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Re: Original Love Poems by vexxy(f): 12:54am On Aug 26, 2005
I love it, Ra. I really understand this poem. Some events in our lives are so significant emotionally that it all seems like a dream. Did it really happen?

This truly was amazing.

More grease, girl! grin
Re: Original Love Poems by nike4luv(f): 12:54am On Aug 26, 2005
This one is for my baby

I just can’t find the way
To express my love for you
You are just amazing
In everything you do

The time I spend with you
Is the best I’ve ever had
And you always know how to help me
When it’s me who’s feeling sad

I don’t know how to say this
But ill do my best and try
And I just want you to know
That you Babyboi, are the perfect guy
kiss

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Re: Original Love Poems by vexxy(f): 12:56am On Aug 26, 2005
Awe, Nike. This is so sweet! tongue
Re: Original Love Poems by nike4luv(f): 12:58am On Aug 26, 2005
lol..thanks vexxy, love romance
Re: Original Love Poems by Princess(f): 1:07am On Aug 26, 2005
Back and forth the world i walk
           through the wilderness of darkness i search
        wondering if i could find a real love, thinking that maybe there is someone out there
       i can reach out to 4 real love. yet my mind draws me  back to the time i thought i had mr. right
       going back snapping my fingers, biting my nails getting frustrated at the world yet happy to be a woman
      in control of my world. Will i ever find what am looking for hardly doubt it, but as the same time believe it.


         dazzling against the wall whizzlingly battling with my mind still trying to figure out what if i had let the real love past me by, but hold on for a second i thought that maybe my mind is fooling me. Hell i thought i was loosing it, though i try to convince me that its just a fantasy my mind running to, still something stroke me hard then i had to step up and walk through an unfinished buliding, there i saw a man looking so fly, juicy lips saying "come on girl" body yawing for my slow touch, then i heard a voice say what's up, i was shock, turning back to see who said that but it was too dark, then infront of me stood this brown skin fine looking brother, hard to resist staring.

    grin smiley    Maybe that was my real love but come to think of it, i don't think that real love is out there.
Re: Original Love Poems by vexxy(f): 1:13am On Aug 26, 2005
"then infront of me stood this brown skin fine looking brother, hard to resist staring"

This wouldn't happen to be the fella at WBC, would it? wink

Seriously, wonderful writing, Princess. grin

All of you that have posted something should really keep up the good work. I enjoy reading them, and I'm looking forward to reading more!
Re: Original Love Poems by Princess(f): 1:16am On Aug 26, 2005
In Your Arms................


             Baby in your arms i feel so safe and confident, in your direction i feel that i can never get lost,
            baby all i met in your path was love which we've shared with me. The sound of your name whisper
           a music to my ears, i will always be there for you when your rain don't shower u anymore. I need u


            Honeybunches in your heart i am the most special and the most beautiful lady for u that makes
           me feel so beautiful inside. Baby boo if lovind u means that i am wrong then i don't wanna be right
          in your arms my sunshine brightly and beautiful. My heart know no sorrows cause in ur direction
                                                          i am well sastified.
Re: Original Love Poems by Princess(f): 1:18am On Aug 26, 2005
c'mon vexxy why u gotta put me out there like that? anyway u r right though it's him! cheesy
Re: Original Love Poems by Princess(f): 1:28am On Aug 26, 2005
All I Wanted..........

All i wanted baby was for u to show me u have love 4 me
all i wanted was 4 u to hold me and tell me am ur first lady instead of u
treating me like dirt. Everyday and night i wish 4 u to be by my side.


All i wanted was 4 u to tell me u care about me, i wanted to be by ur side
feel the warmth of ur body next to mine, hear ur heart beat 4 me. Above all
all i really wanted was ur love boo.
Re: Original Love Poems by littlebaby(f): 1:38am On Aug 26, 2005
My heart beats blood
I don't know why
It must be broken
I may soon die
My heart beats blood
And while I sleep
It shows me memories
I shouldn't keep
My heart beats blood
I may soon die
But if I do I know your the reason why.

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Re: Original Love Poems by Princess(f): 1:40am On Aug 26, 2005
good one littlebaby.
Re: Original Love Poems by vexxy(f): 1:40am On Aug 26, 2005
Wow shocked
Re: Original Love Poems by Princess(f): 1:49am On Aug 26, 2005
why love........

love is full of unwanted suprises
love is full of so much hurt
love is death
love is sufferness
love is hurtful
love is blind
love is irressistable
love has no options
love has no ending
love is a race so why run through miles and never stay stable and catch your breath?!
so there for why love
Re: Original Love Poems by Princess(f): 1:54am On Aug 26, 2005
who will cry.......

who will cry 4 a girl that's looking 4 love
who will surrended hate 4 this girl to find true love
who will walk with this girl through stages of heart ache
who will cry for this girl in pain
who will yawn for this girl to find attention
who will laugh last so that this girl can laugh again
who will be willing to be a role model for this girl
who will cry for this girl with nothing in her heart but aches and pains
tell me who will cry for this little girl in hurtful land
Re: Original Love Poems by littlebaby(f): 1:55am On Aug 26, 2005
You won't understand; exactly how I feel...

Felt my pulse and wonder when will it stop beating
The melodious rythm that seems to keep me going
I reached for the blade that will meet my blood
Placed it on the vulnerable part
Slicing across my pale skin
I grit my teeth in pain
As I cut it deep within
My fate has been told
I'm going off
I don't know if I'll be back again
Re: Original Love Poems by Princess(f): 2:03am On Aug 26, 2005
How could u......

how could u take me 4 granted
how could u bring nothing in my path but sorrows
how could u betray my love
how could u step on my heart
how could u mistreat my feelings
how could u creep behind my back wit my so-called friends
how could u hurt me
how could u take my pride away from me
how could i not know what u was trying to do
how could i be a victim under u
why would love treat me like dirt.

