Gravanno:

Delivery is 80%.
Not the noise the useless OP made me to waste my MB on.

Thanks Boss!

It is better for a new artiste not to blow his or her trumpet too loud before releasing his debut singles before ppl expectations will be very high. It is also better to sing to 10 ppl who will appreciate,correct and tell 100 ppl that u are very good than for u to sing to 1000 ppl who will see ur faults,condemn u and tell 10000 ppl how fake and wack you are. Many stars like 9ice ,dbanj started small with small audiences and corrected their mistakes before blowing their trumpets.

Airforce1:
http://www.datafilehost.com/d/86488c0d

Wow, I just downloaded the song & its so nice. Congrats @airforce1

Initially i didnt wanna log-into nl today, but seeing this thread of yours, i felt the need to commend you for your strong determination & present achievement.

I wish you the very best in your muzik career bro. Keep it up!

limamintruth:


Wow, I just downloaded the song & its so nice. Congrats @airforce1

Initially i didnt wanna log-into nl today, but seeing this thread of yours, i felt the need to commend you for your strong determination & present achievement.

I wish you the very best in your muzik career bro. Keep it up!

Thank you

The dude tried a lot..... My respect...

Capital Nonsense, after all d hype... this Airforcr1 really messed up with this opportunity. Cus First Impression Matters a lot.

@ joebeckz
.....nice try!!!
However I am not buying!!!

When you are presented with an effort
The right thing to do is to first commend that
When serving criticism....you point out what the person did right....then what he did wrong...and how they can improve

I saw little of that
And more of "guy, after all the wait....", I am. Not trying to hurt you, in fact, I am being a tremendous help, but that was some crappy music"...etc
Really
The Golden Rule is worth looking into

But, I am not here to preach
I truly, really, honestly disagree with your post

Cheers

icedbeatz:
nigga where dafuq are the rap songs?! *cocks gun* I mean some real hip hop shitt not the fukin trend shitt. Content makes jams evergreen.
.
professional advice : pull that audio down from that site or better upload what we call MUSIC to supersede this crap bro. let me start by typing fk ur producer the idiott just took money and pushed record button.
1. too much auto tune on your vocals which is so unprofessional.
2. on the scale of 1-10 your melody is on 3 bro you have a lot of work to do because the pleasing to ear is Melody.
3. you need voice training because your delivery here is so so poor.
4. the beat is wack been long I've come across such, beat selection is like a foundation to a building like a beat is to music, get ur niggs and fk that producer up.
5. lyrics ain't got quality, distinct content you should work on this or hire a song writer but better horn your skills on these things.
6. the final mix is not the best, I wonder the kinda sound card you guys used.
7. there's no SOUL in the song, do you know why we still bang 2pac, r. Kelly, Bob Marley?! they don't put just voices rather they put their SOUL in every word, melody, pitch on the song now that's music.
8. you were not near the zone at all, no charisma or control of your art. no confidence you sound scared or pressurized like someone said "voice this song and get the fk outta here before I shoot you ".
9. you have to know what you want, how you want it to sound and most importantly they producer you work with and the vibe in the studio, you were not feeling the song even as you were singing it.
10. the sequencing of the beat is shitty (fk the producer again), no charger, no gritty gent WTF. I can go on and on but let me stop here. I'm no hater I just want you to learn from this and work on your art, music is hardwork. surround yourself with good you and coming artistes and not some WACKASS artiste wannabes that's one of the reasons you uploaded this audio cos none of them told you the truth. believe me here's the ugly bitter truth but you can do very great cos you have these sonic effect in your voice that you can master and make yourself stand out, your desire, the reason and dedication will determine how good you can be. seems like ur first recording section relax it happens to the best even the great pied piper r. Kelly of today. keep hustling God de.
Change that stage name, don't patronise that producer he's no good at all. Airforce1

Bro what about this one? DESTINY by SMASHY(@iamMr_Smashy) click: https://my.notjustok.com/track/download/id/17791

herald9:
The beat is wack bro.

I didn't even listen to the wordings cause I know it'll be the typical Nigerian shiii.... But its better doing a typical shiii to a cool beat.


Damn it, that Lalah is a disappointment or maybe the girl is not such a diva!

What about this: DESTINY by SMASHY (@iamMr_Smashy) click: https://my.notjustok.com/track/download/id/17791

milychocs:
@ joebeckz
.....nice try!!!
However I am not buying!!!

