blessedvisky:

3plekay?? Na you be this?

lolz who knw me ooo? Lemmi guess vicOfmoto?

trippleKAY:
lolz who knw me ooo? Lemmi guess vicOfmoto?

Supreme's bro? Omo, this world is a small one oo. Internet to so aye dero!!!

blessedvisky:


Supreme's bro? Omo, this world is a small one oo. Internet to so aye dero!!!

ahhhhhhh! So u sef b costumer 4 here? Chaii nawa ooo , so ure d 1 always making trouble vic? I hail thee oo

trippleKAY:
ahhhhhhh! So u sef b costumer 4 here? Chaii nawa ooo , so ure d 1 always making trouble vic? I hail thee oo

Me ke! Trouble maker?? I be gentle boy oo!! I be Seun's customer oooo . He be like say Na jazz he use tie me for here

blessedvisky:


Me ke! Trouble maker?? I be gentle boy oo!! I be Seun's customer oooo . He be like say Na jazz he use tie me for here

guy d jazz na currect 1 ooo, in an hour I fit enter here 1000 times lolz. Nd yesterday was year NL birthday ooo

seriously dahz love not lust anyway nyc write up

Nice & short, just the way we want it served. Not all those one update per month writers.

this is the best Article I have read in years. Thank you for making the moment a great one!

This was sweet. I woke up and decided to check out nairaland before sleeping back a bit. This story just made it impossible. A very short, nice piece. If it were true, I would have called the guy a dumbass. But then who am I to judge?

Quick question though, why did his mom think he was under a spell because he was seeing a Kogi girl? My mom also made the same assertion some months back. Are Kogi girls diabolical??

Popflair:
Tnks 4 ur support erry1 I really appreciate buh just as I had said earlier, it aint actually mine....felt lyk sharing it, #teamonelove

@op, sorry for saying this, make thunder fire ur left yansh. U con comment now sey u dey share anoda person's story ni. Wen e don mak some people cry already. anyway, nice write-up once again.

Very touching story. As opposed to many people's opinion though, it's not an easy decision to make. Of course, we can all conveniently say " I'd have picked Tope" but in reality, I can bet many would be stuck. Think about it...

Ella had done absolutely wrong, she was a very good woman in her right too. He was already engaged to be married to her. In fact a date had been fixed and he cared deeply for her also. So how easy would letting all of that go?

In the case of Tope, I get why the writer felt it was lust and not love. He did care for Tope but wasn't actually in love with her.
If he ever genuinely loved Tope, he would have made an attempt to reach out upon his arrival in the country.
Besides, he had no long term plans for her while leaving Kogi.
He was caught up in the moment with her, he saw someone that had and expressed interest in him and got struck by that.
His love for Tope was never genuine.

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mya1:
Very touching story. As opposed to many people's opinion though, it's not an easy decision to make. Of course, we can all conveniently say " I'd have picked Tope" but in reality, I can bet many would be stuck. Think about it...

Ella had done absolutely wrong, she was a very good woman in her right too. He was already engaged to be married to her. In fact a date had been fixed and he cared deeply for her also. So how easy would letting all of that go?

In the case of Tope, I get why the writer felt it was lust and not love. He did care for Tope but wasn't actually in love with her.
If he ever genuinely loved Tope, he would have made an attempt to reach out upon his arrival in the country.
Besides, he had no long term plans for her while leaving Kogi.
He was caught up in the moment with her, he saw someone that had and expressed interest in him and got struck by that.
His love for Tope was never genuine.

I feel its love
he didnt have plans cos she was 16 I was surprised she didnt reach him sooner yu know he had no way 2 reach her

saying he didnt sleep with Ella is surprising

Did this truly happened! Am intrigued with this piece! Its a true love story. OP u made ur best decision...Never you regret

Bro you've got some serious talent
I almost cry, you can imagine

I hate the ending. He could have married Tope and be happier in life.

Anyways, maybe the story hasn't ended.

Oyecute:
@op, sorry for saying this, make thunder fire ur left yansh. U con comment now sey u dey share anoda person's story ni. Wen e don mak some people cry already. anyway, nice write-up once again.

lol...make thunder from ur villa fire ur left ball, re-read it from the beginning and u will see it there....it aint mine

Adaeze003:


True that. The entertainment industry as a whole is just overly sexual. Why can't people just sell creativity without selling sex?

