@rapmike,
@madawaki,
@yettocome,
@sexitee,
@beesqueezy,
@visita,
@kslib,
@adisa,
@gosifechris,
@Medken,
@sakie,
@florblu
@incredible.me

All I wanna say is....




PAY ME MY MONEY O!!!!

Lolz.

But in all honesty, I appreciate you all.

Action continues tomorrow.

rapmike:
Its like the MOD does nt have time 2 check d stories, i tell u, this one suppose 2 hav bn in FP by now.
KAYEMAY, weldone, d only tin wey go vex me na if this story lives and dies on this thread.

There's a thread at the begining of Literature section where we can tell the MOD what topic we want as a front page material.

https://www.nairaland.com/1210134/endorse-topics-make-frontpage/16

Maybe that would work.

That Ahmed daft like the protagonist of dragon slayer and ned stack 4 GOT.

That Ahmed daft like the protagonist of dragon slayer and ned stack 4 GOTH.

kayemjay:

There's a thread at the begining of Literature section where we can tell the MOD what topic we want as a front page material.

https://www.nairaland.com/1210134/endorse-topics-make-frontpage/16

Maybe that would work.

i av already endorsed dis thread 4 FP bt i didnt get any reply 4rm d MODS.

I have a feeling that the Colonel would die. Nice update bro.

Colonel f*ck up....him suppose slap dat omugo for head or even shoot am for leg...him no get 1 sense @ all...mtcheeew...@kay I dobale for u o...#wagbayi

Chineke me, see me waiting for 8 to nack to come and read update. No wahala, till tomorrow then. @kay keep up d good work. I av a suggestion. U know this is now turning to all those TV series broadcasted for an hour everyday, shey u fit give us update wey we go dey read for an hour?*winks* Say 8-9 daily cos I fit read all these ones under five minutes more ink to ur pen.

me i cant wait for 8pm 2nit oh

I never even know if I go update today sef.

I still dey vex for David Moyes and the ineptitude of the whole Manchester United Players, minus Rooney sha.

Good Morning Guys.

kayemjay: I never even know if I go update today sef.

I still dey vex for David Moyes and the ineptitude of the whole Manchester United Players, minus Rooney sha.

Good Morning Guys.

Kay, dont do that o. You should have known that your team is a one man team. Since RVP didnt play. I had expected it but not as wide as that.

But you will bounce back now. You had always done.

oga kay you are good abeg, reading dis stuff is like I am watching 24, cant wait for 8pm.

kayemjay:

There's a thread at the begining of Literature section where we can tell the MOD what topic we want as a front page material.

https://www.nairaland.com/1210134/endorse-topics-make-frontpage/16

Maybe that would work.

Just did dat nw.

..I have Been Reading this Action Story For Sometime Now But Got Confused In a Way.

Firstly, I thought You were Sean, Go back to the First Chapter, You Used "I" to describe the Present day Sean. You Might Want to Correct that to Give this Wonderful Fiction Story its Respect.

Secondly, What About your Mum Or Sean's Mum. Sean Has Been Missing For Sometime Now and She hasn't reported to the Police or Cried Out that Her Son was Missing. I just Wonder How the Family and Friends would feel Right Now. We Need To Know more About the Family!

Honestly, I've Been a Silent Reader Of this Wonderful Film/Story/Novel and I must Confess you are Good. I love Your Narrative Style and Use of Sophisticated and Modernized Gadgets. You and I Know that it Might Take The Nigerian Police Up To 50yrs to Get this Equipped!
More Ink to Your Pen!

Omo I don miss o hehehehe oga kay I can never pretend not to enjoy ur work. Even suspense wan kill me wen I tink say Ahmed go die....

Oga kay! U go life long for us o

@yettocome, thanks jare. United go still win the league this season sha.

@benzeeno, your head is dia! Tuaile!

@rapmike, baba, u r mouthed. I go block you for joint.

@iceman, like I replied sum1 earlier, I got carried away with the narration style. I will edit it as soon as I can. Thanks a lot bro. 20 virgins for you.

@vivvy, my boo boo. No worry. I go make sure Ahmed die this night.


The action resumes at 8pm.

Miss it not!

kayemjay:
@vivvy, my boo boo. No worry. I go make sure Ahmed die this night.

The action resumes at 8pm.

Miss it not!

Ha! Pls o..., no touch Ahmed o and the Colonel too. The ghosts fit they die one by one who cares. In fact I go lyk make the colonel and the general meet

kayemjay:

There's a thread at the begining of Literature section where we can tell the MOD what topic we want as a front page material.

https://www.nairaland.com/1210134/endorse-topics-make-frontpage/16

Maybe that would work.

Supported!

Vivvy, oya take: MUAH!

Anyways, General dey show tonyt sha.

It was the general........Sir kay u r just too Good



please tell ur fiancee never to annoy u cos there r few intelligent guys out there n u belong to that rare species.......Ride on

Wow cant wait for d next update.@kay do u update on sunday or not cos yesterday u didnt update is there another reason for that.nice work though

Yo yo yo,yoyo yoyo yoyo ;-)

kayemjay toh badt!!! I just love this!!!

may01: kayemjay toh badt!!! I just love this!!!

Eyeneka, thanks baby. Muah. Inya u pm fien!

IZUKWU: Yo yo yo,yoyo yoyo yoyo ;-)

Oga mi is everything ok?

WOW!!! U r damn good...

U r jez too good... CTU nids u oo

MedKen: It was the general........Sir kay u r just too Good



please tell ur fiancee never to annoy u cos there r few intelligent guys out there n u belong to that rare species.......Ride on

My babe just read this. She's so happy. Thanks bRo.

ninja4life: Wow cant wait for d next update.@kay do u update on sunday or not cos yesterday u didnt update is there another reason for that.nice work though

Thanks Bosss. I update Mon - Fridays @ 8pm. I only add saturdays once in a while. But sundays, NO!

datblaqgurl: WOW!!! U r damn good...

U r jez too good... CTU nids u oo

Thanks dear. Which 1 be CTU?

kayemjay:
Thanks dear. Which 1 be CTU?

as if u never watch 24 ops

Complete... Sell to Wale Adenuga or Mainframe. You are hot sir...

@Nduking, I am being very honest here. I have not watched 24. I still wish to see it one of these days.

I have seen A LOT of Tv series, but not 24, and not Nikita.

Plus, I've read A LOT of John Grisham. I have 10 of his books.

What I write is purely imaginative and not influenced by TV Series or extrinsic factors.

kayemjay:
Thanks dear. Which 1 be CTU?

counter terrorist unit or somtin of that nature