LOSS OF VIRGINITY: AN EARLY MISTAKE

CHAPTER 24

Like I said, this is going to be in Adams POV
As in 'point of view'
~ADAMS' P.O.V~
I sat on the hard plastic seats in the waiting
room of the Hospital. I watched as a small
family that consisted of two younger kids and
a mother sat in the corner carefully trying to
hide the tears in their eyes. Apparently the
mother's father was on his death bed and the
doctors had come to the conclusion he may
not make it through the night.
On the other side of me there was a bouncy
mid-twenties lady; her excitement and
eagerness made everyone else feel a bit
awkward. She was soon to be an aunty; her
sister was only a few doors down from Jane
and was in the middle of giving birth to a baby
boy. Its crazy all the things you can find out
about people just by sitting near them.
But what's even crazier is Hospitals in general.
A hospital can both hold the saddest moments
in your life and the happiest. It sees both
death and birth; at the same time an old man
is dying a new man is being born.
I myself was having problems trying to hold
myself together; since the moment Jane was
admitted into the hospital the doctors had her
in the surgery room under intensive care.
They wouldn't allow me to go see her and neither
would they tell me how she is doing.
Apparently they needed to speak with a family
member but her parents are unreachable at
the
moment and Richard is outside the hospital
having a mental break down. Derrek's outside
with him and trying to calm him down though I
hadn't seen them in the past half hour.
Everything just seemed like a horrible
nightmare. I kept closing my eyes hoping when
I reopened them I would be back at my house
sitting in the living room next Jane.
It never
happened though; I'd open my eyes to see the
saddened faces of the small family across from
me.
I had got to the point where I couldn't even cry
anymore. Before this week my whole life had
been boring and pointless. I never had any
reason to live. I had friends who cared more
about what they looked like than they di
d about me.
I had parents who only came
around to talk about my future plan and never
once actually asking me how I was doing. But
then in one night my whole life had taken a
complete change for the better; or at least
that's how it felt at the time.
I was laying on the couch in the living room at
Richard's house. I couldn't sleep so randomly I
went for a walk; I was just walking up the
stairs when I saw Jane leaving her bedroom
and heading towards the bathroom. It was like
it had been the first time I had 'actually' really
seen her.
She was wearing these cute little
pink pajama pants and a tight black tank top.
She looked completely breathtaking; even with
her bed hair and off balanced sleepy walk.
Curiosity had gotten the best of me as I made
my way towards her bedroom. I walked into
her
room and began to look around; out of all my
years being friend with Richard I had never
actually 'seen' Jane's room. I was a bit
surprised at what I found, I mean I never knew
anything about Jane but still when I saw all
her superhero comic books scattered across
her desk table I small smirk had appeared on
my face.
I had always been a little bit of a comic book
geek though it was a secret obsession I kept
hidden from all my 'friends' at school. I
continued to roam around her room until I
reached her large stack of C.D's; being once
again surprised as I realized she had all my
favorite bands. Most of the kids at school, well at least the people I hung out with
listened to hip-hop.
Jane had C.D's of Josh Radin, The Tragically Hip, Green Day, The Spill
Canvas and so much more.
I sat down on her bed and reach over for a
tattered little book on her night stand table, "A
Book of Scoundrels" but Charles Whibley. I
couldn't believe my eyes, how could she
honestly have all my favourites from my most
cherished book to my most listened to bands.
It was barely a second later when she walked
into her room and saw me sitting there on her
bed.
I remember waking up the next morning; my
arms had been securely wrapped around her
petite body. I had almost instantly jumped out
of bed at I stared down at her; she was so
beautiful but she was Richard's little sister. I
couldn't believe what I had just done; I
couldn't believe I had slept with one of my
best friends little sisters. I had rushed out of
the house without any explanation and
instantly regretted it.
All weekend Jane has been stuck in my head
and no matter what I did I couldn't get her out.
I went to a party at Derrek's house; where
Jessica and Tiffany pretty much stripped naked
for me but I still kept thinking of Jane.
I ended up leaving the party early and by myself.
I fell so hard for Jane but was in denial for
such a long time.
I had never liked anyone the
way I liked Jane and it completely scared me.
No one had ever had such a strong hold on me
and because of that I continue to run until I
finally realized I couldn't live without her.
When she finally forgave me and came to my
house earlier today I felt like my whole life had
been complete. Like this void inside me was
filled and I finally had a reason to live. But now
that reason to live was on the verge of leaving
me forever.
Like I said before; I couldn't cry. I didn't know
what was going on in the surgery room but the
worse case scenario was beginning to haunt
me.
The family across from me had been told
the worse news; a loved was not going to
make it. While the lady beside me had been
told the best news; her sister conceived a baby
boy.
I sat there in the same room with two of
the most opposite emotions surrounding me
while awaiting my news; whether it is the
worst news or the best news was the
unanswered question that froze my body
emotionless.
"No...No, not my Liam." I heard a soft voice
crying from the hallways.
I looked
up with curiosity as I got up off the hard chair;
slowly I crept over to the doorway of the
waiting room and peaked down the hall.
Alicia Smitten, a curly haired red head nurse was
standing a few feet away talking to one of the
Police officers that had walked in on the earlier
scene. The rather pretty lady who was also
Liam's mother had tears rolling down her
cheeks as she continued to shake her head in
denial.
The officer placed his hand gently onto the
nurse's shoulder in attempt to comfort her.
"I'm sorry Mrs. Smitten but he already
admitted to it." The policeman said softly.
"B-but L-Liam would never sh-sh-shoot
someone." Alicia cried. "Aren't you going to do
more investigating?"
The Officer sighed lightly, "There is no need
too. We caught him red handed aiming your
Husbands hand gun at young Mr. Richard. When
he was questioned; he admitted to shooting
Miss. Jane without hesitation."
"No! Oh, please...No. Liam...Not my Liam."
I turned around; not being able to watch
anymore. I felt both shocked and guilty;
shocked because I couldn't understand why
Liam had admitted to shooting Jane when it
was in fact Richard who had accidentally shot her
and guilty because I already knew I was going
to go along with that story; Liam being the
shooter. I didn't so much feel bad for Liam; he
deserved to go to jail for what he did to Jane
but I did feel bad for Alicia.
She had always
been an amazing Mother and far better than
most the mothers in McLasgidi.
I couldn't even imagine what this was going to do to the poor lady emotionally.
I had just sat back down on the hard chair
when a tall dark haired doctor walked into the
waiting room. He had been one of the many
doctors that had been going in and out of
Jane's room since she got here.
"Richard Raine?" He called out while looking
around the room. I jumped up to my feet as I
felt the quick hammering of my chest.
"He's outside...It is Jane? How is she?
Please, tell me she's alright?" I began to ramble
as I quietly raced over to him.
He looked at me skeptically at first, "I should
Only speak to a family member pls."
"Richard's not exactly sane enough to talk right
now. Please, just tell me! She's going be
okay...please tell me she's going to be okay." I
could already feel pools of water filling my
eyes.
He cleared his throat before motioning towards
the hallway with his head. I followed him out
into the hallways as everything around me
began to fade away and all I could hear or see
was the Doctor.
Once we were away from any
nosy ears he stopped and looked towards me.
"She lost a lot of blood." He began; instantly
the tears in my eyes broke free as they fell
down my face.
"But she's okay!?" I managed to yell out.
"For now. We have stabilised her and lucky the
bullet missed all major organs and arteries.
The bullet pierced right through the side of her
stomach and came out at her side. It was only
a flesh wound but as I said before; she did lose
a lot of blood."
I wasn't exactly sure what the Doctor was
saying; did that mean she was going to be
okay? She lost a lot of blood, what did that
mean?
I just stood there staring at the Doctor as
the tears slowed down for the moment.
"At the moment she is unconscious and
due to the amount of blood loss her
body went into shock; we've done
everything we could but we can't say
whether or not she will wake up."
"What?! What do you mean?" I cried out,
"what do you mean?!"
"Her body reached a high level of shock
called Hemorrhagic shock; it prevented
her cells from getting enough oxygen
which forced her organs to begin to fail.
Her body has gone into a coma. It is now
a waiting game; there is nothing more
we can do. I'm sorry Sir, it's in God's
hands now." Doctor said quietly, "but you
may go visit her."

