[size=13pt]Ksslib Vs Gottoboy [/size] (Group A)


Title :Letter To The President

Instruction: Address GEJ on the current situation in the north, and offer advice on what u think should be done to calm the turmoil and how.
Note: :Your Verse shouldn't Lose that Hip-Hop touch .


Criteria

Creativity-- 2 points

Flow- - 1 point

Imagery- - 2 points

Rhyme Scheme-- 2 points

Consistency/Topic-- 4 points

Lit Elements/Metaphors-- 2 points

Vocabulary-- 2 points

Emotion

Rules (must be strictly adhered to)

- 8bars/16Lines...

- Deadline is Tuesday Dec 2nd 6pm

- Verses should be posted by both contestants on
or not later than deadline date.

- No biting, swaying, stretching, feeding or
recycling.

- No complaining about votes.

- No dissing of opponent

- No unnecessary comments

Goodluck!

Guykhena:



Title :Letter To The President

Checkz

A No-Show verse

His Honourable,
The President of the Federal Republic of Nigerian,
FCT Abuja.
2nd December, 2014.

Dear President Jonathan,
.
I write to you in this letter to urge you in your capacity as the president of Nigeria to vehemently tackle 'Human Right Problems', especially those that have made it a Choice to do Evil,|am a loyal citizen from the Northern Part of Nigeria, a self-proclaimed Voice of the People.|
I urge you to use your time in the Office to address Northerners Most Pressing Issue like; Corruption|
Lack of Security, Incompetent Education, Inter-Religious Crisis, Poverty, Violence
And Terrorism that has led northerners into a State of Commotion.|
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It is written in the Bible, God said we should Fear Not, | but with the current Massacre and Bloodshed in the 'Northern Region' is enough reason for peeps to Fear North.|
No time to argue about if you're a Christian, Muslim, or an Atheist,
|
Coz this situation is beyond 'Religious Issues' the sh1t is getting worse and worse Lately, |
the Hopes of Northerners are 'Lost' right now they don't know where their Faith Is,|
Army, Police and Civil 'Defence' are 'Useless' like Mangala in City,/ its a Pity,/ when we put them to a Test' they couldn't Guarantee us 30percent Safety.|
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Alimajiri's littered errwhere like Sheet of Papers,
| 10:00am on monday school hours some children are busy hawking BisCUITS or Epka.| our young girls nko? They barely cross 15year, buh em are Forced to Marry,|
when ii intervened, i was told to forget the age and take a good look α​t their Body,/ some are Good, some are bad, others are Ugly,/ they said our Yarinya's of nowadays belike 'Cossy Orjiakor's body package' you self go 'FEAR' for the kind of Bobby and Butt they Carry.| (Is this a concrete reason? NO)
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Writing this Letter Tearz be Falling From My Face,| Doleh Changes!! Doleh Changes!! The people keep Calling For A Change,|
No work for the youths, some graduates Suffer As Apprentice;|
Some Okada Riders others dey push Truck and Wheelbarrow,/ they say 'No Food For Lazy Man' buh the guy wey manage get 'Work", with im 'small pay' manage buy small food Chop, check out his body now, pfft you go see Bone, you go See Marrow,/
Na all this things we 'Northerners been dey Stomach' men we getting 'Sick and Tired' majority of us are now victims of Ulcer And Appendice.|
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Sir, my people are crying, Like APC motto: all they Need is Change,|
Get 'Justice League' to 'Catch and Kill' those Evil Masterminders, instanta, so they too will Feel the Pain,| Send 'Troops of Army' to Nasarawa Local Government, to reprimand all those heartless fulaNI Herdsmen,|
And if that Sum aint enough, i Beckon you to Order for Reinforcement.|
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Other opposing party tryna ridicule ya Governance, Sir my people inpatient and are Feeling Upset,|
Rather than segregation and Spitting Nonsense.|
I feel you need to step up your game like a movie, you need to Put in Action, |
cut out all those Fools distractions,|
and the Nation will not only shine bright like the Galaxies,|
Buh will regain all lost 'Status quo', and together we'll stand as ONE no more Political Falacies.|
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Mr president you look like a Weakling, so sluggish and lazy, |
Are you tryna say you don't know those 'Sect or Psychopaths' are Nothin but Crazy?|
I suggest its high time you should prolly Raise a Notion, and to the Motherless baby homes, and the Less privileged? Make Donation,|
join hands together and support the people to Fight This Menace,|
Coz if things turns to 'Abacha's Era' omo this Crisis go Hard,|
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To tackle,
so its the best time to sack, corrupt and Selfcentered, and Bad Leader,|
Coz we're '2 Good to Loze this War' Rambo and Swazznigga. |
All we need is quality civilisation and Good Education,|
Coz wіthουт the Northerners? Its like using 'Ordinary Sand and Water' in Building the Nation,
| You are a career politician, make me believe you don't Lack Experience|,
I beg you to take immediate action after reading this 'Open Letter' coupled with Facts and Reference.|

