It's strictly the work of a beginner.
But I'll do My best to make it look great.
Thanks to My Tutors, I can finally achieve one of My wishes, 'become a Poet'.


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Laykon
Texanomaly

Each time I awake
I hear the thoughts resound
In the innermost part of My belly
But when I make the efforts
To put the ink to paper
I tend to ask Myself
Where all the thoughts have gone.

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Laykorn
Texanomaly

As I lay down to sleep
I finally glide into deep sleep
As the fabric of reality gets pulled aside
I'm finally freed from the anxieties and worries
Of the day that seems endless
And as I embrace the tranquility of the night
I can finally put my head to rest.

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Laykorn
Texanomaly

Brother. I love the way you play with words. The imagery.

'As the fabric of reality gets pulled aside' perfect!

When you wake up. Let's do a collabo.
Ayamlaykorn

laykorn:
Brother. I love the way you play with words. The imagery.

'As the fabric of reality gets pulled aside' perfect!

When you wake up. Let's do a collabo.
Ayamlaykorn

Thanks @ Oga
I hope to make a good poet someday.

Where did we miss it?
How did it go wrong?
The natural way
Of a man with a woman
We left the ancient path
We derailed from what
It's meant to be
And pursued this madness called 'gay
But I hear it re-echoed again
Man and woman he made them
It's Adam and Eve
Not Adam and Steve


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Laykorn
Texanomaly

Buqqui:
It's strictly the work of a beginner.
But I'll do My best to make it look great.
Thanks to My Tutors, I can finally achieve one of My wishes, 'become a Poet'.


CC
Laykon
Texanomaly

Buqqui:
Each time I awake
I hear the thoughts resound
In the innermost part of My belly
But when I make the efforts
To put the ink to paper
I tend to ask Myself
Where all the thoughts have gone.

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Laykorn
Texanomaly

OMG! This happens to me sometimes.

Buqqui:
As I lay down to sleep
I finally glide into deep sleep
As the fabric of reality gets pulled aside
I'm finally freed from the anxieties and worries
Of the day that seems endless
And as I embrace the tranquility of the night
I can finally put my head to rest.

CC
Laykorn
Texanomaly

Laykorn is right. You have a way with the pen...a "word crafter".

Buqqui:
Where did we miss it?
How did it go wrong?
The natural way
Of a man with a woman
We left the ancient path
We derailed from what
It's meant to be
And pursued this madness called 'gay
But I hear it re-echoed again
Man and woman he made them
It's Adam and Eve
Not Adam and Steve


CC
Laykorn
Texanomaly

Serious subject matter.

Buqqui:
It's strictly the work of a beginner.
But I'll do My best to make it look great.
Thanks to My Tutors, I can finally achieve one of My wishes, 'become a Poet'.


CC
Laykon
Texanomaly

Y my name no de na?

Buqqui:
It's strictly the work of a beginner.
But I'll do My best to make it look great.
Thanks to My Tutors, I can finally achieve one of My wishes, 'become a Poet'.


CC
Laykon
Texanomaly

Y my name no de na?

I was told it's bright
I was promised it has so much in stock
I looked forward to it with enthusiasm
I worked towards it with all I've got
I endured the scorch and the beat
I can see it just ahead
I can finally embrace it
As I walk right into it
It's none other, but My foretold future.

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Leki10
Texanomaly
Laykorn
Pappyrose

SHADOW


Silently and swiftly
He follows without a wimp
Abuts his owner through thick and thin
Dedicated and faithful,Oh! What a friend.
On-board the train even in death,
Whatever befalls he sticks around.



Silently He observes
He sees but says naught
Abide by the good and the bad
Denies no one the pleasure of their devise
Oblivious though he seems
Wine not,he's always there.


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Leki10
Texanomaly
Laykorn
Pappyrose

The music of the spheres
Sounds sweetly to My ears
Sings melody as it dares
To all that cares to hear

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Leki10
Texanomaly
Laykorn
Pappyrose

Abeeeg nah Make una come mark My assignment. Even if na zero, make red ink sha show for my script.

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Leki10
Texanomaly
Laykorn
Pappyrose

Buqqui:
Abeeeg nah Make una come mark My assignment. Even if na zero, make red ink sha show for my script.

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Leki10
Texanomaly
Laykorn
Pappyrose

U know it can't be zero, it's always inspiring,

I am told it's bright,
And promised it had much in stock.
I look forward with enthusiasm,
And work towards it with all I've got.
I endure the scorch, the beat.

I see it just ahead,
And finally, I embrace it,
As I walk right into...
My foretold future.

Music of the spheres
Sounds sweetly to my ears,
And sings melody as it dares
To all that cares
To hear.

Buqqui:
SHADOW


Silently and swiftly
He follows without a wimp
Abuts his owner through thick and thin
Dedicated and faithful,Oh! What a friend.
On-board the train even in death,
Whatever befalls he sticks around.



Silently He observes
He sees but says naught
Abide by the good and the bad
Denies no one the pleasure of their devise
Oblivious though he seems
Wine not,he's always there.


CC
Leki10
Texanomaly
Laykorn
Pappyrose

I don't really understand this one. I'm really sorry.

Where did we miss it?
How did it go wrong?

We left the ancient path,
A man with a woman,
The natural way.
We derailed what
Is meant to be,
And pursued this madness called
Gay
But I hear the echoes again.
Man and woman he made them.

It's Adam and Eve,
Not Adam and Steve.

I lay down to sleep
And finally glide into the deep.
As the fabric of reality is pulled aside,
I'm finally freed from the anxieties and worries
Of the day that seems endless.
I embrace the tranquility of the night,
And finally put my head to rest.

texanomaly:


I don't really understand this one. I'm really sorry.

I was trying out with an acrostic type of poem.


@ Texanomaly

Buqqui:


I was trying out with an acrostic type of poem.


@ Texanomaly

Oops...lol

I didn't even notice.
Now I understand.


Ok. It needed punctuation for one.


SHADOW


Silently and swiftly
He follows without a wimp.
Abuts his owner through thick and thin.
Dedicated and faithful. Oh! What a friend.
On-board the train even in death.
Whatever befalls he sticks around.


Silently He observes.
He sees but says naught.
Abide by the good and the bad.
Denies no one the pleasure of their devise.
Oblivious though he seems,
Wine not. He's always there.

Thanks @ Texanomaly.
Hope I'm becoming more resourceful with the ink?

Buqqui:
Thanks @ Texanomaly.
Hope I'm becoming more resourceful with the ink?

I've enjoyed what you've done so far, and I look forward to more, if that says anything. The most important thing is that you enjoy it though.

SOMEONE TO CALL MY OWN


I wish there was a soul,
Whose words keep me aglow.
Someone to call My own,
When others keep away.


Going through life alone is burdensome,
In bed alone is worrisome,
Aloneness can be cumbersome,
With none to share the sum.

All day I look and search,
All night I sigh and sleep.
The watch and wait seems endless,
Where is the one that makes me whole?

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Leki10
Texanomaly
Laykorn
Pappyrose

We need to find you a girlfriend Man! Lol
I promise you an e-gf when you punctuate the first two stanzas.
Ayamlaykorn

laykorn:

We need to find you a girlfriend Man! Lol
I promise you an e-gf when you punctuate the first two stanzas.
Ayamlaykorn

That's some good news.
Oh! What a relief.