Omg! Jane should be fine o

LOSS OF VIRGINITY: AN EARLY MISTAKE

CHAPTER 25

Three weeks later...

*Adams' P.O.V Continues*
~
I looked over at the form of a person
lying on the hospital bed.
I stood up off
the hard chair as I walked over to her but
as I looked down my eyes went wide. It
was Jane, but she was old.
Her hair was
white and her face was wrinkled; she was
still as beautiful as ever but she looked
nearly ninety years old.
I turned around
to look in the mirror behind me; I
reached up to my face as the mirrors
reflection mimicked my every move.
My hair was completely white as my face
slightly drooped down from years of
gravity and I looked nearly dead.
I coughed as I turned to look back down at
the sleeping women on the bed.
A doctor walked into the hospital room; a
doctor I had never seen before.
"Adams, we need to talk." The doctor
said softly as he looked down at Jane
then back up at me.
"...About what?" I asked fearfully;
knowing exactly what he wanted to talk
about.
"It's been 75 years Adams; she has no
family left anymore...We need your
permission to pull the plug."
"No, no...She's going to wake up, she has
to."
"Adams..." The doctor shook his head as
he glanced down at the old lady who
looked so similar to Jane and yet so
different.
"She is nearly 92 years old...
Even if she were to wake up, her
heart is already beginning to fail her; she
won't be strong enough to pull through."

"No, no...She'll wake up...She'll be fine.
No, no, no."
My voice echoed in my ears
as everything began to fade away.
~
"Adams...Adams, wake up."
I sprang forward as my eyes flung open;
my heart was pounding inside my chest
and my body was drenched in sweat.

I looked around the white room as my
eyes fell on Jane's motionless body.

She looked the exact same as she looked
last night, the night before and even
three weeks ago.
Her eyes were closed
shut as her chest continued to grow
before sinking with each shallow breath.
Her hair was its regular deep brown
colour as it outlined her perfect face.
I sighed with relief as I realized it had only
been a dream.