Thank you for your public service.

Sincerely,
路斯哥
Gottoboy
08179463636
Kofar Kokona, Keffi
Nasawara State.

CC:
President of the Senate; David Mark

Sorry for the delay. I was multitasking.

First both cats were sick with it,both on point with the topic. But what I think really made this 'one way' ,was the 'hip-hop touch' in both netcees verses,one was in with it,the other was a bit not.

Creativity-- 2 points- Ksslib

Flow- - 1 point-Ksslib

Imagery- - 2 points- Gottoboy

Rhyme Scheme-- 2 points- Ksslib( Gottoboy erred here,most times I lost where his rhyme started and ended,if you know your words from one point to another is magnified,you should do multies in b/w,you know to get the folks reading in check and not lose track,and that affected his flow)

Consistency/Topic-- 4 points- Ksslib(his message was clear )

Lit Elements/Metaphors-- 2 points- Ksslib

Vocabulary-- 2 points-Ksslib

Emotion- 2 points- Gottoboy(obviously)
13-4

MVGT - Ksslib.

Mvgt - Ksslib

Gottoboy, seriously, nobody asked u to compose a real letter. And did u read that rhyming is in the criteria?

Lol krone..

Ksslib = GMV

Thank you for your public service.
Sincerely,
路斯哥
Gottoboy
08179463636
Kofar Kokona, Keffi
Nasawara State.
CC:
President of the Senate; David Mark

lwkmd

007Bruce:
lwkmd

II DULL!!!!

Dafuq, Gottoboy was writing a real letter o :v

It is written in the Bible, God said we should Fear Not, | but with the current Massacre and Bloodshed in the 'Northern Region' is enough reason for peeps to Fear North.|

Nicey!

Limerick:
Dafuq, Gottoboy was writing a real letter o :v

Nicey!

Α​h wanted to use the pattern of Ink verse vs Iceberg buh ii stretched and lost ᵗᴴᵋ hiphop touch

gottoboy:

Α​h wanted to use the pattern of Ink verse vs Iceberg buh ii stretched and lost ᵗᴴᵋ hiphop touch

stop copying Ink, his styles are always complicated.

Limerick:
stop copying Ink, his styles are always complicated.

Twasnt a copy though, just used the scheme! Thankx Fo̶̷̩̥̊͡Я the advice

gottoboy:

Twasnt a copy though, just used the scheme! Thankx Fo̶̷̩̥̊͡Я the advice

k

gottoboy:

Α​h wanted to use the pattern of Ink verse vs Iceberg buh ii stretched and lost

Lolly.

kr0ne:
Mvgt - Ksslib

Gottoboy, seriously, nobody asked u to compose a real letter. And did u read that rhyming is in the criteria?

....

Dj5naira, what's with you nd all this old posts?

*rubbing chin*

OK, Darkrebel has been banned and can't post his verse by himself, so he'll send it to me. Elymaxiimus, I'll post after you. Deadline is 8pm.

kr0ne:
OK, Darkrebel has been banned and can't post his verse by himself, so he'll send it to me. Elymaxiimus, I'll post after you. Deadline is 8pm.

... Mhen this guy wan enter guiness book of records?

Has he sent his verse? I'm ready when u are.