I remember I promised 3 chapters tonight but I am gonna add 1 to it...this is in a bid to apologise for updating late...

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LOSS OF VIRGINITY: AN EARLY MISTAKE

CHAPTER 16

We began to ascend the stairs leading to
Derrek's
house when we were abruptly stopped by Jessica. She stood on the top steps with Tiffany
on one side of her and Sammy on the other.
Jessica had her arms crossed looking down at
us
with her annoying scrunched up face. She kind
of
reminded me of a ferret.
"And what do you looosers think you're doing
here?" She asked us while Tiffany and Sammy
mimicked her stuck-up facial expression.
"We're coming to the party Jessica, so move."
Dorcas jumped in before I could say anything.
"Ha! I don't think so. This is a senior's only kind
of party."
"We were invited." Dorcas said mimicking their
stuck-up tone.
"I don't care who invited you, you're not
welcome
here." Jessica insisted.
"Derrek invited us and this is his house so get
the
hell out of the way Jessica!" I finally jumped in
as
I took another step up. I was now standing face
to face with Jessica, staring at her with glaring
eyes.
She looked at me with amusement, "Ohh look
here girls, Shy-loner girl thinks she's tough." She
laughed as Tiffany and Sammy joined in
following
anything Jessica said like two obedient lap
dogs.
"Well, first of all little girl, Derrek would never
be
caught dead talking to a sophomore never
mind
inviting three of them to his party."
The front door opened as the noise from inside
surrounded us, people's laughter, music, joyful
yelling; all the sounds that indicated a teen
party.
We all looked over to the door and saw Derrek
coming out of the house. He was wearing the
same clothes he had worn at school today. Blue
jeans with a Pittsburgh Steelers hooded sweat
shirt on and even though I would have drowned
in that sweater it was tight against his overly
large muscles. At this point everyone sitting on
the porch was now watching us closely.
"Your right, Jessica." Derrek said in his deeply
low voice. "I didn't invite those three
sophomores here." He paused for dramatic effect.
"I knew it-" Jessica began before Derrek
caught her off.
"I invited Jane here. Why the short-stuff and
nerd boy came is beyond me." Derrek said
while eyeing both Dorcas and Brandon.
"Derrek!" Jessica said with amusement. "You
know 'nerd boy' is Adams' brother!"
Just hearing his name brought a sharp pain into
my stomach. Anxiously I looked around hoping
he
would just appear out of nowhere. I knew it
was a
tad psychotic, I mean I was supposed to be
trying
to get over him and yet he was the only thing I
could think about. He was the only reason I
even
came to this party, wishing and hoping that
maybe he would be here. Maybe I'd be able to
at
least see him if not anything else.
"I don't care!" Derrek replied to
Jessica making her giggle.
"And you know we're standing right here!"
Brandon announced angrily as both Jessica and
Derrek looked back down at Brandon with
disgust. Seriously, those two were perfect for
each other, both the most stuck-up, 'think
they're the best' kids in McLasgidi.
"Whatever, we're leaving!" I said through
gritted teeth. "Let's go guys."
"Wait!" Derrek called out. "You don't have to
leave
Jane, I invited you!" He said it like it was a
good thing, like I wanted to be there and would
ditch my friends just to go to his 'party'.
God, the nerve of some people! I thought
angrily.
I turned around to face him, "I'm sorry Derrek,
but
it's either all of us, or none of us."
He looked over at the seniors watching us and
then at Jessica who had the 'Yah-right-like-
he'll-fall-for-that-one' look on her face. Derrek
then looked back at me, "Fine, you guys can all
come."
Jessica's mouth dropped as she turned to look
at
Derrek, "But Derrrrekkkk..." She whined.
"Shut up Jessica!, you're annoying!"
I took one step toward the house before
stopping
and looking back up at Derrek. "And say you're
sorry to my friends."
"What?!" He snapped back.
"Say you're sorry for calling Dorcas 'short stuff'
and Brandon 'nerd boy', or to hell with it...We're
leaving." I challenged him.
He rolled his eyes, "Fine." He looked at both of
them and then muttered "I'msorryokay."
Everyone
around us gasped in surprise as they stared at
Derrek. Though his words were all connected
together making it hard to understand them
properly I knew it was still a huge achievement
to
get Derrek to even remotely say it.
Jessica stared at Derrek completely stunned
before she threw her hands in the air and said,
"Unbelievable!" She ran into the house, Tiffany
and Sammy tagging along behind her.
"You know this is going to ruin my rep! "
Derrek groaned.
"Well, I guess that's just a risk you're going to
have to take." I smiled at him while waving
Dorcas
and Brandon to follow me. "Party time..." I said
unenthusiastically.
"I'll show you guys around, follow me." Derrek
said as he began to walk into the house. We all
followed him as the door opened and once
again
we were drowned in the noise. "It's a pretty big
house so try not to get lost!" Derrek yelled
over
the noise.
I knew it was pointless to try and respond to
him,
he would never hear me so I just nodded.
Derrek began to scream over the music again.
"There are drinks in the kitchen, the bar
downstairs, there's a keg in the dining room,
some hard liquor in the cabinet in the first
bedroom up the stairs. If you're planning on
getting lucky tonight my bedroom and my
parents
are off limits. They are probably the only doors
locked and if I find anyone in them, they'll get
shit-kicked! Girl or boy." He finally stopped
yelling as he turned around and looked at us.
"Any questions?!" We all shook our heads. "I'll
grab us some drinks, what do you want?!"
"I'll just have a cooler, maybe?!" I yelled back.
"Me too!" Dorcas added.
Derrek looked at Brandon waiting for him to
answer, "I'm the B.R" Brandon finally
responded.
"Okay? So beer it is!" Derrek disappeared
before
Brandon could correct him.
I finally took the time to look around and well,
everyone was wasted. As my eyes peered
around
us when I realized I wasn't just checking out the
party but actually looking for someone in
particular. Every time I saw a tall brown haired
boy excitement rose inside me, although I was
quickly disappointed because it never turned
out
to be him. I wanted to forget about him so
badly
because the constant disappointment was
becoming unbearable. I shook my head trying
to
get him out of my mind.
I tried to distract myself by concentrating on
something else. At the top of the stairs I saw a
couple boys putting a mattress down and
looked
about ready to ride it down the stairs; both
boys
had a bottle of hard liquor in their hands. At
the
bottom of the stairs was a group of teens (boys
and girls) cheering and encouraging them. In
the
corner of the foyer was a chair that was
occupied
by a half naked girl giving some guy a horrible
lap
dance, her rhythm was completely off from the
music and to any sober person she looked
foolish
and a tad pathetic.
I could slightly see into the dining room where
a
game of "Strip Poker" was being played. I
turned
to Dorcas and Brandon waving them closer to me
so I didn't have to yell, "Is it just me or is this
party a little..."
"X-rated?" Brandon finished the sentence for
me.
"No, this is how parties normally are...aren't
they?" Dorcas questioned. "I mean I see it in the
movies all the time!"
I shook my head trying to keep my eyes
averted
from all the half naked girls, "Yah, that's just it
Dorcas, you see it in movies! I don't think normal
teen parties are actually this bad."
"Yah, but Jane, this is McLasgidi. 90% of the
girls here are sluts!"
Brandon nodded, "Dorcas does have a point."
"Well...It's still disgusting." They both nodded in
agreement though it kind of looked like
Brandon
was enjoying the 'view'.
My head snapped up when I felt someone grab
my
ass as I quickly turned around to face a drunken
guy. He was another senior, not the most
popular
of the guys but he was still a football player. He
was a little chubby with reddish burnt coloured
hair, freckles and these piercing green eyes.
His
eyes were so red and bleary from the vast
quantities of alcohol he consumed.
"Excuse me!" I said pushing his hand away from
me.
"Awwww, com' on sex...E " The boy slurred.
"I think there's a game of strip poker in the
dining room. Umm,why don't you go join them."
"Nahhh!" He yelled before stumbling over and
falling to the ground. The beer that was once in
his hand smashed against the foyer floor. I
could hear Dorcas and Brandon laughing behind me as I ignored them and tried to offer him my hand.
"Here, I'll help you up." I insisted.
"Orrr!" He yelled arrogantly again, "I'll -hicup-
helps you'p downn!" He then grabbed my hand
before I had a chance to respond and pulled
me
to the ground as I fell on top of him. Dorcas and
Brandon's laughter roared out of control as the
boy's arms wrapped around my body and
squeezed me tightly against him as I struggled
hard to get out of his grasp.
"Liam!" Derrek's voice echoed through the
foyer as
he marched toward us with his arms full of
drinks.
"What do you think you're doing with Jane,
let her go guy, she's mine!"
I'm his? I thought to myself, I'm definitely not
'his', I am for nobody, I'm a person not an
object. I was going to start yelling at Derrek for
saying that. When Liam quickly let go of me and
crawled away mumbling apologies to Derrek, I
decided to let it slide.
"No thank you?" Derrek said as he grabbed me
by
my waist and pulled me up to my feet.
"I'll think about," I replied before turning to
Dorcas and Brandon. "Thanks by the way! My two best
friends stand by and laugh at me as I get
molested by Liam. I have to wait for the stuck-
up
asshole to come along and save me!"
Derrek chuckled, "Hey, I'm standing right
here."
Brandon butted in, "Yah isn't it fun to be shit
talked right in front of your face?"
"Whatever Dude, I'm wasted. I honestly don't
give
a shit." Derrek then handed me a red coloured
cooler, then handed Karis the same kind and
passed Brandon a beer.
"You're cocky like your brother, huh?" Brandon
shrugged.
"Anyways..." Derrek started talking again. That's
when I realized the music had calmed down a
bit
- we were actually able to talk without
screaming
at each other.
"I'm stealing Jane for a bit, you two go enjoy
yourself. Look around, get naked. I really don't care."
I looked at Derrek like he was nutty, "Umm,
don't I
get a say on whether or not I want to come
with
you?"
Derrek then looked down at me as if debating,
then finally he replied with one word "No." He
wrapped his arm around my shoulders and
pretty
much dragged me along with him. We went
through the dining room in which I really wish
we
hadn't almost everyone sitting around the table
had next to nothing on except one guy you
looked rather proud of himself. He must have
been winning most the games because the only
thing he wasn't wearing was his sweater whilst
everyone else had piles of clothes beside
them.
"Derrek, dude you got to get in on this!" The
fully
clothed boy called out. Derrek merely waved
his
hand dismissively to him as he brought me
through a doorway that led to the kitchen. The
kitchen was huge! It looked like it belonged in a
restaurant rather than a home. All the
appliances
were made of stainless steel that matched
perfectly to the black marble counter tops.
"Did you want another drink?" Derrek asked
me as
he walked up to one of the two fridges and
opened it. The fridge was full of alcoholic
beverages from top to bottom and nothing
else.
I was going to say no when I looked down and
realized my cooler had less than a sip left in it,
so
instead I said "Sure, same thing." He grabbed
another red cooler from the fridge twisted off
the
cap before passing it to me. "So what, you guys
don't eat around here?"
Derrek sneered, "Obviously we do." He replied
snobby, "the food is in there." He pointed to
the
other fridge as he rolled his eyes at me.
"Jane?!" A voice I recognized all too well
pierced my ears as I turned around to be face to face
with...my brother!
"Oh...Uh, hey Richard." I said nervously as I
began
to take giant nervous swigs from my cooler.
"What the hell do you think you're doing
here?!"
He yelled at me.
"Richard, calm down. She's with me."
Richard turned to look at Derrek with wide eyes,
I
could see the anger boiling up inside him as his
hands began to clench.
"Richard, stop it!" I yelled out, "I'm seventeen years
old!"
"No exactly Jane, you're only sixteen years old!
No sixteen year olds come to this party never
mind
my little sister!" He growled as I chugged the
last
bit of the drink down. "And what's that in your
hand?!"
"It's nothing!"
"You're drinking?!" He ignored me.
"So what you drink all the time!"
"I'm twenty."
"Yah and you drank when you were sixteen,
too!"
"This is not like you Jane, what has gotten
into
you!?" He demanded.
"Nothing has gotten into me, just leave me
alone!" I yelled at him as loud as I could, I
knew
everyone was now staring at us. My cheeks
began
to redden with both anger and embarrassment
as I
ran out of the kitchen. I didn't know where I
was
going but I continued to run knocking already
tipsy people to the floor as I passed.
I finally made it to a set of sliding glass doors
as I
opened them up and ran onto Derrek's lawn. I
was
guessing it was his back yard because I didn't
recognize it from earlier. I continued to run
down
through the grass until I couldn't go any longer.
I fell to my knees as tears began to burst out of
my eyes - I felt so embarrassment and so angry at
my
brother. I was already depressed about
everything
going on between me and Adams. All my
emotions exploded at that moment as I sat
kneeling in the grass bawling my eyes out.
"Jane...are you okay?"

