LEGITLAYO:
lol epic ending.... boss you're the best... ...

Baba i loyal

superb! excellent! intruging.. God bless ur writing prowess

much more than i anticipated


critique....none for now; will read again-

tnx so much Ade 4 completing d story. May God continue to inspire u. Hope to read again from u soonest. Kudos

thumb up dude, i read it t to de end,
dat bobby is a sonofabitch, so no CNN again.... & ha beauty ws wasted jast lyk dat,
Aaron got no punishmt 4 his sins against his blood bros, WTF
de oda crew aboard dat she trasportin Jeremy fa?, I tot de were infected wit de virus also....
& den I hv a problem chosin which karata i wanna be like; Officer segun or Tobi de pilot or de computa wizkid, den all mek sense shaa,
kip de flag flying bro, bt wait oo, whr were u wen Woke Soyinka won de NL 4 literature?, anyways I know ur tym ma de com...

Wow such a end! Kudos Ade.

Oh My God!!! Glitches is over?!

How could I have missed that??

So lemme take this time out to appreciate an awesome pen pal and writer in you, adegwurulez. You are one great fiery ball of talent here on the literature segment of nairaland.

I do not regret the day I clicked the link to this beautiful story. Though there were bumps but that simply made the ride much more real. Sometimes, I felt as though I was part of the set and really having a real time moment at almost every second of reading.

Did I mention you're awesome? Like really awesome? And even with your busy schedule at school, you manage to post nothing less than meritorious here (because, believe me I totally understand how uneasy it is to combine writing with schoolwork as a science student in a tertiary institution).

You've been awesome and you deserve kudos for that. It had been my greatest pleasure being your number one female follower here.

I wanna be like you in terms of perseverance so please don't disappear yet, okay?

Congrats again, Sir.

So much love,
Kizzy.

Ade, wow ur story is very captivating,educative,interesting.,& so on. i really enjoyed every bit of it

wow. I love the way you painted some scenarios in the story. someone compare you to Dan Brown. You did a great work. bt I have some observations which you need to address. 1) the whole story was set-up in lagos and this city don't have forests but beaches. I couldn't relate with that. 2) how did Greg become a loman 3) how did stella and arron get to hook up OR Ddid I miss anything?

efzbah:
superb! excellent! intruging.. God bless ur writing prowess

much more than i anticipated


critique....none for now; will read again-

read again? Guess i'll have to wait... this time with gun

Ann2612:
tnx so much Ade 4 completing d story. May God continue to inspire u. Hope to read again from u soonest. Kudos

Amen! I also hope to be posting soon

Xcellency007:
1. thumb up dude, i read it t to de end,
dat bobby is a sonofabitch, so no CNN again.... & ha beauty ws wasted jast lyk dat,
2. Aaron got no punishmt 4 his sins against his blood bros, 3.WTF
de oda crew aboard dat she trasportin Jeremy fa?, I tot de were infected wit de virus also....
& den I hv a problem chosin which karata i wanna be like; Officer segun or Tobi de pilot or de computa wizkid, den all mek sense shaa,
kip de flag flying bro, 4. bt wait oo, whr were u wen Woke Soyinka won de NL 4 literature?, anyways I know ur tym ma de com...

1. well everybody has a purpose in life, she fufilled hers and had to go.
2. Do you believe everybody always get to pay for their sins? Well, thats open for debate but a scientist would tell you we're in the real world not an ideal world.
3. yeah they were infected and it was through them the virus spread.
4. Hehe.. I'm still looking up to some peeps here on NL and you're comparing me to soyinka? well, as you rightly said, my time will come. Thanks.

Missmossy:
Wow such a end! Kudos Ade.

Missmossy, thanks for having my back.

Missmossy:
Wow such a end! Kudos Ade.

Missmossy, thanks for having my back.

kizzykeziah:
Oh My God!!! Glitches is over?!

How could I have missed that??

So lemme take this time out to appreciate an awesome pen pal and writer in you, adegwurulez. You are one great fiery ball of talent here on the literature segment of nairaland.

I do not regret the day I clicked the link to this beautiful story. Though there were bumps but that simply made the ride much more real. Sometimes, I felt as though I was part of the set and really having a real time moment at almost every second of reading.

Did I mention you're awesome? Like really awesome? And even with your busy schedule at school, you manage to post nothing less than meritorious here (because, believe me I totally understand how uneasy it is to combine writing with schoolwork as a science student in a tertiary institution).

You've been awesome and you deserve kudos for that. It had been my greatest pleasure being your number one female follower here.

I wanna be like you in terms of perseverance so please don't disappear yet, okay?

Congrats again, Sir.

So much love,
Kizzy.

awwww someborri hand me a hanky. What can i say? You're such a great friend. No, i wont disappear, how can i do that to myself? Thanks dear

virtuedagirl:
Ade, wow ur story is very captivating,educative,interesting.,& so on. i really enjoyed every bit of it

You made it possible, thanks for that.

adegwurulez:
Missmossy, thanks for having my back.