I shuffled around on the hard chair that I
had been sleeping on.
My legs felt stiff and sore from the awkward sleeping
position I was beginning to grow use to
it.
For the past three weeks I had been
sleeping on that exact chair every second
night.
"Dorcas is on her way over here...She was
wondering if you wanted some coffee."
I finally looked up to where the voice
was coming from.
My eyes locked with
my younger brother's as I quickly turned
to look at the clock.
It read eight thirty in
the morning which meant I had only
gotten at the most two hours of sleep
last night.
I groaned loudly as I rested
my head on Jane's bed. I couldn't be
mad at Brandon for waking me up
because even if he hadn't, my bad dream
surely would have.
"Why aren't you guys at school?" My
voice came out a lot groggier than I had
expected; I tried to clear my throat as I
watched Brandon bite down on his lip.

"Umm, Adams...It's Saturday." He said
each word slowly as if he were talking to
a mental patient.

"Oh. Well, uh, sure...Coffee sounds
good."

Brandon nodded as he began to head
towards the hallway while pulling his cell
phone out of his pocket. He hesitated at
the door way before slowly turning
around to look back over at me.
"Adams..."
"...What?"
"You should, w-well, you should really go
home and try to get some rest." He spoke softly.

"No!" I glared at him, "I'll be fine...And
I'm not leaving until Dr. Moore kicks me
out again."

I watched Brandon sigh heavily before
giving up and heading out of the room.
I turned back towards Jane as I reached
my hand up and brushed her hair behind
her ear.
For the past three weeks Richard
and I had been trying to spend every
second of the day here with Jane but
apparently the Doctors didn't agree so
much with the idea.

With the help of Derrek and his parents' money,
we did manage to bribe them to let us visit her
after and before visiting hours but of
course there were conditions. Richard and I
both had to take turns staying the night
with her; with me staying every second
night and Richard every other.

Apparently the idea of us sleeping on a
hard hospital chair every night was
completely out of the question.

They also had gone so far as to kick us out during
school hours; though in my opinion it was
a pointless effort. Even when I did
attempt to go to school; I couldn't pay
attention to what the teachers said.

Almost everything people said to me
lately would go in one ear and out the
other.

There was only one thought stuck
in my mind, one unanswered question
that haunted me both awake and
sleeping; will she ever wake up?
Jane still hadn't shown any signs of
awakening but I knew I would never give
up on her.

I would stay at her bed side for all of eternity if I had to.
The only people that were really there for her was
Richard, Derrek, Dorcas, Brandon and of
course me. Sure, Jane's parents had
obviously come home when they finally
found out the news but they didn't stay
very long.
They were here for the first
week but had to leave again for work. It
honestly didn't surprise very many of us;
both Jane's parents and mine were a
lot alike.
They were the type of people
who cared more about working and
making money than they did about their
children.
They figured as long as they
paid the medical bill; they were doing a
good job.
I sighed heavily as I placed my folded
arms on top Jane's bed and rested
head down against them. I peered
outside through the hospital window. The
weather seemed to mimic my mood; it
was pouring rain and had been like this
for the past week.
Water smeared across
the windows making it almost impossible
to see past the flooded glass.
Everyday
seemed to slowly creep by; I would stare
up at the clock as each second ticked to
the next.
I had probably missed more school in
the past three weeks than I had within
the whole year.
But a lot of things at High school had changed since the accident; one being Derrek and Richard
going public with their intimate
relationship.
Apparently after everything
that had happened they realized that life
was too short and ended up kissing in the
middle of the hallways during the
morning rush. With Derrek and Richard
going public with their sexual
preferences, Liam admitting that he had
shot Jane, Tabitha being humiliated in
front of the entire student body and me
becoming a complete loner who barely
showed up for school; the whole 'A class'
senior crowd had crumbled to the
ground.
Kelvin being completely homophobic began hanging out with some of the less known football players;
acting as if his ten year friendship with Richard never happened.

PLS HOLD ON, CHAPTER 25 STILL CONTINUES...

CHAPTER 25 CONTUINATION...

Tiffany and Sammy finally ditched
Jessica and decided to follow their own
dreams rather than being Tabitha's little
sidekicks.

Jessica still roamed the school
with her head held up high; thinking she
was the hottest thing since Megan Fox.

The good news was; people seemed to
envy her a lot less now.
Even with all of Kersha High completely
changing for the better; I still couldn't
manage to fake a smile.

I mean, sure, I was happy that everyone was beginning to be true to themselves. Also, me
finally stepping up and not letting the
judgmental teens of today's society
control my life had started some kind of
epidemic.

But I still couldn't gain the
strength to smile, not when the women
the love was caught between life and
death, in the dreamless state that
consumed her unconscious body relying
on nothing more than the Hospital's
computers and technology to keep her
alive.

"How is she doing today...?"

The sound of Richard's voice brought me out of my
thoughts as I turned to watch him walk
into the room and take the seat on the
other side of Jane.

I shrugged as I rested my head back
down on the bed. My hand snaked its way
towards Jane's motionless body as I
covered her cold hand with the warmth
of mine. I glanced up at Richard; he looked
horrible and yet very similar to me.

He had big dark circles underlining his eyes,
his hair looked as if it hadn't been
touched in days, he wore the same
wrinkled clothes from the day before
and even his body language showed signs
of complete exhaustion.
"So...Uh," my barely used voice came out
scratchy, "did you go to Liam's trial?"
Richard nodded slowly as his eyes stayed
locked on Jane. He cleared his throat,

"yah...The lawyer was a bit angry you
didn't show up."

