thats inventive if u can do dt as well as write it wud b ok, if not stick 2 d writing

MzNelly:
I don't mean narrating the story o

I mean the characters saying their part, the action and everything

So you can get a better feel of it.

I foor one prefer the written words... words tell a story more beautifully if they are read... gives the brain more room to be imaginative in picturing the story being told.

MzNelly:
The reason I'm updating slowly is because I'm recording the story.
Rather than writing, I'm thinking of just recording it and having you guys listen to it.
What do you think? Do you prefer the write ups or the audio to download and listen?

I will prefer to listen to ur radiant voice, ma luv.

I agree wit d point made by daxlasaint. Reading nd imagining makes it all more interesting

Zeeenas:
I agree wit d point made by daxlasaint. Reading nd imagining makes it all more interesting

Thank you ever so much

MzNelly:

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"Why did you do it?" Biebi asked as she sat opposite her bruised and battered brother.
"I needed a jersey" He said, looking down at his feet. She slapped him hard on his face, without thinking about it.
"Yes, I might be a prôstitute, but I do it for you two. I do it so you don't ever lack, so you can get the education that I never did! So you won't have to steal!! This is a slap in the face! How dare you, Alex Oyibo Izogie!" Oyibo rubbed his cheek and frowned.
"If you don't have any morals, then why should I? I wanted the Jersey and I didn't want to take any out of your ashewo money" Biebi gasped at how his words stung.
"Your sister was dying, Oyibo. She was dying, I couldn't do anything. I had no money. I had no one. What did you want from me? I couldnt steal.
I watched you too starving. WHAT DID YOU WANT FROM ME?!
You think it was fun for me? Losing my virginity to an overweight pig old enough to be my father? You think I wanted that life?! I had no choice!
It was the devil or the deep blue sea...
I-" She paused and wiped her tears. "But... It's good to know you don't appreciate my sacrifices. That you think of me as dirty and a prostîtute. It's good to know, Oyibo."
"I'm....sorry" He mumbled, looking morose.
"No, don't be. But lemme tell you something Oyibo, I would do it again. Over and over again. Because I can't watch the both of you suffer. I'd rather just die"

Someone pulezzzz get me a handkerchief

Iffa hear say oyinbo nor receive sense after hearing all dese, make dem kukuma sell am buy mannequin.

lovelygurl:
Doye fine o

See this wan don pour spit all ova doye pishure

MzNelly:
[size=15pt]Thanks for the compliments, guys. You're the only reason I'm writing.
Thank you Lekan. [/size]

U welcome dear

Been quite busy so I just read all your updates and its excellente!!!!

Me likey the introduction of faces to the characters. Makes the story come alive.

I think you should also go on with the recording, but that's a lotta work tho. Getting thespians that can effectively communicate like the characters you are trying to portray. I sure would love to listen to it when you are done.

Chaii see beibi's curves . Oh lawwdddd have mercyyyy

kinglekan:


U welcome dear

Been quite busy so I just read all your updates and its excellente!!!!

Me likey the introduction of faces to the characters. Makes the story come alive.

I think you should also go on with the recording, but that's a lotta work tho. Getting thespians that can effectively communicate like the characters you are trying to portray. I sure would love to listen to it when you are done.

Chaii see beibi curves . Oh lawwdddd have mercyyyy

Lmao, you're crazy.

I even thought you stopped reading sef

"Make dem sell am buy mannequin"
Lmfao You're not okay

Thanks for stopping by, as usual

MzNelly:

U didn't see ma mention?

Wetin dey worry u?

Emodeee:


U didn't see ma mention?

Wetin dey worry u?

Lol, sorry

How far?

MzNelly:


Lol, sorry

How far?

I'm good, ma luv. Hp u r working on doing an audio version, it's gonna ba nice. That lovely voice of nelly, I wanna hear it.

Emodeee:


I'm good, ma luv. Hp u r working on doing an audio version, it's gonna ba nice. That lovely voice of nelly, I wanna hear it.

I'm not gonna be the one acting it.

I'll just direct.

Emodeee:


I'm good, ma luv. Hp u r working on doing an audio version, it's gonna ba nice. That lovely voice of nelly, I wanna hear it.

Hmmm emodee. You've seen another 'bushmeat' to chase abi? Lets be simple, ever since mznelly mentioned her virginity you've been all over her like a lost puppy. Take it easy o , I protect my innocent friends.


Lolz don't get mad o, I'm just joking.

Krystalxxx:


Hmmm emodee. You've seen another 'bushmeat' to chase abi? Lets be simple, ever since mz.nelly mentioned her virginity you've been all over her like a lost puppy. Take it easy o , I protect my innocent friends.


Lolz don't get mad o, I'm just joking.

Lmaooo

Krystalxxx:


Hmmm emodee. You've seen another 'bushmeat' to chase abi? Lets be simple, ever since mznelly mentioned her virginity you've been all over her like a lost puppy. Take it easy o , I protect my innocent friends.


Lolz don't get mad o, I'm just joking.

Oh, krystal, very funny.

I've been all over mznelly even before she disclosed her virginity status. U can ask her.

Her write ups made me fall in luv with her.

.

MzNelly:

Lmaooo

Toh it's true now. e go shock u in 3d how sinister people can be. Woju o!

Emodeee:



Oh, krystal, very funny.

I've been all over mznelly even before she disclosed her virginity status. U can ask her.

Her write ups made me fall in luv with her.

ohk o, chewing my kolanut in a corner.

Krystalxxx:


ohk o, chewing my kolanut in a corner.

Yeah, u can trust me.

kinglekan:


See this wan don pour spit all ova doye pishure

No johr, u just det vex cos u no fine pass him

MzNelly:
The reason I'm updating slowly is because I'm recording the story.
Rather than writing, I'm thinking of just recording it and having you guys listen to it.
What do you think? Do you prefer the write ups or the audio to download and listen?

me sha wud prefer reading cuz I'lld hv enuf room to imagine n un-imagine a character nd a scene but with an audio, I can't help but jst want 2 play to d script, anyways its all GOOD for as long as YOU FINISH the STORY!!!...
Cheif Benson blood too hot jare... haba

Norenal:

me sha wud prefer reading cuz I'lld hv enuf room to imagine n un-imagine a character nd a scene but with an audio, I can't help but jst want 2 play to d script, anyways its all GOOD for as long as YOU FINISH the STORY!!!...
Cheif Benson blood too hot jare... haba

Baby girl hawayu?

I just lv dis

lovelygurl:


No johr, u just det vex cos u no fine pass him

Tah!! Vex sey who die na?

Dis wan wey saliva just dey full all ya post so, wetin go con happen if u see my pishure? U go release underground fountain be that ooo.

kinglekan:


Tah!! Vex sey who die na?

Dis wan wey saliva just dey full all ya post so, wetin go con happen if u see my pishure? U go release underground fountain be that ooo.

pls update

ishiamu:


Baby girl hawayu?

I'm good, U?

Norenal:

I'm good, U?

Great, how's the night 4 u?

Nice story, will surely keep reading.