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NEPA Smiles by joseph1832(m): 5:52am On Apr 01, 2015
Mosquitoes stings
And music rings
Darkness speaks
And despair creeps
Bodies wriggle
And sweat mingle
Heat caresses
And rashes arises
People growl
And NEPA smiles!

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Re: NEPA Smiles by EverestdeBliu(m): 1:27am On Apr 04, 2015
Bodies wriggles
As sweat trickles.
Re: NEPA Smiles by Prodeegee(m): 9:14am On Apr 04, 2015
EverestdeBliu:
Bodies wriggles
As sweat trickles.

Exactly, the 'and' should be replaced with 'as'
Re: NEPA Smiles by joseph1832(m): 10:44am On Apr 04, 2015
Poetic device guys... Remember a poet doesn't have to follow the basic rule of English language!.
Re: NEPA Smiles by jamofan(m): 11:41pm On Apr 18, 2015
Nice one
Re: NEPA Smiles by joseph1832(m): 1:38am On Apr 19, 2015
jamofan:
Nice one
cool
Re: NEPA Smiles by AllNaijaBlogger(m): 6:12am On Apr 19, 2015
Well timed poem.


Haven't had light for a week now.

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Re: NEPA Smiles by joseph1832(m): 6:56am On Apr 19, 2015
AllNaijaBlogger:
Well timed poem.


Haven't had light for a week now.



Its the same with me bro. I've been buying petrol like no mans business. The mosquitoes are now getting bold!.

I wonder what's up with the light, it hasn't been this bad.
Re: NEPA Smiles by AllNaijaBlogger(m): 7:00am On Apr 19, 2015
joseph1832:
Its the same with me bro. I've been buying petrol like no mans business. The mosquitoes are now getting bold!.

I wonder what's up with the light, it hasn't been this bad.

Same here. Pre-election, my area could boast with about 14 hrs of light daily
Re: NEPA Smiles by joseph1832(m): 7:09am On Apr 19, 2015
AllNaijaBlogger:


Same here. Pre-election, my area could boast with about 14 hrs of light daily
Imagine, na that election is gone is back to the normal ways of no light. Indeed "NEPA smiles".
Re: NEPA Smiles by AllNaijaBlogger(m): 7:11am On Apr 19, 2015
joseph1832:
Imagine, na that election is gone is back to the normal ways of no light. Indeed "NEPA smiles".



Your poem sha is problematic

Your grammar is wrong-

Mosquitoes sting not "mosqyuitoes stings"

Gbagaun grin grin grin
Re: NEPA Smiles by joseph1832(m): 7:14am On Apr 19, 2015
AllNaijaBlogger:




Your poem sha is problematic

Your grammar is wrong-

Mosquitoes sting not "mosqyuitoes stings"

Gbagaun grin grin grin
Bros I no understand wetin you mean oh!?.
Re: NEPA Smiles by AllNaijaBlogger(m): 7:29am On Apr 19, 2015
joseph1832:
Bros I no understand wetin you mean oh!?.


Rashes arise not "rashes arises"
Re: NEPA Smiles by joseph1832(m): 7:35am On Apr 19, 2015
AllNaijaBlogger:



Rashes arise not "rashes arises"

Did you wake up this morning and decided you want to be a troll today?.

Read more about poetry bro. It will enlighten you the next time you choose to drop a poem.
Re: NEPA Smiles by AllNaijaBlogger(m): 7:37am On Apr 19, 2015
joseph1832:
Did you wake up this morning and decided you want to be a troll today?.

Read more about poetry bro. It will enlighten you the next time you choose to drop a poem.


Calm down. If I wanted to troll you, we would be having drama.

We are brothers afterall. Didnt I dedicate my poem to you?



I understand what you are doing. It is called diction and using poetic license.

But then, the best poetry is usually grammatically correct.


I am just criticising. Bros, I am being real and not trying to insult you.
Re: NEPA Smiles by joseph1832(m): 8:13am On Apr 19, 2015
AllNaijaBlogger:



Calm down. If I wanted to troll you, we would be having drama.

We are brothers afterall. Didnt I dedicate my poem to you?



I understand what you are doing. It is called diction and using poetic license.

But then, the best poetry is usually grammatically correct.


I am just criticising. Bros, I am being real and not trying to insult you.
Is that so?. A good poem with flawless grammar without poetic device is nothing but nursery rhymes!.

Since you know about poetic license why attack my grammar?
Re: NEPA Smiles by AllNaijaBlogger(m): 8:57am On Apr 19, 2015
joseph1832:
Is that so?. A good poem with flawless grammar without poetic device is nothing but nursery rhymes!.

Since you know about poetic license why attack my grammar?


I see. Maybe its just my preference. I guess I still have to learn

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Re: NEPA Smiles by joseph1832(m): 5:34pm On Aug 22, 2015
AllNaijaBlogger:


I see. Maybe its just my preference. I guess I still have to learn

So how's the learning going? grin
Re: NEPA Smiles by AllNaijaBlogger(m): 7:09am On Aug 23, 2015
joseph1832:
So how's the learning going? grin

grin grin

It's going fine, bro.
Re: NEPA Smiles by joseph1832(m): 7:47am On Aug 23, 2015
AllNaijaBlogger:

grin grin
It's going fine, bro.
Cool.

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