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| A Poem- My Love by Kslib(m): 9:52pm On Sep 15, 2013 |
My time of writing a poem,hope you guys like it. I dedicate this to all those who have lost someone so close to their heart at any point in life. 2 Likes |
| Re: A Poem- My Love by Kslib(m): 9:52pm On Sep 15, 2013 |
MY LOVE: There she was, Gentle she looked,as if a dove. Feeling her warmth with trembling hands,i groped, Looking up to the heavens, i signaled needing help from above, What is happening to my love? Tears i cried, Freely to my cheeks,they fell. An ocean,i cried, Even though Crystal clear, they appeared, Dark they were.. Like the voice in the wilderness i cried, Oh yes,i was lost in this wilderness of pain, No thanks to death's disdain.. It hit me and left me with nothing to gain, My love has left me,i wailed again, Like a baby spanked with a cain... My beloved is sleeping i joked, Smiling like a mad man, Oh yes,i was a mad man.. A miracle will happen i hoped, Feeling her warmth with trembling hands,i groped. Cheated i felt,defeated i was,i felt duped, Together with death,my love has eloped. My love is gone,my beloved is no more, Deep,my soul sank as if a well. The harsh reality rang like a bell. On my knees i fell, My love didnt bid farewell. Death i screamed, Death i snapped **all izz not well** 3 Likes |
| Re: A Poem- My Love by Nobody: 9:53pm On Sep 15, 2013 |
Kslib: This is my first poem ever and i hope you guys like it.. Following. |
| Re: A Poem- My Love by Nobody: 9:57pm On Sep 15, 2013 |
"Cheated i felt,defeated i was,i felt duped, Together with death,my love has eloped.." This is superb especially "Together with death, my love has eloped." And the end "...all is not well" cracked me up like someone high on weed. You did well, bro. I love the flow, the meaning, the setting, the portrayal of the evil of death, the beauty of love, the imagery. Nice one!  1 Like |
| Re: A Poem- My Love by Kslib(m): 10:00pm On Sep 15, 2013 |
Jekyll & Hyde:Yay!!!! Thanks bro.. .. All izz well! |
| Re: A Poem- My Love by Cestmoi1(f): 10:14pm On Sep 15, 2013 |
Nice one! |
| Re: A Poem- My Love by Kslib(m): 10:26pm On Sep 15, 2013 |
C'est moi:Thanks.. .. All izz well! |
| Re: A Poem- My Love by Dannyxy(m): 10:38pm On Sep 15, 2013 |
*coughs*,i wonder who she is,btw great write up bro |
| Re: A Poem- My Love by Nobody: 10:42pm On Sep 15, 2013 |
Dannyxy: *coughs*,i wonder who she is,btw great write up bro You too dey wonder. |
| Re: A Poem- My Love by Nobody: 10:43pm On Sep 15, 2013 |
Kslib: You're welcome.  |
| Re: A Poem- My Love by Kslib(m): 10:57pm On Sep 15, 2013 |
Dannyxy: *coughs*,i wonder who she is,btw great write up broThanks.. Glad you liked it.. |
| Re: A Poem- My Love by Dannyxy(m): 11:00pm On Sep 15, 2013 |
Jekyll & Hyde:na fela teach me "sings to fela* "wonder,wonder,wonder"...abeg kslib no vex with the derailment,*runs out* |
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