NOTICE: I want to inform you guys that all other chapters I will be updating from 17 - 27 has some of the casts'name changed... This is due to the fact that some friends of mine whose names I used then were complaining... Especially on the roles I used them for... But you are still going to recognise this characters.

LOSS OF VIRGINITY: AN EARLY MISTAKE

CHAPTER 17

The sound of his voice instantly stopped the
tears from forming in my eyes, any thoughts
that were once circulating through my mind
had vanished. The moment I looked up and
peered
into his warm brown eyes the world around me
disappeared. Even with his right eye
completely bruised black he was still gorgeous.
I barely even
acknowledged the sudden rapid thumping in
my chest.
I roamed my eyes over every inch of his
perfectly sculpted body. I had been waiting,
wishing to see him all night but it wasn't until
that exact moment
did I realize how much I needed him, how
much I craved to be securely wrapped in his
masculine embrace. It felt like my head was
getting light as
if maybe I was going to pass out, that's when I
realized I had been holding my breath - I let it
go.
I watched Adams as he knelt down beside me.
His arm reached out as he cupped my face in
his hand. The second his skin touched mine, my
whole body exploded with goose bumps as a
shiver ran down my spine. Using his thumb he
gently wiped away the left over tears from my
cheek as I reached up and pressed my hand
against his.
His other arm snaked around my neck and at
first he hesitated for a brief moment before
pulling me closer. I could feel his warm breath
against my
lips and it smelt of sweet strawberries with a
hint of spearmint. The alcohol that was now
circulating through my veins dismissed any past
anger I had toward him because at that
moment all I wanted was to press my lips
against his and
taste that sweet intoxicating smell that was
radiating inside my brain and attacking my
senses.
I removed my hand from his as I coiled it
underneath his arm and grasped on to his back
before pulling him closer to me. Our lips were
now so close I could feel his lightly brush
against mine which instantly forced my lips to
begin to tingle. My body began to heat up with
anticipation - it felt like hours before our lips
finally met although it was merely seconds. It
started with light butterfly kisses, our mouths
moved in sync with each other.
Time seemed to stop as the world around me
had been forgotten. It was just me and Adams
at that moment and that was all I cared about.
The house
could have been on fire and I would barely
have even acknowledged it. The sounds of cars
driving and party-goers laughing, drunken
yelling and boats honking and all other sounds
that normally filled the night air of McLasgidi
had all disappeared from existence.
The only sound that seemed to reach my ears
were our individual heartbeats pounding
against our chests and our heavy breathing as
the kiss began to deepen. As Adams pressed
his lips
harder against mine, pleasure exploded inside
me.
The tingles that had begun in my lips expanded
throughout my entire body. The last couple
days I had built up so much resentment toward
Adams and self-loathing for being so weak. Not
once though could I deny myself what I truly
wanted, which was this.
I hated Adams after everything he had done to
me and deep down there was an unreleased
anger toward him but no matter how much I
tried to unleash it there was something else
fighting against the anger, something stronger.
It was something I vaguely recognized from
movies I'd watched and books I've read except
it was a feeling I was completely new to. There
was no
other explanation as I just then realized I had
truly fallen completely in love with Adams.
Adams hand began drawing light circles on the
back of my neck which automatically made me
shutter with sheer pleasure. My arm joined my
other one around his waist as I pulled him
harder against me leaving no space between
us. We fit together perfectly, like we were
specifically made to fit into each other's arms.
Even though, I could still hear a faint voice in
the depths of my mind, yelling at me to pull
away.
That this was not safe and I was only setting
myself up for more pain, more hurt and more
misery. Nice self-talk going on inside my head,
I had to ignore the senile bitch and go with the
pleasure principle instead!
Adams pulled away for only an instant and yet
that instant felt to me like an eternity. He
lowered his head as he began nibbling on my
ear sending
me into pure ecstasy. The pleasurable tickling
he was doing on my ear over powered the
voice in my head and silenced her. Stupid cow
she's
getting in the way of my happiness! I could feel
my hands clenching onto his back and could
faintly hear my moans of pleasure though my
mind had become nothing more than a cloudy
haze as I sat knelt in the grass enjoying every
electrifying touch from Adams.
"Wait..." Adams pulled away breathing heavily,
"We need to talk first..."
"Hmmm?" I sat there in a daze barely even
realizing he was talking. I didn't want to talk but
instead wanted to just feel his body heat
against mine and I didn't want the addictive
feel good sensations to stop.
"Jane," He whispered as his breathing was
beginning to even out. He hesitated, debating
on whether or not to finish his thought. I really
didn't care - I just wished he would stop talking
so we
could get back to what we were doing. "I need
to know, what has gotten into you today? I need
to know if this is a permanent thing."
"What do you mean?" I spoke softly. I was still
too distracted by wanting him and his
pleasurable heat.
"The new clothes? New attitude? Flirting with
Derrek and coming to this party?" His eyes
were full of disappointment, "This isn't you
Jane, you're not like these people, you're
better than this, than them."
The absence of his touch cleared my head as
the dreamy haze disappeared and I was finally
able to make sense of what he was saying. I
can't exactly
explain why but his accusation of actually
'knowing me' made me angry as my eyes
changed from loving to furious in an instant. I
know I might have been overreacting but the
fact that both Adams and continued to act as if
me
coming to this 'party' was like God hanging out
in Hell was infuriating! I was a teenager like
everyone else and even though most of my
sixteen years were completely isolated, I no
longer wanted it to be like that. I wanted to be
like a normal teenage girl!
I quickly stood to my feet which released me
from Adams embrace, leaving me feeling alone
and incomplete. Every part of my body ached
and craved for his touch but somehow I
managed to
hold myself together and keep my composure.
"This..." I waved my hands up and down my
body, "isn't me? How would you know what is
or isn't me, Adams? You barely even know me!"
"Barely even know you?!" Adams asked in
disbelief. "We sat on the cliff for eight hours
Jane and did nothing but talk. If anything I
know you better than anyone else."
I couldn't deny the fact that he was completely
right, which only made me that much angrier.
A guy I knew for barely even a week knew
more about me than my own parents did. We
hung out
for one night and I had trusted him with my
whole life story. He betrayed me the next
morning and as I stood there looking down at
him knelt in the grass those feelings of betrayal
from that
afternoon came rushing back.
"I don't care!" I yelled immaturely, "Just leave
me alone, Adams!"
Adams got up to his feet as he tried to reach
out to me, instantly I backed away from him
knowing the second he touched me all would
be forgotten.
"Jane, what can I do to prove to you I won't
ever hurt you again? I'm begging for your
forgiveness."
His voice was full of sincerity as he looked
down at me with his soft brown eyes that were
lightly shimmering with unshed tears. I could
see the
wetness that glazed over his eyes except the
tears never seemed to fall as he tried to keep
himself together. My heart began to shatter
into pieces as
I watched Adams beg me - I had never seen
him look so exposed and vulnerable.

Janey u beta bhave urself or else............weldone op.

LOSS OF VIRGINITY: AN EARLY MISTAKE

CHAPTER 18

I stood frozen on the spot as fear stirred up
inside
me. Even the curtains against the window were
dark and heavy blocking out the night's sky.
Again I spoke into the silence, "Is anyone
there...?" I stuttered out of fear but there was
no
response.
I was about to take a step forward when I heard
the floor board creek which automatically
made
my eyes begin to water. My heart was pounding
hard against my chest. I was so scared I wanted
to burst into tears. I already had a fear of the
dark
and being in here in the darkness with some
unknown person had me shaking and
hyperventilating.
"Who's there?" I cried out again - silence.
I didn't know what to do as my body stood
paralyzed in one spot, so I decided to try
screaming for help. The second I was about to
open my mouth a cold hand clamped over it
preventing any sound from escaping my lips. I
panicked and tried to scream but it was
muffled
against the unknown hand. The hand was too
big
to be a girl's so I knew it had to be a guy's.
Swiftly I turned around and was about to start
hitting him, but he completely overpowered
me.
He pushed me hard in the shoulder as I went
flying across the room and my head smashed
against something hard as I felt warm liquid
begin
to cover my head. Dizzily, I reach up and
touched
the thick liquid oozing out of my head and
instantly I knew it was blood.
I began to scream at the top of my lungs. I felt
his
hands wrap around my ankles as he pulled me
down towards him. "Shut up!" He hissed.
I tried to put a face to the voice but I was too
panicked to focus. Rivers of tears were now
flowing down my cheeks as I squirmed to get
away but his hold on me was too strong. I could
feel my strength fading and my body began to
shake with pure terror as I realized I couldn't
escape.
"What's wrong Jane? You can go around kissing
everyone tonight but me?!" He gritted through
his teeth. "I saw you with Adams on the lawn
and then Derrek in the kitchen. What about
me, don't I
get one!"
He locked my feet down with his legs as he
began
crawling on top of me. I tried to punch him but
he blocked it by grabbing both my arms and
pinning
them against the floor. I screamed out in pain
as
my wrists were smashed with force between
the
floor and his hands. My head was still pounding
and I could feel the blood dripping down my
neck
and soaking my back.
"Please..." I cried out, "J-just let me go...I'm
so-
sorry! I'll give you a-a kiss if that's what you
want..." I stuttered through my sobs. My
breathing was erratic I kept gasping but felt like
I couldn't
get enough air into my lungs.
A malicious chuckle came from him as he
began
forcing his legs between mine. "No, I want
more than a kiss."
I tried to keep my legs together, but he was
too
strong and heavy. I screamed out again,
wondering where the hell everyone was. This
was
supposed to be a party surely people had to of
heard my screams, why wasn't anyone coming?
I
felt so alone and scared and vulnerable.
"You had better shut up!" He threatened me. I
could tell he was growing impatient because his
voice was growing angrier. He was sweating and
his breathing had quickened but I could tell he
was also becoming excited.
He pushed both my hands together and held
them
above my head with his right hand. Even both
my
hands were no match against his one as I tried
pulling them away unsuccessfully. He spread
my
legs open when I tried to kick him away but he
barely even flinched. He was big and I'm not
talking about muscles, his round body barely fit
between my legs making it almost impossible
to
move them.
With his free hand he ripped the strap off my
dress exposing my naked chest to him.
Immediately I wished I had never worn this, I
wished I had never changed my look to try and
make Adams jealous! My loud sobs were now
mixed in with hiccups as I began to give up and
let my body go limp.
Suddenly his hand was at my throat blocking
my
airway, squeezing and pushing me down against
the floor using his weight to exert more force.
"Stop fucking crying!" He growled as his grip got
tighter and tighter. I tried gasping for air but
nothing came as my body began to shake from
lack of oxygen. I felt light headed and thought I
was going to black out. Stay awake I told
myself,
don't black out! I found the energy and the will
to
struggle against his death grip. I turned my
head
from side to side and bucked my whole body
bracing myself with my feet on the floor. He
grinned and laughed as he said "That's it Jane,
struggle it'll make it feel better for me!" He
moved
in to kiss me and I could look into his eyes,
which
were glassy and cold. I could smell his sour
breath. I felt nauseous as my stomach began
churning. I turned my head and he kissed and
licked the side of my neck.
He finally let go of my throat and moved his
hand downward as I breathed in sharply,
gasping
in deep gulps of air. His hand ran over my
breasts
squeezing roughly and pinching my nipples
making me moan in pain. He put his mouth on
my
breast and encircled the nipple before biting
down. I could feel his breath on my skin
making it
crawl. He paused to look at me to see the
terror
in my eyes. Then his hand began moving its
way
down between my breasts and inside the top
half
of my torn dress triggering an alarm inside me.
"Please!" I begged.
"I said shut the Bleep up!" Suddenly the black of
his hand slapped hard against my face as my
cries
grew louder.
The sound of something smashing against the
other side of the door made us turn our heads
toward the noise. He froze, his eyes wide for a
brief moment, and that was all I needed to
push
him as hard as I could. He didn't move very far
but it gave me the chance to wriggle free and
try
to get up.
"Open it dude!" I heard Adams yell on the
other
side of the door.
"Bleep, I'm trying to find the key!" Derrek yelled
back.
"Adams!" I screamed as I jumped to my feet
and
attempted to run for the door. The guy got to
me
first as he clamped his hand onto my arm and
threw me hard against the floor. I screamed
out in
agony.
I heard another smash on the door.
"If you fucking break that you're paying for it!"
Derrek yelled.
"Shut up!" Adams yelled back as he smashed
against the door again.
Suddenly, I was grabbed by my hair and
dragged
across the floor toward the closet. I didn't want
to
scream anymore because I knew it would drive
Adams mad but I couldn't help it. My loud
excruciating screams echoed throughout the
house. I felt like he was ripping my scalp off
my
head.
I tried to see what he was doing when I heard
him
open up the closet door but at the same time I
heard the deadbolt click unlocked as the door
swung open. Adams rushed into the bedroom
with
Derrek slowly tagging behind.
I finally looked up at the boy and saw his red
hair, freckled face and his chunky body. It was
Liam.
"You fucking bastard!" Adams shouted. It was
the
first time I had ever heard Adams swear. He
ran
toward Liam and punched him in the face
before
Liam even had a chance to react.
Liam smashed against the wall behind him as
he
slid to the floor with a big thud. He looked up
at
Adams as blood began to gush out of his nose.
"You know your little angel was fooling around
with Derrek not even ten minutes ago." Liam
stated with pure malice.
A look of hurt flashed across Adams' face as
instant regret wash over me. I had never felt
so
dishonest and unworthy in my life. I wished I
could just curl up into a little ball and disappear
forever. Adams' face quickly changed to anger
as
he kicked Liam hard in the ribs making Liam
scream out in pain.
"Bleep you Liam, you don't know shit!" Derrek
finally spoke up as he pushed Adams out of the
way. He grabbed Liam by his shirt and pulled
him up with little effort, "I told you to stay
away from Jane!" It was Derrek's turn to punch
Liam but
this time as Liam fell to the ground he was
completely knocked out.
I was sitting there looking down at Liam's
unconscious body while my own body was
shaking uncontrollably. I felt Adams' arms wrap
around me as I rested my head in his chest,
tears
streaming down my face.
"What are we going to do with him?" Adams
questioned Derrek.
"What can we do?"
"Well, she can charge him...Can't she?"
"Ha! Not likely, Liam's dad is one of
McLasgidin's most respected Judges and his
mom is that fucking sexy and sweet nurse at
the hospital."
Derrek said as he analyzed Liam's body. "Who
do you think they're going to believe? Liam -
the
son of two extremely respected adults or Jane
- the weird loner girl?"

