Larry-Sun:
He Sees Places In The Bible Where Readers Raise Eyebrows And He Gave Them Reasons To Frown. He's An Entrepreneuer Too.

adexsimply: lol..I am a TITANS freak..that painting depicts the scene when he was chained to a rock by zeus after he stole fire from Olympus..
Now what's 17 yellow bars?

adexsimply: don't tell me you believe all his claims are wrong?

Larry-Sun:
I Don't See Dan Brown As A Writer In The Literary Sense, But He's B Great Entertainer; One Hell Of A Researcher.

adexsimply:

that painting on your profile..Prometheus right?

Sisi_Kill: Awwww! Vesc. . . this is lovely!

Dark and Lovely....just the way I like 'em.

Flytefalls: I love this. Melancholy often fills the gaps.

e-talker:


I love those lines.

But the poems aren't dark as warned.
I was expecting something scary (though, i noticed the sadness on few lines in the "LIFE" piece)

I enjoyed reading your poems.

Thanks for sharing. Keep the muse up!

Esin waju: Brilliant. Especially the one about life. I relate with you on that one cos presently I'm faced with a situation and your poem captures it perfectly and you were more rhyme concious on this one, that I find very appealing as a rap afficionado lol.

Orikinla: Good poetry.
Very original.

talk2s: This poem helps reminisce the good old days: when the beauty of art was given its pride of place;
When art was not celebrated for fun but for the sakes of art;
When the place of art was extolled and amplified...

Indeed, that is a masterpiece of poetry.

Nickydrake: Vescucci, reading your work is always a treat. Believe it or not, i spent a good amount of time poring over your satires over at Naijastories (that was the only time i ever used the site). The piece on cursíng was especially entralling.

These poems are good, no doubt about that, but because i'm much less captivated by poetry than by prose, i find myself drawn more to your opening post. Your opening post is fuckíng excellent.

I beg your pardon, the expletive was necessary for emphasis.

I think you should ditch poetry and move into a monastery where you'll devote the rest of your life to producing bewitching satirical pieces for people like me to revel in. This is crappy advice alright, but i hope you consider it all the same.

Great work, my friend.

ariblaze: interesting ... i like
i am also sure you can do darker
com'n don the cape of the reaper which you are

kay9: ^^ Blazeman... Where u been, mate?

@Vesc, u got any more of these? First one reminds me of Tom Cruise's Nathan Algren.

amiskurie: I fear to loosing my poems to the internet world.
@op hw do you claim its yours in future when everyone had it?..I've been keeping my best away from the internet sha.

JeSoul: Nice Vesc! good to see you 'back' and about...

Funny...I scarcely have anything but a happy-campy-all-is-fine-and-dandy image of you - so to see this darkside 'veering' is a bit of a treat . Very nice flow, simple & to the point. Likes!!!

adim2: Woah i love you baby

alutacontinua:

YES, YES, YES!!!!!! Of cos, i will.

I HEREBY DECLARE DT ADIM2 WON D GAME. Let d party begin!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

adim2: ok i think, i better we post after each other. remember that this scene is suppose to be like a brawl scene. we are fight for her now.