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The Girl.. by Twaci(f): 8:19pm On Apr 04, 2015 |
I looked up and met her gaze; A tall dark-skinned girl. Eyes hard as ice; Black diamonds filled with questions. I smiled, she smiled too, A little weaker I guess. The amusement, the purity, Her eyes belied it all. I studied her face; Her looks, her personality. The lonesome angel, Whose innocence seemed vague. I felt her fears; Her wants and her desires. Her dark thoughts I could read; A Dark paradise, it seemed. I yearned to know more; To relate to this persona. But as I lifted my hand, She did also. A step closer I thought, And as I moved, she did. Then I tried to touch her, Only to feel the cold side of my mirror. 10 Likes 5 Shares |
Re: The Girl.. by JeffreyJamez(m): 9:00pm On Apr 04, 2015 |
Hahaha.... Nice one.... beautiful piece Tracy ![]() |
Re: The Girl.. by Twaci(f): 9:03pm On Apr 04, 2015 |
JeffreyJamez:Thanks dear 1 Like |
Re: The Girl.. by harffie(m): 7:34am On Apr 07, 2015 |
60%...its good! Buh i believe you can get better! |
Re: The Girl.. by Muzikluva(m): 10:22am On Apr 07, 2015 |
Sensual and captivating! |
Re: The Girl.. by badinfluence: 12:05pm On Apr 07, 2015 |
Twaci: Beautiful piece... tho I have to add.. Silently he watched Stricken by such lovely sight As the girl in the mirror smiled.. He hoped she could touch his heart A heart colder than the mirror 3 Likes |
Re: The Girl.. by Nobody: 6:23pm On May 09, 2015 |
I love your poem. |
Re: The Girl.. by Ghost01(m): 8:13am On May 15, 2015 |
A fine piece! |
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