TO BE CONTINUED...

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LOSS OF VIRGINITY: AN EARLY MISTAKE

CHAPTER 19

"I don't care whether you guys kicked his ass or
not, she's my little sister so this problem is
mine
to deal with!"
I woke up to the sound of my brother yelling
from
his bedroom into what I'm guessing was a
phone
seeing as I couldn't hear anyone reply. I
squinted
my eyes against the bright morning light
shining
through my bedroom window. My head
instantly
began to pound hard as my stomach rumbled
angrily inside me. My mouth was dry as I ached
for some water to drink, I felt drowsy and
nauseated.
This must be what a hangover feels like, I
thought
to myself as I pulled the blanket off me and
tossed it to the ground.
"Where is he?!" Richard's loud voice reached my
ears, "Is he at your house? He is, isn't he! I'm
coming over."
I looked around my empty bedroom trying
hard to
ignore my brother's hollering that was only
adding to the excruciating pain my head was
causing me.
"No? No! What do you mean no?!" Richard
continued
to scream as his voice echoed through the
whole
house.
I didn't know exactly who my brother was
talking
to but I definitely knew what they were talking
about. The memory of last night began to
replay
in my head like a terrifying horror movie. It
was all
just a drunken blur as if I was watching a movie
on a video projector with multiple clips
missing. I
was just beginning to crawl out of bed when I
saw a small note left on my bedside table. I
picked it up and began to read.
Jane,
I'm sorry I had to leave. I really wish I could
have
stayed with you... but I did wait until you were
safely sleeping. I will be with my parents all
morning but I plan to head to school at around
lunch time. I'm not sure if you are even
planning
on going to school or not, but I just thought I'd
let you know. I dressed you up in some
bedtime
wear last night, your dress was...well...ripped. I
took the dress with me, I'm going to get my
Mom's tailor to fix it up for you.
If I don't see you at lunch I'll check up on you
after school.
I hope you're alright...
Adams
I looked down at myself and saw that I was
wearing blue and red striped pyjama pants with
a
green t-shirt with black pot a dots on it. Out of
all
the clothes Adams could have put on me, out
of
all the matching clothes he had decided to go
with the most 'clashiest' outfit I had ever seen.
Instantly a small smile of amusement appeared
on
my face as I rolled my eyes and shook my
head.
"Fine! Bleep you Derrek, don't even bother
trying
to talk to me, you backstabbing prick!"
I turned my head in the direction of Trent's
room
my eyes widening in shock. I knew he was just
trying to protect me and that the horrible news
of
last night's events had obviously pushed him
over the edge but honestly I wished the yelling
would just stop. I wanted to get the memory of
last night out of my head though it seemed
nearly
impossible with him constantly yelling about it.
"I am not being immature!"
I dragged myself out of bed and began to head
towards my mirror, fearing what I see in the
mirror
would echo how I was feeling. At first I stood
there with my eyes closed, taking slow deep
breaths trying hard to gain enough courage to
just open them up and look at my reflection.
"Derrek...I told you not to invite her to the
party,
and what did you do? You invited her anyways!"
I peeled my eyes open as I began to adjust to
the
sight in front of me. My hair was a scrambled
mess on top my head as dried up blood matted
my hair together in dark clumps. I reached up
to
feel the slight gash on top the goose egg, which
had emerged out of my head. An instant replay
of
being tossed to the ground and smashing my
head made me to tremble. My left cheek was
swollen and discoloured as the memory of
Liam
smacking me across the face flashed through
my
mind. I could see the skin on my neck
darkened
into the shape of his chubby little hand as the
feeling of not being able to breathe came back
to
me.
"You're sorry?! That's it? Okay where is he,
Derrek? Where is Liam?!....Fine! I'll find him
myself, you good for nothing piece of shit!"
The sound of something smashing against the
wall in my brothers room instantly reminded
me of
Adams smashing against the door urgently
trying
to get in as I was being dragged across the
room
by my hair. In that exact second the tears
began
to gush out as I fell to the floor. All of last
night's
flashback memories were becoming too much
to
bear and my body marked with reminders of
the
events that occurred.
The past sixteen years of my life have been
boring and completely safe and predictable. No
real happiness or sadness, it was merely a life
of
neutral nothingness. I barely remember ever
actually crying although the past week it
seemed
that's all I had been doing. I never thought
when
the time finally came that I made friends that I
would want everything to go back to the way it
was. But I did - I missed the non-dramatic,
overly
boring life I lived only a mere week ago.
I laid on my bedroom floor my hands covering
my
face crying from my very soul. My cries grew
louder and louder as every second passed. I
felt
broken.
Suddenly my bedroom door flung open as I
turned
to look at my brother standing in the door way.
In
his hand he held the handset of his telephone,
the cord hanging loosely from where it had
been
pulled out of the base. At first I continued to
cry
though as my eyes settled on Richard longer, I
couldn't help but cough out a laugh.
He looked down at me with such a worried
expression, as if there were something wrong
with
me and yet he was the one standing there with
a
broken phone in his hand and a red hot face. In
some twisted way it amused me that he and I
were such a train wreck. My brother was
usually
so in control of his emotions, calm and steady
able to cope with practically anything. I just had
no reasons to feel any emotions before. Ever
since I decided to break out of my shell of
loneliness and join the real world I have turned
Richard into an overly protective brother, while I
seemed to be nothing more than bipolar and
depressed.
"Are you okay?" Richard whispered as he walked
into my room. I nodded my head trying to
swallow
the large lump in my throat. "I'm going to kill
him,
Jane." His voice was full of animosity.
"No...Richard, just leave it be...please." I pleaded
as
I began to get to my feet.
"But look at you; he can't just get away with
that!"
"But that's the thing Richard, he can." I walked
over
to my closet trying to ignore him. "Just drop it
okay."
"But Jane-"
"Richard, please!"
He finally gave up but not without storming out
of
my bedroom angrily and slamming the door
shut
behind him. I sighed heavily before going to
my
bathroom and jumping into the shower
attempting
to once again forget all of last night's events.
I decided to wear something a little more
casual
today, not the little kid-baggy outfits I used to
wear but neither was it anything like my
yesterdays outfit. I choose a nice pair of blue
jeans with a perfectly fitted yellow t-shirt.
There
was no extra skin showing but the outfit did
outline all my curves giving me a more natural
beauty rather than a forced one. My hair was
pulled back into a messy pony tail with strands
of
hair falling out and I decided to boycott
makeup
wanting to embrace a more natural look.
I looked in the mirror as a smile appeared on
my
face. Ignoring the fact that my cheek and neck
were bruised I actually looked good. It was a
more
in-between look and evidently I liked it. I
wasn't
overly trying but I definitely was trying a little
more than I used to - giving me a more
matured
natural beauty.
The sound of a vehicle peeling out of my
driveway
forced me to run to the spare bedroom across
the
hall to look out the window. I saw my brother's
Chevy zooming down the street as my heart
began to accelerate. I knew where he was going
and I knew it couldn't be good.
I ran back to my room and grabbed my phone
quickly dialing Richard's cell phone number. It
rang
and continued to ring unanswered finally going
to
voice mail.
Thinking quickly I looked through our caller
display to find Derrek's number. I knew that's
where Richard would be heading.
"I thought you never wanted to talk to me
again."
Derrek's voice answered the phone sounding
amused.
"I think Richard's going to kill Liam!" I almost
yelled
into the phone.
"Jane?"
It was at that moment that I realized that I
didn't
blame Liam for what he did to me, I blamed
myself. If I hadn't decided to change my
appearance and try to look like Tiffany and the
Crew then maybe Liam wouldn't have forced
himself on me. I had got so caught up with
trying
to pay Adams back that I had stooped so low as
to dress up like a slut.
The girls in McLasgidi that dress the way I did
yesterday are the type to give themselves
freely
to any guy. Liam was far past drunk last night
and though what he did was wrong, I still
blamed
myself for it. He did deserve to be beaten up
for
hitting me but honestly I did not wish death
upon
him.
"Did you hear me?!" I said panicked, "Richard is
going to your house to kill Liam!"
Derrek laughed into the phone which made me
realize why Trent threw his phone against the
wall.
"This is serious!" I yelled angrily.
"Calm down ya' grouch. No one's at my house
right now, I'm on my way to school and Liam
has
gone on a much needed vacation."
"What?!" I asked confused.
"Well, when Liam woke up this morning and
realized what he did, he decided to go visit with
his aunt in California until things...settle down a
bit. I think he knew your brother would be
going
after him."
"Oh."
"So I'm guessing you need a ride to school?"
"What? Oh...I didn't even think about-"
"I'll be there in five minutes." He cut me off
before
hanging up. Richard, please! Richard, please!

