Who be this writer sef.. If you can't write why do you start it?? Don't ever write again.. I have told my brother lacisacala

Ghostwriter u that start and abandon stories Lucifer key,Corridor of hell u no finish.

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I kept quickly, through my long pause I listened, trying hard to access the voice of ‘God’ within the dark silent vacuum. IS THIS VOICE FOR REAL? HOW IS THIS EVEN POSSIBLE? I HAD NEVER HEARD GOD TALK. I sighed. IF YOU ARE GOD THEN WHERE AM I?
“You are in your coffin” replied the voice of God.

NOW I REMEMBER THAT VOICE, IT WAS CALM AND UNPERSUASIVE. THOSE AWKWARD DREAMS OF JENNIFER STABBING ME WITH A KNIFE OR PUSHING ME INTO A PIT. WHERE THESE THE SIGNS? OH MY GOD, I HAVE BEEN A FOOL FOR TOO LONG.

“But why didn’t you talk to me in clear tone just like you are doing now, it would have be more convincing” I tried to blame someone.

“Because you never came close enough to hearing my voice” said the voice.

“What do you mean? I don’t understand”

“Kenneth!” the voice called my name caringly like a concerned father ready to give a talk to a rebellious son. The voice continued “You never called me, you never prayed but yet I showed concern, I gave you the signs of the evil to come upon you but yet you ignored and never called for my help. You never gave alms to the poor, to the needy, to those who had come asking, you were greedy even to your parents but yet I gave clues of the doom to come. You sinned without remorse but yet I forgave you. Son, do you know why I had done all that?”
“No Sir” I replied as I wept regretting my past deeds, I had recalled every of my sins like they were just seconds behind. I even recalled my childhood sins. WOW!

“I did all that for the love you had shown Bruno, you gave it all that it needed and it prayed for you with every act of love and compassion you made towards it. You were good to it” the voice of God paused for a while, I thought it had gone when it came up again, the voice was louder “Now, I wish to grant you a second chance, a chance to make amends of your ways, a chance to go redeem yourself but it’s your choice to make!” the voice said before drifting away in echo, and ones again, the terror and pain and agony and silence filled my dark vacuum.

“God please come back!!!” I screamed, I felt lonely in a coffin.

BUT THEN, THERE IS A CHOICE BEFORE ME, ONE THAT I MUST MAKE WITH CAUTION. HOW CAN I GO BACK WITHOUT A HEART OF REVENGE, WITHOUT SPILLING THE BLOOD OF MY KILLERS, HOW CAN I REDEEM MY SELF WITHOUT DRAGGING BACK CRYING SOULS? THE CHOOSE LOOKS SIMPLE BUT RIGHT HERE IN MY HEART…IT’S A TOUGH ON.

I AM SURE YOU READERS DO NOT UNDERSTAND THE MAGNITUDE OF WHAT LAYS THE CHOICE BEFORE ME BUT I WILL MAKE YOU, I WILL TAKE YOU BACK IN TIME, BACK SWEET MEMORY LANE.

gozima22:
Who be this writer sef.. If you can't write why do you start it?? Don't ever write again.. I have told my brother lacisacala

Apologies, my schedules outside nairaland are so demanding and besides, writing stories like this are tasking...I don't want to post rubbish to (some) very intelligent readers.

GHOSTWRITER IS BACK!!

Tolezy001:
Ghostwriter u that start and abandon stories Lucifer key,Corridor of hell u no finish.

Abeg no vex, there is always a (Strong) reason behind my actions.

shiffynaani:
Very Slow Updates Wash Away The True Essence And Credibility Of Any Story.

that is what happens when you post stories with your phone in a place with very bad network and tangled with other responsibilities. Nairaland is like my dairy, I post ONLY when the inspiration comes and when chanced, NOT in line with longing curiosity.

madjune:
This guy sure has imagination but I still sorry over his tenses.

As a writer, you can't be mixing present and past tenses all in one line.

I'm am only a sleepless thinker, a story teller. I am here to learn and grow in talent, that is why you must help point out mistakes (in precise) and not just read and condemn me to my fault. I am all ears to correction (besides, this is an unedited work and you don't expect I post this 'thing' to a paid forum...or do you?) but never the less, I will appreciate your red inks.

ghostwritter:

I'm am only a sleepless thinker, a story teller. I am here to learn and grow in talent, that is why you must help point out mistakes (in precise) and not just read and condemn me to my fault. I am all ears to correction (besides, this is an unedited work and you don't expect I post this 'thing' to a paid forum...or do you?) but never the less, I will appreciate your red inks.

baba no mind them jare...post when you feel it's OK for you

ghostwritter:

I'm am only a sleepless thinker, a story teller. I am here to learn and grow in talent, that is why you must help point out mistakes (in precise) and not just read and condemn me to my fault. I am all ears to correction (besides, this is an unedited work and you don't expect I post this 'thing' to a paid forum...or do you?) but never the less, I will appreciate your red inks.

I know very well you've read much of Lovecraft works.
Study his use of adjectives more.

And, cut the Nigerian english.

ghostwritter:

Abeg no vex, there is always a (Strong) reason behind my actions.

Hope such things won't happen to this story....
Coz I'm tired of reading good stories like dis half way.

This is my first time of commenting on this thread, nice work bro, keep it up. am a fan[color=#990000][/color]

Ghostwriter I give you credit for your imaginations, they are wierd and fascinating, but please try and speed up updates. Na beg I dey

Ghostwriter abeg come and continue what you started ooo because this story is really interest and mind blowing

Another masterpiece unfolding. Ghostwritter hpe dis tym around producers and scriptwritters wil allow dis story to be completed. Lovely creativity

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Ghostwritter oooo....
Ghostwritter oooo....
Ghostwritter oooo...
This is also a call from the grave too

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My first encounter with her had been in a house party organized by Lilian who was Felix new girlfriend at that time. From a corner I had sat staring at the beautiful creature who made everything around her seem irrelevant. Her coral-black hair plunged over her shoulders, she had a shapely figure more like a hour-glass covered in a glossy skin, she had a slender eye-brow, her eyelashes were velvety, her ears were sea-nymph and also had a dainty nose.


She stretched a hand “My name is Jennifer Osolo
I shook her hand “And my name is Kenneth, Kenneth Aguda”
We both joined in the dance and I felt my spirit rushed back to my body.

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This man go just whet person appetite, only to disappear again! Smh

bros, more pls

this episode is hilarious, See me shining my 32 anyhow
more Grace bro

davspog2:
This man go just whet person appetite, only to disappear again! Smh

appreciate him small Na, we are not paying him, remember?

I called him from the grave and he answered....
Don't tell me you're writing this story from the grave oooo.

Joislim:
appreciate him small Na, we are not paying him, remember?

of course, i do sis.

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Interesting.. We need more

Ghostwritter I see you viewing. We want more!

pls ghostwriter we want more of this pls.

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Thanks for the invitation.... hope u av catch front sit for me

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