Iaz93: See connections. . Interesting....kudoz Larry

Splendblex: Chai....!Larry U too much jor

'yindamola:
Impressive larry!!

semid4lyfe: Questions:

1. Larry-Sun, has the story finally ended, as in THE END?

^^
Meanwhile, you need to go over the story from the very installment/first page to paragraph & space it out and sorry for all your bans by pyguru

Also, a few typos here and there. I think some of your paragraphs are too long. Shorter conversation style paragraphs make for easier reading

kanechimex: larry,if you don't post the sequel to the brand of cain,i will do to you what cain did to Tolu.
P.s..I loved the story

semid4lyfe:

@ Larry-Sun, Congrats and more ink to your pen.

Wishing you the best and hope you get published. . .. .

DailyNews: Larry well done, but then, to make it more interesting and easy to read, cut the post in bits so it can come in short short form than being too voluminous so people can read, remember, most people that visit forum sites, always want to gland, scheme through and possibly not read a volume post.


But seriously, your story is interesting, nice to have you.... well done

Cunninlingus: did not bother reading

Larry-Sun:

Thanks, Cun(I can't even type your name)...too risque!

Cunninlingus: