@Queenxster: I have never being in a coma before and I don't know how it feels. I just wrote what I imagined. I promise to change it.

More comments and criticisms. They keep me going.
Two more updates and we call it a day.

good work here....bt try working on ur tenses....ur using present instead of past.......stories shud b written in past tense

D9ty7: @cestmoi1, akinkudin, Eniqurl,Anugod, Hussain63, talk2riel, Mercyclaire, Bettybold, Drnonny, Atk01.
Check out this story and tell me what you think of it.

Hmmn enjoying d story .... Weldone D9ty7 ! Following til d end ......

--Continuation--
TIME: 10AM
VENUE: THE UNIVERSITY'S GIRL'S HOSTEL.
_________________________________________
Clement drove into the less spacious compund which shows a typical
environment occupied by students. Even though the concrete floor was
clean to some extent, litters were all over the place. A few rooms
downstairs were locked, meaning the occupants have either ran away from
school or taken cover somewhere. He proceeded to the stairs and ascended
to the second floor. He knocked on the door of room 16A.
"Yes, am coming." A female voice replied.
The door opened and a beautiful girl of about twenty one opened the
door. She smiled at Clement.
"Is Chioma in?" He asked.
"Yes." The lady replied opening the door wider.
Clement stepped into the room which was painted pink and white with
three matresses placed around the room. Dolapao was lying down on one
of the matresses while Tola was seated behind the only reading table in
the room pressing her phone. Chioma walked in from within the inner
room.
"Welcome sir." She greeted their visitor.
"Thank you. How you today?"
"Am fine. Dolapo, Tola, Darasimi, this is Inspector Clement." She
introduced formally.
"You are welcome sir." Darasimi replied while Tola was shaking
her
head to the music being played through the headset connected to her
laptop. Dolapo only smiled sadly.
"Toooooolaaaa!" Chioma called.
"Yes!" She replied with a start.
"This is Inspector Clement."
"Welcome sir." She said smiling before slipping the headset back
to her ears.
"Can we talk here?" He asked.
"Yes but....." Chioma looked at Dolapo's pale figure lying on the
bed.
"Okay." Clement replied as if he knew what she was try to pass
accross but his gentleman's instinct told him, Dolapo doesn't want
Dayo's death to be mentioned in her presense.
"Let's go outside." Chioma said rising up and picking two plastic
chairs from the inner room.
Clement walked outside to wait for her on the corridor where they last
had their conversation.
"How far have you gone in your investigation?" Chioma asked.
"We are almost done with the investigation but you girl's
cooperation will take us closer to the end. I appreciate your personal
contribution but your friends are not helping matters. If we can get
information from them, I believe it'll take us a step further. By the
way, who is that new girl?"
"Darasimi. She is a friend." Chioma replied.
"She has always lived here with you girls or what?"
"She came over this morning to console Dolapo." She replied.
"Are you girls that close?"
"Not really but she is and engineering student who lived in the
same hostel with late Hadiza's boyfriend." Chioma explained.
"Have you seen Hadiza's boyfriend lately?" He asked.
"No. He is probably mourning over her death." She replied.
"He must be heartbroken by now." He said sympathetically.
Darasimi walked out of the room dresses in a blue t-shirt and a black jean trouser.
"Where are you going?" Chioma asked.
"I need to pick some things in my room." She replied looking tensed.
"When are you coming back?" Chioma asked.
"I'll come back later in the evening." She replied.
"Okay. Bye." Chioma said.
"Take care. Bye sir." She said to Clement who replied her by nodding his head.
Darasimi walked along the corridor until she got to the end where she took the turning the the right and descended the staircase.
"Mike, a girl will come out of the gate now. Monitor her movement, report strange things to me directly and send pictures of people she converse with to me on whatsapp. Copy that?" Clement instructed.
Chioma was looking at the police officer before her in a way that clearly showed her displeasure.
"Its nothing serious. Am just suspecting her." He said assuringly.
"Hope she won't be arrested sha?" She asked with concern written all over her face.
"Not at all. She will only lead us to our suspect." He replied throwing her into more confusion but she decided not to probe further.

--to be continued--

Eniqurl: Hve bin lukinq for u nah.

darling hw are u na *plants her a kiss* na work tinz i have been very busy lately.

Mimisboygreat: Chai!! Wait o! U dn leave me? techno!! If u toast my babe again ehn***brings out my cutlass** dis my cutlass go change colour 4 ya body o.

oboy u wan die young *mumbles some incantation and brings out Heckler and koch Usp 40 pistol*
e be like say u never hear say guys dey die 4 babe if u wan join those kind of guys just drag dis babe wif me again @eniqurl no just mind am

tecno4life:
oboy u wan die young *mumbles some incantation and brings out Heckler and koch Usp 40 pistol*
e be like say u never hear say guys dey die 4 babe if u wan join those kind of guys just drag dis babe wif me again @eniqurl no just mind am

U dy chant incantation for d9ty7 thread abi.....hehe, m out oh.