LOSS OF VIRGINITY: AN EARLY MISTAKE

CHAPTER 20

Derrek pulled up in his silver 2009
Lamborghini Gallardo; usually when people would see that car
they would stare with envy but I merely rolled
my
eyes with disgust. He looked over at me and
smirked before hooking the horn even though I
was already at the car. I opened up the
passenger
side door, gave him an evil glare before getting
inside.
"Nice bag." He said sarcastically while looking
down at my batman backpack.
"Shut-up and go!" I snapped back.
"Someone's P.M. Sing..." Derrek mumbled as he
pulled his car out of the driveway and sped
down
the street without even giving me the chance
to put my seatbelt on. I glared at him once again
before I pulled my seatbelt with much
emphasizes
and wrapped it around me angrily.
"Honestly Derrek, why is it you can be such a
complete dick."
"Ummm...Because I have money."
I couldn't tell if he was joking or not but either
way it still pissed me off. I looked over at the
overly muscular guy sitting in the drives seat;
he
had a snobbish grin plastered to his face.
Curiosity was beginning to get the best of me
as I finally asked the question that had been on my
mind for the pass 15 minutes.
"Derrek, why are you all of a sudden talking to
me and driving me to school? I'm not part of your
'in'
crowd so why are you even acknowledging me."
"You can blame Richard for that one. He wanted
me
to keep an eye on you, make sure nothing
happens..." He laughed but continued. "I sure
bleeped up last night, huh?"
I rolled my eyes at him. He was such an
inconsiderate bastard.
"I didn't know you and Richard were such good
friends." I finally said breaking the silence.
"There's a lot you don't know."
Suddenly a memory from last night I had tried
to
completely erase from my mind appeared. It
was
right after I had chugged half a bottle of
Tequila
and I was drunk...too drunk. The thought of my
lips pressed up against Derrek's almost forced
me
to puke right then and there.
"Look Derrek...about last night-"
"What part?" He cut me off.
"The...umm...kiss." I said as my cheeks flushed
red.
"Don't worry about it."
"It's just I don't...like you like that..." I
mumbled,
"What I mean is...That-"
He cut me off again before I could continue "I
said
don't worry about it, I'm not attracted to you."
"Oh right, your only attracted you older
women." I snapped back.
I had no reason to be jealous but maybe my
insecurities were starting to take over and I
was
hoping for some reassurance from Derrek.
Which, apparently I was not going to get.
Derrek laughed his loud hearty laugh, "and
where did you hear that."
"Hey, just because I never used to talk to
anyone doesn't mean I didn't hear all the rumours. Like for instants how you've never slept with any of the high school girls and that you only go for older
women."
"Like you said, those are all rumours." He said
nonchalantly.
"So what are you telling me you're a virgin?"
"Bleep no; I lost my virginity to Tiffany in 10th
grade(like SS2 here in Nigeria)."
"Oh, and she's the only girl you've ever slept
with?" I said with disbelief.
"Yes actually, she is the only girl I've ever slept
with." He replied truthfully. He turned his head
towards me while biting his lip as if he were
having a debate inside his head but then finally
continued. "I didn't sleep with her because I
wanted to either. I slept with her because I
thought maybe if I had sex with a girl, I'd start
being attracted to girls."
"What are you taking abou-" I stopped mid
sentence as my mouth dropped to the floor.
"Wait
are you saying..."
"Unfortunately, yes...I'm in the same boat as
Richard-Or should I say closet."
"You know about Richard?" I said in surprise
before
realisation dawned on me. "Wait, are you
two..."
"It's an on and off kind of relationship and I'm
guessing right now it's off. He was pretty pissed
at me this morning."
"Oh my god..." I managed to whisper in daze of
shock. "But you seem so-"
"Straight?" He finished my sentence. "It's called
acting...I act like a big dick head who's too good
for all the girls in high school, that way they
don't constantly try hitting on me. Well, aside
from the stupid ones like Jessica."
"Well, you're sure good at it." I said still
completely taken back.
"Are you saying I'd make it as an actor?" He
joked.
"Very good possibility." I said while smiling
back
at him. "Does anyone know...Like about you?"
"No." He said sternly while adding in the same
tone, "other than Richard and I'd like to keep it
that way."
"No problem; My lips are sealed." I wasn't lying
either. Even though Derrek was a complete
asshole (whether it was all an act or not I still
wasn't sure of) but I knew this secret was not
mine to tell. "So...If no one's knows about you
but my brother...Why did you tell me."
"I don't know...I guess I feel like I can trust
you."
He admitted; I smiled up at him in response. "I
can...Can't I?"
"Of course, your dating my brother so your
practically family!"
This made him smile but just as quickly as the
smile appeared it faded. "Well, I don't think
were
actually together right now..."
"He'll get over it."
"Hopefully..." He spoke softly as he stared out
the
windshield.
The silence was starting to become
uncomfortable
as I tried to change the subject. "So why don't
you and Richard just tell everyone you're dating.
Why do you have to hide, I mean it would be so
much easier for you two if you didn't always
have
to pretend to be something your not."
"Shit." He shook his head, "Not likely, we're in
high school doll. If me and Richard let any of
those
little immature teens know our real sexuality,
we'd be teased more than the band geeks."
I shook my head at him in annoyance. "You
guys
are all the same."
"What are you talking about now?"
"You, Richard, Adams... You guys care to much
what other people think; you are all so
embarrassed to just be yourselves."
"Okay, Adams has NOTHING to be
embarrassed
about." Derrek said while pulling into a parking
spot. I was so lost in the conversation I hadn't
even realized we were all ready at school.
I turned to look at Derrek and said, "Neither do
you or Richard."
With that I got out of the car and began to walk
towards the school, not once glancing back at
Derrek though I knew he was still watching me.
~
I watched the rain pouring outside threw my
classroom window as my nerves began to spike
up. Soon the lunch bell would ring and because
of
the weather the whole student body would be
in
the cafeteria for lunch. I didn't know what to be
expecting; whether Adams would act how he
usually did around everyone else or if maybe
by
some chance he really was going to change.
Either way I was scared for lunch to come and
as
every second ticked by my nerves continued to
grow.
I stared at the round clock that sat above the
chalk board at the front of the classroom as the
big hand joined the little one at the number
12.
At that same instant the bell rang loud
vibrating
in my ears as my body froze with nothing but
my
heart rapidly beating.
The whole classroom erupted with noise as
everyone piled out of the door hurrying away
for
their one hour of freedom. Both English and
History class had dragged by so slowly this
morning but now that it was actually lunch it
felt
like it approached too soon.
I slowly picked myself up off my seat as I could
feel my palms begin to grow warmer. I made
my
way out of the empty classroom as slow as a
slug
before heading to my locker. It felt like barely
seconds had gone by but I had already dropped
off my books and was standing in front of the
cafeteria doors.
I could hear loud laughter coming from within
the
room on the other side of the doors. Already I
knew the café was going to be unbelievably
packed and obviously Adams lied beyond these
doors as well.
"Okay stop being such a baby and open the
door,"
I muttered quietly to myself.
I inhaled a deep breath before pulling the door
open and entering inside the cafeteria, which
too
no surprise was completely packed.