Oh well.

I believe creative writing should not be hindered by sentiments like moral. He is trying making a fiction look real, which it is one of the point of writing fiction. S.ex is part of real life situation and there will be a lot of holes in dat story if the se.xual actions were left out. That is why creative stuffs are rated, maybe he should have rated it 18. I only have issue with writers putting s.ex actions in their stories when it could completely left and would not take anyth away from the story.


@ op, nice piece of work.

Hmm im so touched

Oh Myyyyy......wow.....I kinda lyk d Tope character......

Jwhizzy:
OP next time quote your source. This story has been posted on nairaland before. Plagiarism is punishable under the law!

http://www.browngarri.com/love-story-could-blood-be-thicker-than-water/

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U didn't even read the story from the begining, he told us it wasn't his story but would like us to learn from it.

golddeejay:
I believe creative writing should not be hindered by sentiments like moral. He is trying making a fiction look real, which it is one of the point of writing fiction. S.ex is part of real life situation and there will be a lot of holes in dat story if the se.xual actions were left out. That is why creative stuffs are rated, maybe he should have rated it 18. I only have issue with writers putting s.ex actions in their stories when it could completely left and would not take anyth away from the story.


@ op, nice piece of work.

Leaving out the details wouldn't take anything away from the story... buh then, that's my opinion, I'm not going to argue.

Adaeze003:


Leaving out the details wouldn't take anything away from the story... buh then, that's my opinion, I'm not going to argue.

and I sure respect ur opinion, though I don't agree with it. I don't argue also.

Cheers to the originator of this story and thanks to the Op for promoting the story....nice write up.


What Thomas had for Tope might have been lust buh maybe Tope really loved him...

very touching and am almost in tears.
I wonder how can someone live the rest of their life with somebody they don't love.

u see Wat a silly mistake of not using protection had caused, being carried away by pleasure.

o God may my future husband not make such mistake waiting for me.

But ur story has not ended oo.wen its time to claim daddy's property am sure it will continue, but dat time with another writer. am waiting till then.

Popflair:
Her driver then took us to Tope’s apartment.
I knocked and Tope opened the door and
said. “Sweety, I was just …….”
My mom said. “Who is your sweety?”
Tope was scared to her teeth and she said.
“Sorry mummy, I didn’t see..”
My Mom said. “Don’t call me mummy. You
mother disowned you because of your
treachery.”
We all stepped into the apartment. My mom
then said. “Do you know who I am?”
Tope said. “No ma”
My mom sad. “I am a Judge in Lagos. I can
make life very complicated for you if yo try to
destroy what I have spent almost all the
years of me life to build.”
Next thing Junior walked into the sitting
room and cried out. “mummy, mummy…” He
stood still as he saw the crowed.
My mom saw him and said. “Oh my God,
Thomas!!” As she held my hand tight.
There was silence for a minute. Then my
mom said. “The deed has been done, but if
you truly love my son you will have to let him
go. I was very angry but now I don’t have to
show it because of him. He is innocent and
does not have to suffer from your
recklessness. I will make arrangements for
you 2 to relocate to the UK. That is were you
will spend the rest of your lives. You will have
to get your educational documents and
necessary documents for that effect.
Tomorrow, you will leave for Abuja and you
both will stay there till your visas are ready.”
Tope was just sobbing and didn’t utter a
word. My mom then said. “My personal
assistant will come tomorrow morning to
facilitate the arrangements. This is the best I
can do not for you, but for him. Thomas, you
have 2 minutes, I will be waiting in the car.”
She left for the car and I stood there looking
at Tope. I then said. “I fought for us Tope
and now see what it has led? I don’t think I
will ever see you again. Good bye Tope.” I
then looked at Junior, I carried him one last
time, kissed his cheek and blessed him. I
dropped him down and headed to the car.
We got home and no word was uttered
between my mom and I. The following
morning I went to work and resumed my my
life the way it was before I went to see Tope
at Kogi. I knew I would learn to love Ella but I
can’t love her the way I loved Tope. But I
later came to understand that what
transpired between Tope and I was lust, lust
was the basis of our friendship and what
reshaped our destinies. Love builds but lust
destroys.
Tope lives happily in London, she got
enrolled in the university and she’s almost
done. Junior is almost done with his primary
education, he loves football and likes to play
drums. Ella and I are happily married and we
have a daughter, she’s 2 years and she looks
a whole lot like my mom. Tope and I still
communicate once in a while. She still vows
to wait for me no matter how long it takes. I
know what happened was a mistake and it
still remains a secret but for how long?
THE END….

