Patotelli:
HMMHMMMHM!!! *Clears throat*....

(in runtown's voice)

Dis sweet tori be wan kili me o,
Hope say e affect u d way e do me machi e kom sweet like shitoo oo,
Evajel i say ur story na killer OooWEE!,
Kom abeg pattoski dey lukup make u write anoda thriller story ooo.

Hhmhm ok! Thanks 4 dis piece, if u no go mind i go like to greet on behalf of us all...

I still remain me #pattoski.. Mention me on ur next story.
#dapeacemaker..
Oya starboy wey ur version @HORLADSTAR....
Front page abeg oooo..
Our mods demmmm!!!

Patoski baba ,I Don land all d way from planet Mars. so make I sharperly drop a nice lyrics. before I drop that I would like to commend our dear writer for a good job that is well-done. NYC story from u,it was fun reading ur story.

Evajael WELDONE
Her finger WELDONE
I really love this nice STORY
From the start it feel LOVELY
Can't even describe my FEELING
For the pretty nice BABY
All the same, nice POSTS
Keep moving with the nice STUNTS
Will surely take u PLACES
Or let me say COUNTRIES
That's all for now till we meet AGAIN
But don't forget to mention me when u wanna post AGAIN
It's ur gentle nigga mean, it's HORLADSTAR AGAIN.

@evajael, hold on lemme finish crying before I'll come back to comment


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I loved it from beginning till the end, especially the end. Lol

It was one heck of a ride, and I'm glad how it ended, though Niel dying wasn't easy to take in.
But in all, t'was amazing. Good job sweetie.

Hantonia:
Re U Kiddin Me Dis Story Ova No O It Must Continue

Would you like a sequel dearie? I'm just kidding abeg. Let my brain recover small ehn. Thanks

misskbest:
Hmmm nice one. Most times it's the end that matters not really the beginning

Thank u dear

Lilyjoe567:

@evajael, hold on lemme finish crying before I'll come back to comment

Lilyjoe567:

@evajael, hold on lemme finish crying before I'll come back to comment

Lol..please finish crying fast o. I'm eager to hear from you.

HORLADSTAR:

Patoski baba ,I Don land all d way from planet Mars. so make I sharperly drop a nice lyrics. before I drop that I would like to commend our dear writer for a good job that is well-done. NYC story from u,it was fun reading ur story.

Evajael WELDONE
Her finger WELDONE
I really love this nice STORY
From the start it feel LOVELY
Can't even describe my FEELING
For the pretty nice BABY
All the same, nice POSTS
Keep moving with the nice STUNTS
Will surely take u PLACES
Or let me say COUNTRIES
That's all for now till we meet AGAIN
But don't forget to mention me when u wanna post AGAIN
It's ur gentle nigga mean, it's HORLADSTAR AGAIN.

Thank you so much dear

favch:

Thanks darl for d mention am honoured, it was a nice story even at times it seems like u forgot d stores but u still came back to finish it up. ...u r a great writer��

Thanks for sticking around till the end. I appreciate it.

donsanctus4real:




lol not yet my bae ooo but looking forward to ve her as my bar DAT if she accepts.. am new born baby still searching won't mind if two of us date...

Hehehehehehe thou shall not go there o

donsanctus4real:




well understand "But" still in it dear.... lol can't wait to see another super story from u dear...

donsanctus4real:




well understand "But" still in it dear.... lol can't wait to see another super story from u dear...

donsanctus4real:




well understand "But" still in it dear.... lol can't wait to see another super story from u dear...

Thanks. Another story...hmmm...donno when that will be. This one was just to test my hands.

Patotelli:
HMMHMMMHM!!! *Clears throat*....

(in runtown's voice)

Dis sweet tori be wan kili me o,
Hope say e affect u d way e do me machi e kom sweet like shitoo oo,
Evajel i say ur story na killer OooWEE!,
Kom abeg pattoski dey lukup make u write anoda thriller story ooo.

Hhmhm ok! Thanks 4 dis piece, if u no go mind i go like to greet on behalf of us all...

I still remain me #pattoski.. Mention me on ur next story.
#dapeacemaker..
Oya starboy wey ur version @HORLADSTAR....
Front page abeg oooo..
Our mods demmmm!!!

Thanks patotelli.

Sojikhing:
wow..... this the best story have ever read. thanks mam, have learnt a lot on lesson.

Awww thank you. I still have a lot to learn tho from my ogas at the top

ftosino:
ah totally understand, waiting for your next story

itsandi:
Nice one EvaJael, I totally understand.

Thanks itsandi and ftosino

ikombe:
Evajael the way you end this story dey pain me seriously

Awww I'm so sorry my dearest ikombe. Please who is his bae? Let her bring tissue for ikombe jare

YoShawtee:
miss evajael if I see you for my street I go beat your fine face up...You now killed Niel instead of Elliot to die for his sins by himself.

Ha! This lady o. My face wey I deh manage before before, u won come scara am finish. Na beg I dey beg o

ToluNimiWrites:
Wow! Can't believe this awesome story has finally ended.....I've been a silent reader all along and it would be a sin not to commend you

Though its a little bit of tragedy, Great story Evajael, I loveeee it!

Yeah o, it has ended finally. My brain is happy sef because now it can go on vacation. Thank you dear.

toyhin123:

Lol

Seriously,will Niel just die like dat......Eva dis is not good o...... crying

I really commend evajeal for this great work , thumbs up sis........ don't forget to mention me in ur next story

Niel is gone and I'm really sad too. Thank you so much dearie.

queenitee:

No nau
Eva, you finally did it. Killer and buried Neil *crying* don't console me oo.