Uhmm, Aunty Darasimi ah hpe u kn ntin bouh dz case oh.
Weldne bOss...itz getting mre interesting

Eniqurl: U dy chant incantation for d9ty7 thread abi.....hehe, m out oh.

oya sorry na *dips hand in pocket and brings out wallet* take dis 5K go bring cold zobo 2 cool ur mind

This thread is turning to something else. Incantation?....
You guys settle your differences and the story resumes afterwards.
In other news, this story has been suspended.

D9ty7: This thread is turning to something else. Incantation?....
You guys settle your differences and the story resumes afterwards.
In other news, this story has been suspended.

Suspended keh ?? Nooo oh, we wil settle it ASAP.

tecno4life:
oya sorry na *dips hand in pocket and brings out wallet* take dis 5K go bring cold zobo 2 cool ur mind

5K for zobo?? No p.

hmm folds arms ,cross legx waitin 4 d next epic

Well done d9ty7,just passing by,will be back later

D9ty7,, u re a sure guy....more ink to ur pen.



Please mke ur updates regular...

Hmm, interesting! Suspense everywhere.

Gotten outta ghost mode* grabs popcorn and chilling with an iced tea..... Waiting impatiently 4 more updates

Weldone boss.

As an apprentice to d9ty7, I just kicked off a new story thread. It is titled 'LAW.' The title is somehow boring but the story is not.
It is the story of a man who at the age of thirty two was sentenced to fifteen years in prison. His well planned beautiful life got smashed and his dreams shattered.
Find out what really happened...
This is the link....https://www.nairaland.com/1911289/law-story-man-took-law#26446533

Lyzbet
CHOREM
EmeraldB18
lopeoba
Babetolux
BibiBasy
Plaitex
Adeayomi
deeyor
Baddchristy
Labaski
anasbeaut
rollytee
enemercy.
READ!!! READ!!! READ!!!

tecno4life:
oboy u wan die young *mumbles some incantation and brings out Heckler and koch Usp 40 pistol*
e be like say u never hear say guys dey die 4 babe if u wan join those kind of guys just drag dis babe wif me again @eniqurl no just mind am

*** brings out my bible n start fireing prayers** na me get dis babe ghan

--continuation--


TIME: 11AM
VENUE: SANDRA OSELU'S RESIDENCE.
__________________________________________
Sandra walked into her living room which was painted sky blue. The
curtains that stood on the window and the doorways is a combination on
sky blue and white and a rug of skyblue covered the floor. The couches
are suede black made by a popular furniture company in italy. Opposite
the two seater couch stood a television set hung to the wall and a HD
kodak camera layed on the table.
Barrister Benson was seated flipping through the pages of a beauty
magazine with a bottle of Ciroc and a glass cup on the stool before him.
"Sorry for the delay. I've been making some calls." Sandra
apologised as she walked in in a short flaying skirt that stopped above
her knee, and a tank top that showed a large amount of her cleavage.
"What do you think o this company?" She asked.
"It is good but you know their offer is not up to our
standard.They are not ready to pay sign on fees neither are there any
chances of renewing the contract once this one expires. The only thing
that excited me is the fact that they'll give both the model and her
agent/lawyer a car." Benson explained.
"Will the car be every year?" Sandra asked.
"No. Just once." Benson replied.
"Its better we let this one pass. Moreso, our current contract with
Levis&Paige is an interesting one."
"Yeah. They'll come back with a beeter offer if they realise our
worth." Benson added.
"I'll be back." Sandra said exiting the living room.
Benson who has been having a hard time coping with Sandra's presence,
her exposed laps are not helping matters neither is her exposed
cleavege. She made it worse by sitting down very close to him. He often
found his eyes wandering to those exposed part of her body.
Janet walked into the room carrying a basket full of clothes.
"Hello sir." She greeted for the upteenth time.
"Hey"
"My name is Janet."
"The maid?" He asked.
"Yeah."
Janet is beautiful on her own part. She should be contented with the
level of her beauty, she is not rich and she has no class.
"You are handsome." She complimented walking towards him in a seductive manner.
"Thank you." Benson replied without battling an eyelid.
"Am single though. You may want to try me out. This is my pin." She said dropping a piece of paper on his laps.
"Thank you but am not interested."
"I know you won't be. You are interested in Madam S."
"Your headache." He said spitefully.
"Let's see whose headache it is." She said before carrying her basket of clothes and walked out of the living room.
"Hello sir. I did it, yes he refused. The game is on." She whispered to someone on phone.
--to be continued--
This update is short and I know it. But the next update comes up after 12noon. Thanks for your understanding.

