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Don't Let Go by StephenP(m): 6:09pm On Aug 29, 2008
Don’t let go of time
Hold on to these memories
Find them and treasure them inside
Remember the sweetness of our love
The passion of our lust
The eagerness of our heart
The childlike hope that we now have lost
Remember us as it once was
Drawn to each other
A magnetic force

Don’t let go of time
Find it and replay it over in your mind
Times when we stared into each others soul
Blown away by how quickly pieces of each other came together to make a whole
You, amazed by how heroic I came and saved you from yourself
Held you tight and made you realize that not all men wore a disguise
Or danced in lies and self-ish reasons
Aiming to commit treason to your heart
And you, you forced me to see the truth in your eyes and set you apart
Tore through my mask and saw the core of me
Gave me your heart and told me it was mine for eternity
So don’t take it away from me

Don’t let go
Now that we have the key
To be loved like we deserve
To find peace in just one kiss
To find ourselves linked
In sync in love
Till time has no end
Let me be yours.

Re: Don't Let Go by Moyola(f): 6:10pm On Aug 29, 2008
awwwwww!!!

9ce 1!!!


u gat skillz brov!

keep it up!! wink
Re: Don't Let Go by StephenP(m): 6:19pm On Aug 29, 2008
Wow!! That reply was pretty quick . . . you don't see that around here LOL!! Thank you.
Re: Don't Let Go by Moyola(f): 6:30pm On Aug 29, 2008
u welkum bruv!! wink
Re: Don't Let Go by onyinye2(f): 4:30pm On Aug 30, 2008
Stephen. . . . . you are by far the most cruel person i have encountered.
Like seriously, are you trying to to kill me softly with these poems? JEEZ!
I mean who writes "Blown away by how quickly pieces of each other came together to make a whole"
That is just utopian and enchanting.
Anyways. . . . . it is classic writings from you and i enjoyed it.
Re: Don't Let Go by StephenP(m): 8:05pm On Aug 31, 2008
onyinye2:

Stephen. . . . . you are by far the most cruel person i have encountered.
Like seriously, are you trying to to kill me softly with these poems? JEEZ!
I mean who writes "Blown away by how quickly pieces of each other came together to make a whole"
That is just utopian and enchanting.
Anyways. . . . . it is classic writings from you and i enjoyed it.

Thanks.

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