I rolled my eyes, "Liam admitted to
it...They didn't need my statement
anyways."

"Well, apparently they did." Richard's voice
grew angrier as he finally looked up at
me.

"I guess Liam finally started thinking
properly because now he's pleading
innocent."

"What?!" I felt my heart skip a beat.
"Not that it really got him anywhere...
He had already admitted to it, so he was
charged as an adult with assault with a
deadly weapon, attempted murder and
unlawful discharge of a firearm.

He's been sentenced to ten years in prison
and depending on how Jane does;
years may be added on."

Richard finally finished and as I looked up at him; I
could still see the shame and guilt the
masked his face.

As much as Liam deserved to be
punished for he had previously done to
Jane, the fact that it had actually been
Richard who accidentally pulled the trigger
had been haunting him since the
moment it happened.

Every time he looked down at his little sister; tears of
regret would fill his eyes. Many nights I
had watched Richard waking up screaming
such things like 'I'm sorry' or 'I didn't
mean to'.
Countless times, Derrek and I had tried
to convince Richard it was not his fault, that
it was an accident and Jane would
never want Richard to be putting himself
through all this.

We could tell him a thousand times but it would never do anything; he needed Jane to wake up
and to forgive him herself, otherwise
he'd never be able to let it go.

"Coffee anyone?" Dorcas' soft voice
reached my ears as I left my head up off
the bed.
I turned towards the doorway as
Brandon, Dorcas and Derrek walked into
the room.
I tried to force a polite smile onto my
face but I could just tell by Dorcas'
sympathetic look that I had definitely
failed.
She passed me over one of the
two coffees in her hands before grabbing
a chair and pulling it up to the end of
Jane's bed.
Brandon followed her as he
too grabbed one of the chairs from
against the wall and placed it beside Dorcas.

Derrek walked around the bed and sat
down on the arm rest of Richard's chair.

I watched him as he wrapped his arm
around Richard's neck and tilted his head
against him.

I then turned to look at
Dorcas and Brandon as my eyes fell down
to their interlocked hands. I couldn't help
be feeling envious of the two couples,
they both managed to find comfort in
each other during such tragic times while
I sat at the bedside of the only person
who could have given me that comfort.

We all sat there in silence as we
continued to watch Jane's still body as
her chest grew and sank with each deep
breath.

Whenever I was alone with
Jane, I would usually read or sing to
her and even sometimes talk to her but
when all of us were with her; we would
sort of just sit there and watch her.

Small conversations sometimes would fill the
silence but with both Richard and I never
really joining in on them; they would
quickly die down.

I took a small sip of Coffee; though it
didn't seem to be helping very much
because my eye lids still felt overly
heavy.
I struggled to stay awake but as
soon as I rested my head against the side
of the hospital bed; sleep had consumed
me.
~
"Jane, please, please wake up. I love
you and I can't lose you...I'm so sorry,
this is all my fault and I just...don't know
what to do.

If you don't wake up...I-I just
don't know how I will manage to go on.

Please, Jane, Please. You are my baby
sister; my everything...and I'm so sorry."
Richard's whispering cries forced me to
open my eyes. I didn't lift my head up or
really show any sign of being awake as I
glanced around the empty room.

My eyes finally fell on Richard; he was still
sitting across from me but Derrek and
everyone else was gone. It was only me,
Jane and Richard in the room now.

Richard was looking down at his sister as
tears rolled down his cheeks, his bottom
lip was slightly quivering as he reached
up and brushed Jane's hair gently.

"J-Jane...Can you hear me? Please, you
need to be strong...You need to pull
through, I need you, we all need you."
He coughed out through his silent sobs.

"Please, you have to wake up."

I heard soft foot steps behind me.

"Richard...?" Derrek's quiet voice forced
Richard to quickly wipe the tears off his
face. "I'm going down to the Hospital
cafeteria."

"O-okay." Richard mumbled back.

"Come with me, please."

"I'm not hungry..."

Silence filled the room for a second
before the sound of Derrek's footsteps
grew closer.

I was starting to wish I was
still sleeping because it felt like I was
invading their privacy. Derrek reached
for Richard hand and I finally decided to
close my eyes.

"Your never hungry, Richard...But you still
have to eat." Derrek spoke softly.

"But, Jane..."

"Adams' here."

"Yah, but..."

"Please, come eat with me."

Richard hesitated for a long moment
before replying. "Fine."
I waited until they both left the room
before I opened my eyes and sat up
straight.
I looked back down at the
beautiful girl sleeping on the hospital
bed. I bent forward as I lightly brushed
my lips against her forehead.

"You have to wake up..." I repeated
Richard's words as a single tear fell down
my face.

LOSS OF VIRGINITY: AN EARLY MISTAKE

CHAPTER 26

Another Week Later...

Adams' P.O.V Continues...

I stared out of the Hospital window;
looking to the west as the sun began to
disappear behind the large mountain on
the other side of McLasgidin.

That same mountain was the place I had brought
Jane and somewhere along that
mountain was the cliff that I seemed to
find so much comfort in.
Usually when I had a lot on my mind, or when I just
needed to get away from reality for a
while I would go there. But apparently
even that cliff couldn't give me the
comfort I needed.