More grease to your elbows ...

tank God mr benson used his head u 4 jst loose

Oya na, oga D9ty7 12 don pass oooo, on my knees pls come and update oooo....

D9ty7, tnx for inviting me. I tink dis is the perfect cure. U no try ooo, how will my namesake be in so much pain as she is in atm. Notin must happen to her o.

I saw some mistakes while reading and I can see u've bin corrected, will be on the look out as u progress. Nice story line. Pls don't delay the update.

AudreyTimms, longest time. I hope u're doing great? I've missed u o

Abeg who be your namesake?

[quote
author=SexySapphire]D9ty7, tnx for inviting me. I tink dis is the
perfect cure. U no try ooo, how will my namesake be in so much pain as
she is in atm. Notin must happen to her o.

I same some mistakes while reading and I can see u've bin corrected,
will be on the look out as u progress. Nice story line. Pls don't delay
the update.

AudreyTimms, longest time. I hope u're doing great? I've missed u
o[/quote]

#typing#
All thanks to Beckytee.

Patiently waiting for more update

--continuation--
TIME: 10AM
VENUE: HARMONY LODGE.
__________________________________________
Darasimi alighted from a campus shuttle at a junction popularly known
as Harmony. The street was named harmony because of a house built for
student's of the university for rentage. The logde was known as Harmony
lodge. By the roadside at the junction stood Harmony cool spot. A
popular bear palour and pepper soup joint owned by Mama Harmony.
"Weldone Mama Harmony." Darasimi greeted the woman who owned the
cool spot and the lodge.
"Dara omo mi. Bawo ni?" (Dara my daughter. How is everything?"
Mama Harmony asked.
"Adupe fun olorun." (we thank God) Darasimi replied.
She was a regular stopper at Harmony cool spot where she normally have
her meals when she is too tired to cook. And discount enjoyed by the
occupants of Harmony lodge is enormous. Buy a plate of rice worth #200
and get a bottle of drink free or pepper soup.
She was an easy going girl who lived her life in a predictable
manner. Wake up in the morning, do her chores, get dressed and go to
school, come back home and sleep. She doesn't go to parties neither does
she keep friends. She had just five friends who lived inside the school
hostel whom she occasionally visits and vice versa.
She unlocked the black gate through the hole bored on the iron gate.
She entered the compound which is the base for most engineering students
of the school. Two cars were parked inside the compund instead of the
normal three cars meaning one of the car owner is out enjoying himself
with his car-less friends who will jump at the opportunity of a free
ride.
A black Hyundai was one of the two cars belonging to Adeoye(late
Hadiza's boyfriend) also an engineering student in his final year.
"Hey babe." A guy popularly referred to as Scorpion greeted her
from his room.
"Scorpy. How far na?" She replied and opened the door into her
room downstairs.
Even though Darasimi was brought up in the christian way. Since
gaining admission four years ago, she has since lost some of the good
characters imbibed in her. she now behave like every occupants of
Harmony lodge. Harmony lodge has a sharp contrast to its name. The
compound is far from being peaceful, since most of the boys occupying
the rooms are either cultist or influential students of the school. So
its either they fight because of girls or they fight to stamp authority.

On entering her room, she opened her wardrobe and picked a packet
of noodles which she planned on eating. Her roomate, Sade travelled home
to check on her sick mother.
She walked into the kitchen as typical of other rooms in the whole
lodge. A room, a kitchen and a bathroom incorporated with convinience
materials.
She began cooking and in few minutes, the compound which seemed quiet
when she walked in was begining to bustle.
"Oya place your bets." A guy said to the others.
"Na five thousand I wan put o." A familiar voice replied.
The boys were playing their usual abnormal gambling game and today's
game seems not to be different. The task is anyone who can jump into a
car through the window without having any body contact with the car
body. The car being used was the black Hyundai belonging to Deoye. A short statured guy opted to do the jumping and he did it successfully.
"Oya give him his money." Deoye ordered bringing out the five thousand he promised earlier and giving it to the boy.
A two hundred level naive but rich kid who was referred to as a common jew by the big boys of the lodge put up a struggle with them.
"I didn't say I want to place a bet. I just said he can't do the jumping." The boy replied.
"I close my eyes now. Go bring your laptop and give it to Samson." Deoye ordered the boy who ran into his room which is beside Darasimi's room. Samson is the guy who jumped.
"Who dey cook for this area na?" Scorpion asked.
"e be like sey na Sade o." Samson replied.
"Tar! Sade don travel na. Make we go check. Boys gats to chop na."
The guys(numbering up to twelve) excluding Tayo(the jew kid) who stood holding his laptop all walked toward's Darasimi's room.
"Hold that lappy well o." Deoye advised.
"Kpom kpom kpom." Sounded the knock on the door.

--to be continued--

D9ty7: Abeg who be your namesake?

Guess