Don't mention,its nothing .

ubiquitousade:
wow. I love the way you painted some scenarios in the story. someone compare you to Dan Brown. You did a great work. bt I have some observations which you need to address. 1) the whole story was set-up in lagos and this city don't have forests but beaches. I couldn't relate with that. 2) how did Greg become a loman 3) how did stella and arron get to hook up OR Ddid I miss anything?

At last i got what i have been begging for.
1. I have a lil confession, please dont tell anyone else, *low voice* i have never been to lasgidi. I talked about elegushi beach somewhere in the story, yeah? And i also talked about the drive distance to the forest. It might be somewhere in the outskirts.
2. Greg was Falcon's test subject, Falcon was an SVR agent. Sorry i didnt mention it but i thought it would have been obvious. Falcon was responsible for Greg's infection and he came as a 'saviour' it was all a well planned out charade.
3. Greg and stella were childhood lovers, something Aaron didnt like so he set up a mechanism to seperate them and win Stella and it worked.

Thanks for this, it opened my eyes to the fact that, in story writing, every little detail matters.

@ Adegwurulez
I guess my conscience won't allow me move past this story without commenting. For the first time, i was captivated by a story. I admire your courage, efforts and dedication. Please make sure you keep hard&soft copies of this story. You might have to publish it some day. It will make a nice literature for schools. Keep it up, never give up. Cheers.

EboOmos:
@ Adegwurulez
I guess my conscience won't allow me move past this story without commenting. For the first time, i was captivated by a story. I admire your courage, efforts and dedication. Please make sure you keep hard&soft copies of this story. You might have to publish it some day. It will make a nice literature for schools. Keep it up, never give up. Cheers.

Waoh!! I'm keeping soft copies for sure, thanks for the advice.

adegwurulez:

awwww someborri hand me a hanky. What can i say? You're such a great friend. No, i wont disappear, how can i do that to myself? Thanks dear

Take my own hanky, ehn.

And yeah, don't do that to yaself. Stay around.

Wow! Again wow! Just finished reading this wonderful, thrilling, breathtaking, suspense filled, action-packed literary work and I must confess, it was worth the time.
Kudos mehn!
Believe me, you did an EXCELLENT! Work.
Updates flowed freely without any form of lagging. Bravo! It's not an easy task - cracking up one's brain, typing... That's why I never stop to appreciate NL writers.
I say may your literary ink never cease to flow.
Bro, I see you going places with this.
I sincerely love this. :-)

IshilovePleaseNa:
Wow! Again wow! Just finished reading this wonderful, thrilling, breathtaking, suspense filled, action-packed literary work and I must confess, it was worth the time.
Kudos mehn!
Believe me, you did an EXCELLENT! Work.
Updates flowed freely without any form of lagging. Bravo! It's not an easy task - cracking up one's brain, typing... That's why I never stop to appreciate NL writers.
I say may your literary ink never cease to flow.
Bro, I see you going places with this.
I sincerely love this. :-)

Thanks for your kind words, They meant alot. I pray ishilove listens to your plea.

Wonderful story...thank God I was able to read the end...keep it up! Ade

When I first saw "THE END", I was lik; Ah-Ah? Ade? But then, I found somewhere in the comments that there was gonna be an epilogue and I was like; I for say oo!

Mehn, though I didn't expect it to end that quick, it did. And in a very clever way. You did a wonderful job, and I wanna read another. Just so you know, I didn't just follow glitches for the sake of the thrill, which is actually breath taking. It was more like a literature class for me. #Confession#

A very wonderful masterpiece. I saw somewhere in the comment area where someone advised you do this full time. Well, it's not a bad idea at all. More grease to your elbow. And please, invite me when you start something new.

Kudos!

jezuzboi:
When I first saw "THE END", I was lik; Ah-Ah? Ade? But then, I found somewhere in the comments that there was gonna be an epilogue and I was like; I for say oo!

Mehn, though I didn't expect it to end that quick, it did. And in a very clever way. You did a wonderful job, and I wanna read another. Just so you know, I didn't just follow glitches for the sake of the thrill, which is actually breath taking. It was more like a literature class for me. #Confession#

A very wonderful masterpiece. I saw somewhere in the comment area where someone advised you do this full time. Well, it's not a bad idea at all. More grease to your elbow. And please, invite me when you start something new.

Kudos!

No doubt i learnt more from the experience. Your comments were always spirit lifting and i really appreciate that. Yes it wasn't supposed to end this soon but many things in my life were clashing and i felt some had to make way for others. Right now i'm not thinking of starting a series, i just want to rest. But anytime i feel like starting a new series, i'll holla at you.

adegwurulez please check your mail, please...

silverdam:
adegwurulez please check your mail, please...

Replied.

Adegwurulez How far? Expecting the next story.

encubed:
Adegwurulez How far? Expecting the next story.

right boss... still on it.