Every morning I would watch the sun rise
above the ocean on the east side.
Each time the sun would rise; so would my
hopes. A new day had begun and with
this new day my faith in Jane's
awakening would resurface.
But as every day came to an end and as I watched the
sun set in the west behind those large
mountains; it felt like a part of my soul
would disappear with it.

Each day it seemed to get worse and worse.
I would spend almost every day completely
emotionless; I couldn't remember the
last time I laughed...

Well, actually I
could. It was four weeks ago; right after
Jane had punched Tabitha in the face
and we were speeding off in my Truck.

The only thing that kept reminding me
that I was still human and that I wasn't a
complete emotionless psycho path was
when I cried.

I would sit at Jane's bedside;
staring at her motionless body,
praying and begging for her to wake up.

But aside from the few tears I shed
regularly; my facial expression stayed
neutral.
My strength to even attempt to
fake a smile had vanished; the only time
I spoke was to Jane and I felt like there
was a large void inside me. But I knew I
would never leave her and I would stay
at her side forever if I had too.

I turned back around to look over at the
hospital bed in which Jane laid
peacefully asleep.

I sighed before slowly
walking over to the large bouquet of
white lilies that sat on the bedside table
next to a cute little brown teddy bear.

My fingers trailed along the stem of the
flower as I inhaled the fragrant sent I
was beginning to grow so use to.

Every week I would go to the Hospital gift shop
and replace the lilies with new ones.

I let my fingers fall away from the
flowers as I moved towards the bed;
taking my place on the seat next to
Jane. I reached my hand towards her
before intertwining my fingers through
her small ones.

I rest my head on her
bed as I looked up to her closed eyes.

"How's she doing today...?"

I looked up to the sound of my brother's voice.

Brandon and Dorcas were standing in the
doorway, hand in hand, looking down at
Jane and I with sympathetic facial
expressions. I slightly bit down on my lip
before shaking my head slowly.

Dorcas let go of Brandon as she walked
over to the side of the hospital bed.

"Hey Jane." Dorcas said; trying to sound
upbeat.
"Me and Brandon are here...
We can't stay long because well, him and I
are performing in Romeo and Juliet at
the school today.
Yeah we both managed
to get the two main roles in the play."
I saw the shimmering wetness that
glazed over her eyes as she spoke.

Talking to Jane was always the hardest
part; for all of us.

Suddenly I felt Jane's hand slightly
tighten around mine as my eyes flung
open and I jerked into an upright
position.

"Dr. Moore, Someone, come
here!?" I yelled as water filled my eyes
once again.

I quickly glanced towards her
face; the feeling of her fingers still
slightly moving against mine shot tingles
through my entire body.

Her closed eye lids slightly fluttered as I
sat there in anticipation.

"Jane, come on!" I said with a shaky
voice,
"You can do it, just open your
eyes.
Please, Jane...I know you can pull
through!"

I watched her as her eye lids slowly
began to rise upwards. Her sandy colored
eyes soon found their way to me as tears
streamed down my face.

I felt completely paralyzed, all I could do we
sit there and stare at her as tears of joy
continued to flow down my face.

"A-Adams...?"

Jane's voice came out so
weak and yet it was as harmonic as ever.

TO BE CONTINUED O O O

waoh...weldone kelvin3028..I feel Adam's pain buy how come Liam was met with the gun

matie:
waoh...weldone kelvin3028..I feel Adam's pain buy how come Liam was met with the gun

Richard dropped the gun when he notice he had shot his sister then Liam had the opportunity to pick it for his safety, at that point, the police came in...

awwwww...I feel like crying

awwwwwww...I feel like crying

So touching tanx for d update

nice update....hmmmmmm am happy jane is alive

when is the next update @ Kelvin?

Oh! So touching... Thank God she woke up after sleeping 4 a month! Weldone kelvin

Pheeew, thank God she woke up

Americans and guns God save them

Thumbs up Kelvin!

Oh! So touching i had to comment (Ghost reader). Good work.. Be fast and update pls.. Harjibolar10 never see this one. Chai. You af miss.

Thanks for all ur comments and encouragements... I will update 2nite 'in jesus name'

Kelvin3028:
Thanks for all ur comments and encouragements... I will update 2nite 'in jesus name'

Amen

Amen ooooo

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LOSS OF VIRGINITY: AN EARLY MISTAKE

CHAPTER 27

NOTE: Yes..It's coming to an end. After this
chapter it will be the Epilogue and I'll
have the Epilogue up by the weekend. XD
*Tear* It's soo sad to see this story
ending.
I'd like to thank Each and everyone of
you who have been supporting me all
these months.. I don't know if I would
have had the motivation to finish this if it
weren't for all of you.. Thank you so
much!
I hope you like this chapter as much as i
did. Enjoy

And now Presenting..

BACK TO JANE'S POV

I was completely surprised I had even
managed to muster out Adams' name.

My whole body felt utterly weak; almost
as if I were paralysed.
I knew I wasn't
though, I could still feel the blanket that
was wrapped tightly around me but even
so, it was almost impossible to move.
Not only that; but it also felt like I
couldn't talk.
My throat was unbelievably
dry and burnt whenever I attempted to
speak.
My arms, neck and legs all felt cramped;
almost as if I had been sleeping in the
same position for days.
But it honestly
felt like I had only been sleeping for
hours and the urge to go back to sleep
was growing stronger by the second.

