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To My Daddy by Sapphiredamsel(f): 2:27pm On Nov 23, 2012
First love,
first son,
or perhaps
a precious
daughter,
their laughter
swift
and sweet,
his hand so sure,
his love so pure,
his loyalty
to them
amazing,
his patience
vast,
and his heart
wider
than the heavens,
the leaven
for their
lives,
the bright sun
in their skies,
the one to
whom they
turn,
the man for whom
they burn,
the flame
of love
so bright,
his wisdom
always right,
his hand
so strong,
so seldom
wrong,
so sweet,
so near
so dear,
so much the hub
of all,
and once upon a time
so tall,
his love for them
never waning
always entertaining,
handsome,
dashing,
teaching,
reaching
for the stars,
driving funny cars,
a loving hand and heart
for every lass
and lad,
beloved man,
eternal friend,
how lucky
you are,
sweet children,
to have him
for
your
dad.
Re: To My Daddy by Mynd44: 6:28am On Nov 24, 2012
Awwww
Re: To My Daddy by Sapphiredamsel(f): 7:13am On Nov 24, 2012
Mynd_44: Awwww
wats awww, mynd?
Re: To My Daddy by Redmosquito(m): 7:18am On Nov 24, 2012
AWWWWWWW! cry
I am moved
Re: To My Daddy by Mynd44: 7:20am On Nov 24, 2012
Sapphiredamsel:
wats awww, mynd?
Redmosquito: AWWWWWWW! cry
I am moved
Do I need to explain further?
Re: To My Daddy by Redmosquito(m): 7:21am On Nov 24, 2012
Mynd_44:
Do I need to explain further?
Xplan wat?
Re: To My Daddy by Mynd44: 7:22am On Nov 24, 2012
Redmosquito:
Xplan wat?
What "awwww" means
Re: To My Daddy by Sapphiredamsel(f): 8:59am On Nov 24, 2012
Redmosquito: AWWWWWWW! cry
I am moved
dis mosquito don come here?
Re: To My Daddy by Obinoscopy(m): 9:49am On Nov 24, 2012
Awwww. Nice one damsel. You're truely a damsel and a poet. Your poem goes straight to the heart and makes one elicit the 'awwwww' sound. That explains why Mynd and mosquito couldn't help but release the 'awwwww.' It came straight from their heart.

More of those poems hon. Don't bottle them up for your man only. We need some as well smiley

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Re: To My Daddy by Sapphiredamsel(f): 11:19am On Nov 24, 2012
Obinoscopy: Awwww. Nice one damsel. You're truely a damsel and a poet. Your poem goes straight to the heart and makes one elicit the 'awwwww' sound. That explains why Mynd and mosquito couldn't help but release the 'awwwww.' It came straight from their heart.

More of those poems hon. Don't bottle them up for your man only. We need some as well smiley
obino, i couldnt help but be 'awwwed' by ur critique. It helps. Ive written other poems. Maybe i should post the link
Re: To My Daddy by Obinoscopy(m): 11:22am On Nov 24, 2012
Sapphiredamsel:
obino, i couldnt help but be 'awwwed' by ur critique. It helps. Ive written other poems. Maybe i should post the link

Please do hun
Re: To My Daddy by Sapphiredamsel(f): 11:27am On Nov 24, 2012
Thats my first poem on Nl
www.nairaland.com/1026884/ping-me
Re: To My Daddy by Sapphiredamsel(f): 11:37am On Nov 24, 2012
another
www.nairaland.com/1029498/dont-blame-slippers
Re: To My Daddy by Sapphiredamsel(f): 12:12am On Dec 24, 2013
I have more poems

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