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LOSS OF VIRGINITY: AN EARLY MISTAKE

CHAPTER 21

"Get away from me!"
I was half way to the Cafeteria exit when
Adams' voice reached my ears, I wasn't
exactly sure if it had only been my imagination
adding to the chaos inside my head but either
way I stopped dead in my tracks.
"Jane!" His voice came again; this time loud
and clear as any false thoughts began to
evaporate. I slowly turned around to see
Adams running towards me with Tabitha
tagging behind him.
"Adams! What do you mean? What are you
doing?" Her whiney voice made me shutter is
annoyance.
Within seconds Adams was standing in front of
me, breathing heavily while he tried to catch
his breath. I could feel every pair of eyes in the
room directed towards us in anticipation;
waiting and wondering what was going to
happen next. Even the few teacher supervisors
in the Café stood still with both shock and
curiosity.
"Jane, you need to stop running away from
me. What are you afraid of?" He finally spoke
once as his breathing became more even.
At first I said nothing as I was a little taken
back by the accusation but then my eyes
landed on Tabitha. "But what about you and
her?" I said while nodding my head to the girl
who was still trying to approach us though her
nine inch heels were slowing her down a bit.
"There is no Me and either, Jessica, Tabitha or anyone...There never was
and there never will be, honestly Jane. I have
never done, tried, or will do anything with her,
never."
"But-" I started to say but was quickly interrupted as Adams' lips crashed down on
mine in an explosion of pleasurable tingles.
I felt his arms wrap tightly around my waist as
he pulled me in against his hard chest. My
arms were hanging loosely at my sides as I
stood there in complete shock which lasted
merely a millisecond before I threw my arms
hastily around his neck and pulled myself up
towards him. Our lips moved together in
perfect harmony as our hands eagerly tried
pulling each other closer which was almost
impossible.
My knees felt weak beneath me though my
hold around his neck and his hold around my
waist kept me from crumbling to the ground.
His mouth tasted just as sweet as last time
though instead I could taste a hint of maple
syrup. His tongue was just beginning to find
its way into my mouth when someone's hand
grasped my shoulder and pulled me away.
That's when I realized we were still in the
cafeteria. I looked around at everyone as they
stared with their mouths dropped and eyes
wide. I could feel my cheeks begin to burn up
with embarrassment from our very public and
yet very passionate kiss. I looked up at Adams
as he seemed to be coming out of the same
cloudy daze as me.
"W.T.F was that?!" Tabitha nearly yelled from
behind me instantly forcing me to turn around
to face her while covering my ears from her
irritable voice.
"Tabitha, why can't you just leave us alone?"
Adams spoke sternly as he came to stand at
my side.
"What are you talking about Adams, you
actually like this 'little' girl?" She said while
emphasising the word little.
"Little? Tabitha she is 17 years old and far
more mature than you and your little groupies
put together." Adams snapped back.
"But Adams...Look at her, she isn't even HOT!"
Tabitha whined.
"What do you think you're hot? You look like a
cheap prostitute and well shit, you act like one
too! I'm sorry to break it to you 'darling' but
guys don't like sluts like you. Jane on the
other hand, well, she is unbelievably gorgeous.
She presents herself in a way that you never
could."
I looked up at Adams with complete awe, his
words making me want to wrap my arms
around him again but never let go.
"Uh! Whatever Adams!" She said while flicking
her wrist and putting her bare balm in his face.
If she was trying to act mature she was
definitely failing horribly. "And you..." Tabitha
turn to face me with her face squished up into
a very unattractive smug look. "Well, you can
have him all you want...You-dirty-little-slut!"
It was at about that moment when I could no
longer handle Tabitha's voice. Honestly, it had
nothing to do with what she was saying
anymore, I could care less what came out of
her mouth. No, what came next was because I
couldn't handle hearing her screeching, high
pitched, whiney voice anymore.
My fist had already been clenched since the
moment I heard her voice but I had been
trying
to control myself; I tried to remind myself that
I
won. Adams was mine and he didn't want her
not now, not ever, but a person can have only
so much control.
I felt my arm reach back before springing
forward in one fast motion as it connected
hard with her face. I felt something crunch
under the pressure as she flew to the floor and
began to scream loudly, tears began flooding
her face. "Sheeee brokeee my noseeee!" Her
voice yelled out instantly making me regret
doing it because obviously it didn't shut her
up, it only made it worse.
I felt Adams' hand lightly tug my arm trying to
get my attention. At first I just stared down at
Tabitha completely shocked at what I had just
done but I felt Adams growing impatient as I
finally looked up at him.
"We have to get out of here..." He said while I followed his gaze and saw the few
supervisors now advancing on us. "Like now!"
He grabbed my hand and began to pull me
which finally broke me out of my shocked
trance. We both began to run; hand in hand out
of the cafeteria and down the hallways. We
were running so fast and kept looking behind
us that we didn't even noticed the old Janitor
slowly making his way across the hallway.
Our interlocked hands ended up knocking Mr.
Charles straight on his butt as we flew by him.
"You crazy, crazy kids, with all your hyper-
ness jumping-jumpy inside you! If you want to
run...Go on a Marathon!" He yelled back at us
as he began to get up off the floor.
I felt bad not helping him up but it was either;
go to the principal's office with a phone call
home and perhaps suspension or be a rude
teen and leave the old man on the ground. I
had already punched a girl in the face; why not
add another something to my 'bad girl list'.
Next thing I knew Adams and I were
scrambling
into his GMC truck. The second we were both
securely inside with the doors locked we
roared into laughter though it didn't last long
when we saw a few teachers running out of the
School's front entrance. I watched Adams
fumbling for his keys inside his hooded
pocket.
"Hurry, hurry, hurry." I muttered as I watched
the teachers getting closer and closer.
They just made it to the parking lot when I
heard the engine roar to life. Quickly Adams
shifted the truck into drive and pulled out of
the parking spot and sped down the road. I
suddenly roared into laughter while holding my
stomach. I couldn't believe I had done that and
yet it seemed so unrealistically funny. Adams
looked over at me before he began to laugh to,
both our voices echoing through the truck.
It was a good five minutes later when our
laughter began to cease. I looked over at him
as I bit down on my lip. I still couldn't believe
what he had done; he had kissed me in front of
the whole student body and then called
Tabitha a slut. He had finally decided not to
hide his feeling for me and had made, what
ever our relationship was, very public.
"What are you looking at?" Adams looked over
at me sheepishly, a half smirk plastered to his
face.
I shook my head, "you surprise me, that's all."
"What do you mean?"
I looked up at him with a shy smile, "well...I
just wasn't expecting that...In the cafeteria."
"I told you, Jane. I'm going to change...I
don't care what they think, especially Tabitha.
You are the only person I care about and I'm
not going to be afraid of showing that." He
looked out windshield before adding,
"anymore."
I nodded my head as I peered out the window.
I
could feel my cheeks slightly turning red so I
changed the subject. "So, where are we
going?"
"I was thinking of just heading to my house. I
mean, if that's okay with you?"
"Yah, that's great."
~~
"Did you want something to drink?" Adams
asked me once we finally made it to his house.
I was sitting on the couch in his living room as
he stood at the dining room entrance looking
over at me.
"Just water is fine." I replied. He nodded
before
disappearing.
My eyes began to wander around the room; it
was big and yet completely cosy. There were
large window the looked out at their front yard,
the sun shined through lighting the place up.
Their couches were a beige color with
hardwood flooring and black glass top coffee
table and side tables. There was no TV but a
big portrait sat where the TV would have
been.
I turned my head behind me as I heard
footsteps coming into the living room. I was a
little surprised at what I seen. It wasn't Adams;
instead it
was Dorcas wearing nothing but a guys
superman t-shirt and underwear. I inverted my
eye brows in confusion as I watched her face
turn a different shade of pink. She pulled down
on the bottom of the shirt trying to cover her
bare legs.
"Dorcas? What are you doing here?" I finally
asked.
She stared me with the same wide eyes, "I
should be asking you the same thing."
"Yah, well, I asked you first."
The look of surprise on her face quickly
vanished as she ran over to me and plopped
down on the couch; still wearing nothing but
the t-shirt and underwear. "I slept here last
night." She said with a smile that reached her
eyes.
"What?! Tell me more...

