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Re: Lets Get Bloody With Rhymed Poems by firestar(f): 7:18pm On Nov 15, 2015
I had red hands last night. ..
Cut palms extracting shards

Grievous

Twasn't so before the peels
Before the wet curtain
...Before the work of the day
...Before travels from the nest
Before Selfies of Fam
Before sleeping off a flu
Before joyful shouts of:
Welcome Uncle!
Before realization
...

Stay away from me
For my fingers extract
Shards...
From the water spring
*Squelch*
*Clatter*
I have got to remove everything.
...

Please... please pass the ointment
That it may heal...
Can it scab before dawn?
It hurts too much
Numb it completely
I don't want to feel
...

My face is flushed with burgurd
Eyes are puffy
I can't go to work like this!
The world would see

The keen may sight red:
On the bridge
On the crow's feet
In unsteady breaths

Ice on the blinds
Water for the spring
The land is parched
The birds won't sing

The moon has set
With the land provoked
Lightning and Fire
Will be met

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Re: Lets Get Bloody With Rhymed Poems by timpaker(m): 7:37pm On Nov 15, 2015
firestar:
I had red hands last night. ..
Cut palms extracting shards

Grievous

Twasn't so before the peels
Before the wet curtain
...Before the work of the day
...Before travels from the nest
Before Selfies of Fam
Before sleeping off a flu
Before joyful shouts of:
Welcome Uncle!
Before realization
...

Stay away from me
For my fingers extract
Shards...
From the water spring
*Squelch*
*Clatter*
I have got to remove everything.
...

Please... please pass the ointment
That it may heal...
Can it scab before dawn?
It hurts too much
Numb it completely
I don't want to feel
...

My face is flushed with burgurd
Eyes are puffy
I can't go to work like this!
The world would see

The keen may sight red:
On the bridge
On the crow's feet
In unsteady breaths

Ice on the blinds
Water for the spring
The land is parched
The birds won't sing

The moon has set
With the land provoked
Lightning and Fire
Will be met






And here she is...

She doesn't disappoints.
cool
Re: Lets Get Bloody With Rhymed Poems by joseph1832(m): 7:48pm On Nov 15, 2015
timpaker:


And here she is...

She doesn't disappoints.
cool
Em I though I'm the one who usually doesn't disappoint Mr Tim? grin

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Re: Lets Get Bloody With Rhymed Poems by timpaker(m): 8:17pm On Nov 15, 2015
The Bully

I'm caught up
By this thug,
A bully from down to top,
His affront, my bug
And my meekness he flogged.

Alone he and alone I,
At the street of torment.
Fear I breath as I walk by
To face the Satan of the moment,
In a bloody sunset.

He brought out his knife
As sharp as a Croc teeth,
He threatened to steal my life
By having my arm slit
He missed and so beget my seethe.

We fought like girls
Before I stole his blade,
He screamed like a girl
When his attempt failed.
But that was the last sound he made.


I slit his throat
And washed my face
With his blood
So as to see his death clearer,
He tongued out like a goat
With his life on a race
To see his God,
And the devil his maker.

I peeled his skin
And made a flute with his bone
For the beast in me
Is one whose heart is made of stone...
In him I sounded a warning in fearless tone.


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Re: Lets Get Bloody With Rhymed Poems by timpaker(m): 8:20pm On Nov 15, 2015
joseph1832:
Em I though I'm the one who usually doesn't disappoint Mr Tim? grin

You na Chairman na. grin
Re: Lets Get Bloody With Rhymed Poems by joseph1832(m): 8:26pm On Nov 15, 2015
timpaker:


You na Chairman na. grin
LOL! So you sef get sweet mouth? LMAO.
Re: Lets Get Bloody With Rhymed Poems by joseph1832(m): 8:56pm On Nov 15, 2015
UNCHECKED EMOTIONS






Rage
Pain
Anger
Chaos


All became my alley
When my strength flay.


Confusion
Distortion
Adjection
Abomination


All seem intense
Because my rage
Isn't a pretense.


Beat
Maim
Lynch
Kill


All scream at me when
My RAGE became my greatest
Strength.


Abhor
Devour
Carnivore
Ogre


Their stinking carcass
After knifing it to shreds
And feeding it to the lions.
Re: Lets Get Bloody With Rhymed Poems by april4mee(m): 6:24am On Nov 22, 2015
this ain't bloody but its about vexation of the low class

lamentation of a proletariat... an unfolding satire.
loaded to the brim yet boxed in a pack of "observer- non-participants" folded like a wrap yet forced to lack in the ranks of server- run-anticipants dare to pass a comment and ... a knife to your jugular! they claim to pass yet your life was the formulae!
all work and no play work work work and no pay take home pay? no way! oh! how they dread pay- day!
Bourgeoisies, yes! they ply oversea their remnants, ..our works, they oversee we build the roads yet cant possess the cars that ply same. decyphering the codes.. the confessors, the liars - we been long in this game.

suffering yet been forced to smile -"all is well"- MY FOOT! oh! my root! my precedence.... their loot....my antecedence! they brute, they rule-when they hoot!...we mute. we been stripped of our patience-robbed of our conscience
we've been hit, smite, spite, .....despite we still fit they've been well breed, well fed, yet still got a lot to mend. even when we miss, they don't give a shit! though we do the roughs, their signatures they append.
oh! this road i ply puts food on my table, shows me the bills and .... i babble yes! it puts coins in my pocket it still girds my loins with debts a mega-quartet
"heads will roll" ....let mine not be included! lest my judgement become beclouded i have been spent, febble is my might and ...last time i checked, ain't no other option in sight.
the unfortunate me i found myself in. we seem to be timed up! but i know we will triumph! ...lamentations of a prolaterate!
Re: Lets Get Bloody With Rhymed Poems by april4mee(m): 6:26am On Nov 22, 2015
this ain't bloody but its about vexation of the low class

lamentation of a proletariat... an unfolding satire.
loaded to the brim yet boxed in a pack of "observer- non-participants"
folded like a wrap yet forced to lack in the ranks of server- run-anticipants
dare to pass a comment and ... a knife to your jugular!
they claim to pass yet your life was the formulae!


all work and no play
work work work and no pay
take home pay? no way!
oh! how they dread pay- day!


Bourgeoisies, yes! they ply oversea
their remnants, ..our works, they oversee
we build the roads yet cant possess the cars that ply same.
decyphering the codes.. the confessors, the liars - we been long in this game.


suffering yet been forced to smile -"all is well"- MY FOOT!
oh! my root! my precedence.... their loot....my antecedence!
they brute, they rule-when they hoot!...we mute.
we been stripped of our patience-robbed of our conscience


we've been hit, smite, spite, .....despite we still fit
they've been well breed, well fed, yet still got a lot to mend.
even when we miss, they don't give a shit!
though we do the roughs, their signatures they append.


oh! this road i ply puts food on my table, shows me the bills and .... i babble
yes! it puts coins in my pocket
it still girds my loins with debts a mega-quartet


"heads will roll" ....let mine not be included! lest my judgement become beclouded
i have been spent, febble is my might
and ...last time i checked, ain't no other option in sight.


the unfortunate me i found myself in.
we seem to be timed up! but i know we will triumph!
...lamentations of a prolaterate!

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