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Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by D9ty7(m): 11:51pm On Sep 18, 2014
Emzypaz and Gracy295, you guys have been wonderful so far.
Gracy watch it, you just did a double post.
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by D9ty7(m): 11:53pm On Sep 18, 2014
[size=24pt]GOOD NIGHT[/size]
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by AudreyTimms(f): 12:04am On Sep 19, 2014
D9ty7: Mummy please don't beat me. Suprisingly I write with my left hand.

Okay. I forgive you.
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by AudreyTimms(f): 12:05am On Sep 19, 2014
talk2riel:
Which hand he go use clean kaka
That one no concern me
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by AudreyTimms(f): 12:06am On Sep 19, 2014
D9ty7: You called me three times but I heard just once.

grin
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by D9ty7(m): 6:36am On Sep 19, 2014
[size=24pt]GOOD MORNING[/size]

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Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by D9ty7(m): 6:53am On Sep 19, 2014
CHAPTER TWO
TIME: 7AM
VENUE: INSPECTOR CLEMENT'S RESIDENCE.
__________________________________________
Rachel walked out of the kitchen in her pink coloured night robes
with her apron tied over it and her white and pink slippers. She walked
into the living room where there were litters on the three seater sofa.
The sitting room is a very coulourful one painted in brown and milky
white colour. The curtains that hung on the window and the doorway was a
combination of the milky colour and brown patches. The chairs were made
of brown leather and the pillows milky white.
A 42-inches television hung perfectly to the wall opposite the three
seater and the dinning area which stood right behind the three seater. A
glass cabinet stood below the television set on which a dvd stood. Two
sound speakers stood beside the glass cabinet nad two others at the far
corner of the spacious living room.

A flower vase stood on the table as well as on the cabinet beside the
dvd and on the floor beside the two speakers.
Just then Clement emerged from within one of the rooms, already
dressed in a black t-shirt and a black trouser. He had his small bag
with him, in which he put his laptop.
"Darling, are you leaving already?" Rachel asked.
"Yeah. The issue at hand requires me to be at the office before
eight." Clement replied.
"Will you at least have your breakfast? It is almost done." Rachel
who was heavily pregnant asked.
"I wish I could but right now. I have to run." He replied dropping
his bag. He unzipped it and started packing the papers which litered
the three seater chair and kept them inside the bag.
"See you later in the evening." He said as he walked up to her and
kissed her.
"Bye sweety." She said to him as he opened the front door and
slipped out of the house.

She walked back into the kitchen to finish up with the cooking out of
which she will only eat a little before seeting out to her boutique .
++++++++++++++++++++++++++
VENUE: THE UNIVERSITY'S GIRL'S HOSTEL.
TIME: 7:30AM.
__________________________________________
All packed and set. Tola zipped up her travelling bag and lifted it to
her shoulder.
"Hey girls. Am set. Lets get out of here." She called her friends.
Dolapo and Chioma came in with their respective portable travelling
bags.
"Lets go." Tola said unlocking the door.
"Wait. Lets say our prayers." Chioma said.
The other two girls dropped their bags and held hands to form a circle
and Chioma started praying.
"Heavenly father we bless your name because you are the alpha and
the omega. The king of kings and the lord of lords......." She began and her friends were saying amen to the prayers.
"I pray you grant eternal rest to our dear sisters, Hadiza and Dayo."
She got no replies and she was forced to open her eyes. She saw her two friends crying again. Knowing there is little to what she can do, she decided to end the prayer.
"I pray you be with us and our families. And quick justice is what we crave for. Thank you because you have answered our prayers. In Jesus name we prayed." She concluded.
She embraced Tola and whispered words of assurance to her before walking over to Dolapo.
Just then her phone rang.
"Hello sir." She said on picking the call.
"Am in school. Okay, I'll be expecting you." She replied before ending the call.
She dropped the bombshell.
"Inspector Clement is coming over to see me. So I won't be leaving with you guys." She said.
"No one is leaving then Abi?" Tola said referring her question Dolapo who could only nod in approval.
They all sat down awaiting the arrival of Inspector Clement.