LOSS OF VIRGINITY: AN EARLY MISTAKE

CHAPTER 22

I felt my heart sink as the whole world around
me became a little distant movie. I held my
breath as I stared out at the fireplace in front
of
me. I felt unable to form words in my mouth
as
Derrek's words began to sink in. -He never
made it to PH- The word's echoed in my
mind as thousands of possibilities circulated
through my head.
"W-what do you mean?" I stuttered as I looked
over at Adams with wide eyes. He looked back
at me with curiosity though I completely
ignored him as all my attention was directed
towards Derrek on the phone.
"I don't have any time for this, Jane. Just
come to Liam's house...FAST!?" His urgent
voice forced me to think of the worst case
scenario.
"Get off the phone!" I could hear my brother's
distant voice yelling in the background. The
line instantly went dead as my mouth dropped
and my cell phone fell to the ground. I could
hear it hitting the hard wood flooring as the
back piece broke off and scattered across the
floor.
"We need to go!" I panicked as I stood up from
the couch and began to run towards the front
door. I could hear Adams' footsteps running
behind me.
"Jane, Jane! What's going on?" He asked as
he finally caught up to me, grabbing onto my
arm; turning me to face him.
"R-Richard...We have to go!" I cried out; making
absolutely no sense. I turned to face the door
as I pulled it open and ran out into the chilly
night air.
Adams followed me and I could tell he was
utterly confused by the way he kept staring at
me like I was some run-away-mental-patient.
"Jane!" He yelled out, trying to get my
attention which, surprisingly enough worked.
I turned around to face him and even though I
stood completely still, my whole body was
moving at an unheard of pace. My heart
hammered fast inside my chest as my body
continued to shake with anxiety. I felt my
knee's weakening beneath me as my head span
out of control.
"What is going on?" Adams demanded.
I knew our time was limited and Adams'
constant questions were only slowing us
down. I rolled my eyes angrily before replaying
mine and Derrek's conversation to him. All my
words seemed to mix in together as I spoke as
fast as an auctioneer. I could barely understand
what I was saying but Adams seemed to of got
the just of it because before I could even
finish, he was already running towards his
truck.
Every second felt like a minute and every
minute felt like an hour as I jumped into the
truck and we sped down the street. Different
scenes began to circulate through my mind as
both Adams and I sat in the truck silently. I
watched as normal things passed by my
window as we drove; kids playing happily, cute
old couples holding hands as they walked
down the sidewalk, dogs running around in
their yards. Everything seemed so normal and
yet my life was the complete opposite.
I was driving to my almost rapist's house to
most likely find him strangled to death by my
brother. Just the thought of it forced my
stomach to turn as I tried to hold myself back from Peking. It really had nothing to do with Liam; I mean I could almost care less about what might've
happened to him.
No, all my worry and distress was for Richard and
only Richard. Honestly, I never really thought he
was capable of doing the things that were now
flashing through my head but then again, I had
never seen him as angry as he was this
morning. I closed my eyes as I imagined myself
walking into Liam's house; a complete blood
bath. Even though it was only my imagination
making these scenes up in my own head it still
hadn't stopped my stomach from dropping.
Liam's dead, motionless body lying on the
ground as Richard stood up beside him. A bloody
kitchen knife clenched in his hand as police
barged in through the doors. All of them;
looking over at Liam's body before charging at
my brother; taking him down to the ground
hard. As Richard fell to the ground, his face
would smash against the floor before erupting
in blood.
Instantly I opened my eyes, desperately trying
to shake the thought away. Richard wouldn't do
that, he couldn't, there was just no way.
"Jane..." Adams' soft voice interrupted my
thoughts as I looked over to him. "It's going to
be okay."
He reached over to me and tucked my hair
behind my ear. His fingers trailed down my
neck; the light touch of his rough skin against
the softness of mine forced the hair on my
arms to stand up. His fingers continued to
down towards my collar bone before his hand
landed on my shoulder. Gently, he began to
massage my shoulder as he looked up at me
with caring eyes; utter concern masked his
face.
"It...It's a-all my f-fault..." I murmured as my
eyes began to fill up with water. I closed my
eyes lightly as two tears trickled down my
cheeks.
Adams' arm snaked around my neck as he
pulled me in towards him. I scooted over to
the middle seat as I snuggled against his warm
body. He tightened his hold on me for a
second before loosening it; he began to twirl
strands of my hair between his fingers.
"How is it your fault?" He whispered quietly as
he let go of my hair and began to caress my
arm.
I slightly bit down on my bottom lip as another
tear trailed down my face, "If I h-hadn't tried
to
c-change...Then m-maybe Liam wouldn't of..."
My voice began to trail off as more tears left
my eyes.
"What!?" Adams staggered; his hand instantly
stopped rubbing me. He shook his head as he
looked out of the windshield with disgust.
"Jane, do NOT blame yourself for what
happened. It was NOT your fault...Liam has
always been a disturbed boy and what he did
was wrong. Very Wrong!"
"But-"
"No, it doesn't matter if you wore clothes a
little more out there; that still does not mean
what Liam did was right!" He growled
furiously, "even if he would have done that to
Tabitha; it still would NOT have been right nor
would it have been her fault. It was Liam's
fault...So don't you dare try to blame yourself."
He exhaled deeply, "okay?"
My face was gleamed with wetness as I shakily
began to nod my head. I looked up at Adams
as his crispy eyes began to grow soft once
again. He looked down at me reluctantly before
tightening his grip around my shoulders. He
then held me close against his own body as I
nuzzled into him.
"I'm sorry, I didn't mean to yell." He said
quietly.
A small smile twitched as the corner of my
lips, "I know."
He looked back down at me and smiled
sweetly, almost in a thankful kind of way. I
watched him as his head bent down slightly
and he pressed his lips gently against the top
of my head. The small-almost invisible smile
on my face grew as my cheek flush
ed pink. I fiddled with around with the hem of
my shirt before looking away shyly. Even at
times like this, Adams managed to make me
smile; it wasn't a large smile and maybe it
wasn't even considered a smile but either way I
glad he was here. I laid my head back against
his chest as I attempted to get as close to him
as humanly possible.
I cleared my throat, "do you know where Liam
lives?" I asked...