Well done!! You made my day.

Great story.

One of the finest i have read in an insanity-infested forum.

Read all through, every single line, for the first time.

Well done again.

Popflair:
Her driver then took us to Tope’s apartment.
I knocked and Tope opened the door and
said. “Sweety, I was just …….”
My mom said. “Who is your sweety?”
Tope was scared to her teeth and she said.
“Sorry mummy, I didn’t see..”
My Mom said. “Don’t call me mummy. You
mother disowned you because of your
treachery.”
We all stepped into the apartment. My mom
then said. “Do you know who I am?”
Tope said. “No ma”
My mom sad. “I am a Judge in Lagos. I can
make life very complicated for you if yo try to
destroy what I have spent almost all the
years of me life to build.”
Next thing Junior walked into the sitting
room and cried out. “mummy, mummy…” He
stood still as he saw the crowed.
My mom saw him and said. “Oh my God,
Thomas!!” As she held my hand tight.
There was silence for a minute. Then my
mom said. “The deed has been done, but if
you truly love my son you will have to let him
go. I was very angry but now I don’t have to
show it because of him. He is innocent and
does not have to suffer from your
recklessness. I will make arrangements for
you 2 to relocate to the UK. That is were you
will spend the rest of your lives. You will have
to get your educational documents and
necessary documents for that effect.
Tomorrow, you will leave for Abuja and you
both will stay there till your visas are ready.”
Tope was just sobbing and didn’t utter a
word. My mom then said. “My personal
assistant will come tomorrow morning to
facilitate the arrangements. This is the best I
can do not for you, but for him. Thomas, you
have 2 minutes, I will be waiting in the car.”
She left for the car and I stood there looking
at Tope. I then said. “I fought for us Tope
and now see what it has led? I don’t think I
will ever see you again. Good bye Tope.” I
then looked at Junior, I carried him one last
time, kissed his cheek and blessed him. I
dropped him down and headed to the car.
We got home and no word was uttered
between my mom and I. The following
morning I went to work and resumed my my
life the way it was before I went to see Tope
at Kogi. I knew I would learn to love Ella but I
can’t love her the way I loved Tope. But I
later came to understand that what
transpired between Tope and I was lust, lust
was the basis of our friendship and what
reshaped our destinies. Love builds but lust
destroys.
Tope lives happily in London, she got
enrolled in the university and she’s almost
done. Junior is almost done with his primary
education, he loves football and likes to play
drums. Ella and I are happily married and we
have a daughter, she’s 2 years and she looks
a whole lot like my mom. Tope and I still
communicate once in a while. She still vows
to wait for me no matter how long it takes. I
know what happened was a mistake and it
still remains a secret but for how long?
THE END….

What is 'true love' between a man and a woman without lust. What happened between you two was not a mistake, and was not lust, in my view.

You love Tope genuinely. You can learn to love Ella but not a fraction as much as you do Tope, and you would live every day of your life knowing this, and being tormented by this consciousness.

Nothing Ella would do can reset you, as long as Tope is still alive.

If i was Ella, i would break the relationship with you except i would be content with having a 'bit' of you.

Gosh. Life can be complicated.

Ps: this me addressing the writer not the op. I believe this is fictional thgh

Popflair:
It seems I'm just doing dis on my own...I cnt cont' without any replies c'mon....am outta here

How did you finally get the condomm you used to pop her cherry

Lovely! Just lovely!! Haven't enjoyed a story this long on NL in a while. Thanks, OP.

zicoraads:
Quick question though, why did his mom think he was under a spell because he was seeing a Kogi girl? My mom also made the same assertion some months back. Are Kogi girls diabolical??

A friend of mine wanted to marry a kogi girl. His first visit to the girls family house, he realised her father was a native doctor. End of love story. He broke up with her.

You just made me starting reflexn on my life