I looked up into Adams' deep brown
eyes as a few tears rolled down his
cheeks.
The corners of his lips were
stretched upwards into a large smile as
he attempted to wipe away his tears.
I couldn't understand why he was crying or
why he was holding onto my hand so
tightly.
"Oh, Jane..." He whispered out as he
pressed his lips against my forehead.
"I-I
never thought I was going to see those
beautiful eyes again."
It was so weird seeing him cry; in all my
years I'd never imagined I'd see Adams
Hurtz cry. But there he was, sitting right
next to me as tears streamed down his
face.
He continued to mumble things
that were completely incoherent to me.
I think he might have been saying
something along the lines of: oh thank
God, your awake, I knew you'd pull
through and just a bunch of other weird
things like that.

My eye lids continued to grow heavier as
I let them slightly fall down.
"I-I..."
I tried speaking to Adams; it hurt so badly
but I felt I needed to tell him.
"T-
think...I'm g-going...to go...back...to
sleep."
Instantly the smile on Adams' face
vanished as it was replaced by concern.
"No, no, Jane. Don't go back to bed,
stay awake."
The tears in his eyes
stopped falling as he held tightly onto my
hand; slightly he began to shake it. "Stay
awake, Jane. Please!"
I glanced at him a little confused; why
did it matter? Why did he care if I went
to sleep?
"B-But...I'm tired..." I barely whispered.
"No, Jane! You have to stay awake!"
He
was now beginning to yell.
"Doctor!
Nurse! Someone, please!"

Doctor? I thought to myself, what on
earth was he talking about?
Finally I began to glance around the room I was
in; it was at that moment when I realized
I was hooked up to some kind of Hospital
machine.
With a little more analysing, I
noticed I was in a Hospital room and
lying on a Hospital bed.

"W-What's going on?" I looked up at
Adams fearfully.
My pulse began to
quicken as fear and confusion mixed
together inside me.
"Jane! Thank God, you're awake." I
turned to see a lady with a light blue
uniform on, "I'll go fetch Dr. Moore."
The
nurse said with excitement before
rushing out of the room.

"Jane...What's the last thing you can
remember?" Adams asked softly.
I looked up at him before I began to
think about it.
It was weird; my memory
sort of seemed fuzzy.
The past week was
a bit of a blur but at the same time it
wasn't. I remembered Adams finally
admitting his feeling towards me in front
of our entire school.
The memory of our
very passionate kiss in front of everyone
forced my cheeks to redden. I thought
harder as the image of me punching
Jessica in the face slightly made my lips
form into a smile. I knew that wasn't
what Adams was talking about; I needed
to look further into my mind.
"-Derrek...He called me." I finally
mumbled though the memory was a bit
unclear; I couldn't remember why he
called me.
"Do...Do you remember anything else?"
Adams questioned.
That's when the memory came back like
a bomb exploding in my head. Richard had
made it to Liam's before he left to
California. When Adams and I finally
showed up at Liam's house, Richard had a
gun pulled out on him and I...I was shot.
I tried to move my arm, I wanted to see
my stomach but it was too hard to move.
My body was so weak but I managed to
move my hand to my abdominal. It felt
tender and was still slightly in pain.

"I...I want to see it." I whispered out.
"See what?"
"My...My stomach."
Adams nodded as he pulled the blanket
off my body, he slightly lifted up the
hospital gown.
I glanced downward only
to see a deep red scar; a few little red
dots surrounded the bullet wound.
My
brother once had stitches, so when I saw
the red dots I knew right away they were
from stitches.

"How..." My voice trailed off as I stared
down at the healing wound with
confusion. "How is it already healed,
didn't I just get shot yesterday?"
Adams slowly shook his head right
before a tall dark haired man wearing a
Doctor's uniform came into the room.
"Oh, she was right...You are awake." He
stared at me in shock, "Usually patients
don't wake up so abruptly...Usually they
show some kind of signs first;
I-I'm
shocked."
"W-What on earth is going on?" I finally
demanded.
The doctor walked over to the machinery
I was hooked up to but didn't reply.
When he finally turned towards me;
instead of answering my question he
began bombarding me with his own;
How
old are you?
What is your name?
What is
today's date?
What is your address?
What
are your parents' names?
What is the last
thing you remember?
The list went on
and on, and as he was asking all these
questions, Adams quickly sneaked out of
the room.
I could see him through the
crack in the door as he paced back and
forth while talking on his cell phone.
I looked back up at the Doctor and I tried
to answer the questions as best as I
could. I noticed the more I talked the
more my voice grew stronger. I had
answered every question right aside
from the 'What is today's date?'
Apparently I had been in a Coma for four
entire weeks. When he told me that I
sort of just laid there staring up at him.
It felt like I had barely been sleeping for
a few hours, although it did explain why
the stitches in my stomach had already
been removed and also why my whole
body was so weak and cramped up. But
even so, it was still a little bit of a
shocker.
I looked up as Adams walked back into
the room, "I just called your brother;
he's on his way over."
"Richard?" I gasped with excitement.

LOSS OF VIRGINITY: AN EARLY MISTAKE

EPILOGUE

NOTE: I won't say pretty much here and now, I will leave the whole appreciation to my next update which is author's note...