LOSS OF VIRGINITY: AN EARLY MISTAKE

CHAPTER 23

My heart stopped as I slowly looked up at the
house that we were now parked in front of.
Everything looked so normal; it was just your
regular house in which wasn't too big nor too
small. It was a perfect little cozy house with
blue stucco sidings with black roofing. Three
steps led up to the small porch which a cute
little swing chair sat beside the white front
door.
I took a deep breath before looking up to
Adams, "so...I guess we'd better go find Trent
and Derrek?" I whispered quietly; still fearing
what it is we would find.
Adams nodded his head as he turned off the
engine. I reached a shaky hand over to the
door handle and opened up the truck door;
slowly climbing out of the truck, being careful
not to fall.
"Hang up the phone!"
Instantly my body froze as Richard's yelling voice
reached my ears; he was inside the house. My
stomach turned inside me; there was
something about his voice that honestly scared
me. Suddenly my heart began to race as I
quickly ran towards the house not wasting
another second. I could vaguely hear Adams
running after me though I completely ignored
him as I ran up the stairs and reached the
door. I didn't even bother knocking as I
grabbed the door knob and pushed against the
door; fumbling into the house.
"Jane?!"
Once I caught my balance I turned my head to
look over at Richard. My eyes went wide with
complete horror. The whole living room was a
disaster; the glass coffee table was smashed
into tiny pieces, framed picture scattered
across the floor, the space rug was crunch up
and lying in a corner
of the room and most of the cushions from the
couch were thrown around randomly. The
whole living room looked as if a small tornado
had blown through and destroyed everything.
I looked back up at Richard. He was standing
there with his arm securely wrapped around
the neck of a chubby little red head; Liam.
Blood smeared across Richard's face, starting at
his nose in which honestly looked broken. His
hair was a complete mess on top of his head
and as my eye's trailed over to Liam he looked
just as bad. His lip looked as if it had been cut
right open and there was a small black bruise
already forming under his eye.
But that was definitely not the worst of it. I
looked back up at Richard as something finally
caught my eye...Something I hadn't seen at
first. In his free hand he was holding a hand
gun; the gun directly pointed at Liam's head.
Tears ran down Liam's face as he barely even
acknowledged my presence. He stood there
squirming against Richard's hold as he continued
to beg for his life in quiet almost silent sobs.
"R-Richard..." I barely whispered.
Adams suddenly was standing right beside me
as he began to take in the whole scene.
"Richard! What are you doing?" Adams' stern
voice echoed through the room.
I began to scan the room in search of Derrek.
Finally I saw him on the other side of the room
standing again the wall holding his hands up
in the air as if he were surrendering. He looked
over at me with slight relief as he mouthed the
words 'Thank God.'
Richard shook his head obviously trying to get
over the shock of Adams and I barging into the
house. "He can't get away with what he tried to do to
you Jane!" He said staring at me and only me
as he slightly loosened his grip on Liam.
"Okay, that may be true but still Richard, this will
not solve anything!" I finally replied once I
found my voice. I slowly took a step forward so
I was once again standing next to Adams.
"St-Stay back!" Richard stuttered as he nudged
the gun against Liam's head which forced me
to freeze. My whole body was not vibrating in
fear and worry; I couldn't believe my own eyes,
it was almost as if Richard had passed the point
of sanity. But I guess this was normal behaviour
for a brother who would risk his own life for
the safety of his little sister; he is my big
brother and pretty much my both my parents
in one. He feels the need to protect me and
would obviously go to any extent to do
so...even if it were morally wrong and
completely out of character for him.
"Richard, Please. The police are on their
way...You can't do this!" Derrek finally spoke
up though he didn't dare move an inch as he
did so.
The Police? I thought to myself as I began to
panic. The thought of my brother being sent to
jail forced tears to emerge in my eyes. I
couldn't live without Richard, he couldn't go to
jail...He just couldn't.
Anger quickly masked Richard's face, "Derrek, I
told you to shut up!" Richard barked back at him.
"Why are you protecting Liam? Do you have a
'thing' for him or something?" My brother
hissed jealously.
"No! I just don't want to lose YOU!" Derrek
cried back.
Richard stared at Derrek for a few my moments
as frustration and sadness began to take over his
face as he kept his eyes locked with Derrek's.
Instantly, I could just see the passion and love
they felt for each other; just by looking
between the two of them anybody could tell
how much they truly cared for one another.
Even Derrek; big tough, asshole Derrek was
standing there tears rolling down his cheeks in
fear of losing Richard. He stood there knowing
that moving would only anger Richard further;
staying still, he looked at Richard with pleading
eyes. I could just tell by his face expression
that he was feeling the same emotions I wa
s feeling. Not fear for Liam but fear of losing
the one person he cared about most in the
world; Richard.
"The Police?...W-who called the police?" I
finally butted in.
The second the words left my lips I regretted
saying it. Richard's teeth grind together furiously
as complete hatred grew in his eyes. "Liam
did..." He growled in a low voice as his eyes
looked down at the floor.
I then followed his gaze down to the ground as
my eyes fell on a small cell phone that was
now broken into two separate pieces.
"Oh Richard..." I whispered quietly.
I felt Adams' hand reach towards mine and
intertwines between my fingers; lightly he
squeezed my hand encouragingly. It was such
a small gesture but even so it was all I needed
to keep myself from falling apart.
I looked up at Adams as I watched his eyes
trail towards Richard; he held his head up high
as he shook his head slowly. I had to admire
him; he was probably the only one of all of us
who was able to stay completely calm in such
a hellish situation.
"Richard" He spoke softly but sternly, "you have
to put the gun down and let go of Liam. I know
how much you want to make him suffer but
killing him is only going to hurt Jane more."
"Yah!?" Richard fought back, "and how would
YOU know how much I want to make him
suffer?"
"Because I want to make him suffer for what
he did to her!" He said as I watch his control
began to slip. "There is nothing I would like
more than too force him to lay on the ground
and beg for his life as I rip his head..." He
trailed off as he realized his voice was growing
louder and louder with anger.
Richard chuckled, a laugh that honestly forced
the hair on my arms to stand up. He sounded
completely different and psychotic; nothing
like my big brother.
"Yes, because you CARE for my sister so
much...Huh, Adams? If you actually did care
for her you wouldn't have treated her like
complete rubbish...Your almost as BAD as Liam!"
Richard spat.
"Richard...Don't." Derrek said as he finally
lowered his arms.
Richard's words forced Adams to lower his head
in what I'm guessing was shame. I could see
the sadness on his face as he lightly bit down
on his lip. He slightly lifted his head as he
began to speak though his voice was not
nearly as firm as before, "Derrek, it's
okay...He's right." He whispered quietly as he
looked towards me as if he were trying to
explain himself to me rather than Trent. "I
made
a mistake...A few mistakes. I honestly had, still
have, strong feelings for you Jane, but I
don't know. I was being thick headed; a jerk,
an ass, a prick...There are so many words to
describe what a complete idiot I was and I'm
so sorry."
"Adams, it's okay. I know..." I then squeezed
his hand this time.
"No, Jane just let me finish."
I nodded my head as silence filled the room.
Well, almost everyone was silent aside Liam
who was still sobbing and now hiccupping as
he muttered something along the lines of 'Let
me go, please, please, please, don't, don't,
don't.' Honestly, I don't even think he knew
what was happening anymore.
Adams reached towards me as his cupped my
face in his free hand. "I know I was stupid and
immature, letting the stupid judgmental kids at
school rule my life. It took me a while but I
finally realized it doesn't matter what they
think...They don't matter to me. I could live
without them but I can't live without you."
He stared me straight in the eyes as he spoke so
sincerely; honestly, for the few seconds he was
speaking I had completely forgotten where we
were and what was happening.
"I was so worried about my reputation which was
completely stupid. I don't even understand
how I could have even remotely been
embarrassed of you. You are the most amazing
girl I have ever met. That night I brought you
up onto the cliff? I have
never in my life sat up all night long and just
talked; we talked about everything and even
pointless things like who would win in a
fight---"--Batman or Superman..." I finished his
sentence as I felt my lips begin to form a small smile.
"Yes." He slightly smiled back, "from dusk until
dawn; we just talked and yet that was probably
one of the best nights of my life. Also Stasee,
your real and you don't try to be someone
you're not."
"Aside from yesterday..." I said quietly which
made him smile again.
"That doesn't even matter...You're still the
best thing that has ever happened to me
Jane and I'm sorry it took me so long
to realize that."
It felt as if my heart had melted inside me as I
looked into Adams' chocolate brown eyes.
Butterflies had taken over my stomach as the
urge to jump into Adams' arms grew
stronger.
I wanted so badly to wrap my arms around him
and never let him go but I knew that would
have to wait for later. I then looked back over
towards my brother; his grip on Liam seemed
to have loosen a little once again.
"Let me go!" Liam's voice cried out as he
nudged into Richard. Everything seemed to go
into slow motion as Richard began to stumble
backwards. I even watched as his fists
clenched; his index finger slipped against the
trigger as a loud BANG echoed throughout the
whole house.
Everyone began screaming from
the loud noise as an invisible force shot me to
the ground. I groaned as I fell to my knees and
hands as my head instantly began to spin.
"J-Jane...I'm sorry. Oh my god, Jane!!
I-I didn't mean to!" Richard cried out as tears began
to gush out of his eyes. He dropped the gun
and ran towards my but merely stood up
staring down at me in shock.
I looked up at his a little confused. What was
he talking about, why was he apologizing. I felt
something wet on my hand as I looked down a
saw a small pool of blood underneath me.
Who's blood was that? I thought to myself, but
as soon as the thought came to my mind
unbearable pain pierced through my entire
body as I screamed out in utter agony. I fell to
the floor on my side as my hand reached up to
my stomach where it felt like my whole body
had been ripped in half. My entire shirt was
covered in thick liquid as my screams
continued to pierce the air.
I opened my eyes as I saw Adams kneel down
beside me; he was pulling his sweater off.
"You'll be okay, Jane. Stay with me, keep
your eyes open." He managed to say though
the tears that covered his entire face. He was
breathing heavily obviously not getting enough
air in his lungs as he began to full outcry.
I could vaguely here the sound of sirens in the
background but wasn't sure if it was just in my
head. "I-I-I..." I tried to talk but was cut off as I
began to cough.
"Shhhh." Even Adams' shaky voice seemed
distant. I struggled to keep my eyes open as I
watched Adams crunch up his sweater. He
moved my hand of my stomach and pressed his
sweater against what I guess was the bullet
wound.
I screamed loudly as he put pressure
onto the wound; it hurt so badly but I knew he
was just trying to slow down the bleeding.
"Jane, I'm sorry! I'm Sorry. What have I done!"
Richard cried out before instantly turning around
to glare at Liam. "This is all YOUR fault!"
"R-Richard don't." Derrek pleaded as I watched
Richard begin to advance on the chubby red
head.
Then everything got dark...

TO BE CONTINUED....

Uhmm... Okay, I have done justice to today's update...the next is tomorrow when you will get 2 more chapters before the final 2 chapters with Epilogue on Sunday...


Pls NOTE also that the next few chapters will be in Adams' narrative point of view...since Jane is.... Sorry friends... Goodnight.


I won't forget to thank you all for following... More importantly to you calmdove and lovelygurl... You are great people.

Kelvin3028:
Uhmm... Okay, I have done justice to today's update...the next is tomorrow when you will get 2 more chapters before the final 2 chapters with Epilogue on Sunday...


Pls NOTE also that the next few chapters will be in Adams' narrative point of view...since Jane is.... Sorry friends... Goodnight.


I won't forget to thank you all for following... More importantly to you calmdove and lovelygurl... You are great people.

U r welcome but aaaa. Omg i can't believe Richard shot Jane !!!

lovelygurl:



U r welcome but aaaa. Omg i can't believe Richard shot Jane !!!

Well, he did... That is why its always dangerous to play with a gun...

Richard and Derrek...........Homo
I cnt imagine, Jane dead not possible.
Weldone Kelvin

Plz cum and update kelvin

DanWrites:
Lost of Virginity? Please correct.

You guys won't quit right?.... You still don't get it... I won't correct that... I have known since I started writing this story, though it was a mistake at first but its becomes my style so I didn't correct it... And no one can pressurise me to do so now

[color=#000099][/color]nice story. Really luv it. at 1st i thought jane would date brandon buh still love that adams stood up 4 her at last. Cnt bliv ha broda shot her. Nice twist

Ds write is wao. Update for d continuity of D's writeup..u r gud bro.

Guys, am so sorry I didn't update this trend last night, totally my fault... I will be sincere, I was planning to update at 9pm but was already in the dream land by then...

Which is why you are gonna get 4 chapters today... am gonna start soon and continue till evening...
I know you miss the story, well I miss your comments too so keep it coming...

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...please Kelvin you keeping me in suspense, can't wait!!!