Am i not woman enough to be in true love
Am i not lady enough to be that passionate
Am i not worth it
is love really out there to supress my happiness
why would this world be so cruiel to me
why, how could u love, how could u..
Re: Original Love Poems by WesleyanA(f): 2:07am On Aug 26, 2005
G-d you guys are good. shocked

i'm really terrible at poems and only wrote 1 in my entire life (it was a school assignment) sad
Re: Original Love Poems by Princess(f): 2:14am On Aug 26, 2005
Done heard it all........

my baby, i love u, i miss u
done heard all that  nonsense
i wanna be with u till the day i stop breathing
done heard all this mess
i will never leave u
done heard all this fake words

boo, hun, my love, my baby, my light
done heard it all. Aian't nothing convince me
it all lies and double of lies. why can't people
be true to themselves, why fake, why make a promise
why enter relationship when u know u r not ready yet
why crush innocent hearts why......
Re: Original Love Poems by Princess(f): 2:16am On Aug 26, 2005
hey wesley am guessing u like our poems.
Re: Original Love Poems by Princess(f): 2:22am On Aug 26, 2005
I Am A Lady......

for goodness sake fellas respect urself
i am a lady full of love but how could i share it
with all the fakers out there. i am a lady who needs
a lot of attention, why can't u men out there show respect
to ladies, why do we have to beg for your love

I am a lady in control of my mind
i am a lady who don't go back
i am a lady who respect opinions
i am no wanna be
i am no faker
i stand for what is right
i believe in people
i Trust our saviour Jesus Christ to be in control of my life
Re: Original Love Poems by littlebaby(f): 3:13am On Aug 26, 2005
My love for you is secret
I weep when we are apart
If I open up my heart
It would rip everything apart
So I'll keep my love a secret
A secret of the heart
Re: Original Love Poems by Latoya(f): 3:17am On Aug 26, 2005
Nice poems gals smiley
Re: Original Love Poems by hotangel2(f): 8:29am On Aug 26, 2005
I knew I Sucked at this.... Those things i wrote were nothing comapred to these. Good Poems people. smiley
Re: Original Love Poems by littlebaby(f): 8:56am On Aug 26, 2005
@h-angel

Hey your poem was good i like the sentence when you put the word "ass" hihihi.. it keeps me laughed cheesy... and your good too ha ! don't compared it.
Re: Original Love Poems by hotangel2(f): 9:00am On Aug 26, 2005
Tryna make me feel better eh? Thanks. cheesy
Re: Original Love Poems by Greatpeter(m): 10:54am On Aug 26, 2005
Did You Hypnotise me?

Oh baby, whatever it takes for you to accept who I am, that I am ready to do.
Making you satisfied.
Making you look at the top of the world.
Making you feel secured.
Making you happy inside out.

But you ain't responding to my feelings.
I wouldn't mind still.
Let people say I've hypnotised.
I care not about what they say.
I only care about you.
About the love of you in my mind.

Truly am I hypnotised?
How come the love of my life is retreating.
And me running after her like a remora clinching to shark.
Am I hypnotized?
Who will tell her I am dying of neglect.


Who will tell her it's time to look me to my face.
Who will tell her tomorrow might never come.
Who will console me.

Shedding tears at night is now my hobby.
Growing lean and astenic.
Emanciation creeps in.
I am just love sick.

Hey, Am I hypnotized?
Just lead me out
to have first ever refreshment.
Just tell me you love me and you'll always be there for me,
Even if not real
I think that will console me a bit.

whisper love to my ears.
And I will be done.
i just can't do without you.
Please behave.
Hypnotise me if you like.
Just for the sake of love.
Re: Original Love Poems by nike4luv(f): 11:03am On Aug 26, 2005
love the way you touch me
so soft and sensuously.
It makes me tingle all over.

I love the way you kiss me.
It starts a fire deep down inside of me
and makes me yearn for you even more.

I love the way you look at me.
It makes me feel beautiful and treasured.
Most of all I love the way you love me.
kiss
Re: Original Love Poems by Princess(f): 11:05am On Aug 26, 2005
hot-angel i love ur poem it got me laughing. I think u r a great writer. Writing poems is what i do that bascially my life. I love it
Re: Original Love Poems by Princess(f): 11:06am On Aug 26, 2005
good one nike!
Re: Original Love Poems by nike4luv(f): 11:08am On Aug 26, 2005
merci princezz
Re: Original Love Poems by Greatpeter(m): 11:09am On Aug 26, 2005
Princess more poems from you.
Fantastic you.
Let me learn from you today and will not be thesame tomorrow.
Re: Original Love Poems by Princess(f): 11:12am On Aug 26, 2005
I Miss U.....

when u step an inch from me i miss u
when u don't call i miss u
if u don't call i don't sleep
dangerously helplessy in love with u
if i don't hear your voice in one hour
my heart bleed, your true handsomness
light up my world. I miss u babe

when i feel cold and tender at night
i miss u, when i want to be held
by strong yet gentle hands i miss u
when i need confort and love, and u
are not there i miss u
when the world try to take my pride
i miss u. Baby i can't take this anymore
i reach out for u day and night please
don't leave me misrable in this God forbid world
i miss that perfect smile on your face that make my day
                 u have been missed for so long now.

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