@K-Smallsz

U see u aint spittin isht if ur lines dont rhyme. . . . .Okey dokey let me exemplify


It aint bout voicing any isht that came thru ur mind
Gotta be sure an element of Rap reflects in ur line
When i 1st got here, i thut i i'm the lyrical chief
I feigned nitro while i got fire cracker explosive (Lol)
It aint as simple as licking off butter laced on bread
If u dont geddit, then visit the "Ask for feed" thread
There i learnt n got promoted to the head from tyro
Read thru lines, learn hard n upgrade lyrical silo



Maybe u can learn from this lil piece



@J-Unit

Dont criticize no one we all are learnin aiite

let me refine this nigga quickly

Nigga you running your mouth like you hussein bolt
just one bar and i'll be cutting your neck like a goat
the only flow this nigga got is his menstrual period
when i'm done with you, you'll see your real blood
wanking is the optimom of your daily living
i'm lyrically gifted, to make niggaz stop breathing

Ohhhhh!!!! I see u aint got much flows so u're trying to save 'em, well i done said it

Crude:

I don't trade bars with da lyrically resourceless//
When it's lyrics i'm as wasteful as a hen/

So, u aint worth sparrin with, i only battle the tough ones not some weaklings like J-Unit. . . . . . . . . .U should somthn like

"Oh!!! Makavelle pls come to my rescue
wat i'm facing is deadliest than the devil"

I'm still waiting for ur 16 hard bars not some 4 jello bars

and'Bleep rhyme,
my dad only knows' You don chop? english',
i'm always prét to learn,
but heh' it ain't really ma fault, though
cuz since like 3years i'been stucked in a French Français village,
Lookin for a way to get out'
soon i'll be back to LAGOS/Toronto, Full time,
n start spit'in fluently in english and swahili, (HAH)
thanx brother Crude' We all up for Learnin, But me?
Learnin is in the Blood,
guess real soon i'ma step up to ma Game,


Smalls-Z

I'ma say this like Shaz, "If u're not rhyming, u're not rappin"

ur accent, Shaz's and mine""" Big Difference

didn't have time so just freestyled 3's quickly, will really sort you out when i have time later today
hoe.ohoh

Thanx for d corrections y'all, I appreciate , Thats just how it gets in me, either way, i'll try to give em what they want

ksmallsz:

Thanx for d corrections y'all, I appreciate , Thats just how it gets in me, either way, i'll try to give em what they want

@rat-smallz
are you not that nigga that talked to makavele in a rude way? just check out? u don't even know the rudiments of rap and u's talking to me? u beta go look for 'em wackstaz like you, pray i don't get ur time coz' if i do, it's gonna be a funeral procession for u.

@crude
ain't u tell this lil' waksta who makavele is? lil' cat don't know me

@shaz
how are u doing ma? i'ma edit d post pretty soon, and i love ya that's y i said 'em things there, i'ma come to you pretty soon and show you where da Brid's defaulting.

@Mak's

Easy on 'em rap toddlers. . . . . . .Calm it dowg!!

@J-Unit

I aint got no reason to skimp flows, and u should'nt do that if u got superfulously like i do. . . . . . .

@All

Ya'll seen t-rex lately? Holla dowg!

@crude
i hear you boy!

@t-rex007
were u at while da kings been searchin' 4 u?

y u gays l;ooking for t rex, he ur boyfriend or something, fagoes

@junk-unit
you betta keep ur mouth zipped like u was d etisalat promo
or i'ma have to fuxx ur ass pretty good . . . we ain't ur prototype here, init?

@ macka whacko lele

Now Im the prince of rhyme, and mack you gonnacry
And Im inspired by the beat and all you suckers who try
To defeat the undefeated J UNIT has the mind
To destroy the wonderboy, and any of mankind
Cause Im never caught slippin, performance is tipped and
Like a hoe you ride my jock, I might as well start pimpin
Lyrics of destruction, invincible song
Runnin from the prince of rap, though Im king-kong
Cause Im shakin the nation, tearin down every tank
Only once I lost a battle, then I broke the sucker neck
It was an mc named (whackalele) he was a dumb-ass (boy)
Disc jockey farted as he charged to defeat the mccy
Im a rhyming rap wizard, rhymes are like venom
Bite em, youll die, and I just say to hell with him
Why should I care for you suckers out there
Shoot you down in every battle, you still scream unfair!
Time for a rumble in this concrete jungle
Whiz that take a quiz, shoot you down in one bundle
My rhymes are motivating, your body responds
With the center party people gettin funky for mine
Im a rapper, Im through with ya, posse (tug of war)
Were confiscating (and raiding) and still the boys are hardocre

Where u at t-rex? Damn!!!

@ J(ail) Unit

Lil kids aint meant to spit what the dada says,
Skip beef and let the Old don bring the rays,
I've always lead the rhyme race, Am still in my days,
I never looked back like Lot's wife, since I've stabbed all wacks with a knife
I get many shit to talk 'bout; but definitely this Jay needs a life,
Come alive like the corpse woken by Reinhard Bonnke,
Testify how much work I taught you on the rhyme tour, if u are fair,
I need less than a four bar shit to explode like a timed-bomb,
Am still me, J-Unit I never have to tell a stubborn boy 'fore he smells d tomb,
I know u aint that dumb, but you still prove me wrong, u insist you are,
Im still the terrible ni99re that disect men to bring out liver,
The audible speaker that burst ill, cos am always thicker,
Absolutely no replica, rhyme wise am forever gonna be d leader,
You will always "juba", hail me for life if you wanna grow bigger,
Im absolutely mega, hyper crazy lyricist bursting without the filter,

Ouuuuuch!!! Ol'Sync roll it ez, that hurts

Mehn that shit was str8 up wack!!!