When you are presented with an effort
The right thing to do is to first commend that
When serving criticism....you point out what the person did right....then what he did wrong...and how they can improve

I saw little of that
And more of "guy, after all the wait....", I am. Not trying to hurt you, in fact, I am being a tremendous help, but that was some crappy music"...etc
Really
The Golden Rule is worth looking into

But, I am not here to preach
I truly, really, honestly disagree with your post

Cheers

1st I must commend you for choosing filler words quoting me back unlike some persons who pick offense and throw some crappy sh*t like F up ma post niccur#
as regards ur opinion, maybe u are a little averse bout blunt critics. I would like to draw ur attention to larger platforms locally and internationally like the x factor,America got talent and idols to mention a few. when u perform short of expectations, u are ridiculed,which I really tried hard to avoid so he (air force) doesn't feel bad.
I did mention my likeness for him and d fact that his voice and style contradict and don't match, that shows my beliefs in his potentials. oh yes d wait is a blatant " hey dude, am not OK with this and am not hiding my feelings about how much I expected", and its same with d crowd always laughing wen he reminded us to keep fingers crossed waiting for his track.
if he came up with something real solid, I personally would not hesitate to link him up with a big DJ I know to give it air play in clubs.
sweetheart. am a fan and now your fan too. heheh

airfoce 1, jex wait for ma 1st beef track next week, ur producer na Bleep up guy,buh any way thumbs up

.

epelumi42:


From a good heart, I can help you out with lyrics. No cost. The only problem is I don't follow Nigeria's trend. Trust me, Nigerians are no longer looking for lyrics since they aren't getting it, you can bring that back. Nairalanders want the best from you, they love you... Send me a pm. all the best.

Really epelumi42 Can u help me too? ;-)

Binchie:
Really epelumi42 Can u help me too? ;-)

lol. Of course I will, Kerry.

epelumi42:

lol. Of course I will, Kerry.

can u compose fuji music

It's a lie,the much talked about,long awaited sing is here and no one told me about it.

Well I don't really know much about music tho, but I think the song is just there sha
He tried small.

I don't listen to this types of songs because it can be composed in 2 hours... sorry if it's no M.I, Banky, 2baba....... am not listening to any of this

onatisi:
can u compose fuji music

fu what?? No.

onatisi:
can u compose fuji music

fu what?? No.

marieolae:
Airforce1 congratulations
The song is very catchy..
Keep your head up..and look forward!
You're going to blow!

thanks

firstEVA:
you wanted to write pinch me I suppose, I won't pinch you, keep dreaming big, it's ok to dream.

there are 3 ways to use your mouth. 1. Eating 2. Voicing and 3. Blowing the jobs. I prefer the 3rd. I was told you are a pro

@Airforce1 nice song and a lot has been said already so no need overflogging. I know how it could be sometimes gettin a good producer especially considering budget but yours has to up his game. The song is kind of catchy and what we like to hear as typical naija folks but try upgrade the lyric and delivery small. I lol'ed a bit at that Marc Anthony-ish part sha

You kind of look like Andre Blaze btw. Keep the fire burning mahn

@Chanchit
your song is cool bro. the intro was so so on point and i love the rock feel though it felt a bit more electronic than live. keep it coming mahn!

An0nimus:
@Chanchit
your song is cool bro. the intro was so so on point and i love the rock feel though it felt a bit more electronic than live. keep it coming mahn!

Thanks Man! Glad you loved it.

Billyonaire:
there are 3 ways to use your mouth. 1. Eating 2. Voicing and 3. Blowing the jobs. I prefer the 3rd. I was told you are a pro

why is your moniker spelt billyonaire instead of billionaire?

When I see billy only one thing comes to mind - billy goat.

emmanuelscott:
Pllllls any mad producer ere? Or music artist?? Add me on whatzapp 08181010930 or 2B527695. « bbm...

Guy, every producer would tell you they re mad and every artist would tell you they re crazy.

@iamsynord
If olamide sang this your song do you know he'll make millions??
Your jam is on point on so many levels. beat was doope, both verses were nicely delivered and worded. I like the yoruba verse more though i don't understand the language. You're talented bruh. same for the guy you featured.

try & push that your song wella. the world has to feel it. what's Otubante sef? make e no be say I dey insult myself as i dey sing the song

May God Bless your hustle airforce but get a producer who is not only there for the money but also because of his passion to create great music. For now, I have listened to the song-the beat, mixing , it was not just not hitting my ears right, it was too sharp, like a ping ping(don't know how to explain the sensation)quite uncomfortable. Anyway, wish you all the best.

Damn.

The beat was wack. I just stopped the music after one minute.
Try and work on ur beat , voice is also nt close to being there.

Music i was told is an organised sound. This is not anywhere near organised. It is noise.


Put in effort and improve.

You already have many fans. Over 3000 downloads isn't an easy feat. Improve and use it.