PRESENTING NOW...

I was sitting in the passenger's seat of
Adams' GMC truck as we pulled up to
the front doors of my house.
It had never felt so good to finally be home.

After being at the Hospital for six weeks
(two of which I was awake) home felt
more like heaven where as the hospital
was my hell.
Two weeks of constant
physiotherapy and even mental therapy
had completely worn me out.
Luckily, my recovery had been a lot quicker than
most peoples and being released after
only two weeks after waking up from a
month long coma was miracle in itself.

I looked up into the windows of my
house as I noticed that all the lights were
out which indicated my parents weren't
home. I had talked to them about three
times since I had woken up.
They said they loved me and that they wished they
were there for me, they said to get
better and hopefully they would be able
to make it home sometime soon.
This would probably upset most teenagers;
finding out that you had been in a coma
for a month and your parents were only
there for one week. Or that once you
finally did wake up, they were too busy
'working' to even come and see you. But it honestly didn't bug me, I didn't need them.

At this point in my life, I actually know people who cared about me and were there for me and they were all I needed.
"Home sweet home." Adams' husky
voice reached my ears as I turned my
head towards him.
A small encouraging smile sat crookedly on his face.
"Thank God," I smiled back. "I swear, if I had to have one more bite of that disgusting Hospital Jell-O, I would have..." I scowled while shaking my head,
unable to think of a proper word to
describe what I'd do.
Adams laughed, "Hey, that food didn't
look so bad."

I rolled my eyes and was just about to
glare at him when I caught a glimpse of
something in the rear view mirror.

Instantly my eyes lit up as I watch Richard's
72 Chevy pickup pull into the driveway
with both Richard and Derrek sitting inside it.
Behind them was Brandon's black
S.U.V and although the windows were
fiercely tinted I could still manage to see
Dorcas' sitting in the passenger's seat with
Brandon driving.
I heard Adams slightly chuckle at me.
"What?" I questioned.
"Nothing." He said as he continued to
smile, "Here, let me get your door for you."

I watch Adams as he jumped out of his
truck and came over to my side of the
Vehicle.
He opened the door for me
before offering me his hand to take.
"It's a miracle!" Dorcas yelled from
Brandon's SUV.
She had the door opened
and was leaning over the frame of it.
"She can walk!" I watched her as she fully
jumped out of the vehicle and began to
run towards me.
All the guys were slowly getting out of
their vehicles and walking up towards the
house while Dorcas bounced happily to me
within seconds.
Of course she had seen
me almost every day since I'd woken up
but I guess finally seeing me out of the
hospital, made her all hyper and excited.
I couldn't blame her because honestly, I
was pretty excited to be out of there as
well.
As Dorcas' small arms wrapped around my
body and pulled me into a tight embrace,
I winced.
Her stomach pressed against my own which put pressure against the bullet wound.

"Be careful short-stuff..." Darrek said in
his low, cool voice. "She may be walking
but she did just get shot a little over a
month ago."
I could just barely see Richard behind
Derrek but at the mention of me being
shot I did noticed how he lowered his
head.
Even after two weeks of me constantly forgiving Richard, saying that obviously he didn't mean to and that it had been an accident, he still hadn't fully
forgiven himself.
I knew that it was going to take some time before Richard came to terms with it and nothing I could say
would speed up the process anymore.
"Oh, my God." Dorcas exclaimed as she pulled away remorsefully.
"Sorry Jane...I guess I wasn't really think about that."
I smiled almost immediately as I
wrapped my left side arm around her
neck and pulled her into a small hug,
careful not to press my right side
stomach against anything. "Don't worry,
it's just a little scratch." I said with a
smirk.
"Alright, kids, let's take this party inside."
Richard teased.
He walked up to the front
door and began to unlock it as everyone
else followed him into the house.
Once we were all scattered around the
living room, Richard disappeared into the
kitchen to fetch everyone some drinks. I
sat on one of love seat sofas with
Adams, although I had to carefully
position myself onto my left side.
Brandon sat across from us on a
matching chair with Dorcas resting on the
arm rest lazily.
"Maybe I'll go help Richard out." Derrek finally broke the silence as he got up off the other love-seat and headed towards the kitchen.
I then seemed to let my mind wonder over to school and all the days I've missed, luckily it was Friday and I
wouldn't have to go back to school for another three days.
Also the teachers seemed to let my six weeks off also
count as the suspension I should have received for punching Jessica in the face.
Apparently most of the teachers at school weren't very fond of her either so they tried to give me the most minimal punishment.
But even though I would be going back to school as soon as the weekend ended the amount of
catching up I'd have to do was already
stressing me out to the max.
"Jane?" Adams spoke softly as he
reached for my face and lightly brushed
his hand along my cheek.
I felt my stomach begin to flutter.
"Are you okay?"
Once Adams' hand pulled away from my face the dreamy state he always caused my body to transform into slowly vanished away.
"Huh?" I murmured before I realized what he had actually asked me.
"Oh...Uh, yah I'm fine. Just a little stressed out about school, I guess."
I heard Brandon laugh from across the room as I jerked my head towards him.
"Did I say something funny?" I asked him
skeptically.
"Kinda." He finally replied. "Jane, you are ahead of everyone in class...Hell, you're ahead of me and Dorcas. You don't have any catching up to do, but at last the entire class has caught up to you."
Dorcas giggled,
"Jane, He's right." She said as she ran her fingers through Brandon's deep brown curly hair.
"You'll be ahead of everyone in a week or so...Well,
unless Mr. Adams over there distracts you
too much."
It was about three hours later when everyone finally left, leaving me and Adams alone in my big empty house.
I just finished waving goodbye to Derrek and Richard who were now speeding down the street.
I stood at the front door as I watched the truck disappear out of sight.
Derrek had decided that because today was their one month 'out of the closet' anniversary, he was going to bring Richard somewhere special. Richard had been a
little skeptical at first seeing as I had just returned home from the hospital today.
But after about a half hour of convincing
him it was alright and that I'd be fine here with Adams, him and Derrek bounced out the doors like a couple of seven year old kids heading to an
amusement park.