Nucca ama mess u up wit chrome 9s leave ya stevie wonder blind/
wit runny brown calvin kliens showin all sorts of pussy signs/
u's a bitch ass gay, str8 outda ass rabbit/
who ended up a hookr because he couldnt even bag-it/
rocks slippin through fingers, dudes takin this gay out 2 dinner/
smokes weed when he collects the roaches n ends up wit pinners/
he gettin thinner, he stuck on that pipe/
he thinkin he a winner but he runnin 2 da wrong light/
thats my gat bwoi get back son/
or have da bullets touchin u like jackson/
fuckin clap you to death like a lively crowd/
bash n rip ya fukin flesh, structure rearranged like clouds/
ill stick ya wit da eagle, like junkies to needles/
separate n merk u like john lennon n the beatles/
slap u in da fuckin face wit gold rings, have ya lookin like Smeagle/
down for the dirt liftin on skirts/
i mess ya up like a virgin's first time all bleedin n hurt/

South Side representa all day hommie!

No wonder u been licking the retard asscrack, u're just as retarded as he is. . . . .FlowShow i think u got a new partner here. . . .they call him AfricanStinks

[center]I swing rags to make nigga shed bullets so die in sleep
Wit crystals the only way u get me high is me fallin' to sleep
I'm more LIKE LEATHERFACE,when I shred ya face
Like Lee Harvey Oswald I'll take pride puttin' bullets to ya face
You a crack pipe I'll get ya high like Steve Eclkel in family matters
I pop smithen up ya skinny 9grian ass n' make u a matter[/center]

[center]wait wait wait y'alls gotta b ready for the conclusion[/center]

Crude:

. . . . .FlowShow i think u got a new partner here. . . .they call him AfricanStinks

LMFAO

E'rybody y'all, see who i've just seen. . . . .It's Menike in the building. . . . .c'mon gimme somthn homie. . . . .i missed ya so much man

[center] THE CONCLUSION

I swing rags to make nigga shed bullets so die in sleep
Wit crystals the only way u get me high is me fallin' to sleep
I'm more LIKE LEATHERFACE,when I shred ya face
Like Lee Harvey Oswald I'll take pride puttin' bullets to ya face
You a crack pipe I'll get ya high like Steve Eclkel in family matters
I pop smithen up ya skinny 9grian ass n' make u a matter

Best on the board? Menike' let this 'Fruit roll up' with a verse intending to Bore.
cause when i mention 'trophys in the closet' i'm not talking about athletic awards
Back off, i'll Smother bitches in poisonous fumes and watch his breathin slack off
Until he's 'off the air' . . . the same way nickelodeon put an end to 'Cat, dog'
Your whack dog, askin for trouble?This queer can get beat and bashed with bottles
To the point you wont be able to see 'Cat walk', Like blind fashion models
Call it a comeback ? naw dawg, I call it a fun ride wit a swagger flow
Metaphors wit dimes mixed wit a haterade . . . u retards witness the adeventure
Cusz the way I spit nowadays that boy Crude might just choke me to death



@crude
U damn right brotha . . . . . Menike is in the Building . . . . and I'm takin' all rents. lol[/center]

menike:

[center] THE CONCLUSION
@crude
U damn right brotha . . . . . Menike is in the Building . . . . and I'm takin' all rents. lol[/center]

Damn!!! Where 'em retards gon' stay?!!! Lol. . . . .

I mean no beef though its been long since i had a spit,

Yo! I dust my mic again/if u dont have the heart for this beta don't post again/Im brave hearted/make ur pulse quickned see how ur sweated/I sow lyrical seeds/the outcome you get a hot blooded breed/Puy my vocal cords in sound boxes/put ur mic dowm before you get bitten by mean foxes/I gat more words than a hospital/I think i might just open a mic rental/so u better take to singing u rap wannabees/before i sting on u like the killa bees.

Peace,

Nic Nac Patty Wack
Tic Tac 3 pack
Call me Baby-Gat
Guys i can freestyle too
check it out
un
un
yo
I'm about to get rid of some hoes, it's simple
I'm quick to murder ink with lead and i aint talkin' bout a pencil
Lookit what the fu=ck you done got into
I see you found yo niche, you just a bi=tch wit a menstrol
Claimin' you a killer and you spelled it wrong
You put 'a' instead of 'e' cuz that's all you on
You on Pac's di=ck, you a regular guy
If Pac was still alive you would never get by
All you do is cry, bi=tch keep it real
Life is more than imitating niggaz and eatin' pills
And kind of muthafucka ruins three deals
That another nigga got you, they didn't see skills
And I ain't playin', you a brother gettin' cheated
And Ja Rule be prayin' on his cover cuz he need it
And all you niggaz hatin', shut you mouths
It's just that real niggaz ain't buyin' that sh=it y'all put out
PEACE,

the Rain,
drizzling on you cats like rain drops
never a flop ma skills make u all drog
emcees in a battle but i surf
i go over you beaches and land on the rocks
dont blame me blame my guts
too many ego and ur plane is lost
i bought it crude i made it
fame cars and wealth i framed it
im a winner u should know i pulled that trigger
ma finger itchy you should know i shoulda beached ya
flows dimmer i leave you niggers skinner
got sniper on check yup i just beamed ya
delete ya in the trash can thats where you belong fake teacher,

Selassie I, Thunder rod
Im so far, my main spars dem no near mi
Rapping my song to let my enemies hear mi
Im sipping Hennessey and smoking all mi get
No badmind me, cuz of my voice
No badmind to di girl dem say mi nice
No badmind me, no badmind me
Cant thump mi on mi face, cuz yuh haffi think twice
Dont badmind me cuz of my voice
Dont badmind me, Rasta,

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