--to be continued--

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Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by princesssusan(f): 7:17am On Sep 19, 2014
FTC(first to chop) tongue
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Eniqurl(f): 7:36am On Sep 19, 2014
NB: He had a small back (BAG) with him,in which he put his laptop. Oya correct shaperly.
What a Nice update for a beautiful mawninq. Weldne ma Oqa at d top.
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Eniqurl(f): 7:37am On Sep 19, 2014
NB: He had a small back (BAG) with him, in which he put his laptop. Oya correct shaperly.
What a Nice update for a beautiful mawninq. Weldne ma Oqa at d top.
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by D9ty7(m): 7:48am On Sep 19, 2014
I just made it lengthier.
princesssusan: FTC(first to chop) tongue
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by D9ty7(m): 7:49am On Sep 19, 2014
I've made the update lengthier so read again.
Eniqurl: NB: He had a small back (BAG) with him,in which he put his laptop. Oya correct shaperly.
What a Nice update for a beautiful mawninq. Weldne ma Oqa at d top.
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Nobody: 7:55am On Sep 19, 2014
'Insp clement'..hmm
D9ty7 that's my dad's rank + name so nothing should happen to him
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by D9ty7(m): 8:03am On Sep 19, 2014
Are you kidding me?
Vibra: 'Insp clement'..hmm
D9ty7 that's my dad's rank + name so nothing should happen to him
Nothing will happen to him.
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by D9ty7(m): 8:19am On Sep 19, 2014
--continuation--
TIME: 9AM.
VENUE: KHAL ABDUL REBEL CORPORATION BUILDING.
__________________________________________
Hakym walked into the cell where Detective Okoro was being held early
in the morning. Okoro opened his eyes immediately he noticed someone's
presence in his cell.
"Who are you?" Okoro asked.
Hakym kicked him hard in the face thereby causing him to fall down and
roll on the floor. He was bounded with a rope and had bruises all over
his body. Hakym squatted beside him and puffed smoke of cigaret on his
face.
Okoro coughed as he tried to prevent percieving the odour.
"Do you know how long you've been here?" Hakym asked.
Okoro kept mute.
"You've been here for over three days and you are not co-operating
with us. Tell us all we need to know and you'll become a free man once
again with compensations." Hakym adviced.
"I don't need your compensation here. As a matter of fact, I
don't see myself getting out of here but believe me. You'll get your
as5 kicked by the police." Okoro replied spatting on Hakym thereby
provoking Hakym's anger.
"I'll be back for you." Hakym said immediately he recieved a message
summoning his presence inside the great hall where Maleek sits and
deliberate with his top officials.
++++Inside the great hall+++++
The walls of the hall was painted red and a big throne stood in the
middle of the hall with nothing less than fifteen chairs arranged around
it. Eight out of the fifteen chairs were already occupied by men who
had their head bent. Just then the door opened and another man walked in
with a mask. His name was inscribed on his attire, 'Hakym.'
"Welcome, you men of the Khabal. The time is now to let the
government know what's going on. The government is our sponsor but it is
high time to attack one of them. Our next target is the deputy governor
of the state we are in now. Ten men should be enough." Abdul Maleek
explained without mincing words.
"Long live Abdul the great." The men who sat around his chair
hailed.
++++++++++++++++++++++++++
Ngozi woke up with a start, she has been in coma for two days now.
"Thank God you are awake now." The policeman sitting on the bedside chair said.
"How are you Thomas?" Ngozi asked.
"Thank God you still remember my name." Thomas said smiling.
Ngozi smiled too, trying to remember some things.
"Okoro. Where is he?" She asked.
"Who is Okoro?" Thomas asked.
Thomas had no idea who Okoro is. Reason being that Okoro was an officer from the headquarters while Thomas is a full time Area F officer who has never met Okoro before.
"I believe he is fine." Thomas replied trying to calm her down. He thought Ngozi and Okoro are lovers and that's the reason why she asked after him immediately she woke up. And to avoid any more problems, he had to tell her he is fine.
"I have to go. Where's my gun?" Ngozi asked standing up.
"Where are you going?"
"Back to the field." She replied.

