his praises all sugar coated and sweet

u are the most beautiful,he says

and turns to the other gurl

"u too are beautiful , my dear"

my black sisi am fondly called

she's yellow sisi as soon as i turn

skin, like that of the yellow paw paw

lips as sucullent as the sweetest orange

eyes shinier than a miliion stars

buttocks fuller than the fat woman's

waist slimmer than a bamboo stick

so convincing.

yet he lies thru hes teeth

all deceit,candy coated lips

mr double talk.

dont believe his lies

even if he swears to the skies

he'll butter u up on both sides

but if ur smart enough

take every word with a pinch of salt

the king of lies

flee from him n be wise,

I say WORD.

Good poem, did u write it?

_{P.S: A little bit of compliment doesn't hurt anyone. Accept the compliments, just dnt let it get inside your head.} 

first of all, how have u been girlie, been missing in action on nairaland, missed ur posts.

yeah i wrote it!!!!

thnx for the feedback.

much luv!

that piece is a load of bullshit.i advice that u take up a poetry lesson.better luck next time.

some nice/crazy shiiiiiiit you got here

Very good satirical poem and would be best for performance poetry. But it reads like an uncompleted work.

Add more pepper and salt.

Lies never end.

damn roght male lies never end

@ laide, yeah i have been good. Ohh my sister, i've been and I'm too busy to be a post LovePeddler.

Ohh u wrote it? Good one girl. How u been?

nice stuff