Brandon and Dorcas had left about twenty
minutes before my brother. Brandon nearly had to drag Dorcas out of the door and I'm sure they managed to be at least ten minutes late for their "Romeo and Juliet" rehearsal. Luckily, I highly
doubted either of them would get so
much as a slap on the wrist because from what I heard, Ms. Sherman, the drama teacher, favours Brandon and Dorcas like they were her very own children.
"Are you planning on standing out there all night?" Adams called to me from the living room.

"So, what if I am?" I answered back while walking back into the house and toward the living room.

Once I entered into the room I looked to my left where I found Adams leaning lazily against the piano.

His smile brought up both sides of his mouth, and a dimple surfaced.
I could feel my insides melting as I watched the way his eyes locked with mine just before his facial expression softened.

It wasn't very hard to acknowledge the fact that this was the first time Adams and I had actually been alone, like really alone since our time on the cliff.

Even at the hospital, it would almost seem like
we had privacy but the second the thought ever came to mind, someone would open the door and 'check in' on us.

But now, here we stood in my empty house, completely alone with nothing but the sound of our breathing to fill the silence.

I could feel my knees as they began to weaken beneath me. I took a small step away from him in an attempt to keep myself from tumbling to the ground.
Soon, I found myself standing up against the back of the couch staring at Adams as he pulled himself away from the Piano and took a step closer to me. I felt my
pulse edge up a degree as he dipped his head so his mouth was at my ear.

"Do you want me to leave?" He whispered as his warm breath tickled against my skin.

His hands reached up towards my face before slowly making his way down my body. Barely touching me, and yet grazing the skin enough to force me to
arch my back as a small moan escaped my lips.

He roamed his way down to my thighs and then back up towards the buttons on my jeans. Slowly he began to undo them as my hands fell down to his
chest. I held myself up as he gently pulled off my jeans and underwear, which left me sitting there completely naked.
I slid my hands down his body until I reached the beginning of his jeans, fumbling to get them undone.
Once we were both naked Adams wrapped his arms around my waist and rolled me back over so he was once again lying on top of me.

"Are you sure you want to do this?" He breathed heavily.
I smiled admiringly at him before whispering,
"I've never been so sure of anything in my entire life."

The first time we had done this was absolutely nothing compared to this time, that was AN EARLY MISTAKE. Everything was so much more delicate, more passionate, and just plain better now. This time it felt right.
~*~
I looked over at Adams who was now lying on my bed wearing nothing but a pair of boxer shorts. He was on his side, resting his head in his hand as he
watched me get dressed.
I pulled on a pair of black boy-shorts underwear before reaching for Adams' black 'John Deere" t-shirt and pulling it over my head.
I completely drowned into his shirt and yet it was probably one of the comfiest things I'd ever worn.

As I peered over at Adams again, I noticed a smile smirk had taken over his face and I couldn't help but notice a hint of amusement in his eyes.

"What?" I finally asked as I placed my hands on my hips and waited for his answer.

"You look so cute in my t-shirt." He finally replied as a bashful smile grew on my face.

I was just about to look away shyly when he suddenly pulled me onto the bed with him. I yelled out aloud
which soon was followed by giggles.
He rolled me over him and placed me on the other side of the bed as he hovered over me.
His eyes scaled my body before meeting my own gaze.

Just lying there, staring into his deep brown eyes made me feel warm inside. I never wanted this
to go away, I wish this moment could last forever.
I knew it was getting late and my eyes constantly tried to remind me of how tired I was.
But I didn't want to go to sleep, lying in bed with Adams at my side was better than any dream ever
could be.
I wished I could just stay awake and never let the moment end.

"Adams..." I finally whispered out.

"Yah?"

"Can you promise my something?" I bit my bottom lip.

"Depends...?" He said skeptically,

although he held a smile on his face that said,

'I'd do anything for you.'

"Can you promise me that when I wake up in the morning...You'll still be here?"

This actually made him chuckle. I was lying there trying to have a serious conversation with him and he was laughing at me.
"Jane..." He began as he dipped his head lower towards me, complete seriousness took over his tone.
"I'm sorry to break it to you...But you're officially never getting rid of me." He then closed in the small gap that separated mine and his lips.

Tenderly, he pressed his lips against mine which
caused my stomach to do somersaults.

In my heart, I thought of losing my VIRGINITY to him over and over again.

FADE OUT

Watch out for the author's appreciation note tomorrow... Thank you all.

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