Thumbs sis, the story is wow ahn ahn. I'm clapping for you. You are a great writer

Thanks sis. Your sis can rest well now. Thank you too for all the times you encouraged me and made me laugh. I love u three much

adebriana:
Aww *crying. What a nice ending. Superb story dear

Faspen:
wow you rock men this is fantastic

Lildiamond:
Thanks Evajael

Thank uuu

cbella:


lol! EvaJael pls rescue me

Pele o

Pricelessangel0:
Why all dis now #crying# anyway not everybody got to have happy ending bt i. feel so sorry for mille. and i pray sadness will not replace our joy in Jesus name. well done ma and thanks for dis inspirational story. God bless and more grace

Believe me, I have cried more than you more. Thanks dear and amen

marianneada:
I will comment When I finish mourning Neil

Chei I don enter yawa, I made my mummy in writing cry. I'm so sorry ma.

xaviercasmir:
Nice and very educating work you have here my dear. My God grant you more inspiration. Keep it up

Thank you dear. Amen

Leesah:
cbella ooooo y did u end it now?? I refuse until evajael comes and update by herself. but it's a nice ending though...

It has ended o my dear. Thanks for reading and commenting too

DaLaw22:
The most beautiful endings are the saddest.

This is a work of art

Thanks

Jane1234f:
The End? Just like that?

Yeah. It's the end. I'm sure you were expecting some more action

Eddyella:
The End ke,I know dat u re joking abi dis z just d beginning.

Lol...I'm not joking o

genius43:
Wonderful piece with a beautiful ending Evajael

Thank u. I'm glad u like it

kikiwendy:
Evajael I throway salute for you.. You just made me cry this hot afternoon. But pls explain how the title of the story relates with the story

Thanks dear. Sorry for making you cry. I think I've answered your question but if you still aren't convinced, just let me know

omonifamily:
hers is not a happy ending at all

kudos to you ma'am Evajel

Thank u dear. God bless

DrClemzzY:
Who's tha best?


EVAJAEL!

Awwww thank u DrClemzzY

FortunateB:
Nice story with nice ending.

I was speechless all this while cause I felt Millie's pain.

Evajael u broke our hearts when u decided to end Niel's life, I felt it like it was real.

Babe u rock, I pray God grant you all that you deserve.

Thanks a billion.

Ohh I'm sorry for being a heartbreaker sweetheart. I hope you've forgiven me. Thank u so much

1marking:
Hmmmm Thanks Evajeal 4dis Interesting Story.

Thank u too

Pearl05:
Beautiful story, the ending is great. Life isn't fair all the time but we have to cope and move on.

Life isn't all roses.

My point exactly! Thank u dear. Much love

EvaJael:

Yeah. It's the end. I'm sure you were expecting some more action

Honestly

Nice work dear. Like I said before why kill Niel ? hnnmm!!!! well life atimes is not fair. Mention me in any other story you will write. Dessydemmy loves you too.

EvaJael:

Lol...I'm not joking o

Seriously,I tot since Cbella has played her role is nw ur turn 2 resurrect Niel 4rm d dead.

Dessydemmy:
Nice work dear. Like I said before why kill Niel ? hnnmm!!!! well life atimes is not fair. Mention me in any other story you will write. Dessydemmy loves you too.

Thanks sweetie. The hour glass of Niel's life was empty already even tho he was still young.

Eddyella:

Seriously,I tot since Cbella has played her role is nw ur turn 2 resurrect Niel 4rm d dead.

Lol...cbella's only role was to post the update I typed na. She didn't type it, she was being a good friend by helping me post when I was banned

Eva dear, this story is wow and like I said earlier, we all felt Neil's death but you just have to let go sweetheart and remember it's a story sweetheart

queenitee:
Eva dear, this story is wow and like I said earlier, we all felt Neil's death but you just have to let go sweetheart and remember it's a story sweetheart

I'll always keep that in mind dearie. Thank you being such an awesome sis and yeah, I slept well last night for the first time since I wrote about Niel's death

EvaJael:

I'll always keep that in mind dearie. Thank you being such an awesome sis and yeah, I slept well last night for the first time since I wrote about Niel's death

Come and hug me

Eva dear,u av done a great work here.but I don't know but I feel dis a real life story .anyways more grace.

Interesting story.. But sha come and continue abeg. This "THE END" na joke. Sis Cbella i dey suspect you o..

EvaJael:

Lol...cbella's only role was to post the update I typed na. She didn't type it, she was being a good friend by helping me post when I was banned

Have heard u ma.Remember 2 mention me in ur next story.

nice story.thumbs up ma'am

Evajael twas a ride well enjoyed

Filled with so much vital lessons good enough to keep sensible individuals right OK track and to make others reverse from the route they've taken which might have damming consequences

May your tank of inspiration never run dry and may that big head of yours keep churning out more thought provoking and inspiring write up that will win a lot of Oscars

Eddyella:

Have heard u ma.Remember 2 mention me in ur next story.

Sure thing

boffinjay:
nice story.thumbs up ma'am

Thanks a lot

kingphilip:
Evajael twas a ride well enjoyed

Filled with so much vital lessons good enough to keep sensible individuals right OK track and to make others reverse from the route they've taken which might have damming consequences

May your tank of inspiration never run dry and may that big head of yours keep churning out more thought provoking and inspiring write up that will win a lot of Oscars

Amen amen amen amen. Thanks a lot dear

queenitee:

Come and hug me

Big big hugs plus kisses join