--to be continued--

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Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Onemansquad(m): 8:19am On Sep 19, 2014
Getin mor nd mor interesting...
ah dy troway salute o @d9ty7
#stil folowing
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Nobody: 8:23am On Sep 19, 2014
D9ty7: Are you kidding me?am not,so much will you pay for that?

Nothing will happen to him.
eh eh it is better that way
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Eniqurl(f): 8:31am On Sep 19, 2014
D9ty7: I've made the update lengthier so read again.
Ok, hve read it nd stil expectinq more later.
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by D9ty7(m): 8:35am On Sep 19, 2014
I can see my boss Temitope Daniel viewing this thread.
Morning sir.
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by D9ty7(m): 8:48am On Sep 19, 2014
More comments and criticisms as we all waiit for the next update.
@Eniqurl: I just dropped another update.
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by D9ty7(m): 9:02am On Sep 19, 2014
Your comments and criticisms has kept me going. So don't stop in commenting.
Even though I am yet to see anyone criticising the story.
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by AudreyTimms(f): 9:58am On Sep 19, 2014
D9ty7: Your comments and criticisms has kept me going. So don't stop in commenting.
Even though I am yet to see anyone criticising the story.
You are yet to see anyone criticizing the story, right? I'm coming for you! I'm taking my time to read it. I've seen some typo and grammatical errors sha! grin

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Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Nobody: 10:14am On Sep 19, 2014
Morning boss.
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Eniqurl(f): 10:22am On Sep 19, 2014
Oh boi! dz quyz qo kil people finish oh....getting mre interesting mehn. Weldne boss
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by emmabest2000(m): 12:11pm On Sep 19, 2014
Ride on ... Still following !
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Mimisboygreat: 12:24pm On Sep 19, 2014
Chai!! Wait o! U dn leave me?
Eniqurl: Hve bin lukinq for u nah.
techno!! If u toast my babe again ehn***brings out my cutlass** dis my cutlass go change colour 4 ya body o.
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by AudreyTimms(f): 12:28pm On Sep 19, 2014
D9ty7, come and join us whatsapp na. I mean writers group. Please send your phone number to my mailbox if you are interested.
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by harhormhidey(m): 2:00pm On Sep 19, 2014
A nice story uhve got hre
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by Queenxstar(f): 3:53pm On Sep 19, 2014
Still following... I don't know if I miss an update but how did Ngozi become comatose and how did Okoro get abducted, kindly put me through Duro.

If Ngozi had been in coma for two days, she wouldn't be so alert as you've presented.

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Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by arabaribiti(m): 4:28pm On Sep 19, 2014
Nice work bro God bless you
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by D9ty7(m): 5:01pm On Sep 19, 2014
You know I'll jump at it. As soon as I repair my whatsapp phone I'll do that.
[quote
author=AudreyTimms]D9ty7, come and join us whatsapp na. I mean writers
group. Please send your phone number to my mailbox if you are
interested.[/quote]
Chatting with AudreyTimms the great and others.
Re: All In A Circle.....(A crime story) by D9ty7(m): 5:07pm On Sep 19, 2014
It was as a result of mistake in typing from the paper. I jumped the part where it took place and fastforwarded to later in the evening. So I just mentioned it.
[quote
author=Queenxstar]Still following... I don't know if I miss an update
but how did Ngozi become comatose and how did Okoro get abducted, kindly
put me through Duro.

If Ngozi had been in coma for two days, she wouldn't be so alert as
you've presented. [/quote]

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