felt like I was watching a movie. I feel sorry for Ben, such a twisted fate. I'm waiting for the season two

Creeza:
Queenitee don't worry am here with you. I go supply you with wine and chicken. Hope u like chicken?

yes please, thanks. chicken chicken

Creeza xup nice story u gat dere actually just finished reading it.Don't mind my not reading it earlier, thought u weren't gonna update quick.Luv ur use of Naija no 1 bad boys(boko),IPOB etc.
Ps:i don't think the tori should end soon,u shud write a part 2(if u have the means currently).Ur story might just rival one of the best stories on NL:An Evening With Eva.Anyway sha nice write up hope u consider my suggestion.

Creeza:
bless you brother, I had fun too. Besides if writing isn't for fun ? Whatelse triggers the desire? Money? Secondary I think.

But my question though... How did you expect the story to end. I get quite a lot of emails about twists and turns from few loyal readers that I often beat their expectations and when they want more, that's when I drop a teaser and disappear!!!

Thanks in anticipation bro

I think d story end is unique, people might b expectin you to tel us ben didnt die so he deciided to go for revenge against the group,, but dat would be too predictable, coz dats how most stories goes, so i think dis is unique.
my wish: dat d president does not die and she comes back healthy, win the election, put an end to insurgency, #nototerrorism, that benny and ben hav some hot romance, and benny get pregnant lol.
My thought boss, #salute

Matrycx:

I think d story end is unique, people might b expectin you to tel us ben didnt die so he deciided to go for revenge against the group,, but dat would be too predictable, coz dats how most stories goes, so i think dis is unique.
my wish: dat d president does not die and she comes back healthy, win the election, put an end to insurgency, #nototerrorism, that benny and ben hav some hot romance, and benny get pregnant lol.
My thought boss, #salute

this is unique also... This comment, and thank you for this.... Hahahaha, I liked the part about Benny getting pregnant. Okay , let's see.. You may never know what comes up next .. Gracias!!!

Creeza:
this is unique also... This comment, and thank you for this.... Hahahaha, I liked the part about Benny getting pregnant. Okay , let's see.. You may never know what comes up next .. Gracias!!!

Anticipating

Creeza dis one you no wan consider my suggestion abi we dey fight

MichaelBlake40:
Creeza dis one you no wan consider my suggestion abi we dey fight

Sorry bros.. I did not mean to ignore you, I was only contemplating . Sorry if you feel that way. I thought about it, your suggestion and its a great one. Currently, a part 2 would mean a follow up or you can call it an Interquel ( more like a prequel for the next sequel) . All things being equal, one might be in motion. Many loose ends in the first story, like this one ' who murdered Ben's parents? Why?..... The tattoo on Ray's neck , how did it come . When?

But one thing was accomplished time without number in the story : Ben always... Always found a way to cheat death. and I'm surprised that many knew this to be the theme of the story but when it was time to accept it. They just didn't want to let Ben go.

Even me, that's why I left the end an open one. with hopes that he will scale through the hurdle.



Lemme keep shut for now. But just so you know, there is always a story somewhere and I'm happy you were kind enough to drop a comment.

Obrigado!

Creeza:
Sorry bros.. I did not mean to ignore you, I was only contemplating . Sorry if you feel that way. I thought about it, your suggestion and its a great one. Currently, a part 2 would mean a follow up or you can call it an Interquel ( more like a prequel for the next sequel) . All things being equal, one might be in motion. Many loose ends in the first story, like this one ' who murdered Ben's parents? Why?..... The tattoo on Ray's neck , how did it come . When?

But one thing was accomplished time without number in the story : Ben always... Always found a way to cheat death. and I'm surprised that many knew this to be the theme of the story but when it was time to accept it. They just didn't want to let Ben go.

Even me, that's why I left the end an open one. with hopes that he will scale through the hurdle.



Lemme keep shut for now. But just so you know, there is always a story somewhere and I'm happy you were kind enough to drop a comment.

Obrigado!

Thanks bro, waiting for the prequel/interquel if you like we can even work together on the subsequent prequel.

Full of suspense and the story should continue

Oh my!!! Creeza! Thanks for the mentions....just seeing it... Let me quickly go back to read...

MichaelBlake40:

Thanks bro, waiting for the prequel/interquel if you like we can even work together on the subsequent prequel.

would be glad to... When i begin it, i will email you.

Adesina12:
Full of suspense and the story should continue

thank you sir! Continuation in progress, but I do hope you had a bit of a ride with this teaser ,didnt you ?

Honeydawealth:
Oh my!!! Creeza! Thanks for the mentions....just seeing it...
Let me quickly go back to read...

sorry 4 the late mention, some updates were removed but you can get them straight in your email address. Thats if you are interestd,

Creeza:
would be glad to... When i begin it, i will email you.

Sure thing bro am waiting

Creeza:
sorry 4 the late mention, some updates were removed but you can get them straight in your email address. Thats if you are interestd,

oh! I'm so intrested....pls send it to dis email ad... Oyindah@gmail.com

Honeydawealth:
oh! I'm so intrested....pls send it to dis email ad... Oyindah@gmail.com

i will do just that ,

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I haff land like the ocean in a drop.

Anyone hungry, place and order.

dimssy:
I haff land like the ocean in a drop.
Anyone hungry, place and order.

i am whats on the menu!

Creeza:
i am whats on the menu!

Creeza, just place your order.

dimssy:
Creeza, just place your order.

id go for a ferry godmother wand to make a thrilling story that every one will enjoy. Too much?

Creeza:
id go for a ferry godmother wand to make a thrilling story that every one will enjoy. Too much?

Nope ain't too much meanwhile you don start the prequel.
My email:Mreigns803@gmail.com

MichaelBlake40:

Nope ain't too much meanwhile you don start the prequel.
My email:Mreigns803@gmail.com

i have a plot... Its hazy. More like a skeleton. Before the end of today, ill buzz you. Hopefully, you might be fascinated with it. Hopefully.

Creeza:
id go for a ferry godmother wand to make a thrilling story that every one will enjoy. Too much?

Not too much but it's not just available.
Rachelfst come o